LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part II

Lord_Iggy said:
I'm aware of who he is, though I was unaware of that title. Quite an interesting coincidence.

Or intensely complex hidden subliminal messaging, the subtlety and vastness of which we could never even begin to comprehend!!

Right.

Iggy, though I didn't put it in my orders, please try to avoid sinking the Guangfei galley carrying the Way of the One delegation. It wouldn't look good. :rolleyes:
 
Heh, I'm sure it will have an accident none the less :p
 
Alright, going to sleep, I've finished off northern Terrania, Azulia, and most of the Lengel conflicts. I hope to finish tomorrow night, or some time earlier of course.
 
I already made my stance on the map issue clear. Sadly I forgot what my stance was, but I stand by it still and think that its silly to give any universal names before we get anything that could be called a lingua franca.
 
Mhmm, interesting. Turtledove, by the way, is one of the most popular althistorical authors of our time, so technically titles from his work would make sense being here.

Although, to the best of my knowledge, Into the Darkness is actually part of his only fantasy series.

But enough dragging up page-ago discussions. *Waits for the update.*
 
I agree with Terrania and Azulia. Don't like Cultesia.

The names should be Latin-sounding. I would give Citadel names for them, but I'm using english (look at my city names), and English names are ugly. :p
 
Once an overlooked community that people passed through on their way to Zang, Emor became a hub of ever increasing amounts and varieties of goods as Tellium’s trade network expanded and grew. They came from every corner of Tellium and from Delhi and passed through Emor on their way to Kallamas, Salvation or the great port at Andama. As the citizens of Zang found it easier to descend the mountain than for merchants to haul their goods up, Emor became the nation’s prime shopping center, but it may be just as famous as the birthplace of Samuel Deng Nhial.

Samuel Deng Nhial was not born with any particular advantage except ambition and an eagerness to fulfill it. His first job was as a town crier, shouting the latest news through the town square and markets. It was not long until he realized he could do much better by shouting advertisements for some of the city’s more successful merchants. His favorite merchants were food sellers, whom he convinced to provide him with free samples. When these venders joined in a loose co-op called Grain-Mart, overnight Samuel became the best paid town crier in Tellium.

From then on he hired a crew to do the town crying for him while he tended to more exclusive clientele by way of town whispering. He would make personal visits to prominent citizens, influential officials and successful shop owners with samples and special offers. That was how he met Marcus Onasious, the shipping tycoon.

Marcus contracted Samuel to supply his shipping expeditions and Grain-Mart’s first franchise opened in Andama, after that, things began to happen fast. Soon Samuel, and Grain-Mart, was outfitting all that busy port town’s expeditions. Samuel opened Grain-Marts across the country. After that it was the easiest sale of his life to convince his newly wealthy investors to back him as Chairman of Tellium.
 
The ranger sat upon his ramid. His name Thranwuir, Prince of Myocaca. He was accompannied by several men. They went by the name of the Rough Ramid Rangers. Each with their own talent in martial arts and weaponry.

Thrwanwuir by passed them all. Balthazar, commander of the second legion was a master in sword play. Carrying duel swords he was famed for his display at the battle of Asthazar. He was said t have slain 53 davarians and 27 lengel riders.

Holstein was a master archer. Skilled in acrobats and aim he was deadly in ranged warfare. Riding the ramid and firing at great distance. Many told of how his commanding presence in the Yu-Yan archers was achieved threw at the battle of the Fescar Clearing he fired an arrow straight threw the eye of a Lengel general.

Jafar was a skilled axeman. His massive body made him a juggernaut on the battlefield. He and Balthazar would compete for most kills. He carried a broad axe that could slice threw a grown tree like butter. He was said to jumped clear of the ramid, and slice three heads clean off in a row.

The women on the ramid went by Josephine. She was a master of the mace. She carried metal balls with spikes and clean slicers. They were amazing on the battle field keeping the enemy at a fair distance and mutilating any who got to close. She is skilled at acrobats and once escaped capture through jumping clear of a lengel stronghold and landing on her feet with hardly a scratch and leaving 15 dead behind.

The Ramid's name was Serenity. A massive beast he was far bigger than any normal one. Possessing some deformed skin he bore armor and his skin was as strong as dragon scales. He possessed steel hard horns and tusks that scewered men upon them. He broke pikelines with ease and was unstoppable when angered.

This was the crew of Serenity. They were about to enbark on their greatest adventure. They sought the freedom of Bladism.
 
OOC: A reference to Battlestar Galatica? You know, you gotta stop doing that :p

You know, what kind of Myocacan name is Yu-Yan? Sounds like something out of the Avatar. Again ;)
 
Firefly was a good show.

Bill and Ted was fairly funny as well... Tellium. :p

Resuming update by the way.
 
Comparing Divoium to Azulia...

Azulia's a great name and all, but, before it gets hardened into the public consiousness, or something like that, I think Divoium should take its place, as the name has relevance, as opposed to being completely made-up. Just my opinion.
 
Tell me again how America got named ;)

Was there any relevance to it? Hardly, AZULIA!!! :p
 
Some would argue against that; Amerigo was cited by some as a prototype of the later stereotypes of the American (meaning USite) national character. :p
 
(America was named after a lesser known (in his own right, anyway) explorer. That's relevance. DIVOIUM!!! :))

Crosspost to das, who more or less stated my point.
 
Hardly reference :p Tell me again why the obscenely difficult to spell or prounounce Divoum should be put on maps? Torturing those poor geography students in the future... ;)

The Names that are remembered, are easy, catchy, and of course well liked. Divioum is none of that while Azulia is :D
 
Divo=prefix of New Word religion Iggy named, not me.

ium=standard latin-esque suffix.

That's not hard to pronounce, or spell, in my opinion. Of course, as you're spelling it wrong, you may have proven your own point. :p
 
Divo is based off the latin word for sky. I personally prefer Azulia. Maybe there was an explorer named Azul.
 
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