I spent some time looking at the save tonight, and we are not looking bad. Here are some thoughts:
1. We need to take out Cyrus as soon as we are ready. This means researching Machinery as soon as CS is done. Our cities are in a great pre-war mode at the moment building forges and barracks. As soon as these are complete, we should start building cats all the time. Once Mach is researched, we can switch to Macemen.
2. We only have 2 galleys and should build a couple more. The first Persian casualty should be Sidon. After it is captured (or even before if we enough units), we can use the galleys as bridges to the Persian mainland. Each galley will allow 2 units to cross per turn.
3. We have 2 powerhouse cities suffering from unhappiness - not a good thing. We can make them happy pretty easily by any of the following: a) a trade to Gandhi (silk for gems or sugar); b) by adding military units (archer only 3 turns); or c) by settling silver N of Thebes. I'm reluctant to do anything to aid Gandhi, so advocate building quick archers in those cities.
4. Babylos is in grave danger of flipping--it should be all culture all the time. Switch from Courthouse to Theatre, and MM citizen to work plains tile N of river. Growth will be slow, but it will be doomed without culture anyway. Have the worker who is heading its way build a watermill on this tile, then build farm on grassland tile along river. After theatre is built, work farm for growth. After farm, dyes and watermill are being worked, switch to Caste system and start enlisting artists as the city grows.
5. Religion: Buddhism will be our own religion soon, and to the extent possible while building for war, we should be spreading the religion in our civilization. It will also help us deal with unhappiness. Memphis is our only buddhist city. It should pump out a quick missionary (after the archer) and send it to one of our lesser production cities. That city should build a monastery and start pumping out missionaries.
I'm heading off to China on Sunday for a week, so am hoping I get a turn in before I leave. With a little luck, it will be

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