It might be nice to add an extra seafood resource on the Egyptian coast to make building cities there (and on Crete) a little more appealing.
I agree with this. Also the Spartan clam could be moved 1NW, so that Syracuse gets it as well and it would out of egyptian reach to balance the (possible) extra clam south of Crete (1S of Knossos).
This would also help the AI, which decided to settle Knossos and Sparta in my phoenician game.

BTW AnotherPacifist, this leads to a very weak Greece; so when playing with Persia it would be an ideal start.