LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part II

jalapeno_dude said:
From: The Citadel
To: Adar

Were it not for us, your nation would not exist--you would have perished long ago on the frigid steppes. Were it not for us, you would not have been saved from your doom. Were it not for us, you could not have crossed the sea. Were it not for us, you could not have been given the chance to start anew, to repent for your mistakes. But instead of repenting, and choosing to live peacefully, you return again to your old ways of war and intolerance. You betray your only friends in this world. In your cruel disregard for others, you are no better than the Eldranians of old.

Be glad, then, that we are sworn to peace. You will not be destroyed, but merely isolated. No one else shall ever enter your lands. Cut off from all else, you will be alone with your crimes. May they haunt you forever.

To Citadel

Ha we figured out your foul plan before you had a chance to destroy us! We need nothing from you! We ask nothing of you! Begone! Do not set foot within our lands do not try to enact your foul plan, for we shall push your soldiers back through a river of their own blood!
 
Would you mind if I started writing the nation names ON the map, rather than around the fringes. I've found a cursive font that looks good, at last, and most nation are now large enough to have their name placed in them without looking cluttered.

I dislike this idea. There are still plenty of small nations in the New World, the naming could get in the way of city placement, roads, and other things, and I actually really like the way the country names form a ring around the known world.
 
From High Priestess Alaice X
To New Vertis, Valin nations, ect.
I would be more then happy to attend this conference personally, as an effort to continue the healing Process fo the wound that our.. mis-action caused the Valin. Though it was necessary at the time, the reasoning behind it was flawed, along with it's final Action. We have always regreted the way it turned out.
Still, with the cry of vengeance sated, we hope to finally put this misdeed behind us and rejoin the Valin community at large.
 
emu said:
To Citadel

Ha we figured out your foul plan before you had a chance to destroy us! We need nothing from you! We ask nothing of you! Begone! Do not set foot within our lands do not try to enact your foul plan, for we shall push your soldiers back through a river of their own blood!
From: Citadel
To: Adar

You grow more and more like the Eldranians every day. Do not speak to us again, madmen.
 
To The Citadel
From Arcadia

We choose not to break off relations with a group who attacked your people. They have done nothing to us, and as such, we hold no charges against them.

To Norvalin
From Arcadia

A formal declaration of the lands you seek to claim. We shall present ours later.

OOC: After I get through with some other things.
 
From: The Citadel
To: Arcadia

Adar tortured our people because they were convinced that your nation was invading them! We should demand reperations from you! Indeed, we question your sanity if you wish to maintain relations with a people who speak of your "Sinister Acts" and are convinced you are trying to destroy them in league with us!

OOC: Seriously, read the update. They're not exactly friendly with you.
 
To The Citadel
From Arcadia

Shush. Do not think about things that are over your head. What is wrong with a little insanity in the world? And they must be foolish if they believe that we are in league with you. 'Tis would be against the One.

We did not inflict a wound upon you, so we will not cover the costs. Take your talk somewhere else.

OOC: Did you actually expect to get a agreement? Remember, Arcadians aren't too fond of the Citadelers. And yes, as someone pointed it it'd be stupid to cut trade when everyone else does such.
 
From: The Citadel
To: Arcadia

Are you, too, insane? Think logically! Be that as it may, we will be enforcing a blockade of Adar. Do not break it.
 
To Citadel, Arcadia, Zemora
From Adar

your sinister plan was exposed, do not try to enact it now because for we shall be expecting you and it will fail.
Any of your citizens that are upon our soil shall be removed, any that try to enter after this declaration will most likely be killed.
This goes for the nations addressed in this message and any other.
 
To Gangfei
From Tellium

While trade will be difficult during this war we hope it will resume in earnest after peace returns. In the mean time we offer a galley to transport a representative of the Oneists of Gangfei to Exilsium, assuming that Exilsium agrees to host such a gathering. The vessel will be open to search by New Veritas as it enters and leaves port in Gangfei.
 
To Adar
From Arcadia

While we still have not the foggiest idea of this "sinister plot" that you speak of, we will respect your wishes.

To The Citadel
From Arcadia

Surely you jest. You would break your vows in order enforce a blockade on a small people? You speak of war- somehting that doe not bode well. Do not try to intimidate those who do not care for your lives. We will respect the blockade simply because of Adar's wishes, not yours.
 
~Darkening~ said:
To Adar
From Arcadia

While we still have not the foggiest idea of this "sinister plot" that you speak of, we will respect your wishes.

To The Citadel
From Arcadia

Surely you jest. You would break your vows in order enforce a blockade on a small people? You speak of war- somehting that doe not bode well. Do not try to intimidate those who do not care for your lives. We will respect the blockade simply because of Adar's wishes, not yours.
From: The Citadel
To: Arcadia

We do not speak of war, but isolation. To ensure that Adar cannot conduct war, they must be isolated from the world. That is what our blockade is. Adar must be left alone with their sins.

OOC: Thanks emu! :p
 
Citadeller or Citadeler?

Edit: oh wait is this spam?
 
To: The Lengelzai

We offer to make peace with you. Since you are in such dire straits, we offer that we make peace until your civil war is over. You could cede us Emor and Unchete and return Myocaca its land. Whence you have finished fighting your civil, we can again fight our war.

To: UKKK

Sirs, we have met feriously on the field of battle. We would agree to help you conquer the renegade Nurmaferi provinces if you give us back our land and recognize our soverignity over it.

To: Nurmafer

Bit Chez, what now? Don't mess with the Blademaster, don't mess wit him, nu-uh nu-uh.

OOC: Iggy, good update, but what happened to the invasion froce for the Nurmafer island, and what happened to the Bigun with the people who were trying to find the end of the world?
 
To: New Veritas
From: Norvalin


Our alliance stands strong, but we ask for you to trade us enough Iron, and teach us the secrets of smelting it, so that we can grow into the Iron Age, and better serve the League of Valins.
 
Iggy, good update, but what happened to the invasion froce for the Nurmafer island, and what happened to the Bigun with the people who were trying to find the end of the world?
Both were failures that I failed to mention.
 
Thats cool, thats cool. One more question, why doesn't the Blade River Virus effect Davarians? Or does it?
 
Sirs, we have met feriously on the field of battle. We would agree to help you conquer the renegade Nurmaferi provinces if you give us back our land and recognize our soverignity over it.

Not going to happen, these lands north of the mountain range have long been in Khemrian plans to expand, the UKKK has inherited these. Your expansion into said lands was oppurtunistic at best, Anyway, we're at war.
 
OCC: I have a question did my ships sent south manage to make any contact with nations? Or was their journey canceled for some reason?

Regions of Croyodon

Cintar: Dark Red- The northernmost and least populated of the Croyodonian territories. It is heavily populated by people related to Croyodonians and has thus far kept alive what remains of the Croyodonian culture even having its own unique religion.

Middle Mountain Region: Light Red- The area is very cold and sparsely populated having a population only slightly larger then Cintar. The people are also devote Masra followers who get in regular conflicts with the spreading culture to their north.

Coldon Coastal Region: Dark Green- The area has a vastly expanding population as more and more Croyodonians move westwards to take advantage of the land and conduct trade with Skilv’so which is now under Gorinese control. This is the most populated region in Croyodon and one of the largest.

Plains of the North: Purple- The breadbasket of Croyodon this area grows many crops that fed the population as well as exporting to Gorin. Recent growth in population will see this area strained to produce enough food for trade with other nations as well as Croyodon itself.

Saldor: Pink- The southernmost region of Croyodon its population mainly supports itself from domesticated animal farming. The grasslands which receive regular rain from the nearby mountains produce enough food to support the cattle and some crops that need more water to grow.

Croyodon City Province: Blue- Site of the capital of Croyodon and a bustling center of trade that comes from Gorin. With more and more trade coming from the Gorin and vice versa this city has become the wealthiest in the country. The architecture of the city looks like Gorin and most travelers have trouble figuring out what country they are in.

Lower Croyodon River Province: Dark Brown- The site of trading posts and small harbors is well known to the region. The area has really seen no population boom as most of the people take residence in Croyodon City which is the halfway point of trade in the nation as well as the grand marketplace there.

Upper Croyodon River Province: Orange- The area contains the mountain fortresses constructed when the Lengels threatened the nations with their hordes. The fortresses have never seen a day of battle they are heavily maintained incase of another invader. This is the only major city in Croyodon that serves a lot of traders is Manocon which is the second largest city in Croyodon.

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Croyodonian Peoples of the North

For years of wandering the first Croyodonian tribes arrived at the River Croy building Croyodon city. The people gradually expanded and became the strongest of all its fellow tribes expanding across a mountain range to a great sea and to the frigid lands of the north. The nation’s trade and interaction with Gorin and literal adoption of their culture made them forget of their past and fellow people.

Many Croyodonian tribes survived in a thin belt to the north of Croyodon where they lived isolated from the outside world. These people built a unique culture all by themselves. They had pottery and jewelry shaped and painted with unique patterns and shapes. They often built small permanent settlements that had unique symbols carved into the walls depicting scenes of their religion.

Now to the religion of these culturally isolated people that inhabit such a large area of land. The people believe in one god who is the supreme ruler of everything. The people are his servants in life and the afterlife. The supreme god is often seen as offering people paradise in the afterlife for life of servitude in life maintaining the world he created. People who are lazy or destructive are sent to a life of pain and misery in the core of the earth. They spend one life equal to their afterlife in this tomb of torture which they are reincarnated and given a second chance at making it to eternal paradise. The religion teaches that faith in the supreme god along with hard work, generosity, and just being a good person will lead to paradise.

There is one holy site for this religion a small fishing village where the seven nights of miracles took place. This is where the religion started, spread and flourished. Most of the stories, however, are not written down but instead told through stories or scenes often painted on pottery. The goal of Croyodon’s cultural advisors was translate these pictures into a written form where it can be stored and read for latter use.

Popular to the working class of Croyodon this religion is spreading fast in the northern regions and has begun to penetrate the south. The only reason for this is the nation’s sudden interest and revival of past Croyodonian culture. The religion is known to the people of Croyodon as Nordism named after the fishing village Nord where the seven nights of miracles happened.



A map of the regions and a guide to the isolated Croyodonian settlements in the north. Red dots are major settlements and the one with a blue center is Nord the holy site for Nordism.

From Croyodon
To Gorin

We wish to purchase this small piece of land from you that is sparsely populated and a far away territory of Gorin. Please name your price if you are willing to sell it. Do not be alarmed by our cultural revival which has caused a new religion to spread for it is still much smaller then the Masra population. The king is still a follower of the Masra religion and he promises all religions within the nation will be treated with tolerance. We will reopen our borders to cultural exchange once we have developed our own cultural identity.



Land we would like to purchase.
 
Thlayli said:
From: New Veritas
To: Lengels


As you are the established masters of Emor and Myocaca, we would like to settle a small grievence that we have been nursing for some years. The tip of the peninsula facing south, in what was once Myocaca, held a colony, belonging to Veritas. We would like to reassert our claim on this small area, called Sempronia. In return, we would be happy to lend some of our experienced naval forces to your campaigns.

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Our naval superiority is already unquestioned, so I see little use in making this bargin in return for your 'experienced' naval forces. However, once our respective wars are concluded, we would be happy to sell the territory in question.

Swade said:
To: The Lengelzai

We offer to make peace with you. Since you are in such dire straits, we offer that we make peace until your civil war is over. You could cede us Emor and Unchete and return Myocaca its land. When you have finished fighting your civil, we can again fight our war.

Oh? Why should I cede land when I am winning? I sent only half of my army, and was only defeated by diesease. Koke's punishment for overconfidence and our sin of corruption, but such matters are trival compared to the punishment that awaits you. Koke wills it.
 
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