JalNES I: Quick and Easy

Update 0: The Beginning​

13,700,000,000 BC-2000 BC​

In the beginning...well, we don't really know what happened in the first 5.39121*10^-44 seconds. But after that, there was a bang. A big one, you might say. Though of course no one we know was around to see it...

Ages passed. The universe expanded and cooled. Great black holes formed, and attracted stars around them, thus forming galaxies.

We'll pick one of these galaxies at random. Let's pick a star on the outer spiral and zoom in, shall we?

Eventually, the random matter orbiting around the star, which we shall call the Sun, formed into lumps. One of these lumps was at the right place at the right time. As it cooled, it happened to be in the narrow belt of space in which it could have an atmosphere and liquid water.

And eventually, from the compounds colliding with each other in the ocean, life emerged, a rare event.

Still later, some of the organisms grouped together in social structures for safety. And then they began to kill each other. Let's call these strange creatures humans.

Roughly 13.699998 billion years after the universe was formed, humans and their civilizations had come to dominate the globe. Let's examine some of them.

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One of the major areas of civilization was the Mediterranean, in the middle of three continents. On the rivers and plains in its east, civilization first formed, and gradually moved west.

The new nation of Byzantium has just formed, led by a leader whose name has been lost to history. But instead of slaughtering the tribal council in his rise to power, like most of his kind, he had the novel idea of keeping them and letting them direct his decisions, or so they thought. This strange form of government, used by the nation that straddles a strait in its middle, is called a republic.

But it will not be easy for Byzantium. Others have risen before it. To its southeast, the nation of Troy is building a empire of its own. To its west, the ever-present barbarians loom. In Greece, naval Athens and warlike Sparta struggle for control. And Minoa in the south is ever-present, dominating trade in the Aegean. The Minoans speak of far off countries like "Aegypt" and "Karthag"...

Will Byzantium be destroyed? Or, by taking advantage of its amazing location, and through clever diplomacy and warfare, can it control the Aegean?

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Although thought by some to be a myth, the nations the Minoans tell of are largely real.

For centuries, Egypt was in chaos, gripped in petty civil wars in the First Intermediate Period. The period is nearly over, as two states have risen from the chaos...

Egyptia is one of those states, far down the Nile River. Having united the petty lords of Upper Egypt, they now challenge Lower Egypt.

Will one of these nations unite Egypt for the first time in many years, then beat back the Nubians or conquer the crumbling Syrians? Or will something entirely different happen?

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Far to the west, still in the great Mediterranean but beyond the knowledge of any nations yet mentioned, lies the city-state of Rome. The people there hold a distant memory of descendence from a once-great but now fallen Troy far to the east, a city far greater than the one that is there now.

The Romans are one of two leagues of cities that dominate their part of the world. The other league is that of the Etruscans. Composed of twelve ancient cities, they have watched in dismay as Rome grows to rival them, rather than joining them.

Can the two nations join together peacefully, or will there be war? And what will the ever-present barbarians in the mountains that run down the spine of Italy do?

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If we move south in Italy, we gradually move far from the influence of these leagues. Passing over a large island known vaguely by the Minoans, we move south to Africa and Carthage. Recently founded by a group of Syrians expelled from their lands in a quarrel, they are trying to start a new life here. But they are only slightly stronger than the Berbers, who eye their lands hungrily...

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Far to the north, the nation of Prussia rises in the forests, distinguishable from the barbarians surrounding it only in that its rulers have established a clear line of succession, and that its warriors prefer pointy sticks instead of axes.

A bloodthirsty people of warriors, the Prussians itch for war. But they are hopelessly outnumbered by the many tribes surrounding them. Unless, of course, they can be turned against each other...

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NPC Diplo​
From: Sparta
To: Byzantium

Help us destroy Athens, and you may have the islands they control.

From: Minoa
To: Byzantium

Let our ships trade through the Bosporus, or we will open it by force.

From: tribe just south of Prussia
To: Prussia

We know we will be invaded and destroyed, as we are weak. Promise not to kill us or take our women and we will join you peacefully.

From: tribe directly southwest of Prussia
To: Prussia

Pay us 1 EP tribute a turn, or die! Your pointy sticks cannot meet our bronze axes!

From: Etruscan League
To: Rome

Will you join with us, or must blood be shed?



OOC: There are more countries, obviously, but you don't know about them yet. Orders due Wednesday at 6 EST--remember, they must be PMed.

BTW, I've dropped the training stat. It wasn't fitting in with what I had in mind.

Others should feel free to join.

Map and stats up momentarily...
 
Stats are updated. Here is the map.

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From Prussia
To Germanic Tribe south of Prussia

We will accept a union with your state.

From Prussia
To Germanic Tribe southwest of Prussia

Your demands have offended our monarch. We will win and your bronze axes will not save you from being impaled by our pointy sticks. Our warriors will meet you on the battlefield and fight till death.

From Prussia
To Germanic Tribes in Lithuania

Help us defeat the Germanic Tribes to our southwest and we promise you all the plunder from their defeats.

OCC: Very Nice Update! I like your style.
 
to Lower Egypt:
For years our two empires have been fighting for the Nile, and the nile gave life for both of us. Ra's eye is set upon our fighting men, hating us for killing many Egyptians. We call for an end of this wars and unification of the two Egypts! One Great Egyptian empire of two crowns. Shall the Pharaoh of the Lower Egypt accept and the creation of a Greater Egypt, for all Egyptian people, will be made possible, or shall we continue to fight while the nubians and Canaanians destory us all...

Ra have shown us in the stars his wishes, will you do as the great god commands?
 
The Farow said:
From Prussia
To Germanic Tribe south of Prussia

We will accept a union with your state.
That is good. (OOC: put this in your orders so I don't forget.)

From Prussia
To Germanic Tribe southwest of Prussia

Your demands have offended our monarch. We will win and your bronze axes will not save you from being impaled by our pointy sticks. Our warriors will meet you on the battlefield and fight till death.
Hah! Your skulls will be crushed by our axes.

From Prussia
To Germanic Tribes in Lithuania

Help us defeat the Germanic Tribes to our southwest and we promise you all the plunder from their defeats.
The tribe directly to your north and the southern tribe directly to your east agree.

to Lower Egypt:
For years our two empires have been fighting for the Nile, and the nile gave life for both of us. Ra's eye is set upon our fighting men, hating us for killing many Egyptians. We call for an end of this wars and unification of the two Egypts! One Great Egyptian empire of two crowns. Shall the Pharaoh of the Lower Egypt accept and the creation of a Greater Egypt, for all Egyptian people, will be made possible, or shall we continue to fight while the nubians and Canaanians destory us all...

Ra have shown us in the stars his wishes, will you do as the great god commands?
We are pleased that you accept Ra as your true god, not the heretical god Amon. Tell us more about your vision. How will power be shared between the two Egypts?


OCC: Very Nice Update! I like your style.
Thanks! I'm trying to imitate NK...
 
Dreadnought said:
Greatest part of the update!
I thought you would like that... :lol:
 
jalapeno_dude said:
From: Etruscan League
To: Rome

Will you join with us, or must blood be shed?

To Etruscan League
From Rome

The question isn't whether we will join you, but whether you will join us. If the city states refuse to, war shall descend upon your lands.

OOC: Strange, one would assume the other 12 cities are on the map too ;)
 
To Etruscan League
From Rome

The question isn't whether we will join you, but whether you will join us. If the city states refuse to, war shall descend upon your lands.
To: Rome

Very well. You shall join us by force.

OOC: The 12 cities thing was a random fact from Wikipedia. Presumably, none were really that large. I also had a lot of trouble deciding which city should be the capital--I finally just picked one that I could spell. ;)
 
jalapeno_dude said:
To: Rome

Very well. You shall join us by force.

OOC: The 12 cities thing was a random fact from Wikipedia. Presumably, none were really that large. I also had a lot of trouble deciding which city should be the capital--I finally just picked one that I could spell. ;)

OOC: Ahh, by any chance, are there any dissidents inside the 12 cities? Like a single city that's figured out they're going to get crushed and etc ;)
 
alex994 said:
OOC: Ahh, by any chance, are there any dissidents inside the 12 cities? Like a single city that's figured out they're going to get crushed and etc ;)
Read the description of the Etruscan league in the stats. ;)

In fact, that goes for most of you--there are some hints hidden in the NPC stats.
 
jalapeno_dude said:
Read the description of the Etruscan league in the stats. ;)

OOC: I wanted to know if any of them have contacted me yet ;) And where are the stats for the barbs in Italy?
 
You should contact them, not vice versa.

And you don't really know their stats. Estimates range from the "roughly 1000 spearmen and axemen", from your advisors, to the "by the gods, there are millions of them!!!", from those who have been attacked by them. Keep in mind that they're not at all organized.
 
Dreadnought said:
To Greek States and Troy
from Byzantium

Shall we make a trade agreement, to bring prosperity to our lands?
Sparta and Athens each agree, but only if the other one is not allowed to join. Troy does not agree. Minoa agrees if they are allowed free passage through the Bosporus.
 
To Minoa
From Byzantium

You'll have free passage, so long as you pay us for it :p)

To Sparta and Athens
From Byzantium

We support the people's own say in their government. We suport Athen's republic.
 
Dreadnought said:
To Minoa
From Byzantium

You'll have free passage, so long as you pay us for it :p)
From: Minoa
To: Byzantium

Do you jest with us? Give us a straight answer!

To Sparta and Athens
From Byzantium

We support the people's own say in their government. We suport Athen's republic.
From: Athens
To: Byzantium

We thank you for your support, and agree to trade. May we have aid to defeat the Spartan dogs?

From: Sparta
To: Byzantium

This will be the death of you, as soon as we destroy the foolish Athenians!

OOC: Please put the agreements you've made in your orders, so I don't forget. That goes for all of you.
 
The Hedjaz
Mecca
Government: Despotism
Color: doesnt matter
Economy: 2/0/0
Size: Tiny(1)
Age: Bronze Age
Army: 1000 Spearmen, 1000 Archers
Navy: 10 galleys
Infrastructure: None(1)
Education: None(1)
Culture: None
Confidence: Ehhhhhhhh.......
Projects:
Description:

I can't think of much of a description. Whats the most advanced religion we are allowed to have at this time?
 
Whatever you want, if you create it yourself. If you mean RL religion, then look up Sumerian and Babylonia gods, or Judiasm (but you'll need to change it), or animism/spirit worship.
 
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