PureNES: Years of Excelsior

well, well well well.... I believe that Christianity is taking hold!

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The Divdence of the Heart

The men of Isus are mobilizing. Inspired by the teachings, groups of devout men of Hardain Ja's teaching traveled around doing good. They are starting projects everywhere, building a new granary in Vernackk, building roads, farms and new towns. They marched westward, building mighty terrances over the cliffs of the Cann'anho Platue and arriving at the fertile side. Towns spread into choke points, mountains of salt where they are mined, and beautiful pine were repectfully chopped to be sustainable as they learned their old lessons.

But Up North, the most militant, most sour and closest to the Sea Peoples, Tynois refused to join in the colonization and offered to be the main defender instead.




Tydion, Mayor of Tynois, was Yelling at Hadian Ja,"You Insane? Friends with the Sea Peoples?" The Huge muscled man stared at the calm composed feature. "My friend," Flowwed out of his mouth,"We are all loved and cared for by the Loving God "Isnovance" and our exile is from our hatred, dishinesty and growth. Once we are joinded together, we can prove that the men of Isus are the most honest men of the world, and will trade for our coins and our business. You are hardened by war, and one day, your line of tough leaders will lead a successful defence against an enemy"

Tydion Swore,"I'll join your union... however, I will release my Rage If I have the provociation. "


Soon, the men of Tynois joined the Hadain Ja's New Isus to defend and to expand.




Gona finish later! I promise! I have to go and get my HOmework!
 
lurker's comment: Indeed. How about a das update and a Jason update in the same night, then? ;)
 
A shame, really.
 
No, bad Charles. We don't have OTL religions in an ATL non-earth cradle. Your religion can be similar, but not identical, and it needs a different name.

bah! damn you Thlayli, I thought we had both a das AND a Thlayli update in the same night. Too much to ask for I guess.


I'll Name it Hadianism, the true history.
 
Charles_Li's spastic bumping actually does bring up a legitimate point.

I plan on doing an arbitrary 200 year long-term update to slightly change the political and cultural face of the cradle, as well as carrying out some of the storylines we've already planned out for most of the existing cultures.

You can expect to see that in mid-December, as my workload from college applications dies down. Then we can reset Excelsior on some type of sane schedule again.
 
All right, around two more weeks to go and then we shall see what happens. Hopefully the Exiled will live.
 
Awesome. LINES II and now PureNES as well! w00t! The Yuzoi will ride again!
 
Charles_Li's spastic bumping actually does bring up a legitimate point.

I plan on doing an arbitrary 200 year long-term update to slightly change the political and cultural face of the cradle, as well as carrying out some of the storylines we've already planned out for most of the existing cultures.

You can expect to see that in mid-December, as my workload from college applications dies down. Then we can reset Excelsior on some type of sane schedule again.

I know the feeling....
 
I think I'll join this once I feel safe. :)
 
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