Killing likeness

Kyriakos

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I just finished writing something. Glassfan noted that i seemed to never mention the crisis in my works, so i thought of writing something that is related to some degree with it.
The main plot is that someone metamorphoses himself, by losing weight and shaving his beard, into the likeness of the prime minister that brought this country to hell. He does that due to having the end of rising the anger of a madman, who he occasionally shows himself to. The madman is homeless, due to the crisis, and hates that political figure.
In the end the man with the likeness to him is killed brutally. He wanted to commit suicide, but perhaps he changed his mind, when it was too late.

The story is only on the surface about the political situation, although it can be seen as a satire too, the likeness of the prime minister being all other political figures in the country, being equally guilty. But the main point of it is that people need an outlet for their anger, and to them in the crucial moment it might not matter if that outlet is logical, or quasi-logical, or even downright mad. In times of plight people can become beasts, to paraphrase a bit the beginning sentences of the tale.

I would be interested in reading what you thought of this idea. It is literature, but at the same time political. Personally i am not that detached from it already (just finished it) to know if it is worth anything. I might send it to a magazine if i get some positive feedback by those who read me on a regular basis.
 
Could be a good short story.
 
Could be a good short story.

Well it is not great by any means (i think i can tell while writing it) but the main issue might be that it could be seen as sensationalist. But at this point it does not really matter, since the collective will for retribution would be expressed with more civility through literature, rather than through burning buildings.
 
There is nothing wrong with being a "sensationalist" as long as you are one of the first.

Polish the story quickly and try to publish.

There must be a market for such a short story - now.
 
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But the Prime Minister looks like such a nice guy. Does your protagonist have a love-interest who tries to save him but is tragically killed in a scuffle with the brutal riot Police? He tries to save her but the Police think he's the PM and drag him off to a bunker, and ruthlessly carry out his increasingly incoherent commands which result even more ironic unintentional violence?
 
The story refers to the previous pm, Papandreou. Not that Papademos is very liked now either, but Papandreou has an 8% approval rate.

And, yes, i suppose there is a market for such a story at the moment. Doesn't mean it will become published though, since the publishers have to realize the market exists, which is not taken for granted...
 
According to my exhaustive research (watching My Big Fat Greek Wedding), the Greeks gave us Democracy, Astronomy and Literature. Now they will bravely lead us out of the Euro...
 
Shaving your beard and acting like a PM seems like a strange voodoo ritual to me. The idea is great - you could add a bit of mystic and madness to such stories.
 
I'd love to adapt that into a screenplay, PM me if you're interested Kyriakos. I think the general plot-outline would work for nearly every country and for nearly any political situation.
 
Ohio has the Euro?

Oh, well, you got me there. I meant Greece will lead the Euros out of the Euro.

But seriously, since this is a red diamond thingy, are you guys watching Youtube? Athens is burning - serious rioting, Molotov cocktails, Cops on fire, teargas, beatings and arrests. Makes our American occupy protests look wussy.
 
Happy i don't live in Athens.

And i hope they burn, since this charade of the eurozone has to end (by which i do not mean our illustrious selves being kicked out, but the euro-fat cats not helping) :\

To think that up to 2008 Greece was one of the 30 richest countries in the world...
 
What if the prime minister gets really depressed due to all the stuff that's happening and ends up growing a beard, starts losing control of his life, and ends up homeless? And in the end somebody confuses the homeless guy (who shaved his beard, etc.) for the prime minister? Of course that's just my take on it ;)
 
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