JNES: Learning to Walk

i changed the name now happy?

No, it still is a cultural ripoff. It still is China, only with a different name and in a different world. ;)

I'll reach you one day, Alex, and I'll make you people, um, speak some silly language.

Jason, sorry, too late. Can't you just remember that its about Werkosely?
 
Contempt said:
Oh, it'll be epic alright. It will be most glorious.

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And after I finish off him, I'll be coming for you Xen. ;)
 
I happen to combine quality with quantity.

In having nothing else to do, there is strenght... Besides, the story about Bahris and his rise to power was SUPPOSED to be short. I got carried away, though...
 
and the story of Bahris was a good read...

In the spirit of quanity here's something I knocked out whilst waiting for things to set.

The Shortened (first four verses) of the main Gargari Creation Myth


In the beginning, there was everything.

The Sculptor God looked out on his intricate creation and was satisfied; every rock, every stone, every drop of water, and every soul was in a prefect alignment, enduring and eternal, frozen like a work of art.

He moved on, leaving his work behind.

And so universe remained, locked in timelessness, for a period that was both infinite and instant, and in the end, meaningless.

Yet this was not as it would always be, for with a great crash; time was broken from its firm bedrock of space, and as the world quivered in the very first breeze, a joyous laugh rolled out over the first dawn. Existence had been loosend from the cluch of changelessness.

Ages passed...

The roots of history wormed their way into the stone of the Sculptors creation. The wind blew, the sun shone, and the clouds scurried across the faces of the mountains, and the spirits of the land sung in each new dawn.
The laughter was seldom heard any more, as the axis of the world turned.

Yet this was not as it would always be, for with a subtle unfurling, what was once mere stone was stone no more, and the first plant turned its leaves to drink in the suns light, and its spirit to hear a warm chuckle. Life had been freed from the creator’s ice.

Ages passed...

A tide of green swept across the world, lapping on the snowy peaks of the high mountains and skimming across waves of the broad oceans. The trees grew, the grass rustled, and the spirits of the plants sung in the warmth of each new dawn.
The laughter was seldom heard anymore, as the axis of the world turned.

Yet this was not as it would always be, for with loud creaking, a tall pine fell the worlds forest, and the light of the sun illuminated what had been gnawing is roots and stripping its bark, and a lowly termite burrowed back into the wood at the sound of a loud guffaw. Animals had been quickened from the grip of immobility.

Ages passed...

The beasts of the field, the air, and the sea multiplied and spread to every nock and cranny of the earth. And as the wolves coursed through the forests, and the eagles soared into the skies, a chorus of shouts, howls, screams, and songs welcomed the light of each new dawn.
The laughter was seldom heard any more, as the axis of the world turned.

Yet this was not as it would always be, for with a hearty bellow of laughter, the first man, little more than a beast himself, announced his presence to the warm light of the morning sun, and across the valleys was answered by an even greater merriment. Beasts that could think had had the scales of thoughtlessness lifted from their eyes.

Ages passed...

Men wandered out across all the places of the world, hunting, fishing, raising children, and growing old. And as the tribes of men looked over their lands, cries of thanks greeting the rise of each new dawn.
The world rang with the laughter of men, as the axis of the world turned.

And who knows what the possessor of the oldest laugh in the world is going to find funny next...
 
@Plexus- you bastard, your starting right next to me.
 
@Xen - Yessir, should be interesting.

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The KINGDOM of ALAHRE

The fishing fleets come in as the sun sets ever lower in the sky, the flat bottomed boats beach on the shoreline and are pulled further inland by teams of men. Terum had negotiated a price of three weights of silver per eighth-ton with one of the more successful fishmongers on the medina's waterfront, a good price by any means - and the catch was decent today.

Terum was a sunbaked man of about fourty-two, portly and, some would say, quick to anger. He and his sons owned a small fishing fleet, just as his father had, and his father's father had. He directed the men unloading the cargo to be cautious:

"Tershnau erútal!.. ai, ai... ai. Cápem."

With the nets of fish unloaded, all that remained was to haul the nets the half-mile or so distance to the shoreline's markets. Terum had the luxury of having a few indentured men, as well as his sons and grandsons, to do the work. He estimated the catch from his three boats was around five-eights, the season was at it's peak, and Terum lined his coin pouch accordingly. Terum was becoming a respected man within the Medina. As the sun moved further towards the horizon, Terum walked alongside the first of many loads of fish - perhaps he could talk that fishmonger up to three and a quarter.
 
Artemia
Government: Monarchy
Ruler: Irius dynasty
Capital City: Iessia
Religion: Artemic polytheism
Economy: Okay
Income: +1 (100% Land Taxes)
Men Available: 5,000
Army: 1 guard (4,500 swordsmen)
Navy: 10 Galleys
Culture: 1
Infrastructure:
Approval Rating: 50%
Resources: None
Major Wonders:
Short Background: To be added soon.
 

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das said:
No, it still is a cultural ripoff. It still is China, only with a different name and in a different world. ;)

I'll reach you one day, Alex, and I'll make you people, um, speak some silly language.

Am i 3rd on your hitlist after contempt and xen? :p

This nes has had one of the largest turnouts I've ever seen... :goodjob: Good job jason! :D
 
Jason you must have read my mind with that battle system!!! no way am i missing out on this.
oh and im wedged between to nations i believe lol this should be fun :evil:

Country Name: Mahabrith
Government:Tribal Council (elders)
Ruler:Elder Guten Runner
Capital City: Nein
Religion: Polytheism
Economy: Okay
Income: +1 (100% Land Taxes)
Men Available: 5,000
Army: 1 Band of swordsmen (250 each)
Navy:
Culture: 1
Infrastructure:
Approval Rating: 50%
Resources: None
Major Wonders:
Short Background:Dwelling mostly in teh mountains, the Mahabrith formed together after Guten Runner gather the elders from all the clans and finally got them to band together as one entity. These are a peaceful people but their warriors (swordsmen) are highly trained and have much stamina from their hikes into the mountains to hunt.
 
Insane_Panda said:
I'm actually closer :-P

your on an islan, hes on the mailnd, push coems to shove, I dont much care about you, since your my cousin anyway. Plexus seems to be more revoved from the large Italiot style of culture that has devloped in the northern hemisphereof this world.
 
the only thing I'm poed abotu is that I had that isnald all prepeed for a city called "Arriso", which is also to be the avernite name for the great central sea.
 
OOC: Jason please say your updating the front page with the new nations :) i want to do what cuiv did.



Preface to the Third edition
It is my pleasure to write the collected works of the Olmec civilization, from its originating point as a small jungle state to the worl......

Chapter 1

On the beginnings of Olmecia.

Olmecia was founded on the strong religious beleifs held by a singular man, known only as "The Prophet". Although this indeed seems itself to be a corrupted word of the orginal. The original word had connotations of worship, Secular and religious power, yet also limitation in compromising with the various Gods and other Secular Councils. The story of the first Prophets early years have only been recorded in this brief story:

"I dreamt, in the Jungle. I saw a Jaguar surrounded by a green aura, He informed me of a great task entrusted to me, He called it "The Hunt" [1].

First I was shown the weapons with which to bring men to the light.

The Axe, The Javalin and the Creed [2]

With these I would bend people to my will. This was my first task. And when I awoke there lay my Axe and my Javalin. I went into the Tribe and I set upo...."

Here the framentary page has corroded, we join again after he has united the nearby Tribes and has set forth on building a City

"...Loyal Jaguar Warriors by my side, The Direction of the Gods in my sleep. I have begun to create a testmount to the Creed and our "Hunt" [1, 2]. The Ignoble peoples nearby have been converted. Shown through the direction our Gods give me the strength of our gods over theirs. Those unworthey of this have been shackled and work the Quarries, and building the great Stone City of my Dreams."

Here the page ends, it is important to note that this was probably the first page in a "codex". basically the first page of a book. Important things of considereation are the time period this was written in. Nearly 200 years after "The Prophet" Died. Although it is to be remarked that the Tribes had a very strong oral tradition, they moved onto a written hierogliphic alphabet in the age of the "7th Prophet" (see chapter 2; On The Prophets).

In the Intervening time between "The Prophet" arrival on the scene and the time of this story being put into writing, several things had appeared. First The Jaguar Warriors had become the elite in society, raiding nearby Settlments for slaves and plunder, they held special privaleges over the rest of society. The Creation of a writing system was followed with a recorded form for numbers, which resulted in a Calender of 360 days, amazingly accurate for such a nation. Seperated into 18 tuins (months) of 20 uins (days), years being recorded as Eins. Recorded from the (supposed) date of the Death of The First Prophet. Buildings were massive and required a great deal of labour. Stepped Pyramids were created for the Temples and other great buildings. The City itself was enclosed in giant wall.

[1] The Hunt, is a literal translation. The Old Olmec writing appears to have undergone several changes through the centuries, in these first years the words were very animilistic, and referred closly to things that happened in nature.

[2] Similarly axe, Javalin are present day names for the Weapons. The Ancient day names were simply hyreolphys of a half-Jaguar half human. The weapons and Creed (sometime translated as beleif etc) were implied by this hyreoglyph.
 
Kentharu stole my starting position almost down to the pixel (two pixels away)... Oh well.
 
im sorry.. damn it i did this twice so far (stealing some ones starting spot)
ill move if you want *hides*
 
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