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holy king
Deity
yes, to george lucas if need be.
Mise
isle of lucy
I see. Well your use (or lack thereof) of punctuation is surprising and compelling, very unique, very edgy. I like it, it seems to expose the narrator's (and author's?) psyche as being deeply confused yet at the same time so far ahead of his peers that he is misjudged and misunderstood, like so many other great geniuses and visionaries. I also like the style of language used, it appears rusk yet hides deeper allusions to the mind and to the darkness within. I like that. But what I like most was that it contained mermaids. I like mermaids.
holy king
Deity
thanks.
the fact that people generally liek mermaids played a huge role when i decided to write this.
the fact that people generally liek mermaids played a huge role when i decided to write this.
Miles Teg
Nuclear Powered Mentat
Forma hasn't done audiobooks in forever.
Quackers
The Frog
There are like 150,000 authors who will never get published YOU WILL NEVER GET PUBLISHED.
If there is only 150,000 authors that will never get published the odds should increase with every new author then.
Miles Teg
Nuclear Powered Mentat
They're just authors. This is the Great American Novel. Which is amazing considering the fact that it's author is Austrian.
holy king
Deity
yeah, i think i'm pretty good too.
TheAlamo
Prince
On a scale of one to ten, banana.
azzaman333
meh
This is the most story I have ever read. 5 Gold Stars.
Wahnfried
Chieftain
I need more stuff to read.
But it is interesting.
But it is interesting.
Lone Wolf
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These paragraphs are wonderful. They have all the potential of becoming the beginning of an epic post-modernistic masterpiece that will forever change people's views on consciousness and morality. By the virtue of my free epoche with respect to the being of the experienced world, the momentous fact is that we must not let ourselves be frightened by considerations of the ego cogito and cogitationes, and the description of Tom's struggle the maitre reminds us about it. Multiplicities of immanent time call our attention to the fact that cogitationes need to be criticized with regard to their validity and range, before they can be used for the purposes of a radical grounding of the fundamental form of this universal synthesis, by the fundamental nature of multiplicities of the task of clarifying noetic acts, which is drawn to our attention by the original "reverse mermaid" concept.
holy king
Deity
maybe i have the time to translate another passage soon. let's see.
Harvin87
The Youth
5 stars ... prepare to a be a Nobel laurate holyking
brilliant
brilliant
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