Princes of the Universe, Part I

[e350tb]

I want a uniform!

 

[tthf]

Great Update!!
War has come at last!

Does Li Wei have a love interest?
This song would have been ideal...

Distant Drums by Jim Reeves ( covered by Roy Orbison)

I hear the sound of distant drums
Far away, far away
And if they call for me to come
Then I must go and you must stay

So Mary marry me, let's not wait
Let's share all the time we can before it's too late
Love me now for now is all the time there may be
If you love me Mary, Mary marry me

I hear the sound of bugles blow
Far away, far away
And if they call, then I must go
Across the sea, so wild and grey.

So Mary marry me, let's not wait
For the distant drums might change our wedding date
And love me now, for now is all the time there may be
If you love me Mary, Mary marry me

 

[Fetch]

Well done. Let's go kill us some Mongols.

 

[carl corey]

For a second I thought you declared war on England. Phew...

 

[Civfan333]

Great updates Sis.

Very great job for war with the mongols


Annihilate them quickly!!!

 

[The Menace]

Off we go to war on the Mongols

Get me a uniform!

 

[Izipo]

Oh boy, it's gonna be Epic...
And the 14th legion is still active. That's good, I suppose they'll be leading the fight.

 

[DMOC]

Nice update Sisituil. The screenshots look awesome using the flying camera (and thanks to this thread I just learned how to use it ), and the writing is polished as usual with one error in a billion words or something. Just wondering, but how many parts do you think this chapter will have?

 

[Sisiutil]

Nice update Sisituil. The screenshots look awesome using the flying camera (and thanks to this thread I just learned how to use it ), and the writing is polished as usual with one error in a billion words or something. Just wondering, but how many parts do you think this chapter will have?

That's it for this chapter, but I plan on having Li Wei show up again in the next one.

 

[The Menace]

The next chapter deals with war, I assume
The imminent demise of the (supposedly) Great Kahn

 

[Premier Valle]

Now that I come to think about it... We havent heard too much about the Roman Navy, and since this war is overseas, perhaps next chapter will not cover the war, but the war-preparations.

 

[tthf]

Now that I come to think about it... We havent heard too much about the Roman Navy, and since this war is overseas, perhaps next chapter will not cover the war, but the war-preparations.

that would be nice, but i suspect that good ole Sis has already mapped out his upcoming chapters.

 

[Milarqui]

I think that Johannes Ferrarius would be the Latin translation of John Smith. Smith, literally translated into Latin, is "faber ferrarius", but I think that Ferrarius has a better ring to it.

Anyway, I'd like to request my addition into the story (I may be the last in a large queue of requesters, but ...). I'm Spanish, so being a Spaniard (please, GREAT SCIENTIST!!!) in your story would be nice . If you plan to put a Spaniard to the front, don't doubt to call me!

What do you say about my proposal, Sis? Being Spanish, I believe that I should have more opportunities at appearing at your story, since we Spaniards are being ruled by Julius Caesar!

(Pity that Isabella didn't build Granada, is where I come from!)

 

[BlueSoxSWJ]

One picky detail ... flicking the wrist causes wobble on a football. The key to a good spiral is to lead with the elbow and keep your wrist stiff.

edit: typo

 

[Sisiutil]

What do you say about my proposal, Sis? Being Spanish, I believe that I should have more opportunities at appearing at your story, since we Spaniards are being ruled by Julius Caesar!

(Pity that Isabella didn't build Granada, is where I come from!)

PM me your name and I'll see what I can do. No promises. I am at the mercy of my muse.

One picky detail ... flicking the wrist causes wobble on a football. The key to a good spiral is to lead with the elbow and keep your wrist stiff.

edit: typo

I throw like a girl.

 

[rabidveggie]

Give Milarqui a scene where he dies running while away from the fight.
Looking forward to the smell of gunpowder, the screams of dieing and wounded Mongol soldiers, and the pounding of Roman artillery.

 

[Red Viking]

So im guessing this would be the the story's version of WWI, right? im sure there will be about the same amount of

 

[Terrance888]

I Hope that you will fully use the power of Racket(one after another fireing) and Uber Reload (2 Lines.... 1 shot per 3 seconds) in your stories!

 

[Sisiutil]

Give Milarqui a scene where he dies running while away from the fight.

Now that's just mean.

 

[raba.yuugi]

Finally! After almost a week of reading, I've finally reached the latest chapter. I've been itching to...to...to commend you for this awesome piece of work!

This story has been moving, exhilarating, humorous, witty, educational and more!

Thank you for sharing your talent.