Princes of the Universe, Part I

[kingfire87]

Great update. I noticed from the screenshot that Corinth is the holy city of Christianity. From there, it is gradually spreading to the Mongols, but hasn't reched the completely Hindu areas of Turlan, Myceanae, Otrar, and New Sarai. I like to track how religions spread from one place to another.

 

[raba.yuugi]

Great update, Sis!

Just wanted to point out to you a minor typo in the third paragraph:

"Bayar could still here the echoing booms in his head..."

I believe the here above should be hear.

Looking forward to your next update!

 

[Sam_Yeager]

Just wanted to point out to you a minor typo in the third paragraph:

"Bayar could still here the echoing booms in his head..."

I believe the here above should be hear.

Ah... I'm not the only one who noticed then.

 

[darklordchuckle]

yes another update.

One question thou how do you get so advanced so early?I for some odd reason can't do that.

 

[Civfan333]

Great update Sis!

update soon!

 

[Sisiutil]

Great update!

Looks like you have a long way to go. Can you include your battle plans in the story, maybe as an order from Caesar? I'd like to see how you plan on conquering Mongolia.

This story will all take place within a few days in the city of Mycenian, so we won't see a lot of varied screenshots.

However, your suggestion is an excellent idea for a follow-up story, since the conquest of Mongolia will inevitably follow.

yes another update.

One question thou how do you get so advanced so early?I for some odd reason can't do that.

You should check my strategy articles and the ALC game threads for the answers to that question. Also keep in mind that this was a game in vanilla Civ IV at Prince level, so I managed to build the Oracle, pull off a CS Slingshot, and win the Liberalism race, among other things. Ah, the good old days...

 

[Sisiutil]

Great update, Sis!

Just wanted to point out to you a minor typo in the third paragraph:

"Bayar could still here the echoing booms in his head..."

I believe the here above should be hear.

Looking forward to your next update!

As per the grand Soviet revisionist tradition, this typo you speak of no longer exists. Nor will you, comrade, if you question the infallibility of the great leader again.

(Seriously, thanks for the heads-up.)

 

[Il Corvo Bianco]

Great update, Sis!

Just wanted to point out to you a minor typo in the third paragraph:

"Bayar could still hear the echoing booms in his head..."

I believe the here above should be hear.

Looking forward to your next update!

Typo? What typo are you speaking of, comrade Yaba? Are you doubting about the excellent grammar of our Immortal Leader Sisiutil, perhaps? Be careful! You could be seen as a traitor of the Glorious MotherLand!

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...ok, let's stop it

Great story, by the way. I like how you are using CIV only for the basic storyline or casual picture, writing everything by your own. There are people who basically copy their game log

So, great job

 

[tthf]

great update!
wonder what caesar is up to?

 

[Peck of Arabia]

Phew, I've just slogged through 46 pages, and each one was worth the effort


Even the ones without any updates on...

Seriously though, great story- really enjoying it, keep up the good work, etc, etc!

 

[Sofista]

Great, great story. I can't wait to see how the Mongolian chapter ends. And the duel - have you thought of putting Genghis on a horse, fighting Julius on his feet?

 

[Civfan333]

wasn't there only one duel where the leader duel was detailed though?

 

[r_rolo1]

Yup ,the tokugawa one... great writing BTW. And JC kept the Toku sword

 

[Sisiutil]

wasn't there only one duel where the leader duel was detailed though?

Yup ,the tokugawa one... great writing BTW. And JC kept the Toku sword

So I guess we're overdue, aren't we?

 

[Gooblah]

Hmmm.

Spoiler :

Have Genghis dodge a blow from JC, then jump out of the window onto a horse. A waiting horse is for JC. Then, the duel on horseback, Genghis with whatever Keshiks use. Finally, JC leaps off his horse, and sinks his sword into Genghis heart, through his horse as well!

Wow, I am seriously bored. That idea was pretty bad...

 

[Civfan333]

well, it was a good try!


Please update soon Sis!!!!

 

[Gooblah]

Thanks, CivFan, but it's okay, I know it sucked!

No, I don;t have an inferiority complex, I just recognize bad things when they occur. Anyways, when's the next update Sis? I assume after you wrap up the Shaka ALC..

 

[Sisiutil]

Thanks, CivFan, but it's okay, I know it sucked!

No, I don;t have an inferiority complex, I just recognize bad things when they occur. Anyways, when's the next update Sis? I assume after you wrap up the Shaka ALC..

Oh, no, I won't take that long. I'll try to post the next entry this weekend.

 

[Gooblah]

Cool.

Also, this is labeled PotU, Part 1. What's Part 2 about? BTS I hope. Augustus Caesar carrying on his grand-uncle's legacy as he colonizes a truly New World? Another Civ besides the Romans?

 

[Sam_Yeager]

Cool.

Also, this is labeled PotU, Part 1. What's Part 2 about?

This question came up earlier. I believe it's titled this way because at one stage S. thought he might post more than one thread about this story. Instead it ended all being in one thread. Before you ask, S. has indicated that he's very unlikely to do a similar thread again.