Louis XXIV
Le Roi Soleil
That's pretty good. I'm short on the facts to add, so I'm not remarkably helpful until I do some research (look on wikipedia).
I would go: Geography (like you have), three kingdoms, unity, Sejong.
Then the stuff about China and Japan, falling to Japan, rising again in the 20th Century. Then something like: Unfortunately, Korea was once again split between factions of the Cold War. Still, Korea managed to rise once again to economic prosperity as one of the Four Asian Tigers. Today, Korea stands once again as a center for science and culture.
Then about the call to unify Korea once again.
But yours works as well. It just has the positives, not the negatives. For me, it's weird writing about cultures that didn't fall. How do they do China? I figured the final lines would be similar to that.
I would go: Geography (like you have), three kingdoms, unity, Sejong.
Then the stuff about China and Japan, falling to Japan, rising again in the 20th Century. Then something like: Unfortunately, Korea was once again split between factions of the Cold War. Still, Korea managed to rise once again to economic prosperity as one of the Four Asian Tigers. Today, Korea stands once again as a center for science and culture.
Then about the call to unify Korea once again.
But yours works as well. It just has the positives, not the negatives. For me, it's weird writing about cultures that didn't fall. How do they do China? I figured the final lines would be similar to that.