GodNES - The Beast with a Thousand Backs

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Introduction
First there was but null and Void. It was a desolate realm of despair, ruled by All-lord Afaja, the Demon Turtle. He long watched the Abyssal Space, but one day, the sky was scoured open by the scar of life, blistering through the æons as the First Sun was born. Afaja's shell was torn wide open, his maw and flesh gutted and springled across the Æther. And then his dead, hollow shell, mighty as it were, rested in place, and above it, the First Sun soared in a bright, holy flame. On the shell of Afaja, his flesh and blood rained, his cracks became currents of muck and mud. And from this primordial blasted soil, Earth came to be, on the shell of the Greater Abyssal. From the primordial soil, the first deities rose to mold the world in their ideal.


Rules
First off, I expect you to read and understand all rules before joining. They're not particularly organized, I admit, but it's important so you don't get caught off guard. Ask me about something if you want clarification.

This is a lite GodNES. Basically, each player assigns himself a position of a primordial deity. A player should treat his part of the players' pantheon as representing an element, an emotion or a concept. Examples are God of War, Prosperity, Fire, Emptiness, Judgment, Growth, Wisdom, etc. It is also possible to be God of a more specific concept, such as Wine, Trade or Fishing, but bear in mind that living creatures and specific beings are not actually created yet, so be careful. Gods are not immortal and die in this world.

Players are not omnipotent either. They spend each turn assigning their cosmic strength to terraform and shape the world. This divine strength and capacity is abstracted through the power sources of Might, Realm and Patronage. Treat these stats akin to EP in other NESes; they may be spent to influence the world. Each source of power counts equally (A point of Might is as powerful as a point of Patronage, and both are spent on the same thing) but are gained from different areas of the world. Your powers are gained from the following:

Might - fundamentally, Might is your divine presence. It summarizes your metaphysical potency gained from experience and unfathomable age. Gods are ancient beings and the older they get, the grander, more bemythed, more primordial they are compared to the rest of the world. Your god's initial Might is 1 and increases by 1 per turn to represent the potency you gain from aging.

Realm - fundamentally, Realm is your earthly extent. It denotes the raw power you assume from Afaja's dead flesh, basically, the larger an area you have under your care, the more power you gain to influence the world.

Patronage - if we ever get so far as to actually creating life and peoples, Patronage will become a factor. It denotes the devotion the earthly populations have to you and summarizes the extent earthlings may sacrifice or die for you. The greater your faith is and the more powerful your followers are, the greater is your patronage.

The concrete amount of change you make by investing your power is wholly abstracted, and I admit to having no fair measure of how much energy is contained within eg two Realm points. But this is a list of approximations of one Power point's potency:
You may pour a lesser sea
You may raise a mountain or a small mountain chain
You may create a desert
You may grow a forest
You may construct a large structure
You may create a flock of animals (note that they must have an environment to live in)

In the beginning the whole world is a fleshy crust of Afaja's dead husk. It is of the Abyss, so life doesn't really prosper or sustain itself on it; rather it is undone by a strange mute death. It is formless even though perfectly visible. In order to use it, you must reshape it into earth.

Also, in order to not get players to tear each other's throats apart too much, working together will help out a project quite a bit. When two or more gods arrange an earthly action together, the Power spent on the action will be treated as if 50% higher (albeit this is another approximation.) That means that two gods with 2 Power points may eg grow three forests instead of two during a turn.

Regarding throat-tearing: I expect conflict between the gods to happen. Although I have no wish for or against conflict (a peaceful NES would be really interesting to see), the rules lend themselves to creation of alliances, conquest of mortal realms and conversions of populations in the name of divine power. Do be aware of that so you won't be caught by total surprise when backstabbed by Lord Iggy. (That vile warmongering bastard!) I assume a point spent to destroy equals slightly less than a point spent to create.

In order to fundamentally change terrain rather than build on it (Eg in order to turn a forest into a desert rather than grow more, bigger trees) I think that spending both destruction and creation Power (that is about 2 Might to change that damn swamp zone into a civilized city) would suffice.

And lastly, well-written (and concise) orders plus good stories will procure slightly better results than lazily typing out a few goals. I won't hate if you do the latter though, as that's the way I do it myself.


Submissions & orders
When making a submission for a god, please fill in the below template and post it in the tread.

Deity name: (Your name as a god)
Embodiment: (What you are the god of, eg fire, death, judgment, swamps, time)
Player: (Your CFC account name)
Description: (Of course, as players per first turn erupt from primordial ooze, not much backstory is possible, but you can still put in details of your personality, looks, gender if any, relations to other gods etc.)
First turn realm: (You get 1 Power to shape your first realm when joining. Describe what you want)

To perform actions when turns progress, you will have to send orders before deadline. I will reserve myself the right to ignore orders if they don't make it. When typing orders, post in the thread in the form of the following template:

ORDERS
Spoiler :

<copypasted stats from page 1>

"Action 1". Cost: number of Power Points spent. What the action does.
"Action 2". Cost: number of Power Points spent. What the action does.
etc


You may of course use attached images if needed.

If you do not write in that format, I might not accept your orders or I might simply penalize you.

I will ignore conditional orders ("If the God of Fire burns the forest, then grow a new one") because I'm not very smart and it would cause me a headache to figure out.

Note that sometimes orders just don't go as planned. Most of the times, ideally, other people's actions will get in the way, while at other times, if I feel a particular distastrous outcome would be interesting, that might be what happens. Sometimes I might just be sadistic. But note that any sadism of mine will be indiscriminate and that I will still try my best to mod "fairly".

And yes, all orders are public, even those hostile to other players.


Tone and Stories
As you might have noted, the world began with an cataclysmic event killing off a Demon Turtle upon which the Earth rests. Yes, indeed what. I have arranged for this setting not to fall into the tone of completely clicheed high fantasy and Greek-elemental metaphysics. The world is darker and more cthonic than that, borrowing from assorted absurd cosmologies. And the setting has perhaps damned this world prematurely (it is placed upon a friqqin giant demon husk after all). I have not mentioned any Creator during the world's inception either; perhaps something darker is luring in the Great Below or outside in the Abyssal Space: Fun thing is, the player deities playing on Afaja's back, while potent, may be even smaller players in a giant theatric Cosmic Horror. I'm not sure yet myself.

Players may write stories as they please, but I'd be happy if they inspired themselves by the established prestory and the stories in the thread. I am a mod and have the power to remove or correct any submissions if I find they are too far from the setting. This means that I don't think a Hamtaro god would be proper and I will smite it from the thread faster than the speed of a thousand methaphysics.


The First Turn (and Joining Later)
The first turn will be special; no more than five gods will be birthed here. That means that I will restrict the first # of players to 5. Any submissions during the first turn will therefore be considered "applicants" to become one of the Primordial Pentagon. The more primordial or perhaps metaphysical of a feel your god has, the higher chance it has to become one of the Five. Still, be creative.

At the submission deadline, before I update, I will reveal the chosen players and arrange the rest in a joining queue, where the submissions will be allowed in in chronological order instead. I will then try to get approximately two players to join each turn.

Note, however: When joining, you are not allowed to choose where in the world you are put. That choice is made under my discretion.
 
Orders and resubmission instructions

http://forums.civfanatics.com/showpost.php?p=12786327&postcount=222

Update list

Update 1: http://forums.civfanatics.com/showthread.php?p=12781485#post12781485

Update 2: http://forums.civfanatics.com/showpost.php?p=12807312#post12807312

Player Queue

1. Cold: Kylmyys
2. Death and Gateways: Zaephta
3. Wisdom and Knowledge: Gnontia
4. Sea: Greyti
5. Passion and Drive and Devotion and Obsession: Merphous
6. Fire: Adur Oheder
7. Drought: Mazus-Klein
8. Forests and Jungles: Juntin
9. Tricks and Lies and Meditation: Magrastuur
10. Chaos: Lafindreeth
11. War and Honor: Sythus
12. Conquest and Dominion: Malek Bal
13. Hearth: Madris
14. Skies: Nargot
15. Gluttony and Lust: Ballestoniormelatimusty
16. Luck and Fate: Jarquin
17. Fire: Rintrah
18. Disease and Healing: Higen
19. Charisma and Daring and Mischief: Sejesse
20. Moon: Evyera
21. Storm: Arastor
 
***STAT LIST***

Deity: Artharax
Player: Grandkhan
Embodiment: Order and Law
Might/Realm/Patronage: 1/0/0

Deity: Borog
Player: Lord_Iggy
Embodiment: Darkness and Fear
Might/Realm/Patronage: 2/2/0

Deity: Ceradus
Player: Ophorian
Embodiment: Time
Might/Realm/Patronage: 1/1/0

Deity: Primanus
Player: Milarqui
Embodiment: Life
Might/Realm/Patronage: 2/2/0

Deity: Solonos
Player: Patchy
Embodiment: Sun
Might/Realm/Patronage: 1/1/0

Deity: The Curator
Player: Seon
Embodiment: Memories and Preservation
Might/Realm/Patronage: 2/2/0

Deity: Thwapp
Player: Terrance888
Embodiment: Accidents and Inconvenience
Might/Realm/Patronage: 2/1/0

Deity: Tsamnir
Player: Bair_the_Normal
Embodiment: Balance and Opposites
Might/Realm/Patronage: 2/2/0

***Terrain description***
(Colors are approximate. Refer to the map for better overview.)
Afajan spine: Mountain range of chelonian crust. Induces madness in the feeble. Time doesn't pass here.
Funghal fields: Shrubland expanse of tree-tall mushrooms carpeted with purple bacteria.
Mountains: A rough land of great rocks and peaks.
Plains: A simple land of little forestation.
Scorch: A molten wasteland where all that would live burns.
Sprawling fields: Places of plant life where small worms exist.
Structure: Basically great things that are built by gods and mortals.
Terror land: A vast thicket of woodland, casting darkness over tunneling holes. Hides a labyrinth of darkness in its soil.
Tunnels in the deep: Deep twisting cavern systems in complete black.
Ur-sea: Perhaps the most ancient of waters, but not some to drink.
 
Hmm, interesting concept. Maybe I'll be able to work in here.

Anyway, this is my Deity:
Deity name: Primanus
Embodiment: God of Life
Player: Milarqui
Description: Primanus' form is undescriptable, because s/he can have any form he wishes, as long as it is something that can be described as a living being. One of hir favorite forms is that of a giant turtle, which s/he chose because s/he liked to see hirself as a counterpoint to Afaja. S/he cannot be considered to have a gender, because s/he represents all life, both masculine, femenine and neutral.
Spoiler :
S/he is neutral towards the God/dess of death, because s/he knows that Life cannot exist without Death. S/he does, however, hate those gods and goddesses who represent things that only destroy life, such as Fire (it destroys plants!) and War (beings die because of it!).

First turn realm: Primanus will, using hir powers, create small bacteria that s/he will be able to help change into larger beings with time.
Spoiler :
When I woke to the First Sun, and gazed upon the vacuum that was this planet, I despaired, for no life existed, and I felt there was something empty within me, within my own soul. The empty that could only be fulfilled by feeling the plants, the animals, the fungi, living, moving, growing and reproducing.

As I remained there, paying no attention to the scorching produced by the First Sun upon my skin, one of my legs entered into the soil, and I was brought from my despair by the feeling it brought.

Humid. There was water under this soil.

Curious, of course, I continued to move the soil with my legs, and I noticed something that had been missing before.

This soil was not normal. This soil contained everything that could create life. It was lifeless life.

My joy, which had been crushed by despair just a few moments ago, returned.

But it was tempered by one fact. There was little I could do with it. I would have to wait for life, actual, true life, to be formed, before I were able to begin guiding it.

Wait! I told myself. There is something you can do.

I looked up to the First Sun, and implored Him to give me something. Just enough to fulfill my purpose here, in this planet.

Closing my eyes, I waited. And, fortunately, it didn't take much for an answer to come.

I felt how some of that emptiness was filled. Not much. But I knew it was an answer. One that showed I had been blessed to continue.

The feeling was power. Enough to do this.

My legs on the ground, I started to concentrate. I wanted life to come to Earth. I could not make something too complex. But, maybe something small, tiny, that could live and reproduce... that was within my reach.

The primordial soil changed. I could feel that. A few things moved, others mixed with others. In my mind, I could see the little balls join in hexagons, then the hexagons into helixes, the helixes into chains... it was coming... coming...

And the chains became alive.

I smiled, and as I opened my eyes, I saw a minuscule blob of life, with an undetermined form, just like me. It didn't move, but yet I could see it was alive. In the humid soil, and with the First Sun shining above both of us, it lived.

And it divided.

It was reproducing.

Life was here.

And I was glad. Because I knew that this was but the first step, and that the emptiness I felt would slowly be filled.

And it all began with a tiny blob of life.
 
Interesting Milarqui and thanks for the submission!

A few things that confuse me though;
1 There seems to be quite a number of symbol typos. Are you typing blindly?
2 There aren't really death or fire gods yet per se. It's not an issue - this seems to be a premature position of yours, right?
 
Interesting Milarqui and thanks for the submission!

A few things that confuse me though;
1 There seems to be quite a number of symbol typos. Are you typing blindly?
2 There aren't really death or fire gods yet per se. It's not an issue - this seems to be a premature position of yours, right?

1: If you are talking about "s/he" and "hir", they are not typos. They are written that way in order to further drive the fact that Primanus has no gender.
2: But there will be. Of course, if you think this is premature, I can pull out that part and write something when those gods appear again.
Also, I have added a story to the orders.
 
I can never pass up a GodNES, I'll have something up shortly when I'm fully awake.
 
@Milarqui: If that's the case, don't worry :) Your submission is fine.
 
Joining as the Curator, God of Memories and Death
 
Deity name: Ceradus
Embodiment: God of Time
Player: Ophorian
Description: Ceradus is best described as a massive serpent, coiling around his den. Though Ceradus is technically genderless, most (future) depictions of the deity describe him as a male. Ceradus cares little about his fellow deities, and is a generally ambivalent god. As his powers are currently less-developed, Ceradus' perception of time is limited to the days and weeks surrounding the present, but as his powers grow, Ceradus will be able to see further into the future and the past. This does not imply that he is omnipotent, he is merely able to grasp the shape of things to come, saying nothing of his ability to prevent such events from occurring.

Spoiler :

Ceradus expresses passivity and ambivalence towards his fellow deities, but is not above cooperating with them to further his cause. Specifically, his goals are to prevent any meddling within the timestream that would prove detrimental to him, and ensure that events unfold as to his predictions. Granted, his currently limited powers and the subsequent growth means that his perception of the future will grow as time passes, so he is technically learning (making stuff up) as he goes along. Should Ceradus' predictions bode poorly for himself, the deity is more than willing to meddle in the timestream to enact a more favorable future.


First Turn Realm:
Ceradus will raise a mountain range for himself to inhabit.

Spoiler :

Story coming tonight
 
Deity name: Solonos
Embodiment: God of Sun and Light
Player: Patchy
Description: Formed directly on the moment that Afaja the Demon Turtle died Solonos burst from the right eye of Afaja as a beam of light piercing through the Void that had only known darkness before. Facing out to the Void for the first time Solonos stared into the Abyssal Darkness and shivered from surroundings that had never known warmth before. Some say he settled in the sky above the shell of Afaja Solonos tore off the left eye of Afaja and brought it with him into the sky, then he began to pour his power into the lifeless eye until it grew so bright none could look at it directly for long and its heat reached out across space and warmed the shell of Afaja. And others say he found that the Sun had already existed due to the lack of time to keep order, upon finding it he knew that it was his and assumed mastery over the light.

Solonos was created with no corporal form, rather he appears as a ball of sunlight that is too bright to look at directly. He is the master of the First Sun and directs where its light shall shine on the shell of Afaja and which lands shall receive it's warmth. Chronologically he was born at the start of time along with Ceradus and he saw the birth of many other great gods such as Sythus, Rintrah and more.

Solonos celebrates the new era brought about by the death of Afaja and all of the new creations and gods that come with it. While he does not advocate throwing away all remnants of the past he believes that the world is a better place in the Age of Gods and sees those who try to bring back the essence of Afaja as lunatics who would destroy everything to resurrect an era that has permanently ended.

Solonos is neutral terms with most of the gods that are not Scions of Afaja. Solonos respects Curator although they haven't talked much due to how he ripped out the left eye of Afaja to create the sun. He finds Thwapp to be an occasionally funny but usually annoying brother and he has a good relationship with Sythus who he cleansed from darkness upon her birth. He is, however, greatly suspicious of his brother Borog who hides from the light of the sun and holds onto the darkness that was left after Afaja's death.

First turn realm: Solonos creates the First Sun out of the left eye of Afaja.
 
Ooh, a NES! How hard can this be? :mischief:

Deity name: Kylmyys
Embodiment: God of Cold
Player: Civ'ed
Description: Kylmyys is the god of cold and is often (in the future) depicted as an old man with large white beard wearing the furs of various animals. At this point, however, he still looks like a man in his early thirties.
Kylmyys has a tendency to stay away from other gods, indeed, his personality could be described as cold. He has no reason to leave his domains as he finds himself incompatible with anything other than the most utter cold and inhospitable surroundings.
First turn realm: Kylmyys doth Shape a Sheet of Ice for his domain, and the Temperature to have It remain..
Spoiler :
One day the Turtle died and the World was blasted by Sun.
This saddened Kylmyys, who looked upon the Ice as his Son and Snow as his Daughter.
It was under such Circumstances that He did form the Sheet of Ice at the Pole, and that He did live there, on this Great Sheet of Ice from which all the Ice on Earth stems.
However, the First Sun could not allow this.
So Kylmyys, seeing His Power wane once more, stood up to the Sun and shouted
"O Sun, do not shine your Warmth here ever again!"
The Sheet promptly fell into Cold.
And Kylmyys was pleased.

OOC: I'm not that good at roleplay, which may be obvious at this point, although in my defense, not much has happened. Yet.
 
Deity name: Zaephta
Embodiement: God of Death and Gateways
Player: Nivyi
Description: Zaephta is the god of Death, and he looks like a skeleton wear a black toga. he also has two eyes that send people to Heaven or Hell, because he is the man decides where people go to after they die.. as being the god of Gateways he protects the way to the underworld and to the great house of the gods.

Zaephta for the first turn will construct the a Desert to make a home.

Spoiler :
story coming soon
 
I shall reserve a spot as Gnontia (Pronounced Guh-NOHN-tee-ah), god of wisdom and knowledge. Even though I probably won't be able to play on this turn, I'm still reserving this God, if that's okay.


Deity name: Gnontia
Embodiment: Wisdom, Knowledge
Player: ChineseWarlord
Description: Scholarly and serious, Gnontia is nevertheless benevolent, because he believes that knowledge can only prosper when the world is at peace.
First turn realm: Create a giant structure akin to the Parthenon, that shall house in the future all of the knowledge of the God Gnotia

Spoiler :
Darkness.
That was all it had ever known.
Then at once, light.
And self-awareness.
It opened its eyes to the world, and realized all.
Afaja, the demon turtle.
The sun.
The nature of his own existence.
Life.
He understood it all.
And he understood his purpose.
To give the beings Primanus had created the light.
Whether it would be a blessing or curse, he did not know.
But he would.
He would know all.
But first, a place to call home.
Using all of his godly strength, Gnontia gathered up a strange element which he decided to call marble, and molded it into shapes aesthetically pleasing to him.
Soon, he had created it.
But it was empty.
Soon, that would be fixed. For now Gnontia rested.
And the world was at peace.
 
Deity name: Greyti
Embodiment: Goddess of Sea
Player: Everblack
Description: Greyti is a being that took on the form of a giant blue and gold scaled fish. For now Greyti keep this form until she can decide what she truly want to look like.
Personality: Greyti has a playful type of demeanor toward most god/goddess which tend to annoy her siblings. Most of her siblings usually see Greyti as a overbearing child.
(Beware if I join you guys will have to put up with a female version of this :
Spoiler :
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First turn realm: Large amount of water begin to pour from Greyti mouth. (That right people she will created the sea by vomiting lol)
 
Looks great all. :)

Welcome Civ'ed! First NES for you? Your submission is very good. :)

Two death gods can't show up both as Primordials though.
 
Deity name: Merphous

Embodiment: Passion/Drive/Devotion/Obsession

Player: merciary

Description: Mad Merphous emerged out of a pool of Afaja's blood formless and thoughtless. After unknown time change came to she who would become the Pursuer of All and Bloody Merphous was given shape. Still dripping and malleable an infinite number of thoughts, goals, and hopes came to the Driven One overwhelming her just formed consciousness. As the Crimson Mistress screamed in insanity she looked upon the bleak wasteland before her. A single thought grew louder among the cacophony of Courtier of Madness's mind. Shape, This land must have shape. This thought drowned out all others until only it remained. She of Many Minds looked down at her arms and saw that where they once ended in nothing now hand hands to shape that which was before her and she smiled.
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More clear description: Merphous was created out of the blood of Afaja. Her initial form is that of a featureless humanoid that appears to be comprised of blood. Once she acquires a goal or driving force her body will begin to shift to better preform whatever her new passion is without conscious effort on her part, as will her personality to a lesser extent. Her body and mind's alterations will continue until she has completed what she considers to be the crowning glory of whatever was driving her. At that point whatever she is becomes "set" and she resets to her basic form until she acquires a new passion which may happen instantly or take hundreds of years. In this basic form she can shift between any of her set forms at will but as soon has she has a new passion she can no longer transform until the form is complete.

First turn realm: Create sort of a New Zealand-ish set of grassland hills and rivers.
 
((My first time playing a NES. Hope they are not as hard as Forum Roleplays))

Deity name: Adur Oheder

Embodiment: God of Fire

Player: Kinkaz (I wonder why this is necessary because you have the username at the left)

Description: Adur Oheder is a young yet godly creature, so he doesn't have much idea what he is doing, although later his mind will clear. At his physical aspect, he is cuadruped and his foots and legs are shaped like a cat. His head is shaped as if it was a buffalo and his hair has fireish colour and he has a lion-like body.
This is what he spits out when he expels a lot of air from his mouth:
Normal: Normal lava
Angry: Lava that is very fluid
Very angry: Fire
Happy: Cold lava
Very happy: Hot solid rock
His breath is already enough to heat up the air. If the air is concentrated for long enough, he can even break normal air into oxygen and hydrogen (I'm supposing that there's minimal science)

First turn realm: Adur finds a mountain-shaped remain on the creature, as well as a large hole. He uses his powers to carve a large mountain. When it was deep enough, he breathed on the place, creating magma. He was very happy to see what he just did, so he breathed a cold lava lake. He digged up the volcano he just created and he breathed a waterfall of cold lava.
 
My god idea was a reinterpretation of the anthropological personification of Death, a Curator who preserves dead souls and their memories and remembers them all, so that at least one person in the entire world can say that at least one god remembers them all and that their life story will never simply be forgotten.

This god of death does not judge, does not praise, does not scorn, does not punish, and does not reward. He simply remembers... In hopes that others too may see all the glorious and horrible things in the past and learn.
 
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