Miscellaneous stuff:
TerrisH, are you German or something?

I'm wondering why you capitalize so many words that aren't normally capitalized.
andis-1, do you want your mages to be spellthieves or telekineticists? You can't have both.
Also, please write up a nation background, because "Elves" needs a good reason.
warman, would you prefer to be closer to the other PCs, NPCs, or far away? Also, please choose science, agriculture of military instead of leaving the (choose) bit in there.
human-slaughter, the nation background can wait, but please pick a magic type.
Cleric, this bit is wrong:
In reality the Council members were the first individuals who realized the energies of this world could be bent to their will
Nope, you weren't the first anything. The first people to realize that went power-mad. The second group was afraid of what the first group had done, so their fears took shape and killed them. It's been three generations since mankind came to this planet, and magic has been present the whole time.
Royal, whatever happened to the second half of your template?