stMjMNES1:First Blood

“Tyre was in turmoil, the intense political background had erupted into open fights. Dido, Rightful Heir to the Crown of Tyre was fleeing. Her younger brother had disputed her right to rule and had launched a vicious attack with assassins killing her leading supporters including her own husband. She was forced to flee with her friends and followers abroad a few ships still loyal to her. Past Crete, and past Malta nothing but a rock in the sea, they landed upon Carthage. There, she was offered however much land by an arrogant Chieftain that she could surround with an ox’s hide. She cut the hide into many many thin pieces sufficient to cover a hill. The arrogance of the Chief was undone.”

-Excerpt from Founding of Carthage by Himcler.

“Boring, absolutely boring! Himcler must have been an extremely boring man, no social life at all! How can father expect me to know his book inside and out by the third day of the Gathering of Baal? I have so many things to do, the Lady Kars- never mind what I said. I refuse to read another word of this.”

The elderly man addressed looked at the speaker with no fear and smirked. “You would prefer to take a short swim in the Sea? For some absurd reasons sailors of Baal refuse to learn how to swim. It would be quite a short swim with the waves and sharks. Your Father is not prone to pity or whimsical fantasy involving your education. You are a member of the Barca, heirs of Dido herself. If you are found lacking, you shall be thrown out. And once more, your nights with the daughters of nobility has not gone unnoticed. A special… employee has been hired to solve this problem if it becomes too much a trouble.”

The person being spoken to paled, but rallied quickly making strong commanding gestures with his hands and was leaning forward prepared to speak when the door was opened and a commanding figure stepped in. An athletic man, his muscles were visible despite the clothing worn. He held around him an air of superiority, seemingly to show that the person knew something disadvantageous to everyone around him.

Such was Hialcha, Lord Admiral of Carthage of the House of Barca. He wore an expression that would have made all men cringe in Carthage, but not these men. The elder was his father, the younger was his son. Both undoubtedly strong willed, the elderly had wisdom of old age the younger had the passion of youth. 3 Generations of Barcas, one served, one serving, and another that would serve.

The silence was broken, by the brave or foolish youth. Brave in the eyes of the young, foolish in the eyes of the wise. “I will be learning a trade and becoming a blacksmith father. I don’t want the luxury of wealth of our family I want to live a humble and simple life. I don’t want the intrigue, the power hunger, or the vast wealth that comes with it. I want a happy life, nothing more.”

Shock was evidently in the air, with both his family and servants gawking at him like he was a man whom had sprouted wings and took flight. A man of Wealth and a Good name do not fall in status voluntarily but must attempt to rise above his station. Determined by Baal, it was tradition. A young man's dream would be quashed by Tradition.

Such was Carthage, tradition and life followed hand in hand…

“The greatest joy of life, is to see what you have planted grow and mature.”
 
Israelite9191 said:
Rulers in NESing tend to last several dozen thousand years if you haven't noticed. They really just add flavor.
That's a damn lie and you know it! Mostly people either have a dynasty that rules or they add a Roman number every now and then to change the leader in their stories. It wouldn't make much sense otherweise now would it?

I mean, NESers want to recreate history realistically, this isn't a fantasy nes in which people live thousands of years for crying out loud!

P.S. I'm bored and I could sure use an update for this NES as a cure! ;)
 
OOC: For more information click here and here. I have taken a few... artistic licenses though ;)
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High Priest Al-Kharan, leader of the Tharian people of Mojenho-Daro, representative on Earth of the River God Korama stood at the top of the pyramid temple, at the very center of the mighty city.

Looking out over the thriving community he gave silent thanks to Korama for His blessings and protections. Around him law the sprawling city of Mojenho-Daro, its streets wide and clean, it's citizens hurrying about their business. Beyond the edges of the city green fields spread as far as the eye could see. Clearly, this was the center of the world, the most civilized people in existence.
On the market place merchants were hawking their goods, farmers were selling grain, fruits and various vegetables and by the docks traders were loading ships to travel to other communities along the mighty Indus. Decades had gone by since the last warring had taken place when barbarians had appeared from beyond the mountains. Since then peace had reigned and the cities and towns along the Indus were prospering with only minor armed forces around to enforce the peace and hunt down wild animals.

A shout from a street close by interrupted his thoughts. Apparently some merchant was highly annoyed that the water buffalos a farmer was leading ahead of him had left some gifts on the street which he had failed to avoid stepping in. Al-Kharan chuckled slightly. Despite the merchants annoyance it was funny.

Diverting his thoughts back to the city as a whole he found himself wondering about the future. The barbarians had not plagued them for decades. Why? Could there be other peoples out there that were troubled by them instead? Indeed, could there be other peaceful communities out there somewhere? A few traders had told wild histories about other lands, but no firm contact was established with anyone. Maybe it would be worth it to build some ships to explore lands further away? Maybe there would be someone to trade with or lands to settles beyond the mountains and deserts surrounding the area? Yes, this was a definate possibility.

What if they were to prove hostile though? With a small force they would be easy prey to any hostile nations. Maybe he should let the leader of the militia have his way and recruit a few more men. And what was that crazy idea he had heard... something about using the elephants in war? The idea was clearly insane. They were great for using as beasts of burden, but in warfare? Hmm... it was something to think on and to pray for guidance on.

Thinking deeply he turned and walked into the temple in order to commune with his god.
 
From the Log-Book of General Ioculus,



Inside the temple on Pontos:


The priest lifted his bald head, looked out into the crowd, and said, "Pontos

be with you."


They replied, "and also with you." And so the mass began.


I entertained myself by looking at the ladies all around. I hated the

temple.....but today we had to go because of the coronation of our new

king....a sort of "bless his reign" service. He is young, I am young, most the

generals (Including me) are young.....


After the service we left the temple and a flood of people began, cheering,

praying, and yelling for the new king. I had to get my bodyguard to force a

path for me through the people.


I arrived next to our new king, and we both just watched the crowd, so they

felt....'special'. I new this kingdom was new, and he was our first king, but I

do not care that the people are going crazy over him.


Later we had a feast. The common people tried to break down the doors, so

we had to barricade them. What don't they understand? Nobles only...


I left Sinope late in the night. I was tired, but the two men protecting me

kept a good watch. Barbarians are still roaming these areas...


When I arrived at my villa, my fiance was still awake. She drew me in through

the door while the guards tethered the horses in the stable.


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I had to write something.....
 
The Rise of Byzantium

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The evening sun glinted off the armor of the assembled legionnaires. Row after row, rank after rank of men assembled in the massive square in front of the Imperial Palace. The banners held by the various legions fluttered in the light breeze of the pleasant evening. Against this as a backdrop was massive temple of Jupiter.
Constantine stepped out of the Imperial Place and inhaled the fresh air deeply. Truly this was a fine day! A day that would always be remembered.

“Men of Byzantium!” he roared causing the soldiers to snap to attention. “This is a great day in the history of our nation! A day that will echo through the ages. Byzantium is strong! Yes it is strong prosperous and powerful. However all is not well. For we are threatened! Barbarians! Slavering stinking, marauding barbarians! They surround us! They gaze upon our riches, our glory, our power with envy, and covet our position! They will fall upon the walls of Constantinople, raping, looting, pillaging! They will take our treasure, kill our children, and carry off our womenfolk! Byzantium is the light! The light in a dark world! We are the lone flame, the fire of civilization. It is our duty to spread our eternal flame to every corner of the earth! You all know me. I am a Byzantine of the old style. I believe in discipline, dignity, honor, and above all duty. We fellow men of Byzantium have a duty. A duty to defend civilization with our lives. We have a destiny. A great destiny to rule to world! That is why I have called you here today men of Byzantium, sons of Mars! It is time to do your duty! I announce the creation of the Byzantine Imperial Army and Byzantine Imperial Navy! For we can no longer sit complacent behind our walls and shut ourselves off from the outside world. No we must take up the banner, the sword, the shield, and the spear, and prepare to embrace our destiny!

“As your first task I am ordering you to expand our realm! Bring our superior culture to the barbarians! It is our sacred duty as ordained by the gods! Go forth and conquer sons of Mars!”

Massive and thundering cheers broke out from the assembled men, they clashed their swords and spears against their shields, some men were openly weeping, the noise was deafening. The Centurions began leading their forces out of the gate while others to the ships in the docks. Constantine watched from his balcony as the long lines of gleaming men marched from the city under the Imperial banner and the billowing white sails of the ships were pushed out to sea. Byzantium had awakened….

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Lurker's comment: I would join when I find the time. In the meanwhile...

Nonsense! In good neses they die Look at ITNES for example, tons of rules that died. I believe rulers actually had a large amount of influence on their nations.

Time to quote my favourite passage from Bulgakov, because I can't pass up such a nice opportunity:
Mikhail Afanasyevich Bulgakov said:
'A thousand apologies, madam, but what membership cards? ' asked
Koroviev in astonishment.
'Are you writers? ' asked the woman in return.
'Indubitably,' replied Koroviev with dignity.
'Where are your membership cards? ' the woman repeated.
'Dear lady . . .' Koroviev began tenderly.
'I'm not a dear lady,' interrupted the woman.
'Oh, what a shame,' said Koroviev in a disappointed voice and went on
: ' Well, if you don't want to be a dear lady, which would have been
delightful, you have every right not to be. But look here--if you wanted to
make sure that Dostoyevsky was a writer, would you really ask him for his
membership card? Why, you only have to take any five pages of one of his
novels and you won't need a membership card to convince you that the man's a
writer. I don't suppose he ever had a membership card, anyway I What do you
think?' said Koroviev, turning to Behemoth.
'I'll bet he never had one,' replied the cat, putting the Primus on
the table and wiping the sweat from its brow with its paw.
‘ You're not Dostoyevsky,' said the woman to Koroviev.
‘ How do you know? '
'Dostoyevsky's dead,' said the woman, though not very confidently.
'I protest! ' exclaimed Behemoth warmly. ' Dostoyevsky is immortal!'
 
The stony streets of Karau Thau were alive with celebration as the soldiers of a defeated enemy tribe were marched into the town. They would be given a choice. They would join the Mekaian army or be humiliated, tortured, and enslaved. Knowing both the combat prowess of the warriors of Mekaia and their- it would suffice to say- unique torture methods, they almost invariably chose the former.

Kath, the leader of the force that had defeated these people gazed pleasedly at the proceedings. Like so many other tribes assimilated into Mekaia, each one made the growing nation stronger. And as it grew, it became capable of taking down more and more tribes faster and faster. If he had understood complex mathematics, he would have known that it was a perfect example of exponential growth.

He snapped out of his thoughts and looked again at the proceedings. The warriors, opting to join his army, were having their arms ceremonially slit, as a test of bravery. Once this was complete, they would officially be citizens and warriors of Mekaia.

Kath grinned. Greatest enemies to close allies within a few weeks. It was amazing what defeat would do to uncivilized people.
 
Oh, so you're the type who updates stats WITH the update? Sheesh. :D

I guess I'm just too eager to show off my work to keep something finished but not posted.
 
I'll put it in, but then again I don't have a big collection....;)
 
The Alexandrine Panda Imperator claims this Nes in the Name of the Alexandrine Panda Empire!

(UPDATE)
 
BTUpdate 1

1100 BC


At aurond 3000 BC, mankind began to change. They stopped roaming like nomads and built cities and settled down. At least most did.. Between then and now, not very many things happened. The most notable will be written down for all too see...

Africia

The westernmost known nation in the world would be that of Morroco. Theese people have a colorful history indeed. They have been constantly harassed by barbarians for as long as they could remember. After fighting them long enough to build their capitol city, they knew they couldnt go on with constant fighting. They had to win a big battle and discourage the barbarians from attacking them again. That big battle happened in 1780 BC. The entire army of Morroco gathered aurond Casablanca. It looked as if they abandoned the city. Then when the barbarian hordes entered the walls to pillage, they were caught in a death trap. The arrows of fire rained down upon the hordes. The chariots swept and cut them to peices. By the end of the day, most of the barbarian threat was gone. After theese battles, the Morrocans expanded greatly, even across to Gibralatar and the Balerics. The future looks good, as long as another horde doesnt show up....

A little bit to the East we have the Carthiginians. They where a colony long ago, a Phoenician one to be exact. Because of their locations; they secured there freedom without a fight. Also Because of their experienced navy and location, their nation is mostly one of merchants and sailers; not of warriors. Carthage has secured the NorthEastern corner of Africia and has control of some of Siciliy and Sardinia.The Carthiginians have a bountiful economy and a good infrastructre, but corruption is in the rulers of Carthage, and their most intense rival, Calabria, is just a stone's throw away..

Even further East we have the land of the Pharoahs, Egypt. They are a rich land filled with treasures from long ago and not so long ago alike. They also look to the East with their power hungry eyes...

And we go South. At aurond 1900BC some tribes banded together to try to make a better life out of the Highlands. They thought there nation would be a small one of farmers and hereders. Boy where they wrong. Barbarians saw this as a chance to attack. A small, weak nation in the middle of nowhere.
Long story short, those barbarians are long dead now, defeated by the Ethiopians. They were fierce to protect their way of life. No not farming, but of a civilized people trying make their way in the harshest conditions. The Ethiopians soon pushed to the Sea, and just to show they mean buissness, constructed a few crude gallies. The Ethiopians are ready for extending their "civilized" rule.

Europe

To the NorthWest we have the nation of Alraidia. This nation is nothing more than a union of a few barbarian cheiftains. It could grow into something more though, much much more..

Southeast of Alraidia on the Italian Penuisla we have the nation or Umbar. This nation has just counqered a nearby city-state and is expanded rapidly. Maybe too rapidly.

And Near Umbar we have Tuscia. This state has an extremely strong millitary, small in numbers, but the 2nd best trained in Italy. Having just counqered Rome (;)) the Tuscan state is running out of room. It looks to the East to the Greek colonies, or perhaps south to the Republic of Calabria.

Speaking of Calabria.
Ancient lore says Catarzarro was built by Greek colonials who broke away. Another tale suggests barbarians banded together and setteld down. Still another suggest that the God Jupiter created the penuisla for Calabria. Whichever one is true, they are here. And doing pretty good. Calabria has always had a strong millitanht attitude. It needed it, being surronded by other city-states, Greek colonies, barbarians and Carthage. Calabria has holdings on Sicily, Sardinia and Corsica, but lacks the navy to keep them well-protected, having lost thier navy in a war with Athens. Calabria has recently launched an expedition into the barbaric lands to the north, and its going quite well.

Go East to the land of Greece - what where you expecting, a *rhyme*?
Anyways in Greece there are 2 states left in Greece that still retain their splendor over the years. Thessaly and Athens. Theese states are always at war over something or other, but weirdly are at a "fragile" peace a spectator commeneted. They both have colonies, Athens in Troy and Crete, Thessaly in Troy and Italy. Right now their millitary strength is at a stalemate as is their economies.

The Byzantine Empire (or at the moment mroe of a city-state) has expanded to control the profitable trade linking two continents, althoguh the Greeks still control most of it. In 1173 BC the Byzantines picked their time to strike, grabbing a few Aegean isles during a Greek war. With land that is more or less not worth it up north, the only place to turn now is the Greek colonies or Greece proper itself....

Middle East

South of Crimea is perhaps the nation that underwent the biggest transformation of all. Pontus was almost as rural as Crimea. Albeit they were a tad bigger, and had very few horses, they were similar. South of Pontus used to be the Greatest Empire the Western world had seen, the Hittites. The Hitti empire stretched from the Dardenalles to Rasit. Though they had chariots and a huge army, they had a weakness, over stretch. It was said if you took every Hittite soilder and spread them out, there would be 1 soilder to defend almost 10 acres! Surely an empire of this stagnation wouldve fallen. And so it did. The Pontic people had a small army, with a few horse and some heavy spear. The Hittites hungered for power and land, so they only sent half of their army and none of their fearsome chariots to "deal" with the Pontics circa 1156BC. Big Mistake. The Pontic army was outnumbered 2 to 1, but they routed the tired, overworked, chariotless army. The Pontic people went on to burn Hattuas down. The Hittie empire was reduced to crumbles, with farmers taking it over. In less than 50 years, they reclaimed the Anatolian section of the Hittite empire. But they face the identical problem as their defeated foes. Over stretch.

South of the Pontics where the Phoenicans. They once had a colonial empire twice their current size, but with Carthage defecting, and Crete being swarmed by Greeks, they have been in a steady period of decline for aobut 200 years.

East of Pontus was the state of New Hatti. Theese people were determined to keep the Hittite way of life perserved, and the hopes of their empire being restored. With virtually each state in the Middle East taking a peice of them, they arent left with much..

Then we get to the bloodbath that is Mesopatamia.
Up in the North we have the Rasitians(pronounced Rah-zee-shuns). Renowned for their ability to turn even the closest of freinds against each other, the Rasitians have acquired most of their territory through diplomacy, not war, although they were skilled at that too. South of Rasit is Babylonia, nation of kings, Since the founding of the state in 2678BC, there have been over 245 kings who have ruled over Babylonia. Although it used to be much larger than its current size, the barbarians on the banks of the river make sure to keep the city-states in line. (Babylon was founded in a differnt place then in OTL. , more South.)
In between this mess is Sippar. The Sippi-ites have the unforunate location between two city-states hungry for power. In 1107 BC that power could be contaiend no longer. The Babylonians in the South invaded, and 1 week later, without knowing the invasion of the South, the Rasitians invaded. Sippar is being enveloped in a pincer attack, and only a brilliant tactian can save them now, or a miracle..

Asia

Onto Asia and we meet a whole mess of nations. Firstly is the barbarians, err I mean the nation Massagetes. They control a vast land, and their sole form of income is extortion from the Indian states and nearby tribes. They have the biggest horse army ever seen, and even now plunge into India.

East to Asia we have the 3 Indian states. Tharia, Guntra, and last but not least, Mumbai.
Tharia has always been the most peaceful state, negioating with natives to get new lands. They have a rich economy and a good infrastructe. Now only if they had neighbors like themselves. Eveh though Guntra and Tharia were extremely close, there was a world of differnce. Firstly, age, Guntra being aurond 100 years old, Tharia being aurond 1800 years old. Guntra has the strongest millitary in India, the strongest in the world right now. It too had a good economy, but it lacked the population, from constantly be harassed by barbarians kept cities outside the capitol from growing too much. And then Mumbai to the South, even though it is the largest, Mumbai has been decaying rapidly the past 50 or so years. Its only about half of its size compared to pre-1150BC. It doesnt have a good economy or much of an army, but it always built ships, and good ones at that.

And further East we have China. Actually 3 Chinese states. Qi, Qin, and Yue. Qin is the oldest state, and is suffering from moderate stagnation, as well as Qi pressure to give up the Shandong. Not that the Qi dont have problems of their own. The fearsome Steppe barbarians such as the mongols and Xiong Nu have been harassing villages alnog the Huang He, and they go to Qi for protection. Qi has doubled in size, while its millitary is still rather small. Expansion at this rate will leave Qi open for an all out invasion.. And Yue. Yue is the newest state in China, it has a army ready for counqering the barbarians in the South, or may the Qi or Qin...

And as our last stop for the day, we have Mekaia. They could be considered advanced barbarians, but because of their sheer size, and of thier use in copper, they stand out among the rest. Proud of their millitant heritage, the Mekinse are always ready for a new war. Having recently united their biggest village so far, and more willing to join, the future looks bright for Mekaia.
 
Ok heres some mroe bout the map

Dark Grey: Barbarians who are backward, and most likely weak. Won't try to negioate. Theese are your real barbarians here.

Light Grey: Can be anywhere from semi-advanced barbs, to weak city states not strong enough to be a nation. Most light grey areas have cities in them. They are also smart enough to see your stronger than them and negoiating is possible with theese peoples. But if they are aggresive, theese areas are harder to counqer...

Red circled cities: Trade Centers. Theese cities are a center of trade, the metropolises of their day. Periodically, trade centers can give an eco level.

White circled cities: Your capitol. The head of your government and most of the time your biggest city. It would be in your best intrest to protect your capitol at all cost.

White/Red Cities: You guessed it! Capitols that happen to be trade centers as well.

Black Triangles: Forts, Barricades, you name it. Soilders fighting behind theese tend to last longer and fight better.
 
To Carthage
From La Republica di Calabria
La Relublica di Calabria suggests putting our differences aside. Perhaps we can negotiate terms for an alliance, or at least an agreement on non-agression.

To Thessaly
From La Republica di Calabria
NAP?

To the Italic Barbians
From La Republica di Calabria
Most of you are our friends, some of you have even been our allies. Those of you that are our enemies are doomed to be defeated sooner or later. Unite with us now and bask in the glory of La Republica!
 
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