The UHVs look good, especially for a first draft. I'm not too fond of "control territory your historical counterpart controlled" goals unless they're really remarkable achievements (like Alexander's or the Roman Empire), but that's of course personal preference. But for example the Ptolemids certainly could replace theirs with something culture or science related.
I slightly disagree Leoreth, most of these Empires/Kindoms are in here because they are famous for expanding their realm to new places, so having a UHV like that is always very interesting, especially when it will lead to the AI trying to emulate its own historical success. But of course, not all UHV's should be primarily territorial ones.
@SRPT
Also you should perhaps think about tidying up your first post, to make it more appealing by perhaps adding some more up to date photos, and listing the civilizations, new tech tree, civics (in game photos of these screens) etc. Although this is perhaps not a priority, it would make your mod more appealing for new people to this mod.
PS. Starting a game as Carthage I noticed a few things:
You should not have two UHV's which are identical, which in this case is the two luxury goods ones, I would recommend therefore that another one, should instead be something about Trade income, you should have Carthage attain a high trade income by xx date. Also the one about "capturing" (should be control) Rome, should rather be something about controlling the territory that they did before the 1st Punic War:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/44/CarthageMap.png
And also perhaps the annihilation or vassalization of Rome. Also there should be an oligarchy civic option for civilizations like the Roman Republic (which were just that), but also for Carthage, who were a Merchant Oligarchy.
Another consideration I urge you to take up, would be the removal of religions from the tech trees, and allow them instead to spread naturally/historically. When you have such a large map, with many different civs, I would find it more appropriate to have certain religions be founded on their historical foundation time, and then through provinces, control where religions are more likely to spread (ex. no Christianity in China, no Buddhism in Persia).
Two other civilizations to consider: Kingdom of Goryeo (Korea) and the Sui Dynasty (reunification of China and Buddhism spreaders).
Out of curiosity why did you add Jainism, a relatively minor religion, but you did not add any Phoenician religion for the Carthaginians or Monophysitism, which in the eyes of the Byzantine Empire was a very large heretical belief that spread in Syria, Armenia, Egypt and North Africa, it is largely why many of these provinces were willing to "flip" to the oncoming Islamic tide, after decades of persecution from Constantinople.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monophysitism
Also it should be the Arab Caliphate, not the Arabian Kingdom (that sounds more appropriate for some pre-Islamic Bedouin tribe)
I would try to write/test more, but I have exams coming up now, and my vacation has just ended, so I will be busy for about a week or two, but will try to keep active on this forum! Great mod nonetheless!