My poem

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This is a poem I wrote back in high school.

Armageddon

Annihilation, mass destruction.
And it will be of Man's construction.

We have all heard of nuclear war.
We'll blow the Earth to the core.

Stop this, we must, and now.
And I will tell you simply how.

Stop.

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Do you still identify with your teenage self?

Trust, me humans (as a whole) are even tougher than roaches, we can (and will) survive ANYTHING.
 
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edit: don't worry, I'll get over it
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[This message has been edited by BorderPatrol (edited June 19, 2001).]
 
Um, it's very,
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whats the word? "Stupid"? No, no, "Annoying", maybe. Or maybe "Not Very Good"
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Dark X
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PS: BP, you've joined alot of activist groupes, haven't you?
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Originally posted by Dark X 101:
Um, it's very, <IMG SRC="http://forums.civfanatics.com/ubb/blushing.gif" border=0> whats the word? "Stupid"? No, no, "Annoying", maybe. Or maybe "Not Very Good" <IMG SRC="http://forums.civfanatics.com/ubb/wink.gif" border=0>

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PS: BP, you've joined alot of activist groupes, haven't you? <IMG SRC="http://forums.civfanatics.com/ubb/tongue.gif" border=0>

Hey be nice.....at least it rhymes!!! I hate those non-rhyming poems.

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maybe putting my teenage poems up ain't a good idea...and they don't rhyme! -well not all of them.

An easy one to start with...I am a...

Spinning on a metal spit,
how to get off of it?
pheasant, fowl, rodent too,
suffer as I now do!

hehe

The worthwhile poem...er

Malignancy a mere tendency -of mine?

Malignant at birth, flesh out the wound,
fully formed, undeformed,
stitching a necessity, first cut, necessary,
wilful and needy, pleading and supplicant,
not human, no soul, ideas or consciousness,
yet pain, anger
and promise.

Brutality protected and shielded while; innocent?
Or harmful, spiteful, gifted, bored, sad; mis-treated?
Personality developing, it will turn out fine,
fine?
wonderful.

Rapid progression, where went the time?
we did this, read that, saw this: all appreciated,
all worthwhile and we loved him;
so why...

Polite, personable and arrogant,
skilled, approachable and sometimes a deeper insight,
glimpses of an internal dynamo driving ‘it’ onwards,
an unrelenting pacemaker beating, pulsing,
but increasingly pressured.

New pastures of experience through
each gaze upon you, each stroke/blow/scratch and tear,
remembering each insult of what others would think
from memory tainted by...now.

A shocking reminder of what are is to do wrong,
to be sublime is to have missed out,
to become who we are is to cake ourselves in the mud of failure,
then to break that cast,
remould
so as to blaze anew.

To meet new people is to be purified, when you know people well
remember only the good.


-I was only 17 at the time...and having a wierd relationship with a girl
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AS FOR A really good WW3 poem -sorry BorderPatrol.

Another poem! I never wrote this one, it is by a guy called Roger McGough, it is quite possible that you may have read it before. It is call ‘Icarus Allsorts’.

Icarus Allsorts
‘A meteorite is reported to have landed
in New England. No damage is said...’

A littlebit of heaven fell
From out the sky one day
It landed in the ocean
Not so very far away
The General at the radar screen
Rubbed his hands with glee
And grinning pressed the button
That started World War Three.

From every corner of the earth
Bombs began to fly
There were even missile jams
No traffic lights in the sky
In the times it takes to blow your nose
The people fell, the mushrooms rose

‘House!’ cried the fatlady
As the bingohall moved to various parts
of the town

‘Raus!’ cried the German butcher
as his shop came tumbling down

Philip was in the countinghouse
Counting out his money
The Queen was in the parlour
Eating bread and honey

When through the window
Flew in a bomb
And made they go all funny

In the time it takes to draw a breath
Or to eat a toadstool, instant death

The rich
Huddled outside the doors of their fallout shelters
Like drunken carolsingers

The poor
Clutching shattered televisions
And last week’s editions of the T.V Times
(but the very last)

Civil defence volunteers
With their tin hats in one hand
And their heads in the other

C.N.D supporters
Their ban the bomb badges beginning to rust
Have scrawled ‘I told you so’ in the dust.

A littlebit of heaven fell
From out the sky one day
It landed in Vermount
North-Eastern U.S.A
The general at the radar screen
He should have got the sack
But that wouldn’t bring
Three thousand million, seven hundred, and sixty-eight
people back,
Would it?


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a poem... to be used by me once... hopefully atleast once, and then once only!

haiku...


If I had one wish
if yould be for all your love
will you marry me
 
Originally posted by weimar_republic:
a poem... to be used by me once... hopefully atleast once, and then once only!

Funny you say that. I could swear I've read it at least three times already in these forums...
 
hey! what's wrong with poems that don't rhyme?

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Originally posted by CornMaster:
Hey be nice.....at least it rhymes!!! I hate those non-rhyming poems.

I agree, but there's more to writing a good poem than just making it rhyme. There must also be some kind of meter; it has to have a good 'beat', while at the same time not sounding artificial.
 
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