PureNES: Years of Excelsior

Good to see you back, Jason and Kal.

Um, because I'm semi-exhausted and need a day to recharge before I start doing another update, you have until the end of today to finish any additional stories.

EDIT: Cool, both PureNES threads have 300 posts.
 
The Capital of the Draklor was not an impressive site. In fact, it was only a small gathering of minor buildings, with the meeting place the Council building being slightly bigger than the rest. In truth, it was not very much of a capital at all. There was, however, a reason why the Draklor called Dralos their capital.

Many years in the past, the first Teacher, at the age of thirteen defeated a challenger in the Duel circle in the center of Dralos, and united the three major Tribes of Draklor; the Draklor, the Jiot, and the Poits. It was here that Draklor truly rose from a minor group of infighting tribes, to a conquering nation.

Every year on that scared date the tribes would gather for the Games, where competitors from all across the nation, and even foreigners, fought for title of the strongest warrior in the lands. A month long festival, it is the most holy festival of Jao.

It was for this reason that the Capital was as sparse and uninspiring as it was. The Elder converts to Jao, however, questioned the intelligence of gathering for a festival without the infrastructure to support it, and were making plans to build up the capital into a true capital.

That, however, is far away in the future. The present was much more chaotic, as the tribal council meeting of the Draklor would revel.

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"So, Balos has responded to our 'request' that they become our vassals?" spoke the middle aged man, at the head of the round table.

The council man furthest away nodded in acknowledgement, and spoke, "Yes, they have agreed to become our vassals, but have requested armies for protection. They are scared of the conquering people to the north more than they are of us."

A few council men laughed, thinking it foolish to fear any nation more than the powerful Draklor. Despite the few defeats Elder inflicted upon Draklor, they did nothing to steam the tide that was Draklor, and the armies of the Teacher always learned from their mistakes.

"Rumor has it, that Isus is going to be the next target for the Sea People's path of conquest. We should defend the border of Balos, and increase it's navy accordingly to stave off the threat," recommended the council man to the Teacher's right.

The Teacher shook his head, and stood up.

"The Sea People's are a powerful threat. Thus, they are a worthy challenge for our armies. Balos bows to us as vassals, and that means all of Balos should serve us. Is not Isus a city-state of Balos? Is that not then our territory? No, Isus will serve as our battleground against the Sea Peoples, and we will test their mettle against Draklor strength."

The council went deathly silent at the Teacher's words, and, one by one, they agreed with their leader's words. How could they call themselves men if they withdrew from such a worthy challenge?

"Recall General Jasih from the south lands. He needs to stop playing with those Jaosti he's so fond of, and to lead our armies north. Send Commander Tosp to continue Jasih's experiment with those beasts. It might do well to test their capabilities in this campaign as well."

"As our lord wills," muttered the council as one, before simply dissolving away to prepare the armies, the supplies, and the million other things that needed to be prepared for the long campaign to the north.

It would be a titanic clash of military powers. Isus would be the battleground. Who would be victorious? The Sea Peoples? Draklor? Or even Isus itself?
 
Will sadly not be able to write any stories, as I will be gone or similarly inhibited from cohesive storywriting for the next twelve hours at the very least. As a last wish, I wish Yuzoi to merge with the Syr people, and migrate far, far away from the Beaknoses.

That will be all.
 
I can't make any promises, but if I can I will try to squeeze something in.
 
I probably won't have time for a proper story. Too many rehearsals for assessments. But, if nothing else, expand the People west.
 
That should be a good thing. Right?

Unless it's epic in a bad way (like an epic fail.)
 
Heh. I've had my share of epic defeats. Give me a less epic update for the Yuzoi, please. I mean, there's hardly any epic victories I can claim at the current state. :p
 
A boy of 15 paused in his tracks to take a drink of water before continuing to work the fields of his families farm. His was one of many farms in this part of Alystr. Along with his families and a few others that had been in these parts for many years now, most of the families where new. The king it seems wanted to expand their agriculture and was helping support new farms by lowering the price of land. His family alone was able to purchase 2 new plots with the amount they where saving in hopes of adding another field in a few years. As he looked up he also saw the ever present road building crews. For the last few months at least they had been all over the farming communities adding in roads that lead to the nearest towns and cities, they where no where near as nice as the roads through the larger cities but they where a lot better than what had been their before.

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As Officer Liam stepped into the barracks he surveyed his new men. A young lot like most of the new recruits but they looked to be in good health and after he got done with them they would be a great asset to the army. He was one of many training officers fairly new to the job (this being only his 3rd batch of recruits). The army was being expanded to help with expansion and protection of the grand nation of Alystr. Word through the camps was also there was a special troop being created from only the best young soldiers that where coming out of these training camps, Liam wondered if any of these boys would be pulled for that duty and what exactly it was......

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In the courts of Alystr things had calmed down since the Drauge Family was removed from power. King Declann Alystr had been hard at work continuing his fathers projects and starting a few of his own. Things where good, Alystr's relationship with the barbarians was good and only getting better, the scouts had been returning with news of new lands and different peoples that where potential trading partners, the projects where coming along splendidly and his wife had just informed him that she was pregnant again. Hopefully this time he would be blessed with a boy instead of another girl. He loved his daughters to death but it would be so much easier with a boy to follow him in his place as King.
 
Noooooooooooooooo! Isus is the Battle Ground????????? Gimme
To Byblos,
As a loose Lord, we agree to be vassal, Princess Aviena will Swear the oath of Fleaty and Fief to the load of Blyblos, here are our conditions

To Byblos,
-20% trade Income
- A strip of and south of the pensulas with a 5 mile strip to connect them
- A vote in the council of 7 (Was 5)
-Aide during war

To Isus
-Protection
-1 seat in your concil (Asembly, not concil of Elders, just a advisor type concil)
-Aide During war

Conditions, the concils are Adviser concils that will make sure tht your orders are obeyed, the people are for voting power and making sure all is fair.
During war, the other must send help in aide and warrior
Isus automaticly get protection fleets in return for 20% of trade income.
We have to share Orders concering each other, so sending more troops into Isus must be send to me, or removing some income must e sent to you



"I will, as I must, do the best for our people, and as I must..... Serve as vassal to thy lord of Byblos and .......Shall, as I must, reunite the .......... Eldar Lands and to, and for, serve to the best interest of people of Isus.....As well as I can"- Vassal oath of Aviena
 
Are you trying to become Balos's vassal? Did you not get the memo that Draklor is Balos's new masters?
 
epic failures mean that i have to pull things out my *** to get things back on track.

Good stories I suppose though :p

epic success means I will probably curtail myself and consolodate/lose something.

I know the feeling...although I doubt I will have "success" to deal with.
 
I'm still looking for a story or orders from Singidu and Lugine.

EDIT: The update is going well, though. I've almost finished updating the map, including the out of cradle regions, and I've mapped out all of the major events. I think that it'll be done by Friday.
 
I'm still looking for a story or orders from Singidu and Lugine.

EDIT: The update is going well, though. I've almost finished updating the map, including the out of cradle regions, and I've mapped out all of the major events. I think that it'll be done by Friday.

orders incoming.
sorry I've been a little busy
I'll make up for it next turn
 
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