LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part III

[Lord_Iggy]

@Charles Li- I'm afraid there isn't much in the way of open space right now, unless you want to take an NPC. PM me if you're interested and want to get committed.

 

[North King]

What are you talking about? When Tellus falls, there will be tons of space!

Note: Rajkutra does not endorse the inevitable fall of Tellus or the reprecussions thereof.

 

[JosefStalinator]

@Charles Li- I'm afraid there isn't much in the way of open space right now, unless you want to take an NPC. PM me if you're interested and want to get committed.

You're seriously going to let him in?

 

[LightFang]

He just has to act like that; that's the picture of a courteous mod.

 

[JosefStalinator]

A courteous mod is not necessarily a good mod

 

[LBaeldeth]

But is he a "back" mod?

Also! I'm on vacation starting tomorrow, won't be back for two weeks. If you're doing a surprise update, Iggy, you've already got my orders.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

If Charles Li has the commitment to send good, consistent orders, then I'll let him play.

 

[Luckymoose]

If Charles Li has the commitment to send good, consistent orders, then I'll let him play.

I will spend the time from now till the deadline writing a novella describing my actions over the coming turn.

 

[Terrance888]

I will.... but you need to send a template

 

[Lord_Iggy]

It's on the first page. Here's a copy:

Nation Name
Cities: Capital, if any yet. Major cities will also be listed here.
Leader: Your Nation's Leader/Your Name
Culture: A sentence or two describing your nation's ethnic and religious makeup.
Government: Your government
Economy: 2- 2/0
Population: To be determined by me
Army: To be determined by me
Navy: None
Education: None
Technology: Bronze Age
Wonders:
Description: Please describe your people's appearance and any interesting things about them.

There is a potential for a new nation developing somewhere above the Sky Range in Azulia (north of the mountains on the continent containing Kelios, Chancosanx and Adar).

 

[Terrance888]

It's on the first page. Here's a copy:

Nation Name: Chincuk
Cities: Capital(ZhuJing), Island Colony(TiZhe)
Leader: Your Nation's Leader/Your Name (Chin'cuk Lol/Charles Li)
Culture: A sentence or two describing your nation's ethnic and religious makeup.(Mainly Chinease, although some native scouts blinded by the entrance. The RElighion IS confucan but only the famaly respect is still left. They gained some animalism and a mysterous relighion of the natives)
Government:Equal Rights- Three classes by education (Farmers, workers-merchants, learned peoples) and vote for 10 year president and a small "Emperour" for ceremonies
Economy: 2- 2/0
Population: To be determined by me
Army: To be determined by me
Navy: None
Education: None
Technology: Bronze Age
Wonders:
Description:They look Oriant with a slight bend of the natives' looks (only one requested to return home) Thay are a Small group of Asian Hikers grabed by a worm holeand entered with nuclear forse (not radioactive)that blinded the native group. They receinty got New Natives from a lost band and have a nation somewhere north of what the natives call "Sky Range in Azulia" The returing native wassent by boat with diplomats and edventurers. This is their 3rd generation here when the blind old man was returned.

 

[a_propagandist]

Competing Guangfei, albeit with weird spelling?

 

[Terrance888]

Competing Guangfei, albeit with weird spelling?

It is in chinese! I am chinease! They are chinese!

 

[a_propagandist]

I'm chinese; I have never noticed that accent before, however.

 

[carmen510]

There are different types of Chinese, like Mandarin, Shanghainese, Cantonese, etc.

 

[alex994]

There are different types of Chinese, like Mandarin, Shanghainese, Cantonese, etc.

OOC: Yes, yes, yes; but it's still spelled Chinese

But because he's 10 years old, I didn't bother correcting him Have fun kid! CHINESE PRIDE!

 

[LightFang]

Well, at least he doesn't worship Japan. -.-

 

[Terrance888]

Die! The Puny Barbarians from The sea that hide behind their Techs and stuff!



Anyways, i will be gone for 3-5 days, seeyaall! and don't kill my cities or you'll have my secret cover agents comming for your blood.... they are VERYGOOD

 

[Lord_Iggy]

Hmm... I might need a bit of a more realistic entry, but that can be mythology. I may have to change a few details due to geography.

Interesting, this makes 3 areas of Asian culture- Guangfei, Lengel/Ikki, and now Chincuk.

Anyway, welcome aboard!

 

[Lord_Iggy]

Example Orders

Economic Orders
Spend 2 points on training penguin infantry.
Spend 1 point researching lightsaber technology.
Spend 1 point to fund the penguin gestapo, to crush the remnants of the 1337 forces and destroy their numerical-swapping way of life.

Domestic
Have my majestic and glorious leader, a certain Lord Iggy, to tour the nation, raising morale. Show videos of him building orphanages, recycling, and stomping on dead polar bears.

Military
Continue crushing the 1337 resistance. As it crumbles, transfer my forces to the Greenland front under the command of Admiral Trik, to push back the Ursine scum.

Send my elite ops in to try and assasinate important leaders and figureheads.

Stats
Name: Penguinskan Imperium
Leader/Player: Lord Iggy/Lord_Iggy
Government: So complex, no one really knows.
Army: Lots of Troops
Fleet: Lots of Spaceships
Confidence: Beloved by all Penguins (except for the Lightbulb ones, who are divided)
Background: Created during a period of excessive boredom sometime in 2002, the penguins have since developed from a diseased imagining into a multiverse-spanning empire. Internicine warfare with the polar bears has laid waste to the once beautiful world of earth, but with nuclear winter approaching, the whole place will be ice anyway- but which side will get it all?

*****

This is just a little example of how I want orders from now on. Now, I don't want them all like this or in this exact form, I just want them to obey these tenets:

No more than 300 words, not including the stats.
Must have some organization, so spending is all in one place, and military is somewhere else.
Seriously, your generals and governors aren't idiots. They don't need to be micromanaged.
Remember, I have to contrast your orders with everyone else's. Even simple orders can create complex and interesting situations. Complex orders can create the same sort of thing, only it takes me much longer.

So yeah, just try this out. Seriously, if you want to go into great detail, write stories!