[MOD] Fall from Heaven

jamie006 said:
If you are going to make some scenro maps a alagaesia map from eragon and eldest.....

Im not so sure what the end of that sentance means but scenerios are speced for "Ice" the last of the 4 versions of phase 2. It is put off until last because I need all of the components introduced in the former 3 versions to build the scenerios I have in mind.
 
Proof reading.

Here is the full pedia entry for Sphener and Mardero if anyone is curious or willing to offer editing advice:

[tab]The room was perfectly formed, identical grey tiles covered the floor and fluted columns were evenly spaced throughout the hall. Angels knelt or were seated according to their rank, which was also reflected in their dress, although the differences were often to slight for mortal eyes to recognize. In fact the perfection of the chamber, from the exact proportions to each fold in every angels robe, was so offsetting to mortal eyes that even the most precise couldn’t help feeling like he threw the room, or the entire heaven, out of balance by his existence.
[tab]Junil stood in the center of the chamber unwavering. Words and reports were unnecessary, there was no outward sign of stress or panic, yet every angels focus was on the same event, sacred ground was being desecrated. It was the Seven Firs, the place that the Compact was signed. It was sacred to many gods but Junil had committed to keeping the area safe before the gods had agreed to the Compact, to ensure that the Gods and their emissaries could meet there safely. And now that oath wasn’t being kept.
[tab]It was the Compact itself that caused the problem, it stated that the gods and angels couldn’t intervene directly with the affairs of men, instead they had to work through them in various limited and archaic means, none of which helped in this situation. Those loyal to Junil had been killed, struck down quickly from a form of stealth that obscured even the site of the angelic watchers.
[tab]In the Seven Firs there was a symbol for each of the gods that existed at the time of the Compact. The svartalfar were stealing the symbols, all those except the symbol of their own god Esus. Junil’s symbol was a sword and shield that hung from one of the trees in the glade. A svartalfar assassin went to claim the symbol as a personal trophy.
[tab]Sphener broke the perfection of the room and stood. The angel opposite him, who was supposed to mirror his movements in every ritualized action seemed confused. Was he supposed to follow, was this some ritual he had forgotten or was Sphener breaking the laws of the chamber? Other angels in the chamber, including Spheners own lord, allowed a brief crease of annoyance to cross their foreheads to show their extreme disapproval of Sphener’s action. Junil showed no reaction.
[tab]Sphener crossed the perfect floor and kneeled before the god of law. He spoke, following the tradition of the few mortals that had come here to petition Junil as an angel had never done it before.
[tab]"Great lord, allow me to keep your promise and protect the Seven Firs. Cast me from the vault, take from me the divine essence and have me reborn mortal such that my actions will not break the Compact and both oaths will remain fulfilled."
[tab]Junil turned his eyes to the prostrate lesser angel. His hesitation was not concern but a consideration of the possible outcomes, would Sphener be able to defend the Firs, was Sphener more useful in creation than he was in heaven, was there another way to maintain both oaths, what would keep the same event from occurring again? Junil turned his focus on the svartalfar attackers and decided that Sphener could defeat them, the laws were clear, if an angel wished to fall he could.
[tab]Junil responded with only one word, "Approved", and Sphener was gone from the chamber.
[tab]The svartalfar assassin smiled as he considered his own reflection in the swords gleaming blade. The sword was to heavy and long for him but it would sell for a lifetimes wages. Then the sword was yanked out of his hands, he spun expecting to see one of his companions and found himself staring into the breastplate of an 8 foot tall angel instead.
[tab]The sword was functional as well as ornamental and Sphener cut him down. Like a sythe through grain Sphener set on the rest, they were killed quickly but it took longer for Sphener to replace all of the artifacts and remove any trace that they had been there from the Firs. When it was finally complete he knelt and prayed.
[tab]When he ended his prayer the Firs were gone, Junil had removed it from creation to keep it safe, all that was left behind was the sword and shield. Sphener took them and headed into the woods, he had long been curious about creation and looked forward to serving Junil in this new role.

[tab]The basilica was flooded with screaming, a mob calling for the death of Lita. Long suspected of witchcraft she was found with crows blood on her forehead and eyelids, evidence of her attempts at clairvoyance through dark rites.
[tab]The adjudicator listened to the guardsman’s retelling of her capture. A neighbor claimed to have seen a cat walking backwards from her house and a pigeon handing upside down from the eves like a bat. The guards had been called to check it out, not an uncommon occurrence for Lita. But this time she didn’t open the door and when the guardsman entered they found her in her basement deep in a trance, with the crows broken body beside her.
[tab]"What are the names of these demons you say I follow?" Lita argued, "Hate, suspicion, fear, weakness, pride? Do you believe these are my demons or your own? You scream because I killed a bird yet you will return to your mutton dinner tonight and see no hypocrisy. You claim that what I have done is evil yet the temple diviners perform the same acts with oils and burnt incense."
[tab]She shook with rage, her voice carried an authority far beyond her 24 years. She turned and glared at the townspeople, most she had known her entire life, and each one quieted under her gaze and then picked the screaming back up when her eyes were off of them.
[tab]The adjudicator was Goroff Grist and he had served in this role for nearly 30 years. He wasn't concerned with Lita’s pagan ritual but he was very concerned with the effect she had on the city. This kind of disharmony cannot be tolerated in a cultured society, she had been warned before about her questionable behavior and refused to become a good citizen. He had known the outcome of this trial the second she was dragged into the basilica.
[tab]Goroff opened the large tome before him. The hall went quiet as he scribed Lita’s name and the verdict. Everyone strained to gain some clue from the stroke of his quill as to the final decision. Goroff sprinkled find sand on the ink and blew on it, then he closed the tome.
[tab]"The testimony has been heard and a just decision has been made. Lita of Alexandria will be exiled from the empire. This exile will be initiated by throwing her from the Cliffs of Hastur. We will see if she will follow the crow’s fate and have her body broken, or gain the crows gift and be saved from the rocks below."
[tab]The crowd cheered the decision, Lita screamed and attacked the guardsmen that held her. They wrestled her into submission and began the march to the edge of the cliffs. By the time they reached them the crowd had grown and hundreds of townspeople were there to witness her death.
[tab]It was an early spring day and the mists common to the cliffs still hung around its base. Lita had stopped struggling and stood unmoving at the cliffs edge. She told herself that she would die without weakness and step over the edge on her own, but she found herself unable to do so. She sensed something much worse than death over the cliffs edge. Then the guardsman pushed her and she fell.
[tab]Her life passed before her, pain inflicted by her and on her, actions performed both good and evil. She considered her own regret, had she become something she didn’t intend? She pushed the thoughts from her mind, she was not the one at fault, but the people of Alexandria. She fed off of her own hate, wished only that they would suffer for what they had done to her.
[tab]She passed into the mists and heard the snap of thick leather, like the crack of a whip all around her. A dark form slammed into her and at first she though it was the ground. But her direction changed and she felt herself being carried along the cliffs edge. A beast held her and she struggled to see its face. It had thick hide wings and skin that felt like a serpents, but hard and warm. The face was a mans, horrible and beautiful, horns and smaller bones pierced his skin and thick iron pins were inserted into the inside curve of his eye, just where tears are formed.
[tab]He took her to a dark place, hell or some hidden cave, it was the same to Lita. She became his unwilling concubine, mother of his half-demonic children. His spells kept the many pregnancies from killing her, but they did nothing for the pain which was so intense that she wished for the times when she wasn’t pregnant and had only to suffer the brutal rapes. And during the periods of the rapes she wished for the times she was pregnant.
[tab]Mardero was the last of these children. His birth was so traumatic that even his fathers considerable power couldn’t keep Lita alive through it. His first act in this world was to join his siblings in consuming his mothers flesh, the first of many human victims his father would bring them as they grew.
[tab]Now Mardero roams the land, unbound by the compact because of his human heritage but as destructive and loyal to the forces of Entropy as any demon.
 
Kael said:
I added your new map to the first post. I love the idea. Im going to run it against 1.0 tonight and see if it works (I don't see why it wouldn't). If it doesn't, and you're willing, maybe I will include it in the FfH download.

'twould be an honor. The only mod I play as much as yours is the fantastic sevo mod, and I'm sure I'll continue making maps for both (esspecially now that I sorta know what I'm doing). I haven't played vanilla civ in months....

If you are going to make some scenro maps a alagaesia map from eragon and eldest.....

My little brother reads those books, I've only seen the map once or twice, but from what I remember i dont think it would make a great CIV map. Too much open space, and, while I'm sure it's great for story purposes, big blocks of square land don't make good maps. I'd like to make a WoT map, but haven't for the same reasons.
Along those lines, if anyone knws where I can find a map of the whole world of WoT please shoot me a link. (as in randland, seanchan, and beyond the aiel waste) That would make a much more interesting map.
 
Good Sauce said:
I've made another map for FFH similar to my last.
havent gotten alot of feedback on the first one so i suppose they're not too popular, but i mostly just make them for myself anyway. coastlines and land masses from real maps are more interesting to me. but i figure there must be at least one other person who will enjoy it. so here. it is


My problem is I still havent finished the game of FFH I was playing when your first map came out!
 
Glad you like the Norse I did. And sure you can use like always just please do me a favor and don't make a dwarf of it like woodelf suggested! Please you won't do it, yes? We'll have better dwarves in the future anyway.

Btw with all that maps now available here think I gotta play your mod again some time:D oh damn I need more time!
 
Ploeperpengel said:
Glad you like the Norse I did. And sure you can use like always just please do me a favor and don't make a dwarf of it like woodelf suggested! Please you won't do it, yes? We'll have better dwarves in the future anyway.

Btw with all that maps now available here think I gotta play your mod again some time:D oh damn I need more time!

He's your creation, I won't use him for anything you dont approve. Right now I have him checked in as the Doviello ("Beastman") version of the axeman. He looks great running around the north scaring the bears.
 
Those civilopedia entries fit well in FFH atmosphere, especialy last one.
Can you get someone to change interfaces? Like city screen etc. Very minor but I think that some fantasy themed interface would look better that blue one. Is it possible to assign mods different interfaces like in civ3?
 
Ploeperpengel said:
Glad you like the Norse I did. And sure you can use like always just please do me a favor and don't make a dwarf of it like woodelf suggested! Please you won't do it, yes? We'll have better dwarves in the future anyway.

Too funny. Let's blackmail Ploep into making a dwarf ASAP or else.... ;)
 
Mr.Earl said:
Are there going to be more Giant units? Mabye a Titian unit would fit in there?

No plans for it yet. Chalid is championing a playable giant race with oversized buildings and limited, slow and powerful build options.
 
TheJopa said:
Those civilopedia entries fit well in FFH atmosphere, especialy last one.
Can you get someone to change interfaces? Like city screen etc. Very minor but I think that some fantasy themed interface would look better that blue one. Is it possible to assign mods different interfaces like in civ3?

Thanks. Spheners was written for the mod, Mardero's was written long ago as background for an adventure.

That would be cool to have diffeent interfaces for each of the civs. I assume its possible since there are a few variations in the game.
 
Even if not new one for each race, then different for each religion. Or just one which has different color (Brown would fit IMO) with fantasy pics in background. This blue one civ4 uses doesn't fit best for FFH (although it isn't important)
 
Uploading FfH 1.0 now!
 
Nice Kael been waiting ages for patch and your up date to post to my friend who has no internet but who fell in love with your mod while playing at my house.
 
Sobsob said:
Nice Kael been waiting ages for patch and your up date to post to my friend who has no internet but who fell in love with your mod while playing at my house.

Glad to hear it. Be sure to update to Civ patch 1.61, it is required for FfH 1.0.
 
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