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As of 0600 this morning, Administrator James Copland and Security Chief Michael Grey of Facility 24 have failed to perform several required security checklists on this system. As per security protocol 7591-VJ1, this failure has generated an automatic notification of superiors.

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2001-07-23, 23:14:54 > Security protocol 4219-VJ3 fails to respond to ping
2001-07-23, 23:14:55 > Automated message concerning security failure at 23:14:54 sent, first attempt (failed)
2001-07-23, 23:14:56 > Security protocol 4219-VJ3 fails to respond to ping
2001-07-23, 23:14:57 > Automated message concerning security failure at 23:14:54 sent, second attempt (failed)
2001-07-23, 23:14:58 > Remote connection lost
2001-07-23, 23:15:58 > Self-destruct shutdown override accepted (WARNING: SYSTEM DISABLED)
2001-07-23, 23:14:58 > Cascading power failure detected in peripheral systems
2001-07-23, 23:14:59 > Automated message concerning security failure at 23:14:54 sent, third attempt (failed)
2001-07-23, 23:15:01 > Cascading power failure reaches core systems, unit loses power
2001-07-24, 06:17:34 > Power restored to emergency communication systems, reboot begins
2001-07-24, 06:18:15 > Remote connection established
2001-07-24, 06:18:16 > Automated message concerning security failure at 23:14:54 and associated logs sent, fourth attempt (success!)

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Other units remain unresponsive/disconnected, including self-destruct mechanism. Given length of power failure, Class 3 Catastrophic Containment Failure is assumed. Continued containment of anomaly-255 is NOT guaranteed. Continued containment of test subjects affected by anomaly-255 is NOT guaranteed. Staff assumed comprised. Recommend local reactivation of self-destruct mechanism.

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Did we ever work out who's getting the pocket watch and Jyeongmin? I wrote something up, but I don't want to godmod. :p
 
It will be written in the update.

75% of the update is done.
 
For future reference, is there a way of typing these black censor boxes &#9608;&#9608; without copying and pasting?
 
Today.
 
Having some minor issues with intermittent power-failure. Luckily managed to save my work before the computer went kaput, but I'm gonna delay update for tomorrow.
 
Update 1

July 8th 2001:

Camera shows a news reporter standing against the backdrop of the National Park. Police lines stretch all the way around it, preventing access. Heavily armed policemen patrol the area.

Special correspondent Lin here on the field. A shootout! A firefight broke out between two unknown parties... We can't see what exactly happened there... the authorities have cordoned off this area... but witnesses have claimed that they heard automatic gunfire and bombs going off...

Yes, you heard that right, Mara, explosives. No, there is no word on what the firefight was about from the authorities... hang on, they are carrying the bodies out right now...

Armed Policemen: Get rid of that camera!

Hey! You can-

"Unmarked cars, weapon serial number scratched out, grenades, bulletproof vests, 2 dead paramedics, a leg bone, and some cooked human thighs. Oh, and a hysterical guy inside the ambulance."

"..."

"So any ideas what happened here? Do we know any cannibal paramilitary groups or something?"

"No, detective Craig."

"Well there goes that idea."

"Hey, this guy's one of us! I recognize him, he's the new guy! What's he doing here?"

Detective Craig sighed. "What the fudge."

Radford sighed. They were getting nowhere. "Goddamn town... it gives me the creeps..."

"Aww, it's not that bad..." Sheppard said. "I actually like this town."

"Really, you like the fact that there is a very creepy store clerk, the toughest bar lady in existence, AND the fact that there is an anomaly here that can potentially kill off every single men, women, and children in the town?"

"Oh yeah, aside from that."

Redford buried his head in his palms. "Can't still believe that the store clerk WASN'T infected, I mean what the ****?"

"Uhh..."

"I mean, come on, a mother of two children gets her shadow stolen, but that creepy jerk wasn't? I want to go and wipe that stupid grin off his face..."

"Redford?"

"What?" He looked back at Sheppard, who was, at this point, staring somewhere outside the window.

"Our shadows."

Redford looked down.

"Oh no."

July 11th

"Director Paul?" Director Paul looked up from his phone to see his assistant, Ellen. She was a strong, independent woman. Or so she said. Director had his doubts. She was, however, remarkably useful to have around. He had handpicked her himself for her performance, after all. And her bosom. Mostly for her bosom.

"Yes, cherie?"

"Wha-... err... I mean... Sir, Cavalry reports that they managed to form a ceasefire agreement with the Protectors.

Really, after that fiasco at the National Park? "Oh, good," he said.

"On the other hand Director Lin is demanding to speak to you."

"Oh. It's going to be bad, isn't it?"

"Yes, sir."

"Crap."


Annie sighed at the box laid out in front of her.

Well, she was going to have to deal with it sooner or later. She would have done it sooner, if she had a scissor. All of them seemed to be missing at the moment. That might as well do, wouldn't it? No need to open a creepy old box left behind by a creepy man. Yup, no need at all. She would just put it in a cabinet somewhere and...

The knife.

She supposed that she could have used a knife to open it. She always carried a pocket knife after all. But the tape would get stuck to the blade, wouldn't it? She hated to ruin a good kni-

She stabbed the box with the knife and then cut through the tape seal. **** it, she wouldn't let some idiot intimidate her like this. She opened the box and looked at the contents.

"Oh, that cheeky bastard," she muttered. She dumped the contents of the box over the floor to reveal her scissors, her cell phone battery, and yet another copy of the deed and the key.

The mission was a failure from the start.

We were misinformed. It wasn't that we charged into the situation, not knowing what to expect. It was that we charged into the situation thinking that it was something else entirely. No, it was deeper than that. It was as if we had a wrong state of mind.

We Keepers are well trained... well equipped... but nothing could have prepared us for what we saw beyond. Of course, by the time I realized this, I was already dead.

The Keepers that were sent to contain the situation was well-trained, ruthless, and most importantly well paid. Their loyalty was unquestionable, their resolve unbreakable, and their gun well-maintained.

So it was not unusual to see them level a tranquilizer gun at a defenseless teenager and pull the trigger.

What was unusual was what happened directly after it. The tranquilizer darts never hit their intended target. The Protectors arriving at the scene in order to observe the containment of the object, as per the agreement, never arrived. The desperate civilians hiding in whatever corner they could find away from metal shrapnel and bullets also similarly never emerged from their hiding place.

In that instance, every living being within 200 meter radius of the pocket watch disappeared, along with whatever possession they happened to be carrying at the time.

"The ****?" Director Paul muttered.

"Indeed, Mr. Paul," Director Lyn of the Protectors said with a frigid voice. "How do you plan on explaining this?"

"Explain what?!" Paul shouted out. "That bunch of troops disappeared while dealing with an anomaly? I would've thought that the Protectors would be used to that by now."

"Yes, that is exactly why we destroy these anomalies in order for them to not to cause problems to humanity anymore."

"How could anyone have known that this would happen?"

"It still does not change the fact that a dozen civilian, my entire Protector squad, and a couple of Keeper squads went missing in that instance," Director Lyn said. "In any case, this will be the Keeper's problem now."

"What? That's ridiculous- we are in it to..."

"My entire squad, gone. You are the only one with manpower nearby. Good luck, director," Lyn hung up the phone.

Erlang put down the phone and sighed. Perhaps this was fitting. While he did not receive the pocket watch, it was far gone for the Keepers and the Protectors as well. At least for a little while, at least.

"Ah, hello there," a voice said behind him. Erlang whirled around to see a man with all the emotional disposition of a bureaucrat staring back at him.

"I've been looking for you."

"Who are you?" Erlang demanded, putting his hand into his desk drawer where he kept the pistol.

"Gabe," the intruder answered.

Erlang pulled out the gun and shot him. Bubbles emanated from the barrel of the gun and harmlessly dissipated over the man's face.

"Actually I changed my mind," the intruder said. "My name is John."

"Really," Erlang said, dropping the gun.

"Yes. I believe it is the right of all to be called whatever they want to be called."

"What do you want?"

"A simple partnership..."

Jack flipped through the newspaper. It was the same old news as always. In fact, he had been reading this exact same issue since about... oh 20 years ago. They didn't make them like they used to anymore.

In fact, they didn't make it at all now.

Jack whistled as he cleaned his bar. The cat mewled, purring beside him.

"Looks like we'll actually get customers today, little fellah," Jack whispered to the cat. The cat seemed to nod briefly before trotting off to someplace else.

"That's a good cat," Jack muttered. "Bring them back here safely, m'kay?"

"So you really have no idea where we are," Earl said.

"No, sir," agent Stockwell said. "The GPS units are no longer functioning. Radio cannot reach command. Even a compass isn't working, sir."

Earl sighed. Jyoungmin was being kept under watch along with the rest of the civilians in a building. The pocket watch was safe in his hands, so the Protectors would be wanting it sooner or later when they eventually emerged from their swiftly constructed safehouse in a nearby apartment complex. Without the Command's support, they were in this situation blind.

"So what are we on then, another planet or something like that?"

Agent Stockwell let out a grunt as he surveyed the landscape. Roads of asphalt stretched as far as eyes can see in every direction. Monolithic skyscrapers of cement and glass rose on every side. Everything seems to be in good repair, but there are no sign of human life. There are no cars, no trash strewn about in the streets, and no voices nor footsteps of the pedestrians. There is only a cold wind that seems to come from a certain location of the city.

"Not unless the aliens built a larger scale model of New York City, sir," Agent Stockwell said.

"Hey Charlie, it's time to go home."

"I just can't believe that she's dead."

"I can't either."

"I just don't buy it."

"Me neither."

"It just feels as if... she's calling out to us somehow..."

"What are you doing, why are we packing up?" Detective Craig said, grabbing ahold of a nearby forensic investigator.

"I dunnow, sir, some Spook BS way above my pay grade," the investigator replied. "Can't help it. Gotta get out of here, sir."

"Oh for heaven's..." Craig let the investigator go and ran straight towards the scene of the crime. It was now full of unfamiliar faces bearing FBI insignias. He shouted "Who's in charge here?!"

Or at least he would've had he not immediately been surrounded by three men holding assault rifles.

"...Uh... can I speak to the one in charge of this investigation?" he asked.

"That would be me," said one of the men with the assault rifles.

"Really."

The man shrugged. "I'm what you get. Who the **** are you?"

Detective Craig smiled. "Well, I was just wondering whether or not you needed assistance with the investigation. You have to agree that I have more local-"

"We have plenty of witnesses already," the man said. "Shoo him off."

"Hey wai-"

"Actually," the man said. "There is one thing. You recognize this guy?" He held up a photo.

"Yeah, that's Chavez. He's a patrol cop. I don-"

"You cops always work in pairs," the man cut him off. "Where's his partner?"[/quote]

When Alan woke up, he was in a bar.

The last thing he remembered was the tranq dart being fired at the girl who possessed the pocket watch... then...

"Oh look who's finally awake," Jack said from beyond the counter. He was busily trying to clean a stain from a glass and failing. "Now you can stop drooling on the counter that I just cleaned. You buying anything?"

"Wha-"

"Oh, by the way, my star waiter had to drag you all the way from the 143rd street to here. You are going to need to pay for that. Preferably in fish." There was a small mewling sound from somewhere.

"I don't have a-"

"Dollars work as well."

Alan grasped his head. It felt as if somebody took a gold brick and hit him repeatedly with it. "Who the hell are you?"

"Name's Jack," Jack said. Alan blinked.

"You are the guy that Gabe told me..."

"Gabe? That's what he said his name was?" Jack said inquisitively. "Huh, funny. He told me he was Falafelraptor or something like that. So what did he send you out for?"

"The watch... he wants the watch..."

"So he can ruin my business more, I presume," Jack said, waving his hand. "Ah well. I don't suppose you have the watch yet. Maybe you could buy a beer and cool your head a little. Welcome to Limbo."
 
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Just in case there is any confusion, you can post. I just wanted to save a spot in case I missed something.
 
"Beer. Beer is good," Alan murmured, rubbing his head. Jack handed him a schooner, which Alan drained in one go. He grinned a little, feeling better now he had some fluid inside him. "What the hell is Limbo?"

"Its&#8230; hard to explain," Jack replied, "Well, theres the multiple universe theory, right? There are multiple universes in the world, all of which are self-contained and exist independently of each other. Thing is, that you can get from one universe to another. You've got to pass through a special universe, which exists as a centre for all the other universes. The Greeks called it Ouroboros. I prefer Limbo. Think of it like a big corridor, with lots of doors to the other universes, but none of them lead to each other. The corridor is like Limbo."

Alan nodded. "Makes sense."

"Now, imagine if the corridor was full of weird monsters from the other rooms, and conventional geometry and physics doesn't make a lot of sense. Then its exactly like Limbo."

"So, I'm stuck in a weird middle ground between universes full of weirdness where conventional physics doesn't make sense. Forgive me if I don't believe you."

Jack shrugged. "Try it yourself. Walk out that door."

Alan stepped out and walked out the door. He found himself entering the room from a different door on the other side. He stopped in the doorway, and saw his own back in the doorway of the other door on the other end of the room. He blinked, and stepped forward. The figure stepped forward as well, and disappeared in the doorway. Alan blinked again.

"Okay, you've sold me."

"Alternatively, you've gone crazy."

"That works too. Either way, what do I do now?"

"Well, first you've got to pay me. For the beer as well as the dragging." He nodded towards the cat.

"You operate a bar in a plane that conjoins several worlds together inhabited by bizarre and inhuman monsters, and you want to take money from everybody who walks into your bar?"
Jack shrugged.

"I don't get a lot of customers. Business is slow, so I gotta take what money I can."

"That&#8230; makes an extraordinary amount of sense." Alan pulled a a handful of crumpled dollars out of his pocket and dumped them over the counter.

"Smart man," Jack said, taking the money and pocketing it. "I'd recommend finding the watch and using that to get home. The Protectors or Keepers probably have it. They're holed up about 4 or 5 blocks from here."

"Blocks?"

"The place is a perfect replica of New York City. The guys who used to manage Limbo twenty years ago built it for some reason. Then they all got butchered when a door to some other universe opened, so its pretty much empty now."

"So I've got to walk back through a perfect replica of NY, while something pours forth from a hole in the universe to kill me?"

"Oh, they won't be pouring. I closed it. But yeah, principle stays the same."

"Great." Alan got up and walked to the door.

"Not that one. Bathroom," Jack said. Alan nodded, and began to leave the building through the bathroom door. "And watch out for the Shriekers!" he yelled as Alan left.

"Shriekers?"

"Eh. You'll find out soon enough."
Alan walked out the door.

Jack got up and scratched the cat's head. It meowed, and began licking its fur.

"Silly kitty. I couldn't take him back myself. The last thing I want is a gate to Limbo in Protector hands. Hopefully, he'll get back to Gabe with the watch in one piece. If he doesn't? Well, I guess I lost nothing."
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Iggy, do you mind if I borrow Earl and Yves for about three lines in a later scene?
 
Those were the words below the photo of some trees in a New York Park. They were from a reel that contained the man that was supposed to be in the photo. Morris stared at the picture, watched by the stares of dead men and women, everybody in Beta-Omicron-5 that had given their lives in defence of humanity. Morris wondered if Sheppard and Radford would soon be joining them.

In actuality, the picture was captioned 'Tid, Not Gone, But Away'. If Tidbury was in the picture, and was labelled properly, it would probably end the world.

Tidbury was a violent man. He had received dozens of sanctions over the years for recklessly endangering the lives of civilians and personnel. He had driven all the psychologists employed by the Protectors crazy for refusing to discuss why he pursued anomalies so readily. But he got stuff done. And if there was hard choice to be carried out, Tidbury was the one to do it.

In late 1999, there was an anomaly. A picture that acted as a portal that unleashed 'demons'. The Protectors decided that the best way to destroy it was to send somebody in to kill every one of those creatures. Such a person would be effectively immortal, but would have to fight constantly against a world of horrifying monsters. Dozens stepped forward, but Tidbury threatened to kill anybody that didn't step back. His last words were "Finally..." As a safety measure, the Protectors destroyed all the pictures of Tidbury, just in case the monsters could use that as a portal. It had happened before.

Probably one of the weirder stories on the wall. As Morris left, he mused that Radford and Sheppard knew the dangers. And it's not like they had planned to leave the town before discovering the source. They'll survive. But they better find the source quick.
 
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Earl pondered the implications of an entry starting in such a manner. His own talking wristwatch identified the time as slightly after six AM on the 24th of July, but it was no longer in agreement with the theoretically-synchronized timepieces of anyone else in the Combined Keeper Task Force. Coordination would have to be done the old-fashioned way.

The Keepers were basing themselves in a large, empty building- though every building scouted thusfar had matched that general description. Several of the vans that had transited along with the rest of the group were gathered in front of the building, along with several small detachments composed of the task groups which had made the transit into this alternate dimension.

Agents Janciewicz, Tanev, St-Laurent, and Rosso were gathered together in the center of the building, with representatives of each of the Task Forces present. Earl, a somewhat squat and round-faced Alabaman wearing a pair of blacked-out sunglasses, was the first to speak.

"Alright, as Agent Stockwell has doubtlessly informed you, any standard methods of navigation or communication have failed to provide us with a clear location or any contact with the outside. By all indications, we seem to have undergone a dimensional transit, most likely triggered by the Pocketwatch Anomaly, henceforth to be referred to as Anomaly-179. Little detail is presently understood, and the four of us you see here will be assuming temporary administrator-level roles, in the absence of contact from command, in order to authorize testing of the Anomaly in order to determine the manner in which it functions and how we will cause it to return us to our original location."

Now, Agent Vitaly Tanev, a tall Byelorussian expat possessed of a balding head and sharply aquiline features, took his turn to speak.

"In the events immediately preceding our anomalous transit to this location, we encountered forces belonging to Third Eye, a single protector Task Force, and what we strongly believe are one, if not more, independent operatives. The man we believe to be the Third Eye's escape driver speaks in further reference to this man, whose described appearance matches the apparently highly-trained man who was observed by the Mental Wall's Operative Jamieson shortly before said operative's death from severe neck trauma."

"As this building appears to be a bank," began the Cajun Agent Yves St-Laurent, "We've identified an 'igh-security area in the building's core, most likely the vault, to be used as an ad-hoc testing facility to determine what we can about Anomaly-179."

Agent Michele Rosso's voice was chipper- almost inappropriately so- as she began to outline the situation with civilians caught in the area.

"We've got the civilians together several rooms away, within this new temporary command facility that we have established here. Most are surprisingly calm, those who were not have been chemically tranquilized. We have informed them that we are a government organization, and that we are locked down after having suffered an EMP attack. All information provided can be erased or modified by our mental techies after we return ourselves to our home plane."

"Thank you very much. Now, our goals are straightforward:

One, we will maintain our control over Anomaly-179.

Two, we will find a way to return everyone who underwent this dimensional shift back to their original location.

In order to achieve these goals, we will need to conduct field tests of 179, and establish control of our immediate surroundings through force of arms. To this extent, I would like reports from the leaders of each Task Force regarding their present strength and resources. Stone Faces?"

"All Beta-5 Operatives are operating at full strength, and our field van is directly outside."

"Good. I would like a report on any reality alteration your instruments have detected, and information on the possible function of 179. Calvary?"

"One casualty from our firefight with the protectors, one operative injured."

"Leave the incapacitated here, and dispatch half of your forces in groups of three to scout the surrounding area. Immediately report anything of interest. In the event of an unknown hostile encounter, back away and call for reinforcements, we can't be too cautious when operating in an unknown environment. The rest will remain here to defend our building. Mental Wall?"

"One casualty, our support van is here as well."

"Please report on any psychic activity detected in the area. Split into groups of three and follow the scouting paths we'll be transmitting to you. Leave one party behind at this area for defense. Men in Black, report."

"Only two Epsilon-6 operatives are present, and our three highest-rankers were outside of the affected area."

"Alright, I'll have you remain in reserve at our command nexus. Vanguards?"

"No casualties, we've got the facility secured and we have captured one rogue operative, previously of the Keepers, who had fallen in with Erlang Shen. He's currently unconscious and in captivity."

"Good work. I'd like half of your forces in scouting groups of three, the other half defending. Bloodhounds, report in."

"All present and accounted for. We have two scout choppers still present, and have already begun developing a map of the area. It does indeed match a template of New York City, as far as we can tell, so the main concern will be finding out what's inside the buildings."

"Thank you. Proceed as you are. Remember everyone, knowledge is everything. Find all Protectors, Third Eyes, Independents and others you can, and report back immediately. And Yves?"

"Yes?"

"Get me test results on that watch, asap."
 
OOC: I'd imagine this scene takes place a while after Iggy's last scene, so the Keepers has time to get attacked by Shriekers.

Alan stepped out of the bar. The cold dusk light bathed the deserted city with an eerie pallor. The buildings were all there, but they all appeared to be empty. There was no rubbish, no cars - only towers of concrete and asphalt roads. Alan peered into a window, only to find the room empty and unfurnished. It was a replica of New York, but only geographically - in every other way it was different. Alan rubbed his arms as a cold wind blew over him, and began walking.

He didn't have to walk far when he began to hear the high, keening sounds. At first they were in the distance, but as he walked further they became louder and closer. Suddenly, the noises stopped.

Alan paused, and looked around. The silence was stifling, like an absolute absence of even background noise. Alan kept walking, increasingly aware of the crushing silence. Suddenly, he heard a high, skittering noise behind him. He spun around swiftly, his hands getting into a combat position, but there was nothing behind him. He turned around again, calming himself, and was greeted by a slobbering maw.

The creature opened its mouth and screamed, deafening Alan with a high, keening screech. Disoriented, Alan staggered back, dizzy. It stood awkwardly on two long, spindly legs, but more appeared to hang between them. A third, long, clawed limb protruded from its stubby larval thorax from its belly, grasping at Alan. Alan recovered, and threw himself aside from the claw at the last minute as it lunged towards him. He heard a second scream, and barely staggered aside as another creature barrelled towards him. Alan shook his head, dodged to the side as a creature attacked him with its third claw, and slammed his fist into its side with the force that would have destroyed the body of a normal man. His blow connected with a dull thump, and the creature merely staggered backwards, trying to regain its footing on its long, skinny legs. The skin was slimy and wet to the touch, and glistened in a way that made Alan want to dry his hand on his clothes, but before he could do so he was caught by a glancing blow from the second creature. He fell to the ground, as the creature stepped towards him, its mouth slavering and its six small, piggy eyes sizing him up. It screamed once more at him, this time in triumph, and then leaned downwards to devour him. Then the creatures head exploded.

Three soldiers jogged out from behind the creatures dead body. They opened fire on the other creature, driving it away, and walked over to where Alan was lying prostrate on the ground. They levelled their guns at him. Alan raised his hands.

"What&#8230; what's going on? What were those things? he said, in his best imitation of a scared civilian.

"We don't know. Who are you?" one of the soldiers barked.

"I'm&#8230; I'm Gabriel Monk. I'm an accountant. I was going out to see a friend, and then suddenly I was here."

"He must have been caught up when we shifted," one of the soldiers said to the other two.

"I thought we got everybody," another said.

"Its possible we missed someone. We were pretty distracted, and so were the Protectors," the first replied.

"True," the third said. "Alright, Mr. Monk. Come with us. We're from the government, we'll get you to safety."

Alan could barely hold back his grin.

"Thankyou, sir."

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The three soldiers marched Alan back to the building, before they were stopped by several more soldiers.

"Who's this?" the commander asked.

"A civilian. We found him getting attacked by the things. We must have missed him on the first sweep."

"Good. Get him in there. Don't dally around outside, the creatures are getting bolder."
"Any casualties?"

"None yet, but they're getting a lot braver. They stick around and scream at us for a while now. They only leave when they get hit. I'm getting worried," the commander replied. "Send him through with the other civilians."

The soldiers walked Alan through the door into the building, up several flights of stairs, and into a corridor. They passed a man wearing a labcoat and a man with a cane on the way. The soldiers halted Alan in front of the two men.

"We found this guy on his own in the city. We think he's a civilian."

"Not likely," the man with the cane said, "We got them all."

"What? I'm just an accountant." Alan said, trying to be as innocent as he could. The labcoated man screwed up his eyes in concentration, as if he was trying to remember where he had seen something.

"Yeah right," the blind man said, "Take him somewhere for questioning. Keep him under guard. I'll talk to him later." The soldiers nodded, grabbed Alan, and began to march him away despite his protestations. The two men kept walking.

Yves stopped misstep as they walked past the soldiers. Earl stopped with him.

"Earl?"

"Mmm."

"I just realised. You know that guy that was with the soldiers?"

"Yeah?"

Yves paused.

"'e matches the description that Third Eye gave us."

"Get him."

Earl spun around. "Hold that man! Keep a gun on him at all times!" he yelled, as Yves drew his pistol. It was too late. At the first sound of Earl's voice, Alan twisted his arm out of a soldier's grasp, crushed the soldier's throat with a single blow from his elbow, and rammed his knee into the second soldier's ribcage, crushing it. The third raised his gun, but he was too close, and Alan knocked it aside and grabbed the soldier as Yves opened fire. The bullets hit the soldier in the back, killing him, and Alan threw him at Yves as he ran forward, and fled.

Yves threw the dead soldier off him and looked left and right.

"'e's gone, Earl."

"Great. So we're besieged from outside, in a place we don't know or understand, and a highly trained, lethal, independent operative is loose inside the facility."

"Yeah."

"****!"
 
I misread the previous story where Earl mentions Alan killing the guy in the Bayou. I guess I got the impression he knew who Alan was from that, considering its been established in Alan's intro that the Keepers and Protectors already know who he is.

That said, you're right, its dumb, because currently Alan's only advantage is that nobody really bothers with him because he's small fry. I'll fix it up so that Yves recognises Alan as the guy who the Third Eye's description matches.

Ed: Fixed. Yves realises that Alan matches the description retrieved from the injured Third Eye. We have always been at war with Eurasia.
 
I misread the previous story where Earl mentions Alan killing the guy in the Bayou. I guess I got the impression he knew who Alan was from that, considering its been established in Alan's intro that the Keepers and Protectors already know who he is.

That said, you're right, its dumb, because currently Alan's only advantage is that nobody really bothers with him because he's small fry. I'll fix it up so that Yves recognises Alan as the guy who the Third Eye's description matches.

Ed: Fixed. Yves realises that Alan matches the description retrieved from the injured Third Eye. We have always been at war with Eurasia.

Earl mentioned a murderer on the Bayou in his daily report of 'interesting' events, but didn't pick up any followups in that report. He'd have no way of connecting you to that. Matching the Third Eye description makes a lot more sense, I'll be happy to go with that one. :)

Could you give me a physical description for use in my next story?
 
He's tall, thin, and has medium length shaggy brown hair. He wears a black t-shirt and black tracksuit pants. He looks pretty unassuming, really, except that he's pretty muscular for a thin guy.

If you give me a bit, I can try to find a deviantart picture of some anime dude that looks about how I imagine him in my head.

Found something that looks very, very similar to how I imagine him here, except Alan isn't an anime. :p
 
I always pictured him as looking like this:
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