RenoNES II: They Terminate Before Steam

[silver 2039]

To Russia
From Japanese Empire

We have a proposition for you , how about a trade agreement, and alliance? We will send you a copy of the treaty for review.

 

[Icmancin]

Imperial Proclaimation by Tsar Aleksandr I​

1. Establishment of the Greater Duma of all the Russias​

1a. All previous Legislatures and executive Branches in the Russian Empire are now suspended

1b. Said suspended Legislatures and Executive Branches are replaced by the Greater Duma of all the Russias

2. The Composition and Duties of the Executive Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias​

2a. The Executive Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias and the Legislative Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias shall be headed by the Honourable Tsar Imperator. The Tsar Imperator shall the descendent of the Romanov Family who currently occupies the Throne of all the Russias. His duty shall be to lead the Greater Duma of all the Russias and the country itself.

2b. The Chief Executive of the Tsar Imperator shall be the Chancellor. The Chancellor is elected from all members of the Greater Duma of all the Russias, by members of the Greater Duma of all the Russias. The Tsar Imperator may disapprove of the Chancellor selected and a new Chancellor must be elected. The Tsar Imperator may disapprove up to three Chancellors. The Chancellor serves as the Tsar Imperator when he is unable to fulfill his duties and serves as the Chief of the Council of Executives.

2c. The Council of Executives is the Cabinet of the Greater Duma of all the Russias. It is chosen by the Tsar Imperator with the counsel of the Chancellor. The Council of Executives is headed by the Chancellor. It consists of a Military Executive, a Foreign Affairs Executive, a Financial Executive, an Internal Affairs Executive, a Health Executive, an Agriculture Executive and a Fisheries and Oceans Executive. Each are responsible for a respective ministry which is comprised of civilians. The Executives advise the Tsar Imperator to make national decisions and to conduct duties relavent to their executive position.

3. Composition and Duties of the Legislative Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias​

3a. The Legislative Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias shall consist of 445 members.

3b. The Duties of the Legislative Branch of the Greater Duma of all the Russias are to:
Approve or Disapprove of Laws created by the Tsar Imperator
Approve or Disapprove of Amendments to Laws created by the Tsar Imperator
Create Laws
Amend Laws
Approve or Disapprove of new Laws created by the Legislature
Approve or Disapprove of Amendments to Laws created by the Legislature

3c. The 445 members of the Legislative Branch shall consist of:
1 Muslim Representative
1 Catholic Representative
1 Protestant Representitive
2 Orthodox Representitives
5 Elected Representitives from Alaska
100 Elected Representitives of Rural non-Slavic populations
150 Elected Representitives of Rural Slavic populations
110 Elected Representitives of Urban populations
25 Members of Non-Slavic Nobility
50 members of Slavic Nobility


4. Emancipation of the Serfs

4a. From this moment forth the Serfs will be emancipated and shall have the freedoms of all other citizens of the Russian Empire.

5. Tolerance of Religion

5a. The various peoples of the Russian Empire shall now have, from this moment forth, the right to perform and worship any religion or division of a religion of their choosing.

These documents are officially enacted by the will of the Tsar and by the will of God in the One Thousand, Eight Hundredth Year Anno Domini. ​

Signed,
Tsar Aleksandr I​

 

[das]

That's wrong on so many levels.

 

[Icmancin]

I'm completely aware of that.

 

[Cuivienen]

Icmancin, any response to my PM?

 

[das]

I'm completely aware of that.

The essence aside, Russia isn't officially an Empire (no Peter the Great or equivalent).

 

[Icmancin]

The stats said 'Russian Empire,' so i just assumed that it was an Empire.
The Tsar, I guessed since no supplied the name of the OTL Tsar.
If it's not the Romanovs, then please tell me what it is, I can't read the timeline because my computer sucks.
I hope no one has any questions the amount of power the Duma has (look at it, the Tsar the head of both branches?).

 

[das]

TECHNICALLY Reno did put up my summary. As for the Tsar, its up to you really. Albeit in OTL in 1800 Pavel I was Tsar - incidentally, he was (mad)man enough to do what you just did.

EDIT: The Romanovs are in power however, they just had a different dynastical history in general.

 

[The Farow]

Reno, is a royal republic similar to a constitutional monarchy? Could you give me some details on my government?

 

[Wubba360]

To: Carolina
From: Virginia

Weoffer a 3 year NAP to preserve peace in the americas

 

[das]

Reno, is a royal republic similar to a constitutional monarchy? Could you give me some details on my government?

Royal Republic is like the OTL Polish government system (which was officially a republic, but with a king). Look it up.

 

[carmen510]

To Roman Empire: Accepted NAP

 

[Reno]

@Carmen I'm still asking you (Very nicely still, but I don't have an endless patience) to rework on your orders. Because...

1. The orders are not in a list form.
2. You have not mentioned where do you want to deploy your troops.
3. You have not listed any of your diplomatic dealings in them.
4. You have not mentioned where, and how many of, your eco points are you going to spend.
5. The other part of your order is way too vague.

If you can't do orders that I can work with, then I can't allow you to play as a major nation such as the UKSG.

 

[Birdjaguar]

Rreno, send him an example or link to a set you want him to emulate.

EDIT: Maybe an outline of what you expect orders to be like would be a good addition to the Rules.

 

[Reno]

Reno, send him an example or link to a set you want him to emulate.

I don't want him to emulate someone else's orders, just for him to put a little more time then 30 second into making those orders. Besides, it's not really my responcibility to teach him how to write orders. (He can look in the 'Show me your orders' thread himself) I already tried that with JackA long time ago, I'm not going to waste my time on doing that again.

 

[Reno]

EDIT: Maybe an outline of what you expect orders to be like would be a good addition to the Rules.

I've already mentioned in the rules some things that should be in there. I didn't really think that I should explain in the grass root level of what should be there.

 

[Birdjaguar]

I've already mentioned in the rules some things that should be in there. I didn't really think that I should explain in the grass root level of what should be there.

For existing players the rules seem to be clear and straight forward, but for new players they are not. Just think about all my questions over the past few days. Good rules and expectations will encourage new players to jump right in.

As a new person to NESing, I've found that most rules are not very well written nor are mod order expectations well defined. It has been a trial and error process for me. It seems that most mods just cut and paste from previous games and don't really re-read or edit what they post for clarity. I would be happy to go through your set if you like.

EDIT: I would think that getting good orders would make moderating much easier and make for a better game. Players should be spending their time on clever plans and devious diplomacy rather than trying to figure out what inforamtion will please the mod.

 

[Finmaster]

Hey, I still don't know what the "write orders in a list" really means

No1 has complained so far, though.

 

[das]

Because the list is just one way. If you can do concise, clear orders without lists, its just as fine, IMHO.

 

[carmen510]

I've just revised my orders.