IsrNES: Beresheet, In the Begining

@Irish Lad- Always wlecome! The only real differences would be that it is more shamanistic, more African. Since I am still working on the update, I will include you.

@Gelion-Perfectly understandable. I will keep you in the PC nations list, but I will not expect orders from you until you sign back up.
 
Israelite9191 said:
@Irish Lad- Always wlecome! The only real differences would be that it is more shamanistic, more African. Since I am still working on the update, I will include you.

So do you want orders from me?
 
In a (probably futile)attempt to stay slightly on-topic...
Israelite9191 said:
Hey, I needed that response to do the update! Do you want your little Teuton ancestor-worshipers to survive or not? I thought so!
Meh, my updates used to run just fine if a response never was sent, and what has it got to do with my Teutonians and their pantheon of heroes anyway???
Yes, that's right, I said pantheon. Wait for my next story to see how history changes the ideals of the first Teutonians.
 
Update 1: 1900 BCE
1862 Hebraic Calendar

G-d’s Power will be directed against your livestock in the field. The horses, donkeys, camels, cattle, and sheep [will die from] a very serious epidemic.
-Ve Era (Exodus) 20:9:3


No one is quite sure where it came from, but the plague has come. Fortunately for us humans though, it is a plague that affects only horses. Thus, this turn, all nations reliant on horses, in other words, without ivory/elephants, will not be able to recruit cavalry. How long this will last, again, no one knows, but it has caught many nations off guard.

Particularly the nations of Egyptra and Upper Egypt, for they could both really use those cavalry at the moment. As if from no where, the Lower Egyptians came crashing southward upon the unprepared Upper Egyptians. With the advantage of surprise on their side, they quickly took over vast tracks of land. Fortunately for the Upper Egyptians, this area of land was sparsely populated and few casualties were reported. Once the Lower Egyptians reached the more heavily populated areas closer to the center of Upper Egypt, the Upper Egyptians superior strategists put their minds to use and drove the Lower Egyptians back some ways. Almost a third of the country still lies under Lower Egyptian rule, perhaps the Lower Egyptians should have accepted Kush’s offer of elephants after all…

While this war is all very interesting, what the real news of the time is the sudden boom in trade all around the world during this past century. This trade has even spawned the recent formation of the nation of the Doha League in the Persian Gulf. Elsewhere, the trade has turned Rome from a backwater fort into a thriving center of trade, but this has had its negative effects, since the people’s religious beliefs focus around war and detest peace, causing a sort of identity crisis among Rome’s people. The trade has also strengthened Rome’s newest rival, Carthage, and Carthage’s old rival, Phoenicia, who is now the strongest naval power and trading power in the world. Besides in the Mediterranean Sea and Persian Gulf, the Athenian traders have tasted their first real taste of trade in a new trade route with Phoenicia, while the Sabaens and Aksumites have created the first vestiges of a Red Sea trade and the Babylonians and Sumerians have harnessed the Euphrates River to the best of their ability to further trade between their two nations.

As to why the Carthaginians and Romans appear to have become fast enemies, a look at southern Italy quickly explains. Though the Romans through fast action and promises of citizenship brought most of the southern Italians under the Eagle, the Carthaginians acted speedily too and have claimed the ‘toe’ of Italy as their own, putting a stranglehold on trade between the Eastern Mediterranean and Western Mediterranean. And with the new Roman city of Neapolis within short distance, no one can tell what Hannibal’s next move will be.

Meanwhile, despite the best efforts of the Athenian civilian leaders, their expansion on land has been cut off by the Macedonians. With the Macedonian horde to the north, the Spartan infantry to the south, and the unrivaled Phoenician navy sailing the Aegean, Athens has little to no room left for peaceful expansion. Meanwhile, the Greco-Slavs of Thrace have continued their uninterrupted expansion northward towards the fertile valley of the Danube. Though the benefits have not reached them yet, a gradual trend is developing with more people farming the river and the population may indeed see a boom in the near future.

Further north the Slavic warriors of Mnogobor’e have begun to skillfully use political bargaining to bring the surrounding Slavs under their leadership. Though they are still small compared to the other nations of the world, and quite undeveloped, they are beginning to feel better about themselves and are slowly developing into a real nation.

At the same time the Germanic warriors of Teutonia have ‘taken up the cross’ so to speak, and become quite zealous in following the Faith of the Ancients (OOC: Erik Mesoy- Could you possibly give your religion a name?). Radically following their ancestral heroes as if they were gods, they have brought the Celtic tribes to their immediate north under their control. Meanwhile, they have come into contact with the Punic people of Marseilles, Marseilles having managed to finally break the wall of the surrounding Celts for the time being.

Down south in the Dark Continent the Nubians of Kush, after the refusal of the Egyptians to the north to accept their trade deal, have begun to look south. Will this continue? Yet further in to the Dark Continent of Africa we find Addis Ababans a little disgruntled with their ruler. Though they like that he is expanding, they don’t like where he is expanding! Though a militaristic people, they still see the obvious benefit of having more control over the Blue Nile and Indian Ocean coastline. Maybe the king should rethink his policies. Meanwhile, the Nok continue their peaceful expansion, mainly among the Yoruba who were used to the Nok culture already. The Hausa, for the most part, however, have blatantly refused to join, independent as they are. With antagonisms running high in border villages, who knows how long this peace can last? (OOC: Kentharu- I need more details in order to do that project you want. Give me a description, a name, stuff like that.)

Mesopotamia looks like it could easily develop into one large mess of a war. The Assyrians in the north have aggressively pushed southwards, taking prized land in-between the Tigris and Euphrates leaving only land on the outside for the Babylonians. With tensions running as high as they are, it is a wonder that the NAP that was signed has even survived the first turn.

The Chinese have continued on pretty much as normal. Well, almost. The nation of Shang has been driven out of their holdings to the south and east of the Huang He by the barbarians displaced by the people of Lu. Lu and Zhou quickly filled in most of the land, but were unable, or unwilling, to take all of it.
 
Here oh NESers! The Map is the Lord! The Map is one!
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Late today or tommorow. They are pretty much done, but I have to do a lot of reasearch on Hungary's foreign policy in 1956 for model UN and probably wont have time to post them.
 
FOUL SCUMMY PIGEATERS!!!

We will burn your cities to the ground. Amun shall block your sun, Osiris sicken your Pharoah, Thoth steal your minds, Nepthys raise your dead back to fight you, Set throw wild beasts into your towns, Anubis block your Pharoah from the afterlife, Hathor throw locusts on your farms, Hapi flood your cities, and Ptah wipe you off the face of very creation! Sekhmet and Horus will lead our armies to our vengeance and your destruction! We will not rest until every single Lower Egyptian calls the Pharoah of Thebes their master!
 
Spoiler original version (previous story) :
These are our greatest heroes, their names and their deeds:
Lutgard the Bearded, who never shrank from battle. He was the first of these to enter the Halls, and all who come after shall look to him for guidance.
Tillo the Arm, who wielded an axe I could never hope to lift. He cut down eight men before entering the Halls and sang as he slew. Great joy was upon him and it is not lessened.
Little Karled, who was mocked for wielding a bow, but he brought wealth to our people and his aim was sure. His arrows are tokens that men carry to remind them of the Halls.
Ludwig Threefinger, truest of friends. He died when he chose to lead an assault upon the village of the Franks and was borne away to the Halls at once, for his death was swift.
Odwacar the Guard, who stood in our village. When the raiders came, he held them off at the gate until we returned. He heaped their corpses five high outside the walls of our village, and his wounds should have been mortal. But he stood long enough to fulfill his duty, and begged for the pyre that would take him away. We granted it at once, and his spirit did not leave him until we had lit the flames.

Over time, religion changes, and worship of dead warriors is especially fluid. It has passed into this: Lutgardism.
We are the People, the þeud, and this is what we believe...
The valiant among us are granted entry into the Halls of Lutgard after their death, where they are greeted by the Gods. These are their names and their attributes:

Lutgard, whose titles are Lord of the Halls, Greatest of All, Fearless One. He watches all men and judges their lives. Those who are not worthy, he will send back to live another life as a man or an animal. All men call upon him before battle. Those he touches become leaders.
Tillo, whose titles are the Strong, Joyful Slayer, He Who Rages. His joy is in the song of battle. Men call upon him to give them strength in battle. Those he touches become berserkers.
Karled, whose titles are Bringer of Wealth, the Sure-Eyed, the Archer. He is patron of those who fight from afar, and he is witness that this is no less a glory than to walk into a mêlée with axe in hand. He watches over those who stand in the second and third ranks. Men call upon him when battle is not yet at its height. Those he touches become rich.
Ludwig, whose titles are Stoutheart, First to Charge, Friend of All. He is at the forefront of every battle and the epitome of trust. Men call upon him when they volunteer. Those he touches gain honor and repute.
Odwacar, whose titles are the Guardian, the Defender, He Who Stands. He guards the village and the home from foes. Men call upon him when in dire need and close to death. Those he touches gain endurance beyond mortality.

History becomes legend, legend becomes myth, and heroes become gods. :D

(*waits for stat updates so he can send orders*)
 
Wow... I knocked the thread unconscious... again...
(24 hours passed after my last post here!)
 
There is nothing more beautiful than the Sea on a warm day, thought Hasdrubal, as he breathed in the clean salt air of the African coast. Carthage basked in the brilliant sunlight, warmed by its ray and refreshed by the cool sea breezes. Hasdrubal stood on a sandy stretch of shore overlooking the harbour, from which vantage point he could see the shifting waves of the ocean and the great trade ships in port.

But from where he stood Hasdrubal could see more than just these things. He could see his people's future in the gleaming orb of fire that reflected off the peaceful water. He could see, from his position at the junction of Earth and Sea, a vast and powerful empire, grander than any other in the world; and at its heart he could see a rich and beautiful city by the Sea.

The landowners put such great stock in their estates. They measure success and failure by how much dirt a man has to his name; they see ultimate power in the accumulation of arrable acres, as though soil for its own sake provides a man with some added strength. They fail to understand the true measure of success; they fail to realize the true source of a nation's power. Success cannot be measured in acres and hectares and bushels of grain; success is measured by the number of ships that frequent our harbours, by the shiploads of cargo that pass through our ports, by the gold and silver accumulated by our merchants and the goods which are accumulated by our people. Land is no measure of wealth; material prosperity is true wealth. And prosperity comes with trade... its comes in with the ships which call at Carthage from ports across the world; and, indeed, the port is busy today.

From the lines of the ships and the emblems of their banners, the Admiral could make out from whence the myriad merchantmen at anchor had come. There were tradeships from Phoenicia, bearing Eastern pottery and textiles; galleons from Marseilles, laden with Gallic lumber for the construction of ships; Hellenic biremes, carrying wines and olives and other good products; and Sicilian galleys, shipping to the Capital the resources of this subjected island province. Hasdrubal knew that these ships and their cargoes were the true wealth of his country. He knew that the prosperity of his people would depend on expanded trade. He believed that ties with Carthage's existing trading partners must be strengthened, and that new partners must be found; further, he believed that valuable resources must essentially be brought under Carthaginian control, and strategic outposts must be established to project the influence and commercial reach of his nation. Hasdrubal knew that Carthage's future glory lay beyond the Sea.
 
Overview of the Government & Polity of Carthage

It is a common misconception amongst the other nations of the Mediterranean Basin that Carthage is governed its Navy, which holds absolute power. This is simply not true. The Carthaginian state is far more complex.

It is important to understand, firstly, that no entity holds absolute authority in Carthage. Power is divided between many levels and several branches of government, each of which holds authority over specific issues, and each of which has something of a moderating effect on the powers of the others.

The first and simplest division in the Carthaginian state is between the civilian and military authorities. The Carthaginian civil government is founded upon a model not altogether unlike the Republic of their Italian rivals. Legislative power at the highest level resides primarilly with the powerful merchant and landed families, and executive power with a leader chosen by those families. The military is separate from this civil power structure. The Admiralty, which commands the Fleet, is the dominant military authority; the Army is a distant second in terms of influence and autonomy.

Carthage's unique historic institutions make it one of the more democratic polities in the Mediterranean, although it is by no means a popular democracy. Its government is also somewhat federal in nature, although this is more by accident than by design. At the highest levels of government are the Senate and the Sufete. The Senate is a legislative body made up of men from the wealthy and powerful families, primarilly those that own large amounts of land, control powerful trading enterprises, or hold great influence in the military. The Senate possesses most of the state's lawmaking power, and serves to regulate and moderate the decisions of the executive. The Senate regulates taxation and revenue, although actual spending is the office of the Sufete. Perhaps the Senate's most potent powers is the authority to declare war. Executive power rests with the Sufete, a sort of "temporary King", similar to the Roman Consul, who is elected by the Senate to a six-year term. The Sufete is responsible for establishing and guiding domestic and foreign policy, and maintaining law and order. Unlike most other states, this "supreme executive" does not hold military command.

The various governors of the nation serve under the authority of the Sufete. Regional government varies by local polity. The state is divided at the regional level into provinces, chartered townships, chartered cities, and free cities. The Province is a relatively large geographical region, under the direct administration of the Carthaginian government by way of a Governor appointed and managed by the Sufete. Provinces have the least autonomy of all subdivisions; the people of the province have little say in taxation and policy. The Chartered Township is a smaller geographical region than a Province, but larger and less densely populated than a city. Townships typically consist of several villages within the same area, which are incorporated together under a Charter from the Senate. The Township, while subject to taxation and policy mandates from the central government, is largely autonomous in deciding local laws; rather than a Governor, the Township is governed by a Town Council, elected by the local population, with only limited oversight from a Carthaginian official. The Chartered City is a geographically small, densely populated area, corresponding generally to a city and its outlaying villages. Chartered cities receive a Charter from the Senate, permitting them to governor themselves by way of an elected City Council with limited Carthaginian oversight, and to regulate their own taxation, so long as they pay an annual tribute mandated by the Carthaginian government and follow Carthaginian policy. Chartered cities are required to pay for their own defense in peacetime, and to raise troops for the Carthaginian military in wartime. Finally, Free Cities are the rarest and most autonomous polities in the Carthaginian state. Free Cities are large, wealthy, powerful cities, which have full autonomy in domestic affairs by way of a City Council. They must maintain their own defenses, provide troops in wartime, and pay a regular tribute to the Carthaginian government.

And power in Carthage devolves to even lower and more popular levels. Carthaginian citizens may at any time hold a Town Meeting (or Citizen Meeting in the Provinces) to discuss laws and policies, to state grievances with the government, and to petition for redress of those grievances. While the decisions made in a Town Meeting have no official legal weight, they often influence government decisions, and help express the will of the people.

Of course, the state cannot exercise its power without the military. The backbone of the Carthaginian military is its fleet, and this is under the command of the Admiralty. The Admiralty is led by the Grand Admiral, the second highest executive officer in Carthage. Under him are many Admirals and unit commanders, as well as various political officers, bureaucrats, agents, and even diplomats. The Army command is smaller and less powerful, consisting of various Generals and unit commanders, with a Major-General only being appointed by the Senate to lead the Army in wartime.

Despite this separation of powers, the miltary's influence is still greatly felt in the civil government, and this is why many historians have mistaken Carthage for a military state. The Sufete is aware that he must rely on the military -- above all, the Fleet -- to enforce his domestic and foreign policies. Furthermore, many members of the Senate also hold military office, are come from military families. Lastly, the Grand Admiral himself holds sway over vast funds, large numbers of men, and many agents of both the military and civil administrations. These influences combine to give the military a great deal of power over the civilian government -- so much so, it could be reasonably said that the Grand Admiral is the most powerful man in the government, even if he is not the official leader of the state.

In all, it could be reasonably said that Carthage is more an association of autonomous and semi-autonomous political entities than an absolute state. The Carthaginian "empire" is more a federation of associated cities and provinces, united by trade, culture, and the need for common defense. This peculiar system provides the Carthaginian people with a degree of political and economic freedom unrivaled in the Mediterannean world, and the Carthaginian state with a degree of flexibility impossible in centralized republics and monarchist states.

(OOC: Wow, rambled a lot more than I meant to.... are we confused yet? ;) And when are orders due?)
 
Orders due Friday. I highly suggest reading the first page, since it says there that orders will always be due, unless otherwise stated, on Fridays at 7:30 U.S. Central Tim (GMT-6). Now to go to bed. I will read your undoubtably good stroy tommorow.
 
To Aksum
From The Kingdom of Addis Ababa

Join the Kingdom. You will find peaceful annexation much more pleasant than forceful annexation.
 
Well, after careful consideration I will take over Marseilles. I just have a few questions that might be answered but which I have overlooked :p

After trade it says stable - 3-1-3... what do the last three numbers mean?
How long are the turns (appro. yearwise)
Is it IT/BT system?
Orders... should they just be general if the turnsets (years) are long?
Is all this answered in the prewiev someone mentioned? :p
 
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