Look at the main thread.
I made my changes.
I try to cover all your ideas, but might be that I omitted something.
I've got the feeling Dean's changes are not fully implemented (even though someone said he made your changes). I think there is no bounty hunter promos again.
Look at that and do changes if necessary. I'm too tired to look into again.
Be prudent! The save you post might be the one Verdian gets for a weekened! Test it before you post!!
Your changes are fine. The only reason I moved it was because it wasn't "deep" in the forest, more like right on the northern edge, i.e. 1 or 2 turns away. I didn't even notice that citadel was guarding a pass.
Next time I make a quest, I'll try and put it in an area that doesn't have anything built and hasn't been explored....that way, it shouldn't cause any more issues.