Few things, researching Pottery speeds up research of Writting. Seing that all of these cities have decent food, they would work a lot better for whipping if you set them up with Granaries. Granaries before Libraries - apsolutely. If they grow itno unhapiness, just slowbuild a worker or a settler until unhapiness is gone. Don't take everything we said so verbatim...I said I like to road hills while I'm on them, but that road next to D-K is not really needed. Instead, you could've mined another hill or farm a grassland. D-K is working 2/0/0 tile while you said you feel 3/0/0 is not worth working. You're asking what to do with workers, while, beside food specials, only 3 tiles are improved for 4 cities.
Next to Akkad you have lots of forests still. We said GLH should be chopped, right? You should chop more of them, even if they are not in your culture. That's why we said you need 2 workers there, and here is why I said to go with both workers on grasshill, before PH, to mine them. You'd grow faster in Akkad to size 4 or 5, queue another worker/settler and 2pop whip it with as close to 29/60 or 69/100 for max OF into GLH. You shouldn't have whipped LH in Akkad, that's why you whipped a worker there - to finish LH. How manny hammers you had invested in worker before you whipped it? That whip and chop should've completed a LH - and could've been done on the turn Masonry was researched, so OF from LH would go to GLH. Then regrow building GLH, working probably pig+grasshill mine, on size 3 add PH mine, size 4 put 1-2 turns into worker, whip and repeat. Or grow to size 5 on another FP and then whip.
In D-K I'd rather whip LH than be working 2/0/0 tile, before mines get improved, you'd get 1 more food from fish and could work coast, 2/0/2 tile.
I really think you're waisting worker turns by moving them on, off, back on the tile, and not use their abilities before they run out of movement.
You have Sailing, you don't need roads to connect cities to have trade routes if they are coastal.
I'm trying to give more general advices for you to incorporate in your game, instead of guiding your every turn; I think that should help you more than me saying whip now, put that there, or so..