vyeh
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I'm sorry I didn't gave feedback in my last post. I'm not really good with feedback.
You did give feedback. You said you loved the map.
it really feels as a real and believable new world.![]()
This is the most important comment.
My apologies in advance if I'm going too far.
No such thing. Take a look at some of my posts in this thread. I was a nitpicker and all Kilkakon did was thank me.

1. In the southern part of the map is a continent with a shipwreckage on it. I noticed that in comparison with some other continents this one is very dry and might be more difficult to build an empire on.
That is an unfortunate side effect of the Starship wreckage; it's all arid and casts a pretty big rain shadow. I can add some rivers on the western side if you think that would help.
It might be possible to stack individual Monsoon Jungle squares on top of the landmark. Also nutrient bonus squares can be put anywhere.
2. At the northwestern continent I counted 4 special landmarks but IMHO it feels a little unbalanced to have them all here. (Strawberry Fields, Ruins, Gold field and Garland Crater.) There are 2 other smaller continents (Seafoam island in the southwest and the island Proving Grounds) who don't have a Landmark yet.
Placing the Fields was tough. I placed them where they are so they are a bit smaller than usual. The idea of that continent was that if two people land on it it'll be pretty interesting, but I have yet to have a game where two people did. I'm happy to move Meora's Legacy to Proving Grounds though.
Seafoam Island and the neighbouring isles are deliberately small -- it's the reason the Seafoam Collective faction exists! They move from it because they ran out of room. Obviously any human starting there would make a beeline to Naval Exploration.
In the game that my friend and I have been playing, the Assassins started on the tiny bit of land above Janus Strait!Talk about poor starting position. Rakis started on Iceveil Headland but managed to get a boat across and build a few cities on the major landmass nearby. Betrayed started on Proving Grounds and hopped over to the major landmass too. True Arena was on Seafoam Island. -- Seriously only Adventurers and I got a start on a continent!
(friend was pirates)
JH24, good point.
Kilkakon, besides making a map, you might try creating a scenario where you place your first seven factions and then playtest the scenario to see how balanced the starting positions are.
3. The southeastern continent looks great but IMHO it feels as if there's too little variation regarding land and perhaps a bit too much of the land to settle on. If you wish, you could for example add a mountain range, hills or small inland lakes/seas to reduce some of the land a little.
Plenty of landmarks though! I can cut the mountain in half though (the SErn part is just one large mountain) or perhaps enlargen Dragon Bay slighty. Looking at it again, I'm pretty happy with the size but am willing to consider losing a few squares in the name of balance.
I like the idea of inland lakes.
4. I don't know exactly what the function will be of the mystic ruins, but I felt the location of these ruins is a bit flat. The ruins don't really stand out from the map. For example you could surround them with a group of mountains or put them on an elevated landmark to increase their importance.
The game makes the land flat there so they don't appear dodgy, same for Starship Wreckage. The Ruins give controlling factions +1 PLANET.
I like the idea of surrounding them with a barrier.
If you have any specific questions or want me to focus on special parts of your map, please let me know. I'll really do my best to help.![]()
Sure well I feel pretty good about it overall. What do you think of what I said above?
JH24, maybe if you would replicate your comment about real and believable in the download section, that would be helpful.
Kilkakon, I think a few iterations of the map is in order, especially since you have someone to provide feedback. It would be nice to have a new map that single players can enjoy.
I hope my comments are understandable. I am use to only having to respond to one person at a time.
