In this post I shall detail grammatical errors in the civilopedia entires.
Auric Ulvin:
1. Auric wandered what was left of the caverns for days, slowly going deeper into the mountain, turned back over and over by blocked passages as he was pressed on by spirits that didn(')t see the labyrinth as it was, only as it had been.
Rhoanna:
1. She was the daughter of a chieftain of a minor tribe. (Her) father was constantly warring with the other...
If that was intended, then the text quickly switched from third to first person in a way that is not considered correct English.
Also, is there a reason that Tasunke's civilopedia entry was removed?
I'll put up some more over time. I know, I can't help but be pedantic.
Auric Ulvin:
1. Auric wandered what was left of the caverns for days, slowly going deeper into the mountain, turned back over and over by blocked passages as he was pressed on by spirits that didn(')t see the labyrinth as it was, only as it had been.
Rhoanna:
1. She was the daughter of a chieftain of a minor tribe. (Her) father was constantly warring with the other...
If that was intended, then the text quickly switched from third to first person in a way that is not considered correct English.
Also, is there a reason that Tasunke's civilopedia entry was removed?
I'll put up some more over time. I know, I can't help but be pedantic.
