stJNES8: Of Empires

The Spirits were surely smiling on Timbuktu, Sonni Ali thought. Their faith in the Spirits had sustained his people through the tough times of draught and famine; no matter how bad things got, the Songhai people never lost faith in the plan of the Spirit of Order.

And now their faith had been rewarded. The Spirit of Agriculture had inspired Kanubi with the idea to build an irrigation canal, and with this act of divine inspiration, had ensured the survival of the Songhai people.

Sonni Ali had seen Kanubi's irrigated fields, had seen the waters of the Niger make the crops grow tall. He realized that in order for his people to thrive, more such canals needed to be built. He ordered that all fields be irrigated with similar canals, to ensure that a draught never wiped out the crops.

Construction began immediately. Every man and strong lad worked on the prokect days out of every week, and after many months the canals were completed. The water of the Niger was now channeled to every Songhai field, so that the land around Timbuktu flowered with lush trees and grasses, and grew thick with wheat and other crops. The High Priest of the Temple, possessed of the word of the Spirits, declared the day of the completion of the final canal to be a Festival, and for three days and nights the people danced to venerate the Spirits and celebrate the completion of the works that would provide them with a steady food supply.

The city itself was growing, too. As they no longer needed to worry about whether they would have food to eat that day, the Songhai could concentrate their efforts on other pursuits. An artisan class sprang up in Timbuktu; people skilled in the making of pottery, or the carving of wood, or the weaving of tapestries, or the sculpting of gold set down their farm implements and started creating art. Throughout Timbuktu, statues and sculptures of copper, gold, wood, and clay were erected to venerate the Spirits and the King. The Temple, too, was oberhauled; the plain, stone structure built by the original settlers of the city -- its only decoration a single gold statue of the Spirit of Order -- was demolished, and replaced with a great stone structure. The new Temple, built of granite covered by sparkling white limestone, and decorated with gold, silver, and woven tapestries, was the pride of the city. The new artisan class also caused the rituals of the Temple to evolve; throughout the Temple, there now stood statues of the Spiritis, clutching in their outstretched hands bowls of mahagony. In these bowls, the Priests burned a new plant called Cannabis, which would play an important role in the secret rituals of the Inner Temple.

Orders:
-Increase infrastructure by building canals to irrigate all the fields in and around Timbuktu. (2c)
-Expand east and west with even amounts of troops (none in Timbuktu) along the Niger.
-Settle the city of Gao, on the eastern curve of the Niger River. (see a RL map)
 
ooc: I should comment on this xen vs erez thing. Helping is fine, but see erez's point. Xen, you are spamming already. It gets a couple people annoyed. You have almost topped my post count in stJNES5 and I have been in the game sinse the beggining! You post like 10 posts usually on one succeeding another for the same point. That is fine in topics like in Off Topic or something, but in a nes, which is Never Ending Story, it becomes a bit annoying. It is sadly already becoming what stJNES5 became, a NES, or Never Ending SPAM.

@jason, about my orders, I decided to expand north west, has it been done? If so, alright, if not, please edit the map is possible.

now on to write a story... :D
 
Egypt

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The court was now full. In the place of the small old table stood a grand map of all of Egypt and the known world. Instead of the clay figurines there were now golden lynxs, silver jackals, bronze lions, and various other pieces representing the now vast armies of the Egyptians. Menes was not in his relaxation garb, but fully dressed as commander of the Egyptian armies, facing his generals, genius and architects who were all down on one knee as the Pharaoh overlooked the cart.

The Egyptian kingdom was tiny. In the center of it was Memphis, jewel of the ancient world, populated by thousands of people. on the outskirts of Memphis, there were great grain fields running down the Nile, where most of the population worked every day. Farther out along the Southern half of the kingdom's borders, the chariots of the upper class would pass by in races and hunting competitions, only a short distance from the vast deserts which marked the end of the Egyptian kingdom. Farther North, lay the little city of Giza which Menes had conquered from the weakened warlord earlier. Farthest North was some of the worst land in the kingdom. The Nile Delta, which was mostly marsh, and impossible to pass through. Several of Menes's men had died attempting to reach the coast through it, until generals with some common sense ordered the armies to go around them. And finally within days, Egypt stretched from Memphisin the South to the great sea in the North. Menes personally left Memphis with an armed escort to see the splendid sight.

So what to do now? Menes faced the men before him who were still on their knees. Quietly Menes called upon the architect.

"Edifis, rise"
"Yes oh pharaoh"
"Do you remember those structures we found a days walk from Giza?"
"Yes oh pharaoh. The ones rising towards the heavens?"
"They didn't reach quite up to the heavens..."
"Oh heavens no, they stopped well short... incomplete I daresay"
"Yes, I suppose I interrupted their construction with my... coming"
"What do you wish for Edifis to do pharaoh?"
"You are to finish those same structures found near Giza..."
"Yes pharaoh"
"But..."
"But what oh pharaoh?"
"But, you are to build them in Memphis... and larger... much larger than before..."
"Pharaoh how much larger?"
"I want them large enough to cast a shadow over the roof of my palace.... but build them far off enough that they do no such thing... we shall call them the pyramids"
"Yes oh pharaoh"

And with that Edifis hurried off to gain the necessary workers and avisors in his workshop by the market. The men that remained kept kneeling like statues awaiting for their pharaoh to call them. Finally Menes called the name of another one.

"Ekonomikrisis?"
"Yes oh pharaoh?"
"I have a job for you almost as big as that given to Edifis"
"I am honored oh pharaoh"
"You are to construct a city... an entire city as you wish it to look like, in the far North by the Delta"
"An entire city?"
"An entire city Ekonomikrisis, and as big as Memphis"
"Oh pharaoh that will be quite an undertakin..."
"Go now, I do not want to see you waste a single second"

And Ekonomikrisis too left. Finally Menes looked down upon the men who remained. He ordered that they all stand up. The generals looked down at the map, and Menes slowly moved the pieces to where he saw fit.

"You will be given enough gold from the treasury to double the number of spearmen under your control. With these you are to expand in all directions"

And he looked at one general in particular.

"And you, you are to have the chariots. And with them, you are to expand Eastward from the Delta as far as your legs and horses can carry you"

"Yes pharaoh"
"Understood pharaoh"
"We leave now pharaoh"

And the generals walked out of the court composed and ruminating the pharaoh's orders. Most all agreed that East of the delta there was nothing but barren desert... it seemed rather obvious. What Menes meant to find in this East, which he so loved to explore, was beyond them. But they dared not question the orders of the most powerful man in the world, and they left him alone to his thoughts, wondering how best to carry out his wishes.

- Invest one economy in the army (infantry)
- Bank one economy
- Start wonder, the Great Pyramid of Memphis
- Establish the city of Rhacotis, real life Alexandria
- Start research of advanced metal-working
- Expand in all directions, but particularly towards the East.
 
Please don´t tell me you filled this nes after 1 day!?!?!?! Put me on the waiting list or something.
 
You could say King Philip was a megalomaniac. You could say he had a very high self esteem. Or you could say he was a maniacal insane tyrant who loved to see his face plastered everywhere he could manage.

This time Philip wanted something REALLY big. He wanted a structure to wow his people and the world.

He sent for 500 men to get working on his dream statue. A colussus of unseen proportions, and made entirely of Bronze. If his statue was completed, itd be very hard for anyone to forget about King Philip ever, and thats just the way he wanted it.


Orders
- increase army size
- bank economy
- expand eastward to the region of Thrace, and northward towards Albania and Hungary
- begin wonder, Statue of Philip (colossus like statue)
- make the wisemen begin researching the possible ways of better equipping my soldiers

- official religion is Macedonian Polytheism
- found settlement town of Salonika, to the far east of Macedon

Macedonian UU
~Bronze Hoplite~
- better defense
- knows Hoplite formations
 
Orders:
-grow army by recruiting archers from the populace
-send archers and spearmen out to take care of the rebellions arund my nation.

It was time to destroy the rebellions around Kiev. No one should threaten the peace of muscovy. In order to stop the danger in the best way possible Peter agreed to invade. More men were drafted and trained to fight. They werent the best of warriors, but they would give their all, he knew this.
 
Working on a religion

Orders
Change Religion to Rejalism
Expand to sea and west, invade Kru SP? to the west of me.
bank econ
 
Just a small reminder:

Well, I am limiting them to one per nation, and only five per age, and your nation cannot build 2 wonders consecutively each age

I think we got 7 wonders being built now.
 
Update II – 2800b.c.e.

Events:

The fist navy is constructed on the beaches of Tyre, where dozens of shipbuilders join together to build small boats with rows that they call galleys. The galleys immediately take to the sea, but it is quickly obvious that they cannot stand the harsh waters of the interior, and must stick to the coast for now until a means, better then rows by human arms, can be found to power the small boats. Meanwhile, in Tyre, a monumental task is being undertaken. Fostering the slave power of Phoenicia, plus the work of thousands of peasants, the King has given the order for the construction of a grand palace that would overlook the city. This palace, made almost entirely from stone, would be the last thing to conquer should Phoenicia ever fall.

Bantu Spearman come face to face with the Ubangians in the north, thus starts the first wars of the two tribes. The Ubangians, faced with an incredible task to defeat the Bantu, quickly resort to jungle fighting where they are best. Already, a few large battles have decimated the Bantu spearman force, and have forced them to retreat back to their land. However, in the east a new tribe rises, known as the Banuba, who are very friendly to the Bantu.

The first “school” is opened, in downtown Roddynia. Taught by the priest of the city, the school is only affordable by the richest people in town, to make it available to all would undermine the authority of the nobility, and would cost the nation much too much as they would need more priests. Meanwhile, Berezka village in the north has peacefully joined Roddynia, and bring along with it the city-states that were allied to it. In all, five small villages join Roddynia, and with the great farmland that nearly triples the output of the nation, the economy increases.

Roman diplomats succeed wildly in bringing Etruscan security. Most of the Etruscan city-states have agreed to ally themselves with Rome, and even two, Mantua and Felsina, decide to join the Roman league. Neapolis is also constructed out of wood and stone in the south, bringing almost the entire southern peninsula under the control of Rome. In addition, the Great Temple of Jupiter has undergone construction in Rome. This monument to Roman architecture, which at the moment is the most complex in the world, is planned to be made completely out of marble.

Macoroba prospers as they connect their surrounding villages and Medina to a small road network, and the trade continues to pour in. As the light chariots are dispatched south, the Hyksos swarm in from the north. With heavy chariots and light infantry, the Hyksos have overwhelmed the small force outside Medina, and without city walls, the city falls to the Hyksos swarm. The people of Mecca want city walls, and wish for the King to pay for it.

The Germans have a hard time conquering the city-states that surround them – other forces are just as numerous as the Germans. However, the highly skilled spearmen of the German army is able to defeat foes with low casualties, it just takes a good deal longer. The Teutonic Order, in the meantime, arises east of Germany. They pose an immediate threat to the security of the nation as their armies are well trained, numerous, and well equipped.

The King of Sargon was perhaps the most ruthless King of any people in the entire world. Pillaging thousands of cities, he finally came to rest when he took the city of Nineveh. From here, he subjugated the peaceful Assyrians and turned them into warmongering killers who pillage the surrounding cities for food and supplies. When the Akkadians were defeated by their own creation, the Assyrians carried on the tradition themselves with launching a new campaign in the south.

With more educated generals and way better trained troops then the barbarians that surround them, the Swedish are able to easily fight their way to dominance in the Scandinavian Peninsula. Reaching the Glaba River, which supports hundreds of new farms in the eastern side. However, with a lack of infrastructure, the Swedes have not yet developed it.

Songhai continues the build the remarkable dams and canals that sustain huge populations around Timbuktu – and having reached a stable limit in Timbuktu, the city of Gao is formed to the east. Along the same river, the Niger, the city of Gao is built from mud brick reinforced with wood, with cobble stone streets and beautiful canals that intertwine throughout the city to bring the much needed water to the people (increased economy). Songhai then expands, bringing with it the canals and roads that they are famous for to the indigenous folk along the rivers, who merrily join the nation. However, with harsher summers on the rise, the canals are in need of better ways of sustaining themselves (need of more education) and the workers complain of the lack of tools they have to build the canals with.

In Egypt, the sun beats down on the army and slaves as they construct the city of Rahcotis on the never-ending sea to the north. Meanwhile, the expansion by the king for mysterious reasons to the east has resulted in nothing, just never ending desert and a lack of support for it by the men who are sent there. The harsh environment of the Si-Nai, or Death Land, as the Egyptians call it impedes further exploration. However, the small expedition south has led the people to find a very fertile land in the south, already populated by Egyptians who left Menes’s kingdom in the north. However, the people join readily with the Egyptians, and the city of Thebes is constructed in the honor of the Pharaoh. The city is much larger than Memphis, and features a summer palace twice the size of the palace at Thebes. Its grandeur in architecture inspires the most learned Egyptians to travel here to remark at its beauty.

The Macedonians finally come alive with expedition, and send soldiers all around to conquer the area in the name of Macedon. However, the bulk of the army that is sent to the east finds a slight problem. The well-developed Thracians have made a Kingdom for themselves and are ready for any Macedonian aggression. No move has yet been made.

Muscovy, instead of expanding rapidly like other nations, decides to take care of the small civil dispute in their own nation first. A wise decision, as plans were uncovered to topple the King and his family once the army was dispatched to fight the barbarians around them. The fighting in Kiev has grown to monumental proportions – only when the archers recruited from the countryside arrive does the rebellion get squashed, and the King remains King.

The Ashanti prepare for war as the spearmen stomp their spears in order to create an aura of fear and hopelessness in the Kru. However, the Kru are not frightened, and are first to charge, which goes to the Ashanti favor. Kneeling down and pointing their spears outwards, the Ashanti force many of their spears into the chest of the Kru mace men. Only when this formation was destroyed did the Kru inflict some damage. In the end, the Ashanti won the day and gain even more land of the Kru.

Spanish settlers move to the east, reaching the never-ending sea and to their dismay, find nothing of imporance. However, many villages are settled by the following settlers. The threat of the Aragonese lingers heavier, as border patrols now threaten the security of Spanish villages.

OOC

I have updated the industry section on the front page – turns out there is bronze-age industry J.

Kamilian (and everyone else), the building of marketplaces and the like would cost your economy…that’s what is different about this game. Mostly, it increase economy you have to spend some of it developing your stats. Its not like stJNES5 or other NES’s where building roads, marketplaces, etc would immediately raise your economy, you have to work at it.

Constantine – when you said increase army, I assumed you meant spearmen.

@Everyone: Okay, so I took the first 5 wonders said in the orders, all the rest will have to be built some other time. A note about wonders: make them a building of some sort. If you haven’t already, please change them to be one. I will not make a penalty for changing them this time.

If you just say to “build canals” and “research better ways…” it does nothing. You need to invest your economy into it – that’s what makes them.

Azale, I did not build that city cus you did not expand as east as I think you wanted too.

Again, you only got a little story if you sent orders. All the rest who didn’t I banked econ.

Second time I did not get orders from Matty. One more time and he is out.

I congratulate everyone on your stories, they are all great.
 
I asked to expand north a bit on the coasts why I didn't? :(
Also, Teotonic order? Those didn't came until christianery came ;)
 
crap. i'll b broke the whole game - and welfare doesnt exist yet so i cant turn to that
 
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