LINESII- Into the Darkness

Silver Steak said:
Still, barbaric artistry! :p

Sorry if I'm being a jerk, but I kinda get a kick out of insisting on your barbarism. Nothing personal, really. There's plenty of culturally pathetic (literally!) nations to pick from. You got single out for, well, your annoying bronze tech and your so-called religion. ;) I still like you. (And I would like you even more if you reclaimed Clous...) :)
Its okay. after next turn. My culture will be AVERAGE :woohoo:
 
So then you'll be the average barbarian, and not a completely pathetic one? :lol:
 
Iggy send me my stats, so I can send orders
 
No, but it might be interesting for other players. Plus it increases post count.
Well, that's hitting the nail on the head.

Wubba, send basic orders for how you want your nation to start, like a BT. You technically don't exist yet, so there's nothing to base your nation on yet.

About orders. I like them in on Fridays or earlier. I will often accept them as I'm updating if it doesn't force me to rewrite anything.
 
Prologue: Sand & Spears


The sun began to set upon the sandy beach, casting shadows across the rich coast. Two figures stood upon the beach, one an old man while the other a young boy. Both were equipped with copper spears.

The old man stood across from the boy, spear at a slight slant. His hair was worn white with age, and it was tied down in a long ponytail behind his back. He wore simple clothes, a pair of white breeches and a white cloth shirt. Ancient wrinkles dug into his face, giving him an appearance of wisdom and experience.

The boy stood opposite from the old man, clutching his spear nervously between sweating hands. The boy had short, brown hair that had been just recently cut off. Like the old man, he wore simply white clothes. However, they were cutoff shorter than the old man’s were. The clothes of an inductee. Without a sound, the old man thrust his spear at the boy’s middle.

The boy let out a low grunt, fluidly ducked underneath the swipe, and returned with a blow of his own. The older man easily dodged and bent forward with a low swipe from his own spear. The copperhead grazed the boy’s left thigh, drawing a thin trickle of blood from the wound.

“Ahh!” The boy let out a low cry, more out of surprise than actual pain. He fell to the sandy ground, dropping the copper spear beside him. The man stood glued to the spot, face unwavering.

“Get up.” The man finally said, lowering a hand to help the boy off the beach.

“No!” The boy moaned, pretending to be in pain.

“…I said get up.” The older man repeated, hand still lowered. He was once again met with refusal, the boy staying on the ground whining. “Fine, rot in the sand. Maybe a shark or something will get you.” The man walked off over the sandy dune, leaving the boy groaning on the ground.

The boy jumped up without the slightest grimace of pain. “ H-Hey! Wait up Grandfather!” The boy called out, jogging after the older man. “Wait!” He called out again, struggling for breath.

The boy finally crossed over the peak of the hill, casting his shadow on the small hut at the base of the dune. Made out of twigs and brush found scattered over the beach, it was a modest home. The boy, after pausing for a second, continued to run down the hill. Without the briefest pauses, however , he ran into the building. The door slammed back onto its hinges, shacking the whole shack.

“I said not to slam the door.” The old man said, drawing a pot of tea over an open fire. The copper kettle hissed with displeasure, a torrent of steam pouring out of the handle.

“I’m sorry Grandfather, but why don’t we continue?”

“…..You know why Joel.” The old man said, clearly exasperated and exhausted.

“But Grandfather, you promised to teach me archery after spear practice today!” The boy continued to whine.

“Not today.” The man said.

“But-“ The boy began before getting cut off by his uncle.

“I said not today Joel!” The man said irritably, pouring himself a cup of the herbal tea. The cup was a small, copper one with an ancient dragon design carved into it. The words “Briach Liun Kali” we inscribed above the dragon. “Go. Study your books or something Joel.” The man instructed.

“……Alright Grandfather.” The boy sighed, moving over to a small cot set in up the corner and grabbing a book from a small shelf. He sat down on the cot and began reading texts from it.

The old man sat in the other corner, drinking his cup of tea and reading pouring over a small parchment of papyrus. The man sighed again, and began to massage his rheumatic hands. With another low sigh, the old man stood up, stretching his rickety joints, and moved to sit beside the boy on the cot. “….How long has it been Joel?”

“…………What?”

“How long has it been since you were sent to train with me?”

“Three years Grandfather.”

“And what did I tell you on that first day?”

“…Not to drink the seawater?” The boy said with a slight smile.

“What other than that?” The man said, returning the smile.

“……That it wouldn’t be easy……”

“Yes, Joel. Has it been easy?”

“Not the slightest bit.”

“Yes. You’ve suffered cuts, bruises, and broken bones. Right?”

“Yes Grandfather.”

“Despite all those injuries, do you wish to continue?”

“…Yes.”

“So you want to continue with your training?”

“Yes, Grandfather I do.”

“Alright, the go to sleep. It’s late.” He said ruffling the boy’s hair. “ We’ll start with the bow tomorrow morning, okay?”

“Yes, Grandfather.” The boy said with a smile, putting the book away and laying down to go to sleep.

The Next Day

A horse quietly grazed on some weeds that poked up out of the sand. A new figure with red hair knocked gently upon the wood door, tenderly shaking the frame of the building. A second later the old man jerked the door open and squeezed through it. “I told you to wait!” He hissed.

“Forgive me.” The other man said with a smile.

“Not this late Jol! I told you to come around midday, not the first hour of the day.” He continued to hiss.

“Alright, alright!” The man laughed. “So are we going in or what?”

“No.” The old man said sharply. The other man’s face sunk. After a short pause, the old man spoke again. “…I told you three years ago that you couldn’t see the boy. You know that if he sees-.” He tried to comfort before getting cut off.

“ –“The plan would be ruined” and all that other crap. Yea, I know what you said. But you also said I could see the boy sometime!”

“Yes, and had you been on time you could have! He’s up now, you fool. You want to explain who you are when he finds us talking?”

“….Here. Give the boy this.” He said suddenly, shoving a large volume wrapped in brown paper into the old man’s hands. Then he spun on his heels and took off towards where the mahogany horse stood.

“Jol! Wait a minute, will you?” The old man called out, running with a broken gait towards the red-headed man. “Give me a second, will ya boy?”

“Good-bye.” The man stated simply, turning the horse around and taking off.

The old man gazed after the man, gently holding the volume in his hands. After a minute, he sighed and then limped back into the shack. He threw the book onto the small table in front of the boy, the book landing with a hard thud. “Here.”

“Huh?” The boy quizzed, staring at the parcel in front of him.

“Open it.”

The boy slid the brown sheet off the book, and gazed the inscribed title. It was writing in some foreign tongue. “What is it?” He asked the old man.

“Its Veritasian. The tongue of the people to the southwest.” He explained to the boy.

“What does it say?”

“See these three words here?” The old man asked, pointing to the three words that rested above the other two lines of text. “They say “Lord Stratikrator Strategius"

"Whose that?"

"A Veritasain general. He lead the assault against Eldar."

"So you served with him?"

"Yes, for a short time. But only for that battle."

"Cool."

"Alright, you can read later. Time for practice."


Got tired of writing at the end, if you can tell. Anyway, I'm setting up for a four part story, hoefully all writen in the next turn. Sending orders anyway.
 
The tongue of Veritas is Valin...but besides that, great story!

About why my story's not finished yet:

I rode up, around, and back, and done. The meter said, km: 31.

Thirty-one kilometers' what I had to do, I would have died at thirty-two.


Other fun events included riding into an overflowing river, and getting hopelessly lost in random (nice looking) countryside.

But I'm writing it. And it's good. For reference, Part Two takes place somewhere near the coast where the Bladists' river meets the ocean.
 
Silver Steak said:
No nefarious orders, I hope? :hmm: ;)
Not this time. For that, you'll need to wait until after my wonder finishes. ;)
 
Do i need to send orders iggy?
 
Grr, what a horrible time for Kal'Thzar to lose internet connection.

Assume that he won't surrender if there's no diplo.
 
Ancient History:

Prologue

Part One

Part Two

Part Three:

“There are three ways in Tellus to get what you want: War, prayer, and both. Traditionally Veritas has chosen the ‘both’ option.”

-Stratikrator Celian I, 355 P.D.

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Veritas, the Catastrophe, 912 P.D.

The world had changed, and the skies knew it. Yesterday, the sun shined as a new day greeted the Light of the World, the shining peak of the Arch of the Exodus reflecting the sun. Today, no sun shined on the mourning ruin of a Republic. The High Assemblum was destroyed, for the first time in history.

A light rain began to fall on the corpse of a beautiful place. It would seem that the Prophecy of the First Elder would go unfulfilled.

Adrian screamed, but there were none to hear it. Sliding off the fallen column where he had woken, his eyes widened with horror at the scope of the disaster. The Great Haggles…the Court of Dominius, the Gardens of the Elders…all utterly destroyed! A millennium’s work undone! He wept softly.

“And so that a greater city might be built in its place…”

The words of Strategius echoed in the boy’s head. He straightened his back, and wiped off his tears. It was all a game, really. Like a great game of Strategy. The black side had captured the fort, that is all. It can be retaken, if the white side manages to control its actions. The greatest opportunity lies in the greatest defeat after all.

These were words that he had heard from his father Sempronius. Repeating them in his head, he tried to stay calm. What would he do now, though? There was something that he had to do…with knowledge…and the Truth.

"You shall begin in the deep places. Seek the first who died.”

Deep places…first who died. What could that possibly mean? Adrian struggled to remember the dream, but it was like holding water. He almost sunk into despair again.

Then, a vision.

Soldiers, wearing little or no armor at all, were carried through the streets in honor. A city wept, and a world wept…because they had never seen war before. All through Veritas there was a great digging, and a massive shaft cut deep into the ground. Lamps were lit, and incense embalmed the heroes who knew not their fate. They would sleep in darkness, and in light…

The Catacombs. That was where they buried the victims of the Zibonian War. Or the First War, as some called it.

Adrian began to walk away from Veritas towards the Shepherd’s Hills, just as the great burning began. Warriors cried, and peasants wept, but he heard none of it. Soon, Adrian reached the spot…though he didn’t remember the journey. Walking like a man entranced, he was drawn towards the gaping tunnel entrance. The door was ripped off, and the shaft gaped like the toothless mouth of a huge beast.

He slowly walked inside.

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Khadon, Khemri, 913 P.D.

King Rhama Khemr III was not a happy man. Sure, Veritas had been destroyed in a massive earthquake…that was good. And the Nurmaferis were retreating, as always. But nonetheless, things were not always as they seemed. The Ramids had come out of nowhere, in that great battle that Khemr witnessed as a mere child. It devastated the Khemran troops before a hail of arrows brought it down.

What would be the next Ramid for Khemri?

Perhaps it was just nervous anxiety, the type that all rulers get after a while. The king sighed, and walked to the great balcony in his palace. He could see the sunset, and gaze at the great harbor that held what was now the largest city in the world.

---

Quintalis and Sempronius were wearing black. Most of the army was. The sun was setting, that was good. Hopefully they would be able to secure the capital within the night. Using handsigns, they motioned the contingent of Latismen to the front of the ship. It was always said that the Latismen were the closest to the One in the army…because they died so often. But many men signed up, for the handcrafted latis, the extra pieces of silver, or a love of danger.

They glided through the muddy waters of the Khim, grounding the galleys among the shoreline weeds. A gangplank was lowered, and the Latismen padded silently onto shore. Their task was to secure the western bridge over the Khim, and then storm the Palace.

“Goodbye, my lord Stratikrator.”

“I wish you well, Oceanus.”

As the Biremes slid back into the ocean to encircle the city, Sempronius lifted his blade. It was forged in Lux, one of few existing in Veritas at the time…pure bronze. Shorter and flatter than a spear, and longer than a latis, it could only be called a sword.

A lone Khemran sentry stood on the causeway, staring at the road towards Alexandria. What a boring job he had…if only something exciting would happen. Like Nurmaferi spies! He made the usual hourly call to the guard tower, or at least he tried to.

“One past dusk, and all is we---“

At that point his speech was cut off by a Veritasan arrow, proving that all was definitely not well. As the copper head neatly severed his vocal cords, he collapsed to the ground, gurgling. His comrade in the tower peered out of the window to see what was wrong, and saw the sight that all soldiers secretly fear.

The bridge-guard lay dead, and the bridge itself filled up with the dark cloaks of enemies. Dull latis-blades shone red in the setting sun, and the young sentry gasped with horror. Retreating inside the tower behind a hail of arrows, he rang the alarm bell. It clanged twice, and fell silent, as soldiers collapsed the wooden tower.

Soon the latises silently filtered into the city, harbingers of the Republic as the sun set over Khemri.

---

For a moment, King Rhama Khemr III failed to believe his eyes. As the sun retreated behind a bank of cloud to disappear for the day, the clash of weapons could be heard from the city below. How could this come to the heart of his empire?

Suddenly it occurred to him. Veritas! They were the only ones that could have gotten here. They had to be thrown back…for Khemri’s sake.

Turning and rushing back into his throne-room, he called for his servants.

“Steward! Rally the royal guards! We must go down into the city, Veritas is attacking!”

“The Steward of the Palace is in the custody of the Republic, king.”

A man in a deep purple cloak sat in the throne. He had white hair, and a long blade in his hands.

“Who are you?”

“My name is Sempronius. I am here on the behalf of the Assemblum of Veritas, who calls for your present surrender and withdrawal from Nurmafer.”

“A pity, soldiering dog. Apparently your little Assemblum is dead…I suppose your “One” doesn’t like you much at all.”

Sempronius tensed. His fists shook with rage.

“King Rhama Khemr III, I now pronounce your present death, in the name of the Assemblum, the One, and the Republic of Veritas.”

The absolute ruler of the largest nation on earth spat on the floor.

“You’ll have to do better than that.”

They circled each other, slowly. The King of Khemri always carried a long dagger with him, probably a relic of his old fighting days in Nurmafer. He charged Sempronius, who swiped his enemy’s blade to the floor, and then brought it upward in a vicious slash. It cleaved open Khemr’s chestplate, who then jumped backwards, heavily bleeding.

“Surrender and you’ll survive. I promise that.”

“No, I will die. And you will as well.”

Withdrawing another dagger, he came in slashing from the left, then stabbed the Veritasan in the face from the other side. Sempronius’ knee slammed into his stomach, but nonetheless he held his ground. As the blade of the king cut into his face, the two warriors faces closed together. Bleeding as he was, the Stratikrator smiled.

“Goodbye.”

“What?”

That was the last word the King of Khemri ever spoke. A small group of Phoenix Archers had filtered into the throne room during the duel, and the Oceanus herself fired the arrow that pierced his chest. Openmouthed with shock and surprise, he died the death of a warrior.

Then the successor to Strategius too collapsed, under the weight of his wounds. And he was as worthy of a great death as his forefathers.

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Eldrar, 863 Postum Diasporum

The door was beautiful. It probably took some Eldranian craftsman months to make. Beautiful polished oak with a solid finish, flowers and vines were painstakingly etched into the wood with a chisel, and then painted. An intricate, beautiful portrait of some ancient priest formed the centerpiece, with elaborate gold leaf surrounding his face.

Of course, it was smashed to splinters by the armored boot of Strategius. Finally, at long last his life would be fulfilled. The great evil would be vanquished.

Even the rage-filled Stratikrator took a moment to gaze at the immense main chamber. It wasn’t beautiful…it was bare. A huge vaulted ceiling reached up into the darkness. The entire room was dark, except for a single torch. It sat next to a tall, thin man wearing a gray robe. He was kneeling in front of a massive statue of Eldos, over seventy feet tall.

“High Priest Eldan.”

“Hello Strategius. I’ve been waiting here for you.”

He clenched his fist.

“You are the very symbol of evil in our world. The poisoned words of your demon brood…look what they have done to this world! So many slaughtered, and your own people! I could never imagine a more monstrous demon.”

The High Priest smiled.

“And what are you going to do about it?”

But Strategius had no words. He knocked an arrow to a massive longbow that he’d been carrying on his back, and fired an arrow. To his shock, Eldan caught it.

“You know, it may be a bit more difficult to kill me.”

In his hands appeared a half-spear, a slim copper blade attached to the end of a quarterstaff. He walked steadily toward Strategius.

The Autorex stood still for a split second…and charged towards Eldan, a latis appearing in his hands. Their blades met.

In the sputtering light from the torch by Eldos, they fought. Whirling his spear, the High Priest brought it down onto the head of the Stratikrator, who stepped to the side as it grazed him. Before Eldan could react, the Veritasan thrust his latis down, snapping the unprepared spear of the High Priest in half.

But the Eldranian picked up the spear-blade, using it as a dagger. Finally he hurled it at Strategius, who dodged and got behind him, tripping his legs in the robe.

The High Priest fell to the ground. Strategius merely stared…and then his massive, gauntleted fist smashed Eldan in the face.

As his mouth bled, the High Priest wept…and Strategius let his axe fall. It was over. They had lost the will to fight. Coughing on blood, Eldan spoke haltingly.

“Now that your rage has calmed, Autorex, look at the statue of Eldos. What is in his right hand?”

“A spear.”

“And in his left?”

“A tree.”

“Does that remind you of anything?”

He thought for a while, trying to calm a mind that was blank with hatred and fatigue. But nothing came.

“No.”

“Any…One?”

The Arch of the Exodus, in Veritas far away. The Statue of the One! Strategius fell to the ground, sobbing like a child.

“Almighty One, how can it be? Eldos is evil! How can he be the One?”

“I understand now, Strategius. All the evil done by the High Priests, all their false visions of Eldos, all their lies. Eldrania was a horrible land, and its people became fanatical demons. You did well to destroy it. But the legends of Veritas and Eldrania being of the same race were true.”

“I do not understand.”

“And neither did I. But I found this buried in the hands of the first High Priest as I examined his grave. Strategius, it is the Truth.”

He placed a small scroll into the Autorex’s hands.

“Those who seek knowledge will find it, Strategius.”

“Leave me.”

“Die in peace, my friend.”

The figure of Eldan faded into the darkness.
 
DEATH TO VERITAS! Kill the warmongers! ;) Long Live Khemri! :D
 
He did respond some time ago, saying that he won't surrender. so...

orders will come tonight, withing 2-3 hours from this post.
 
I will send orders as soon as possible. I have my own update to worry about as well. Ach, I've never been this busy!

EDIT: Curse you, Kal! :cry:
 
You're closing 5000 posts, Iggy! :eek: Next summer you'll reach 10k at this rate.
 
Wise choice. I'm still too young and careless to worry about being banned. ;)
 
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