DominatrNES II: From Chariots to Corporations

Hi, I'm going to be straight with you: I'm dropping. I am thinking of starting my own game, and overextended as it is, so I don't have the time for this.

I chose this NES to drop because I don't like the points system, and I feel that's really holding my enjoyment back.

Sorry.
 
Hi, I'm going to be straight with you: I'm dropping. I am thinking of starting my own game, and overextended as it is, so I don't have the time for this.

I chose this NES to drop because I don't like the points system, and I feel that's really holding my enjoyment back.

Sorry.

Hey that's alright, glad you gave it a try.
To be honest, there are a lot of things i wish i would tweak, and the system doesn't suit everyone. Good luck with your game! :)
 
To - Chalsus
From - The Empire of Myeson

We would like to ask that you allow our merchants access to your ports, and cities, it will create much economic growth for both of our nations.
 
The trade will be fair and honest of course, we wouldn't ask for anything less than that. May our two people live in harmony and prosperity forever.
 
To: Kantang
From: Tinus


Greetings, people to the north. We have only recently looked in your direction, as other areas concerned us more before. However, we come to you in hopes that your people may be friends of ours. Our neighbors to the west, it seems, have not taken kindly to us.
 
Exodus: Part 2

It was time for the ships to launch, an air of uneasiness and anticipation ran throughout the city, many were sad to leave their homes but were also excited to see where Ba'al would guide them. Acteaus had finally announced that it was time for the fleet to leave, it wasn't so much as a fleet as a conglomeration of every ship in they could get their hands on regardless of their condition, some hastily made sloops, and a small handful of military ships that were all overcrowded with families and supplies. But dispite every odd being against them the ships launched from Aecan with little incident leaving behind the land that they and their ancestors were born on, lived on, and died on.

As the fleet sailed past the new nation of Issus the people began to breath a sigh of relife, it seemed that Ba'al was really on their side and protecting them on their way out. But then alarms were raised from the ships bringing up the rear of the fleet. Ships with black sails had been sighted aproaching them from Menadosian lands.

'So this is your first test.' thought Acteaus as he began to order what military ships were left to fall to the back of the fleet and delay the Menadosian persuers. The wistleing of arrows soon filled the air as the Aecan ships fired their first vollys. The majority of the arrows fell into the water but many still tore through the first ship's sails and felled some of the rowers. Acteaus knew that they wouldn't be able to destroy the ships and protect the fleet at the same time so he didn't attempt to. His plan revolved around the fact that he could replace the rowers on his ships and the Menadosians couldn't without retreating to their ports. Acteaus was forced to duck behind a shield as the Menadosians returned fire he saw many good men die but they could not stop to mourn their deaths, the lives of their families in the fleet depended on them and so the Aecans fought with a great fury.

As the Menadosian ships lost rowers they began to slow down, soon they began to fall behind and Acteaus ordered his men to disengage and catch up with the fleet. Within two days of non-stop sailing the Menadosain ships had fallen out of sight. Acteaus was glad to hear the calls of "land sighted!" and the large amount of ships that were headed towards the harbor. However the sight of the large fleet of ships seemed to atract a lot of attention and many ships stayed out of their way. Acteaus ordered that they should stop to refill their supplies and most importantly their water.

Unfortunatly there didn't seem to be much water to find in this port as when they approached the very dusty lanscape became visible. Still they decided to land anyways, other things were in short supply and Acteaus wasn't about to be picky on where they got it from. As he landed he met some fishermen who told him that the name of this land was Qarpa, a very mecintile nation that seemed to attract ships from every land to it's port. It showed by the large integration of cultures that he found in the city, the fishermen chewed mas'tak which was a gum that originated in Ilos and their cloaths showed further influence from Ilosian culture with the patterns on the women's dresses. Apparently these were a people so focused on trade that there was an entire day when they would not work to go to the market and trade. It so happened that tommorow the market day would start and Acteaus would be able to find the supplies for his fleet. Still he went to the market place to see if they would be selling what the fleet needed. Acteaus smelled the markets before he saw them, it was impossible not to with a nearly overpowering sent of spices in the air that came from the traders who haggled for the best prices. A distant part of his mind thought about how much more bussy the market would be when the market day started. Still he and his men set about searching and soon found that the supplies were available in the markets, just not in large quantities until the market day, and Acteaus breathed a sigh of relife. However; he was worried about the Menadosian ships which he expected to be still following the fleet. After reciving directions to the their leader, the Karkul who ruled the entire nation, Acteaus set off to see if he could secure a safe haven for his people.

The Karkul was a man by the name of Asli who was doned in rich cloathing with gold jewlry that signified his wealth and surrounded by servants doing his bidding. In contrast Acteaus was wearing a simple robe over his tunic and had no jewlry, but he possesed a confindence born of the assurance that he was leading his people with the blessing of Ba'al. So both men stood seeing each other as equals and they began to discuss the terms under which the Aecans could find a safe haven. Asli was prudent and saw the amout of riches the large fleet could bring to the markets and so he allowed the Aecans to stay until the market day but no longer.
 
Exodus: Part 3

After the ships had supplied themselves Acteaus quickly ordered them to move on and leave Qarpa. While the Menadosian ships were still nowhere to be seen he did not want to take chances and be trapped in the harbor. They received directions that to continue going west they would have to sail north past a nation by the name of Vatia and then they would be able to continue on their long journey. Acteaus decided to skip on visiting that nation as it would slow them down considerably and they did not have time to spare after waiting in Qarpa.

As they rounded the northern end of Vatia the fleet began to sail west. However not all was well, the cramped quarters of the ships and the poor living conditions had created a fertile breeding ground for disease. Their only saving grace was that on the ships they were isolated from each other. If one ship had an outbreak of sickness they would be unable to spread it to the others. The system of trading supplies through ships floating them between each other began to collapse as none could tell if the supplies were contaminated. Many would die or become incapable of managing the ship and would fall behind the fleet and eventually disappear. These ghost ships as they began to be called sapped the moral of the Aecans whenever one floated by their ship of into oblivion. Thankfully crime was less of a problem, since the ships were crowded isolated vessels it was easy to tell who was a thief if one of the crew woke up missing something that another mysteriously gained.

Another problem occurred as they sailed west, the people began to become impatient with Acteaus. They would always ask him if he had seen a sign from Ba'al that they had found their home and he would keep on answering "Not yet." Soon some began to doubt him, and began to conspire to abandon the fleet as soon as they saw land. When Acteaus first found about these dissenters he had them captured and ostracized saying that any weak link in the fleet had to be purged unless they should break when faced by one of the tests of Ba'al and drag the faithful down with them to their inevitable doom. Those who escaped the purge began to plot against Acteaus thinking that he had gone mad with power and would lead them all to ruin. A plan was made to kill Acteaus and have their leader, a former Aecan councilman by the name of Tierises, take control of the fleet. They had managed to get a supporter on Acteaus's ship and planned for him to comity the murder during the night.

Acteaus was saved only by the shouting of the watchman "Black sails! The Menadosians are back!" Immediately waking up and bolting out of his room and pushing past his would be assassin Acteaus ran to the deck of the ship. He looked out and saw that not only were the Menadosians back, they had brought mercenaries with them to fill up their losses from their previous defeat and unlike before they managed to get much closer in the cover of night and had the advantage of surprise. Acteaus and the crew of the ship did not have the time to pick up their shields and were only able to duck as the Menadosians fired their first volley of arrows. Acteaus managed to survive but many of his men did not, including the assassin. Already some arrows had managed to hit civilian ships which were lacking in shields to protect themselves from arrows and one began to float towards the Menadosians, it's entire crew of two families either dead or heavily wounded.

Acteaus quickly ran through his options as the few military ships began to fire back but the situation seemed grim. As another volley of arrows rained into the fleet he knew that he wouldn't have much time to think of a plan if he wanted to keep the Menadosian ships from wiping out their only line of defense. Finally coming up with a plan he ordered all military ships to turn about to face their pursuers, they had to kill as many Menadosians as the could to stop them from catching up or at least delay them for as long as possible. Acteaus knew that it would mean the sacrifice of those ships but he saw no other way to protect the fleet.

As the ships sailed towards the Menadosians at ramming speed a wind caught the sails of the rest of the fleet and began to carry them westwards away from the fight. They soon lost sight of the ships and it was only then that Acteaus realized how vulnerable they were now. The fleet had become a large target with very little ways of fighting back, if their numbers didn't scare off pirates then they would have little ways of protecting against them besides hoping that the first ship they board is one filled with some of Aecan's former guards who would be able to fight back.

Still the fleet continued to sail west and eventually they spotted land again this time they landed in the port of Tartessos. And Acteus was greatly surprised to see that not only did the people speak the Ilosian language but they also had a very similar culture. They even had the same governmental system as Anotonia with couniclmen (or Sanhedrinii) who ruled democratically. It was a very welcome sight for the Aecans who began to restock their ships, they told the stories of how they were forced out of Anotonia by a war with the blood thirsty Menadosians and how they were back stabbed by the traitorous and cowardly Herakossans. Acteaus would also speak of Ba'al and how he was their true creator who had given them a second chance and would lead them to their new home. It was here where friction began to start as the Plishti did not believe them when they tried to explain to them of Ba'al. And then the Aecans discovered how openly the Plishti treated homosexuals and were horified that they considered it to be divine. Soon the tension had become too much that Acteaus was forced to leave despite the bad weather and every instinct as a fisherman telling him that today was not a safe day to be at sea.

And his instinct proved to be correct as several hours after the fleet had left the port they were swept up in a massive storm. Many ships were capsized and destroyed by the violent waves. The storm lasted for days and pulled them far off course with no way to guide the ships against the towering waves that would throw anyone who was on the deck overboard and threatened to break the ships with every time they crashed against them. Ships would crash against each other sending their crew to the bottom of the ocean. But miraculously the fleet managed to stay together for the most part and they were sent far north until the storm began to die down and crashed many of them into the beach in on last act of defiance.

Acteaus's ship was one of those which was crashed against the beach but as he emerged to look around he saw in the distance large mountains covered in green grass with rivers cutting through the sparsely forested valleys. And then he knew that they had arrived.

"This is Ba'al's sign!" cried Acteaus "We have finally arrived in our new home, Ba'al is great!"

He was answered with many cries of "Ba'al is great" as the Aecans gathered around him and helped others land on the beaches. They were quick to name the land Helikos and after a few days they had cast aside their old name and took up the name of Jutans, or believers in the Ilosian tongue.

But Aecans or Jutans it mattered little because they were home. However; the relife did not last long as they quickly remembered that Ba'al had said that three tests would await them in this land and there was morning to be done for those who were lost in the storm.

OOC: Finally done with the exodus part, didn't think I'd actually finish before the turn ended. Virtual cookie for those who can guess where Helikos is.
 
Chapter Three: Exodus and Aggression

War raged on in Ilos. As internal chaos and declining hopes plagued the Anotonians, they were being mercilessly pounded on both fronts. Skirmish after skirmish, Anotonians collapsed, unable to defend their people any longer. From the north, Herakossus quickly swept through northern cities, claiming the majority of Anotonian territory remaining. However, they were beaten in a race to the capital by Menados, who put Aecan under siege for several days before at devising an intricate plan to take it over. It resulted in many burning buildings, charred corpses, and the brave escape plan of the religiously enlightened fisherman, Actaeus, triggered a mass exodus. During a desperate journey through the seas teeming with pirates and Menadan pursuers, Actaeus and his followers made stops in various ports on their way to the land described to them by Ba'al. They narrowly escaped being swallowed into the conflict between the collapsing Vatia, and Athan and Qarpa'i forces. Mysteriously, they arrived at a very distant location they called Helikos, claiming to have been taken there by a great weather system. They then changed their name to Jutans, Ilosian for "believers".

As Ilos finally cooled down for a bit, another region began to see tension. Six Draesonian merchants were caught by Sufonan rivermen. Instead of hanging them or torturing them, Sufona declared their trade relationship with Draesonia to have ended. In place of their trade with Draesonia, Sufona traded with Marinth to the south. Draesonia was left to struggle with the tiny civilization of Iumia to their north. Not too far to the west, Altania became involved in a bit of conflict. Their target, Rusathia, was just a few days by boat away from them. To Rusathia's surprise, groups of friendly Altanian traders turned out to be warriors and blood spilled from the docks, creating chaos in Rusathia. Altania drove south, but it was not long before Rusiathan forces met with them and produced a stalemate. At the same time, Rusathia's neighbor, Beletia, grew into a sizable foe that threatened Altania with destruction if they were to continue their attacks. Altania's northern neighbor, Auruchni, reported conflict in the island across the strait to their north. Melia continued their aggression toward Wealn with further invasion of their territory. Wealnish villagers were largely driven from their native lands to the old lands of Corval, and some even made small journeys to other nearby islands to find safety. Wealn begged for peace, but over years of conflict, Melia had proven themselves to be merciless.

Branga, contrary to some of the aggressors in Euthia, gained power though peaceful methods. The Brangabhoomi culture quickly developed into an intricate system of belief, spawning cults both in Branga and in foreign lands, Jamikur in particular. Jamikur suffered from mass dissent and protest, calling for the Brangabhoomi religion to be made official in Jamikur, but the leadership refused. The population turned from its leader and joined Branga where they could worship freely without being scrutinized and questioned. Jamikur didn't take very well to this. First, signs of war brought fear onto them and then the Brangabhoomi religion caused the Jamiks to turn on their empire. In eastern Ashaja, Xia and Zhingye reigned supreme. Each of them had been progressing rapidly technologically, leaving the rest of the civilizations in the dust. Although not far behind, Tinus and Zarazia came up a bit short. With neighbors such as Kyorong and Guzhon growing, things were beginning to get quite interesting in Ashaja. Across the waters, Yokosaka was progressing with tremendous speed. Technologically, they had advanced to discovering pottery, which in turn supplemented their already growing population. Seeing this, several neighbors began to prepare their defenses should Emperor Kotona call for an invasion.

Way out in the jungles of Wiixk'oltzan, blood was beginning to spill. Qaxt'i grew tired of Dzambo's nonsense and launched an invasion of their territory. Dzambo was no match for the skilled Qaxt'in fighters and they saw devastating losses. Although they retained their interior jungle territory, the Dzambecs were stripped of their coast and Qaxt'i claimed the Dzambec capital, Cochaba. The Dzambecs fled by the thousand to the jungles, many scattering into other empires such as the close by Ekmu empire. On the eastern side of Qaxt'i, expansion was halted with the formation of two new states, Kuhuaxta and Tzepec.

A growing trend of aggression slowly was beginning to overtake the globe. Ilos was no longer the center for conflict, as numerous areas in Euthia and Wiixk'oltzan found themselves swamped in military confrontations. Competition was flourishing, but at the expense of the poor warriors who met their doom on the battlefield.

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Ah, still progressing wonderfully :) and especially peacefully - I think it is the lack of economic and military stats with units that make me not think of war :p

You are aware that spending almost only on technology is a way to gain everything else much easier? I also suggest you start writing what comes after 9, since that's only 2-3 turns away :p
 
Stats soon?
 
Ah, still progressing wonderfully :) and especially peacefully - I think it is the lack of economic and military stats with units that make me not think of war :p

You are aware that spending almost only on technology is a way to gain everything else much easier? I also suggest you start writing what comes after 9, since that's only 2-3 turns away :p

i have been neglecting to add to the list and i'll find time to add a few more in to give a glimpse of what's to come. :)

Stats soon?

yeah, within the next hour or so
 
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