JalNES I: Quick and Easy

[jalapeno_dude]

For years two Egyptian kingdoms lived next to each other honoring the same god's. Two Pharaohs rules two seperate kingdoms. Every time a Pharaoh died a great and beutifull Mastaba was built in is honor, but now as a unification comes more and more closer the great Pharaoh of Upper Egypt have decided to begin a new trend. Before he will die he ordered thecreation of a small Pyramid shaped building, directed to the star of Ra. This stepped Pyramid will be the largest structre the world have ever seen but in the future... He already knew this Pyramids will be larger and larger, addign to the greatness of the Egyptian people.

As sand stones come from Lower Egypt and workers freely join the project every time the nile floods their farms, The Pyramid begin to take shape, larger and larger, soon Pharaoh Raami II will have a fine place to burry is body and become a god with the Egyptian pantheon...

As the Pyramid height increas so does the unification of the kingdom of the nile into one comes closer... Soon a great empire will form under the Pharoh of the greater egypt and the lands will become stronger than ever.


(If it doesn't give nothing? Must it be considered a Project? It's just a tiny pyramid after all.. in the big ones i assume it will become projects that give culture... perhaps education...?)

Yay! More stories! You can give it a title if you want, and I'll add that too.

Nope, that's not a project. Just a good story topic.

 

[jalapeno_dude]

Erez, what do you want the united Egypt to be called?

Egyptia or Egypt or something else?

 

[erez87]

Either Egypt or Greater Egypt... Hmmm whats sounds better?

 

[jalapeno_dude]

Either Egypt or Greater Egypt... Hmmm whats sounds better?

You tell me....

I like Greater Egypt, or how about something like the Domain of the Nile?

 

[erez87]

Empire of the Nile - Greater Egypt

(two names one easier one cooler)

too early for a word like domain.

Edited kingdm to empire, we have no king after all

 

[jalapeno_dude]

How about the Dual Kingdom of the Nile? Has a nice ring...

 

[erez87]

Yeah! Dual empire of the Nile!

Thats good.

And Egypt in short.

 

[jalapeno_dude]

Okay. It will be done (probably ) in the update (send orders btw!).

I'm signing off.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

If you want, give it a title.

A title it has been given.

 

[erez87]

ORDERS
unite with Lower Egypt into the Dual Empire of The Nile - Egypt in short.
build up the education and culture by building temples and schools across the untied lands.
Increase trade with Crete.
If I got economy left also grow a bit the Axemen numbers.
Expansion after unification is south in the nile and north on Egyptian coasts mostly towards Sinai and Syria. Use boaties to settle Cyrene to.

 

[jalapeno_dude]

@erez: your orders will be accepted this time, but please PM them in the future.

 

[erez87]

But I hate PMing orders

 

[jalapeno_dude]

But I hate PMing orders

But I'm the mod, and I say you should PM them. Otherwise, I can't guarantee that they'll be seen. And what if you're doing something secret? If you normally post orders on thread, but decide to PM them on a particular turn, people will know you're up to something.

 

[erez87]

I'll handle my own strategy thankyou..

And i'll make sure you will see them...

 

[North King]

lurker's comment: Erez, speaking from personal experience, it's been a pain in the neck to dig through a thread finding orders, and will usually lead to them getting included in the last minute when the mod actually remembers somebody posted some orders in the thread, which leads to a much lower update quality for that section of the update. For your own sake and JD's, you really, really ought to PM them.

 

[erez87]

I realy realy hate sending PM's when my whole orders are like 5 lines... and not secret at all...

 

[North King]

lurker's comment: So just because you hate it, you figure the mod deserves to be punished?

 

[jalapeno_dude]

23 hours and 8 minutes until deadline!

I need orders from Dreadnought, azale, and alex994.

 

[Azale]

And they shall be forthcoming.

 

[Luckymoose]

OOC: Azale are you ever gonna update your NES?