Alternate Timeline Building Experiment, v1.0

Silly of me, to miss an entire update... :p

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Priorities: The foundation of the first true Arlitan State, Pelonar. It is to begin with a city more or less in the location of Byzantium and then spread to control the whole straits area, as well as to begin founding trading posts throughout the Mediterranean and Black Seas.

The city upon the location of Byzantion will be Pelonarsus, named after the founding leader of the Empire, Pelonar. Nice and simple, all around. :)
 
The De-unification and Diaspora of the Xanto

As centuries turned and populations grew, so did the rivalries between the many Xanto clans. Domesticated species of wild animals had replaced much of the need for hunting, and the great plains of America sustained the grazing animals' appetites without the need for systemic agriculture. All of this ended when the relatively tame conflicts of the past boiled over into all-out clan warfare between three main factions and their allies. After many years of bloody conflict, the three distinct factions had splintered off and formed distinctive cultures.

What few villages there were at the time of conflict were soon razed and their citizens scattered. Following their ancient traditions, villagers were not highly regarded by most of the wild-hearted Xanto huntsmen and herdsmen, and so what few survived were sent off into the wild with nothing more than a few crude hunting weapons, driven high into the Rocky Mountains. Nothing is currently known about their status, or even if any still survive.

The second defeated faction fled East to the banks of the Mississippi River, taking their possessions and surviving livestock with them. Although they attempted to maintain their previous lifestyle, without the vast rolling plains of the midwest their animals could not simply sustain themselves without aid from humans. Thus they became the first Xanto descendants to develop a systemic agricultural society. They currently live in mid-sized towns and are beginning to develop the sophistications of other civilizations: writing, religion, and trade. They lack a centralized leadership, with each town being completely autonomous. These rugged townsmen call themselves the Panta.

The third and largest, who still called themselves Xanto, retained their traditional lifestyle of razing livestock and grazing across the open plain. They constructed no cities, for they needed none, and moved with their herds taking little else with them. To solidify his hold on power, the victorious clan-chief Anar ordered a massive stronghold built along the banks of the Colorado River. Although it served little practical purpose in times of peace, the wandering herdsmen could fall back to its massive walls in times of war and wait out their invaders. They named this stronghold after their leader. Though it was mostly abandoned during grazing seasons, the clans met their in the winter where they held competitions of strength, courage, and cunning. These clan warriors became the most dangerous irregular troops the world had seen up to that point, although their lack of centralized leadership meant that a true army was not possible.

The war still continues between the Xanto and the Panta, although the fighting has died down to little more than a few skirmishes and raids across the undefined border between them.

PS: this is my first NES, so I'm not entirely sure how much freedom I am allowed in my "orders". Just take what you want :)
 
Again: The Hsin will split into 3 groups.

One group would migrate to Korea and become the most civilized of the lot. They will found Sizlai and will focus on hunting and terrance farming.

The second group would slowly melt into Yueren culture. Becoming a fearful and mutiny constant but valuable elite if they are conquered by dangerous enemies if not.

The Third would expand quickly after the horses and will drive many other normalic tribes farther south, west and into civilized centers.

Prioities: The First group would become civilized. They will focus on minro hunting and horse racing while farming and fighting. They might or might not ally with their brothers or the Yueren.

The second group will become semi-civilized. They would be disgruntled farming and hunting towns and often raid each other. Using horses. The third group, while migrating with their herds, would attack towns of the second and the yueren. They, escaping the chaos of the lost villags, will try to conquer new lands, pushing a great tide upon all chinese civilizations. This will happen every few hundred years.

Prioities: First group civilized. Second semi-civilized and may or may not be conquered. Third group normadize. Rice become a big resource of food for the first and second groups although hunting is still prized. Small jade works are made.

EDIT: First group are known as HaiRen. (Seamen). Second group are ZhanRen (warmen). The third are known as SaiRen (Racemen.)
HaiRen HsinYuan. ZhanRen HsinYuan, SaiRen HsinYuan.
 
By the way, I don't know how much we can say we are interacting with other cultures, but I'm sure the Yueren would indeed appreciate any alliances with the Hsin, as both cultures continue to develop alongside each other. Also, since the Hsin may be adopting Yueren culture, and Yueren may be perfecting their military skills, it might make sense in that sort of way.

But again, not sure - maybe add this to my priorities or something. :)

It'd be really cool if we could continue this, and after the last update, Update 15, we then take control of our nations and play an actual NES with them.
 
The Hai Ren would happily ally with a fellow civilized nation. Indeed, they would be delighted because their legends told that you have cities of Jade. (their special stone.):)

Some Zhan Ren would ask help to gain dominance over others or just invade. If they succeeded in asking aid and won. You will have their gratatude. If you invade some for them. Not only do you have gratatude but also a small core of elite archers that you can draft. ;)

The Sai Ren tribes ignore you, who are civilization? Only targets for plunder! :devil:
 
I wasn't asking animals who defecate in the woods. :D
 
I wasn't asking animals who defecate in the woods. :D

U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Hai Ren aren't animals. They are sub-tier civilization but still civilized.

Zhan Ren are Semi-civilized: they don't have cities but fortified towns.

Sai Ren aren't civilized.
 
Xanto tribes are to settle, and farm. They are also going to splinter over a qwibble about relgion, creating several semicivilized statlettes.
 
Sorry, I kinda jumped in.

you can insert "A group splintered off from the Xanto tribes and" at the start if you like.

Essentially I am trying to force civilization on America earlier than normal, and the more players/nations in the same area, the better chance IMO.

@ Nick [party] Welcome! Dare I suggest you get into JalNESII or FarowNESIII as this one is a bit restrictive (and isn't really a NES anyway)
 
The Seshegi have the following priorities;

1) As they are mostly regional as it is now, much internal development is happening. Therefore, with no foreign influence, they remain barbaric, and there is no such thing as city state development, kingdom foundations etc. The main developments of the region is improvements of the agriculture, where a plow-like tool has been invented and is spreading throughout the region. It is making life a lot easier amongst the peasants, and the dry ground has become easier to farm.

2) The nomadic lords are travelling northwards and subjugating more tribes, but are still only semi-raiders, collecting taxes along their way - therefore this should not be considered a nation. A minor struggle has happened at the Black Sea coast, where two nomad factions found that they both wanted the riches of the same tribe. The Kuzuri and the Sesgway fought, but noone succeeded in dominating each other. The Kuzuri proved victorious.

3) Regarding the city at the coast of the Black Sea, the name of the small village was Yiphesh, and it is somehow rich. Foreign cultures are coming to trade goods for horses with the Seshegi, and therefore the city is somehow prosperous.

City/nation names - Yiphesh, Utaup, Canasshishe, Charyhbdis.
Leader names - Kuzuri (Faction), Sesgway (Faction), Utá (Faction), Petepolis, Amam, Seglashi, Esmepulda.

Please note, though, that the Seshegi will not be expanding militarily - except northwards, where there will be much expansion.
 
@ Nick [party] Welcome! Dare I suggest you get into JalNESII or FarowNESIII as this one is a bit restrictive (and isn't really a NES anyway)

Thanks! I kind of thought this one might be a good place to get a feel for things. I just kinda got in a storytelling mood I guess since originally it was just going to be a general outline, heh. I'll let daft sort out what he wants to take from it :D
 
The Oltaxl oligarchy of judges has ruled the city state of Teoxihuitl for as long as anyone can remember. Endemic warfare with the Talikanan had also been going on for ages. However, the emergence of Oltu forced the Oltaxl to innovate. Rather than endemic tribal warfare as before, the Oltaxl have switched their warfare style to one of total war and annihilation.
Some Oltaxl who didn't like this switch to warfare have left in their boats to other regions. Legend has it that one of the judges Timiquican, was the first to lead an exodus in the boats after a disagreement with the incessant total warfare waged by the Oltaxl.
 
Tianshi Chiefdoms

Civil Strife!

Bloodrider Hanshi (Shaking World) follows in the footsteps of those such as Kaifeng before him and splits off with a good minority of the Tianshi tribes, calling themselves the Diweishi (Earth Guardians). His visions of Mother Earth, in pain at all the Tianshi were doing to her and her people, led him to pursue a more peaceful route. Building off the Areas of Rest such as Xiqu that had come before him, he manages to cobble together a confederation of sorts, formed out of need to defend their new, more sedentary lifestyle.

Predictably, Head Bloodrider Kuaikong (Swift Air) did not take this too well, especially when he found out that quite a large portion of his nomadic city Mucheng had up and left in the middle of the night while he was campaigning; what was worse was that they now called themselves Mushi, which also meant the City of Tents! Furious, he decided to raze the perfidious traitors once and for all.

Unluckily for him, he was fighting a war against people whom many loyalists still considered their brothers, though they were wayward. A third faction even pointed out that this was merely another way to bring Mother Earth under domestication. Furthermore, he had to fight a war to eradicate their lifestyle on their turf while the Diweishi had to fight for their survival and only force the Tianshi to give up.

After a spectacular early defeat at the Battle of Mushi, morale was soon lost. Although the Tianshi still had plenty of reserves and probably could force the Diweishi to capitulate eventually, the military debacle had convinced many that perhaps Father Sky was looking for reconciliation with Mother Earth. Furious, Kuaikong took the Tianshi and abandoned the old lands.

"We'll find a place for us," are his reported last words as he rode off into the sunset; "I hope you do," are Hanshi's. At least, that's the best translation for the bone markings and the accompanying faded remains of the pictures of these two dynamic leaders.

Tianshi: Priorities are to expand down the river, away from their fallen brothers, and start their quest to purify the world once more. Perhaps they could find a few weak tribes to dismantle, to bolster their courage and make sure of their quest in their hearts.

Diweishi: Priorities are to settle down and take over all of Old Tianshi. They're willing to hound the Tianshi at first, but not to the extent that they'll come roaring back with a vengeance. After they've settled down a bit, they will focus on bringing more and more land under their control. They're still warlike, just less than their Sky Brothers.
 
Wow again, thanks very much for all the input, especially kkmo and Nick014 :bowdown:

I didn't expect such details. I feel guilty because there's no way I can give feedback to that... I intend to keep updating this every day, so I will keep the updates brief, but I will refer back to your posts wherever possible.

OK, I'm now updating again. I've actually already done the map, mostly. Should be up within the hour unless I go on another research expedition to Wikipedia.

edit: LightFang, didn't see your post - very cool :D
 
aw, missed the deadline. I forgot they were so rapid.

Looking forward to it.
 
Daftpanzer, what would this 'expedition' to Wikipedia consist of finding, anyway?
 
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