stErzNES - If first you don't succeed, try try again

I don't read orders until I update... I need to give NPC's orders first otherwise it could be unfair... no?

Anyway i'll start update today (now it's about 7AM) and ones I finish you will see it :)
 
The small village dotted the otherwise pristine and magnificent landscape that the gods themselves crafted, and even fought over. King Tir walked violently through the brush, his body guards close behind him. He was angry that the barbarians, those the gods had punished for their immorality, were not willing to accept the grace of the Samehian Kingdom. Not only did they not wish to be ruled by Tir, but they openly defied him with violence.

Finally on the hill top, Tir examined his army, made of rag tag soldiers clothed in leather and wood. They carried iron swords that could barely be passed as blunt weapons. Their stature was slump, their diets scarce. This is all that stood in the way from the life the Gods promised the Samehians, and absolute destruction at the hands of the barbarians.

Looking disgustingly at the men, Tir turned to the prince, his son, and the general of his army. Sebir looked back at his King. "Have this army trained, clothed, fed, and then trained again. The forces of Sameh will have pride and full stomachs!"

"Yes your magisty."

ORDERS
-Train Spearmen and Archers
-Increase Edumacation.
-Expand in all directions, but mostly on the coast.
-Barbarians will feel the wrath of order. If they don't succumb to being under the control of Sameh, then they will be destroyed. They can become citizens only if they have lived under Sameh for 5 years and served in the military for 5 years. Citizens enjoy certain freedoms and less taxation.
 
Done most orders, 4 more PM's to go. than write it and than I post it :)
 
How's the update coming?
 
I never said I'll finish it at night ;)... Just that what I got left.. I'll finish it today :) I hope the writing would be Ok enough :rolleyes:
 
Update II, 1950BC

Across the world countries conitnue to grow. As Civilization reac the valley of the Ganges also there new nations grow fron the ashes of the ancient barbarian age.

In Normandy the first swordsmen are being trained for somthing new, somthing big. After much planning Normandy invaded Brettonia. Disguised as sailors 200 spearmen make it to the outskirts of London when the Brettonians finaly notice them and attack. The Spearmen are slaughtered to the last one by the bigger Brettonian numbers but not without taking many enemy Spearmen with them. This proved to be a wise act of self-sacrifise when the rest of the Normandian army lands in southern Brettonia. Trying to take London quickly they came to the city and laid siege on it. The Swordsmen worked highly efficiently in destorying enemy spearmen but it wasn't enough to bring London down. Archers fire from the large wooden walls of London slowed the Normandians until stopping them at the gates. More men are needed, and siege weapones wouldn't harm as well. Also the invasions of their homelands brought many Brettonians to take whatever they can and join the army.
( -400 Brettonian Spearmen, -100 Brettonian Archers, +500 Brettonian Peasents, -300 Norman Spearmen, -50 Norman Early swordsmen)

In Inner Anatolia a new breed of wariars quickly rise into power. On hundreds of chariots a threat to the civilized Mesopotamia and eastern mediterian coast rises. The Hittie armies march from their capital in Hatti into all directions bringing down many villages and barbarians. Now they stand at the gates of Antiochian Empire and Trebizond. Will they invade or could they be presued to go to another direction?

With many new farms being built in new lands across the world comes a rise of population. While most remain farmers hudrends and even thousands move into new cities and large villages as settlements apear across the world.

Several countries in the world overspend their money and resources. Too much for a new civilazations causing a further lose in economy than usualy. (-1 economy for everyone who 'killed' an economy for 5 SP's).

It was always expected the the Aegean will not remain peacfull. Athense, Sparta and Thebes the 3 greatest city states, and oldest civilization have clashed for several times before without anything large happnening. But this time it happaned.
The Athenians, Masters of the sea, use their navy to land and take the Thebean italian colonies. They easily take them ofcourse without any real looses. In return for this attack Thebes immidietly lands in several Aegean cities expelling their Athenian citizens away (The settlers escape to create Byzantium) and in alliance with the Thebian Sparta immidietly invades Athense in greece and takes the connection between sparta and the rest of Greece. The war have only begun... How it will continue, no one knows.
(No large looses yet)

Story bonuses
From next turn i'll try to write it inyo the update :)
Erin: +2 Culture, +2 Confidence
Scots: +2 Culture. +2 Confidence
Bharut: +2 Confidence
Kerma: +1 Confidence

OOC: Please PM orders from now on stating your nation name in the subject :)
New unit type starts from rabble training, UU's from Tolerable.
Hmm you can't tell cities to pop. I pop them.
And last but not least sorry for not talking about everyone.
 
cyprus is that small little island near sicilly right?
maybe you should label the map to with what nations they are... its tough to figure out by googling the name of them (and i haven't taken ancient history yet, thats for next year)
 
Cyprus is the easternmost Mediterranean island, it's orange. But why didn't you mention Cyprus? We're just as threatened by the Hittites as Antioch and Trebizond! :(
 
To: Antioch, Israel, and Hatti
From: Cyprus

Suggest we sign a NAP, or an alliance of sorts?
 
Good update erez, I guess Sameh isnt that interesting yet :).

Oh, and how come you are just now starting story bonuses :( I wrote one last time, but u didnt give bonuses in the first update.
 
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