A long, long time ago in well this galaxy, there was a barbarian that attacked a seven year old boy. The boy told the barbarian to go away, and he did. The boy didn't know why the barbarian left, but he thought probally the barbarian had a change of heart. Two years later, the barbarian returned with 20 to 30 of others. While the boy was looking for some lost sheep, the barbarian and his men destroyed the boy's village and left no one alive. At that very moment, the boy felt a sharp pain in his heart. He knew something was wrong, so he ran back to the village. One of the barbarians saw him and ran after him with his axe. The boy, with no other choice, was going to try to grab the axe from the 200 pound man, before he could swing at him. However, something better happened. The axe came out of the man's hand and went into the boy's hand. The two were 10 feet away from one another, when this happened. The man started to run away, but the boy ran faster, leaped over him, and landed the axe in the man's head. When the others saw this, they ran away. This boy's name was Zarn.
Another 10 years passed, and Zarn was a man. He had created a weapon that he found out about in his dreams. It had power that no other weapon could compare. It looked like a simple sword handle, but when used properly, a glowing light that could penetrate through everything was formed. He found the barbarians that raided and destroyed his home village and killed them all. Zarn now relized that these powers came from a Force, which was unknown to most people. That's what he called this power as well. He also called himself a Jedi, because his village was called Jedina and that was what the people that lived there were called. He gave a new meaning to the term, though. It now was used to identify the one who had the power from the Force.
Another 4 years later, Zarn meet this man named Almightyjosh or AJ. AJ was brighter than most people. Zarn gave him a test, which AJ succeeded without even knowing that he was being tested. Zarn told him about the Force, and AJ became his apprentice, or padawan. Zarn was his master. It was only 3 years later that AJ became a master of Jediism like Zarn. Several more people followed the ways of the Jedi. Zarn was constantly fighting barbarians to protect the innocent. The others were always happy with Zarn as their master, because Zarn had contributed so much to them. Later, the Jedi built their own temple near the capital of their nation, Fanatika. Years later, AJ disappeared, and the Council mourned. They knew he was alive, but they did not know where he was, and they didn't know if they would see him again. Despite this, more joined the Jedi Council to help out the innocent and the nation of Fanatika as a whole. Now, they are the protectors of the nation...
So, was it bad, good, okay, horrible, or anything else? I would really like feedback, because I can always alter the story. I did ruish through it to see what opinions were first. Sorry about the delay, EA.
edit- saw some erors that I corrected.
