My only question as far as swapping the Pyre and Tomb is: considering they're both now involved in the story, how does that affect sense of disbelief?
At this point you may as well let sleeping dogs lie. If it was outside of Gerran's revealed map it would be another issue entirely, but with them both revealed and both taking a part in the story thus far, disturbing them seems jarring.
Well, my original thought process behind moving the tomb can be explained thusly....
1) He didn't complete my quest, and this saddens the god of Life. Why should he benefit from the life mana my tomb provides, when he really didn't do ANYTHING to deserve it in the previous two rounds.
Considering how close the tomb is to the Grigori starting position, I would have thought the god of Life would have been a natural ally for him.....
2) The Ljos are likely my chosen people, at least on this map....lack of the Elohim IIRC makes the Ljos my most natural allies, thus moving the tomb to their lands fits thematically.
3) We are gods, if I was to replace the fort with ruins, change the forest of renewal to swampland, and remove the tomb (by mystical means), it shouldn't be an enormous task for a god to accomplish.
Now, having said all of that, I'll reconsider my initial plans in favor of something which is more appealing to the masses.
I'm still going to make my little quest area, very likely BORDERING the great desert in the center of the map, perhaps just northeast of clan jungles, or in the extreme south of the desert, along the coast......I want the lands marsh so the baddies get defensive BONUSES, not desert which will give them defensive penalties.
I may also use Abashi if no one has any plans for him....the Sheaim rarely if ever build him anyways.
It's going to be a tough nut to crack, but should prove interesting for some end game madness.
Thoughts and comments are welcomed. If anyone has a problem with me using a)the Broken Sepulchre (would have to be moved afterall), b)a Lich so early in the game, or c) Abashi as the Lichs guardian, please speak now.
Once the changes are made, it will take a good argument to make me agree to change them back, mainly due to the fact that I'll start writing the narrative shortly after placing, and re-doing all of my work doesn't appeal to me....I would rather change it before it's even written, if anyone has a huge problem with something.
Now, a question, has he discovered the Broken Sepulchre yet? If so, I suppose I could use a castle or citadel, although that seems a little boring considering I already made one of those.