Duke van Frost said:
I had to upload two zips, because I had some time yesterday evening and did a new titlescreen - to boost teamspirits!
This is a great a title screen but if I may offer some constructive criticism...
First thing that jumped at me was the mod title - it's hard to read. It's not a very good font in my opinion. I would try to find something that has more variation between the letters, maybe you could even use the warhammer font (i.e. the one that Games Workshop uses for their titles), or something similar. In any case though, I think the current font is a bit "monotonic", if that makes any sense.
The second thing are the pics on the sides. These are beautiful illustrations and maybe they should be a bit bigger, there's a little room on the side, so they could wider by 20 or so pixels, and they could also be taller to show more of the scene. Now, I realize these pics, in a way, frame the title itself so making them taller might ruin that, of course you decide if that's a bad thing or not, but I do think that they should be at least a bit bigger to show off more detail.
The other thing about them is that the pics themselves stand out too much from the paper around them, i.e. it looks more like there's an extra picture on top of a piece of paper instead of it looking like it's an illustration on the paper itself. Now, to be honest I'm not sure how to fix that -maybe you could try blurring the edges, or make them a bit more torn/burnt, like the paper itself. Another way would be to "monochromise" the pictures and make them blend into the paper but of course without the colors they wouldn't be quite as beautiful.
Last thing, something I noticed just before posting this, but the map in the background seems slightly misaligned - notice the thin dark strip on the right edge.
Anyway, I hope you realize I'm not criticising just for the sake of it but because I think it's a great title screen and could be made perfect.
