stDarNES1: Stars!

This story is so long, I'm going to split it into two separate posts... don't ask where I find the time to write so much.

Wer reitet so spät durch Nacht und Wind?
The nightside terminator passed over a Vakkra cluster as Oncol III rotated slowly. Night swept in, covering the ongoing war in darkness. A general gave an order, and a thousand men began marching.
"Check your suits and make sure the dispensers are clear! Move!"
"Rimmer, what's your status?"
"Just fine, sir. We'll arrive on our side in a few minutes."
"Good. Keep your link on; being coordinated is a priority."


Es ist der Vater mit seinem Kind;
At the same time, a Destroyer moved out of orbit and began its descent towards the surface of Oncol III. Along with it came a squadron of smaller ships.
"Blue Block Alpha Squadron, your designation for this mission is simply Alpha. We're going to be operating in atmosphere, so make sure your heat sinks are running at full capacity."


Er hat den Knaben wohl in dem Arm,
"Alpha Squadron, check your weapons. Anything that pops up from the surface is to be considered hostile. The ground troops are moving in right now, so we shouldn't have any casualties."

Er faßt ihn sicher, er hält ihn warm.
"We read you, Alpha Leader."
"Copy that."
"Alpha Four, confirmed."
As all the group leaders checked in, the ships went from being silent to whistling as they entered the thinnest parts of Oncol III's atmosphere. Heat sinks began glowing dark red and motors screamed.


"Mein Sohn, was birgst du so bang dein Gesicht?"
"Alpha Leader to Alpha Eight, turn the laser targeting off. The Vakkra know that we're coming, but we don't need to pinpoint where we're landing."

"Siehst, Vater, du den Erlkönig nicht?"
The ground troops were making their way across the no-man's land that surrounded the Vakkra cluster. In front of them, assimilated buildings loomed against the horizon, spires with eerie shapes that weren't quite right for any human buildings. Some were simply bent, some connected to other buildings by means of cables, and the tallest skyscraper bulged at the top with sacs of unmentionable substances.

"Den Erlenkönig mit Kron und Schweif?"
"Alpha Eight here, suggest you turn your sensors on too. It looks like there's a weapons battery on the surface. We should take it out before we get in range. Give me a moment and I'll transmit the data to you. It's got that Vakkra cloaking crap all over it, so I'm having a hard time locking on to it properly - hey, it fired!"

"Mein Sohn, es ist ein Nebelstreif."
Two missiles impacted on the Destroyer at the front of the fleet, resembling nothing so much as two exploding hamsters flung at a motorcycle. The Destroyer absorbed the kinetic energy with its shields and continued on.
"Foggy on my screens, too." said Alpha Leader. "But I've got a lock from the missiles now. I'll brush it aside."


Part 2 coming soon!
Cookie to the first person to name the song I've been using for the subheadings.
 
The Destroyer fired several times. But while the cannon the Vakkra had constructed didn't fire anything powerful enough to harm a ship of the line, it was resilient enough that it wouldn't stop firing.

On the ground, a thousand men saw the skyscraper spit heavenwards. The Vakkra had engaged the Astral ships first, but ateast their air support was here.
"Sir! The fleet's here! Do we move?"
"Affirmative. ALL UNITS ENGAGE IMMEDIATELY."
"Dose one boosters, everyone. Drop the links."
"Rimmer, leave yours on. I want you reporting."
The two groups of soldiers converged on the Vakkra cluster, spurred on both by adrenaline and by the biochemists' strange craft. They were charging forwards, ignoring the pains of their bodies. There would be a payment, of course. They would have to sleep for twelve hours straight and eat two days' worth of rations to recuperate afterwards, but for the moment they were stronger, faster, their guns weighing nothing in their hands, their protective suits no hindrance at all.

"Fraggit, that thing seems to be healing itself-"
"Alpha Leader, you've been tagged. There's some kind of spores on the front of your shields."
"BURN IT OFF."
The Destroyer pulled up and the other ships levelled off, firing at the Destroyer's front shields. The magnetic-biological hybrid spores were rapidly cauterized before they could worm their way through the shields, but now the air support was late and thoroughly disrupted. The ship's captain tried to contact the ground forces.
"fzzt fzzt fzzt"
No luck. The Vakkra were jamming even this.
"afzzt jefzzt fzztu-"
The captain increased the power. Then the rotating broadcast found a clear frequency for a moment, and locked on.

"-LEADER TO MAJOR-GENERAL JEREMY! REPEAT, BLUE BLOCK ALPHA LEADER TO MAJOR-GENERAL-"
"Jeremy here! We're storming in, what have you been doing?"
"The Vakkra have managed to build some sort of STA battery. Help us take out the skyscraper if you can. We can't provide much support for the moment."
"Gotcha." Jeremy grimaced as he contacted the artillery team. If a Destroyer with backup couldn't take something out, what was he supposed to do? "Go to dose two boosters and take the skyscraper down."
The Destroyer's captain contacted him again. "The thing heals the scorchings from our lasers and absorbs kinetic weaponry since it's rooted. I hope you've got something better."

The little fleet hovered above the Vakkra cluster. From time to time the skyscraper would spit lumps or spores at them, but it didn't have the force or the precision to deal any damage at this range. The Starlight Fliers moved out of the way, the Destroyer took the shots on its shields, and the Fighters hung behind the Destroyer, flying down to scour spores off its shields from time to time.
"So much for air superiority."
"Alpha Leader, this is Alpha Nine. One of the engineers here had an idea. I discharge the Fighter refueling pod from my Carrier and we overload the heat limits with lasers before it hits the skyscraper. Then it explodes."
"Sounds fun. How do you plan to aim it?"
"Fly over the building and drop it. No aiming required."
"Fine. It's not like we have anything better to do here."

Back on the ground, the twenty-man artillery team was putting together two house-sized weapons. The skiff carrying the parts for them was the only motorized vehicle in the entire attack force.
"Supports, stat!"
"Ready when you are."
"Lift!"
"Get the coils over here!"
"Targeting ready."
"Beams ready."
"Got your half?"
"Yep. Clip it together, now."
"Grapeshot or bombshells?"
"Bombshells."
"One bombshell, coming up!"
"Major-General, the guns are ready, SIR!"
"Then fire at will."
There was no flash of explosives, no roar of combustion as the two gargantuan artillery pieces were activated. Instead, the ground peeled away from the spikes stuck into the ground as the recoil from the magnetic fields discharged. Two fist-sized metal spheres shot into the darkness at relativistic speeds. [0:37] read the one targeting display, [0:34] said the other. It was half a minute's respite as the nuclear energy cell recharged the battery that supplied the colossal amounts of power required for a coilgun of this size to fire. The team reduced their boosters from dose two to dose one, not daring to stop entirely after assembling a house-sized coilgun in three minutes.

"Fuel pod away, Alpha Leader!"
"All units, fire on my mark, burst lasers only. Three, two, one, mark."
Dozens of lasers impacted on the falling lump of metal, and moments after it impacted the skyscraper, the heat became too severe and overloaded the first safety. Seconds later, several micrograms of antimatter caromed into the walls of their prison as every single one of the containment fields failed in the Carrier's fuel pod. Exploding outwards in a burst of light and heat, it literally blew the top off the skyscraper-turned-weapon.

The bottom wasn't faring much better. After being hit with a kilogram of unsleep concentrate, every biological system had been effectively shut down, and it couldn't support its own weight or balance. The skyscraper began to topple, first slowly, then falling faster and faster until it collapsed.

After that, the attack became a rout. As the largest building in the cluster, the skyscraper had contained some sort of central nervous node for the Vakkra. Between its destruction and the air superiority of the Astral attack force, the Vakkra were unable to respond effectively. Some of them even degenerated to lashing out in the most primitive way, striking at the soldiers in close combat, and collapsed as the unsleep dispensers inflicted synaesthesia on them.




[OOC] Common soldiers in the Astral army are grown in cloning vats. GenTroops are grown from heavily modified tissue. Neither of them are technically human. This prevents both problems with morale and morality. ;) Also, it explains how I can suddenly produce 5000 troops in one year, and lots of other game-level abstractions.[/OOC]
 
Kal'thzar said:
Can we have clarification on the above?

Follow the RUELES UPDATE #2... I just forgot to delete the "cannot be increased by EP investment"

My bad. :blush:
 
Darwin420 said:
NOTES:

- I have a REALLY busy work schedule coming up for the end of April, and most of May. This will undoubtably cause delays in the updates. I'm giving you all a heads up, so you will know what is going on when I fail to post for a day or two. Hopefully, once we get past May, things should settle down to quasi-normal.

ORDERS ARE DUE THURSDAY, APRIL 27 AT 0900 (9AM) EST.
Thursday. I'm sending orders now, since TerrisH has confirmed my trade.
 
Confidence is a representation of how your population views your Faction. The higher the confidence, the better your military will be, and the more resistant your people will be to invasion. This is mostly raised by GOOD stories, but impressive military campaigns, special projects, artifact discoveries, and more can raise (or lower) the Confidence level.
Is this separate from story boni, or are you trying to say that stories will more often increase confidence than anything else?
 
Can someone link me to the last update?
 
Danke very bien!
 
Which one are you, btw? Darwin keeps messing with the names on the map, so I've forgotten by now.
 
I'm not playing now, but I used to be the now consumed Zentraedi. Perhaps I will PM TerrisH to see what has happened to them.
 
Yeah, yeah, yeah. Rub it in, Erik. :P

I still think I'm doing allright for my first time modding. :D

@Gelion: Kam just dropped out, leaving the Harpellian Hegemony without a leader. You're more than welcome back, y'know.

Orders are DUE tomorrow. I shall endeavor to get the update posted tomorrow. It might not be posted 'till Friday, though. Like I mentioned not too long ago, I'm hitting a REALLY busy spot at work, so delays are going to happen throughout May, though hopefully I can keep it to a minimum.
 
The people of Haven once again cast their votes, and continue to valiantly lead their nation into the uncertain future.
 
Darwinn joining again would be great. I am at work all day today so I'll send you a PM about this in the eveninig if its okay. Orders also later :)
 
Darwin420 said:
Yeah, yeah, yeah. Rub it in, Erik. :p

I still think I'm doing allright for my first time modding. :D
You're doing a brilliant job, I just find it funny that my orders are so long as to have five subheadings. ;)

Can we get a little hint on how long the other people's orders are? Perhaps you could release the orders from Turn 10 or something?

Lord_Iggy said:
The people of Haven once again cast their votes, and continue to valiantly lead their nation into the uncertain future.
You mean "The Big Brother computer network of Haven once again decides who shall be allowed to vote and what issues they shall be allowed to vote on", right? :crazyeye:
 
Erik Mesoy said:
You're doing a brilliant job, I just find it funny that my orders are so long as to have five subheadings. ;)

Can we get a little hint on how long the other people's orders are? Perhaps you could release the orders from Turn 10 or something?

My set just in was 500 words or so; longer than normal as I was detailing what a new project did/how it did it.

Lord_Iggy said:
and continue to valiantly lead their nation into the uncertain future.

What were the other options on the poll? :lol:
 
Yes. 40 lines of orders is a lot.

Here are my anonymized orders. Enjoy puzzling them out. x means a letter, n means a number. Tags have been preserved.

Heh, I might enjoy doing this regularly.

xxx xxxx xxxxx xxxxxxx:
n xx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxxx x'xxxxx, xxxxx xxx xxxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xx xxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx n
n xx xx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxxxx n
(xxxxx nn xx xx xxxxx)
xxxxx xxxxxxx n xx xxxxxxx/xxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx n
xxxxxxx xxxxxx. xxxxxxx xxxxx xx x xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx.


xxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxx:
(xxxxxxx'x xx xxxx xxx xx xxx'x xx xxxxxxxxxxxx)

Spoiler :
xxxxx xx xxxxx:
n xx xx xxxxxxx xx xxxxx xx xxxxxxxx xxxxx xxx xxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xx xxxxx xx Xxxxxxx xxxxx. xxx xxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxx xxx xx xxxxxxx... xxx xxxx :smoke: . x xxx'x xxxx xxxx xxxxxxx xxx n xxxx xxxxx, xxx x xxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxxx xxxx xxx xxx xx xx.
xxxxx xx xxxxx xxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxxxxx, x xxxx xxxx xxxx xx xxxxx xxxxx xxx xxxxx xxxxxxxxx. (xxx. "xxxx xx xxxx'x xxxxxx".)

xxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxxx x'xxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxxx xxxxx
n xx xx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxx

xxxxx xxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxx x'xxxxx xx xxxxx
xxxxx xxxxx xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxx xxxx xxxxx xx xxxxxx
xxxx n xxxxxxxxxx ("xxxx xxxxxx") xxxx xxxxx xx xxxxx
xxxx nn xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxx xx xxxxx xxx xxxx xxxx xxxxx.
xxxxxxxx n xxxxxxxxxx xxxx xxxxxxxxxxx, xxx xxx xxxxx xxxxxxx, xx xxxx xxxxx.
xxxxx xxxx xxxxx xx xxxxx xx xxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx xx xxx xxxxxx. (xxx x xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx xx xxx xxx xxxxxxx xxxxnxx, xxxx xxxxx xxx xxx xxx xxx.)
xxxx xxxxxxxxxxx (xxxx n xxxxxxxxxx) xx xxxxxx.
xxxxx nn xxxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxx xxxx n xx xxx xxxxxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxx xxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx
xxxx n xx, xxxxx nnnn xxxxxxxx xxxx xxx xxxxxxxx xx xxxxx. xxxxxx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxx. x'x xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx xxxx xxxx xx xxxx. xxxxx'x x xxxx xxxxx xx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxx.

xxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx
xxxxx n xx xx xxx xxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx n xxxxxxxxxx.
xxxxxxxx xx xxxxxxxxxxxx n xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxx'x xxxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxxxx n. (xxxxxxx xxxxxx xx xxx n xx xx xxx xxxxx xxxxxxxx, xxx x xxxx xxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxx'x xxxx xxxxx xx xxxx'x xxxx xxxxxxx.)
xxxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxxxx n xxx xxx xxxx xx n xx.

x xxxxx xxxxxx xxx xx xxx "xxxx xxxxx, xxxx xxxxx xxxx xxxx xxxxxx" xx xxx xxxxxx xxx. xxxxxx xxxxxx? :D



BTW: Nobody wants a cookie for identifying the song I stole in my last story?
 
I still think TerrisH gets the award for longest orders. Although Erik is winning for most in-depth orders.
 
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