Which story?

Which story/plot sounds more interesting?

  • 1 Tribal

    Votes: 3 75.0%
  • 2 Invalid

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 3 Collapse

    Votes: 1 25.0%

  • Total voters
    4

Kyriakos

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If you like, you can tell me which of the three following plots seems more of interest to you. :) Ultimately one of them will be chosen as the idea for a new short story...

1) Tribal custom; a seemingly simple ceremony, involving a lie, which later on is revealed to be holding back something terrifying. The trick seems to be to make one forget of the danger, so as to carry on.

2) Invalid person that keeps doing the same thing over and over (eg carving lines on some piece of paper or other object), and someone argues it is a code.

3) Large area (eg some vast building, or even a city) which has built-in collapse-points, ie if some objects in a room are moved then the whole collapses.

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Option one is definitely the most interesting to me... and what relevance does the Lovecraft-style picture have, exactly?
 
I like 2
 
#1 sounds like a typical modern wedding ceremony in which the bride and groom promise to love, honor, and cherish and be faithful to each other as long as they both shall live.

In far too many cases nowadays, it's a lie from the get-go.
 
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