stJNESX: From Bad to Good

Leif Kohen was a happy man, despite the fact that he had been assigned 10 years to work on the new "statue of granduer" that was to be built on the beaches of the Holstein province. Why is that you ask? Because he knew he was part of something historic. As he approached the worksite, a sight struck him immediately, and suprisingly it had nothing to do with the worksite itself. Almost 50% of the workers where Celt! Obviously, they had been enslaved to work on the statue after the decades of torment they had brought to the League "Good, hopefully this will kick some sense into thier heads"

Leif took his place near the base of the statue, walking up the large dirt cliff that had been built for when the statue got higher than man could reach on his own, and began his work.

Orders
- make longboats (I have to do that to get them right?)
- enslave the Celts outside our borders causing problems, get half of them to work on the wonder to speed the process
- begin wonder, Colossus of Holstein (increase army +1, increase navy +2, increased unity)

- expand into Jutland Peninsula, and send 2 galleys to colonize the island that RL Copenhagen is on.
- expand south into Germany
- expand east to Poland
- try sending 2 Longboats (when thier made) to colonize the tip of Sweden
 
Kiev orders
Begin the wonder, the Great City of Kiev, +3 economy +100 archers, +50 clubmen, city walls.
Increase the numbers of clubmen I have.
Expand east with 1/3 of my army.
Expand south with 1/3 of my army.
The rest of my army trains.
 
Orders:
Grow club men
Expand, send army north for expansion
patrol fleet around to patrol and... stuff
Begin Wonder: Manifest Desitiny, inspiring my people with the feeling that they should one day rule europe (Improved growth of army as people are inspired to join, speeds up expansion, army fights better with feeling that destiny is on their side)
 
Orders:
Improve economy by promoting trade with farmers outside the town
expand east and south
send a fleet expedition along the baltic coast, and expand that way
start wonder: Marketplace of Novgorod (+3 economy, better trade with others)

UU: Fur Hunter: Hunters who go out far into the north woods to find animals. Highly skilled at navigating and fighting in the woods. Very usefull for expansion and exploration.

Send the Fur Hunters exploring in all directions
 
Chi'in Empire: Rise of the East

As many explored the new lands Chinese settlers uncovered, the people rebegan thier lives which was once destructed by neighboring forces. Many found peace in thier land as the new dynasty took control. The war raged for many years until one tribe, the tribe of Peking, arose above the rest, claiming all lands and tribes united, under one, Amirsan.

Amirsan dreamed that he will one day see the high mountains, one higher then all the rest. His dream came true as the army he led climbed up a mountain, one that was too steap to look below. The first thing he said was "Yiiiiiiiii, that is a steap climb" and forever on, he called these great mountains "Mount Yi".

The government of China soon changed as the Chi'in Dynasty took over. The Emperor, Amir-san Chi'in had rule above all except the Council, the Wise Men Council which had second in command. Amir-san was once part of the Wise Men council, before he became Emperor. Soon after the civil war, all loyal generals and governors were newly appointed, as the council quickly changed. It was now becoming one of rivalry, and bitterness, instead of cooperation. He predicted China will fall if this wasn't straight, so he gathered the generals, the governors, and everyone in the city to the town plot.

He took one of the generals, one who caused much trouble in the council. He told everyone, "why must we have the same faith as he? If we continue the way this council has been cooperating, China will fall," Amirsan grabbed the man, and cut both his legs off, "China will fall just as this man, and we may never get up."

The crowd watched, in amazement and horror as the man layed. Amirsan ordered that this man be treated with bandaiges, and now is shown as an example to all the empire, what will happen to those who rebell.

ORDERS:
Expand South and North the river. Expand south, then up the river to the sea and fill in the gaps.
Increase the army
 
The Gujarati People had found their home. It had been as prophesized, an all white tiger upon a boulder, guiding them to the proper place. And Gujarat would rise. Yes, it would rise. (sorry for the nonexistant story but I have little time or inspiriation. If I have time before the update, then I shall add more.)

Expand Northward, protected by 50 archers and 200 clubmen.

Expand Limitedly Easterly, wtih a guard of 50 archers and 200 clubbymen.

Expand to the west with, with 100 clubs.

Increase Economy due to several things. One, we have found our new home, and it is fertile, and people love it, so... yeah. Two, We are expanding. Three, encourage trade with our new neighbors.

Begin Wonder: "Gujarat Reborn!" (+3 economy)
 
New Taikir
It was a rainy day. In the bottom of a hill near the great city of Kaitor a group of people some white skinned some yellow skinned met in secrecy. As they met bellow the hill all made a circle while one of them was in the middle. His name was Tianin Chu Fri. One of the men took a speicel tool and oiled the man in the middle. He was now called King of new Taikir, or in the Takirian language 'Malah' Tianin Chu Fri.

The man who was oiled was the first 'Malah' of the city of Kaitor, capital of new Taikir. He begun several expansion campaigns into the north to claim more land for new Taikir. He mostly went to wars along the river but ususaly didn't fought but ususaly diplomaticly united the lands. In 2050BC his throne became stronger than many around him. But in 2030BC he was already 70 years old and died of old age. His son Qara Chu Fri became 'Malah' beneat him.

Becoming 'Malah' at a rather old age, the age of 36, Qara already kenw his job well. Some said he even killed his father to become the 'Malah' ones and for all but those were unneeded rumors. Qara took new Taikir armies southward for the first time into the high and harsh mountains. He went to claim the area. While being highly succesfull in adding much territories into his realm people did not wanted to settle this lands as they were too harsh. Qara understood his mistakes and took his armies back. In 2010 BC he for the first time mad an invasion into a tribe that layd in the east. Rumors said this tribe threw the old Takirian people out of their homes but this didn't mattered to Qara. His conquest was fast and in the end the enemy tribe gave up. New Taikir have became the biggest country known to the Takirian people and to tribes around them. In 2000BC Qara was already 66 years old. He was already old, but refused to give up and die. In his life he had 2 sons. One was already 44 years old and the other son 35. They both already had sons and doughters of their own. Qara knew his stupid sons must not rule the country when he will die. They will break it into 2 parts and destroy it. He arrested the 2 sons and took all their children under his wings pretending that the sons were killed by wild animals in a hunting trip. Without no one knowing Qara in the year 1990BC executed his sons. He choosed that Gara Chu Fri that was now 17 years old would be the next 'Malah'. All other brothers and sister of Gara agreed that he was the smartest and best man for the title. In 1987BC Qara Chi Fu have died of old age. He was very old in his death, 79 years old. In the day he died all the country cried. He was the first man in new Taikir that was burried in a mausaleum. It was a small wooden structre, beautifull and developed. Since the day of his burial new cities begun to pop up, like he was a curse to the grouth of the country. All agreed he was a good curse if he was one. Gara took the throne in the age of 20. He was the youngest 'Malah' in new Taikir.

Gara married Sadira Turin as wife in the same year he was oiled. An year later his first doughter was born and names Malka Chu Fri. After her birth Gara decleared that from now on the Raoyal family of Chu Fri will never stop. As his sons already changed their family names as time went they were only far away parts of the royality. Gara decided that only sons and doughters that come from him will be 'malahs'and hopfully the family will always have sons and doughters.

Next story next update. For me: 1987BC Gara-20, malka-0, Sadira-20

to Masilla:
We welcome you neighborse to talk peace and prosper! Let's work togehter to prosper togheter. I Gara Chu Fri invite your leaders into a royal feast in my Palace at the capital Kaitor.

to Austria:
hello good neighborse. We are rulers of the lands in your west. New Taikir is a fine country in it's birth. I Gara Chu Fri invite you to a royal feast in my capital of Kaitor.

Orders
Begin wonder: "Tianin Chu Fri memorial" - Improves the Culture of the country. Also help the economy thanks to people from all over the country coming to see the memorial. (+1 economy, +1 Culture)
Improve economy by building roads inside the country to imrpove movment of good along the country.
Expand borders with half the army north along the Rhine river.
Expand borders with half of the army south-east towards the mediterian coast.
 
To New Taikir
From King of Austria

We are greatly obliged, but unfortunately we are unequipped to make such a journey through the wilderness to your country. This messenger probably won't even make it. Perhaps in the future we could find a better, safer, and faster way to travel between our two nations.

edit: btw, good story erez.
 
to Austria:
You can come throught the river. We udnerstand your capital is on it? Ours is very close to it. This is the way we are sending this message to you.
 
ORDERS
-Expand northward along the course of the river. Send an expedition of 250 clubmen and 20 archers to enforce our claims.
-Recruit a contingent of archers.
 
I can't believe no one has already taken Gaul...

Gaul
Ruler/Player: KarlMarxxx/King Alaric
Despotism
Age: Bronze Age
Economy: Stable, Uncontrolled
Army: 500 Clubmen, 100 archers
Navy: 5 Galleys
Religion: Polytheism
Culture: Okay
Education: Nonexistent
UU:
Confidence: Okay
Wonders:

Alaric's Unification
The Gauls were once a loosely knit group of tirbes, without any form of central government. But then, a young, ruthless warrior named Alaric forged an army of sufficient size to conquer all of Gaul. He stamped out all opposition and united Gaul under one man for the first time in history. The era of the Gauls has come at last.

Orders:
Expand Northward and Southward along the coast aided by 200 clubmen in each direction.
 
From: Cyprus
To: Canaan

Whould you agree to a 5-turn NAP (will be expeneded) to secure the peace in the mediterrean?
 
New UU: Egyptian Assasin

The Egyptians of Cyprus had always been known for their sneakiness. The reason was the relative low population of the colony, smaller then both the Phoenician and the Mycenaean. Therefore they tried to turn the tide of the battle over Cyprus by using “unfair” tactics like ambushing, bribing, misinforming, incitementing or assassinating. Supported by their richness from their extensive chopper trading, they become masters on this level. Without these special abilities they certainly wouldn’t have survived the two great wars of Cyprus. Especially in one specific battle they proofed the effectiveness of their tactics.
Battle of Paphos

Battle of Paphos

During the First Great War of Cyprus, where Mycenae, Phoenicia and Egypt battled over the control of the island, there were countless important battles. Often two parties allied to push back the currently strongest side. One of these battles is known in history as the Battle of Paphos. It was after a Phoenician offensive against Mycenae had almost gained complete control over their part of the island, when only the core cities of the Mycenaens remained under their control, that the Egyptians signed a pact with them to throw back the Phoenicians. The Egyptian attack surprised the Phoenicians, although they had made preparations, and the tide was rapidly turning. The former invaders had to withdraw from most of their conquered territory and defend their homelands.

After one year of war the Phoenicians had lost one-half of their original territory. The wonderful city of Paphos stood as a gate to their important north-eastern cities. If the city fell, the entire Phoenician colony would most likely fall, too, one city after the other. As the combined Mycenaean-Egyptian army approached the walls of the city, the citizen prepared for a long siege.

After six months of siege the supplies of the enclosed city began to deplete and the moral of the citizen and the defending army was close to collapse. Around the entire city the attackers had set up their camps. They were well supplied by the Phoenician countryside and since they only had to wait to accept the surrender of Paphos, their morale was pretty high, too. The rest of the Phoenician did not even attempt to send help. They fortified their cities and build big walls and towers, while their armies patrolled their borders. The fate of the city seemed sealed.

But then suddenly an unexpected event surprised the Mycenaens. The Egyptian general Kosey, a noble whose family had a long military tradition, had had secret meeting with the Phoenicians and they had signed a deal. In the morning of a warm summer day assassin sneaked into the tents of the Mycenaean commanders and murdered them. When the Mycenaens realised that they were without leadership they left their position and run towards the mountains. When the besieged Phoenicians saw the whole army flee, they opened the gates of the city, which had stayed close for six months, and charged them. Only few were slain by them, since the exhausted Phoenicians were too slow, but the Egyptian chariots which had followed them killed many of their former allies.

But the Egyptian-Phoenician alliance didn’t last long. Meanwhile the rest of the Egyptian army had entered Paphos and they had slain the King of the city and many of his men. When the Phoenicians turned around and saw their city in flames they fell on the ground and cried, asking their gods what they did to enrage him. Only few were still able to resist since both their hearts and their bodies had been broken. Those who still tried to were crushed by the Egyptian chariots. The rest was sold as slaves. Few of them would ever see Cyprus or Phoenicia again

However the Egyptian betrayal had formed an alliance between Mycenae and their former enemies of Phoenicia. The Egyptian advance didn’t last very long when both of them got reinforcement from their homelands. But still big parts of their lands were burned by the Egyptian hordes.


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Today the Egyptian Cypriots are still masters of assassinating and betraying. Although the Egyptian assassins only form a small part of the army they are still feared by their enemies. Any commander fighting them will sleep with at least one eye open.

OOC: Jason as you can see I changed the name of my UU abit. Thanks for updating my template but could you please change my government, too? You forgot it. Its Oligarchy (here: some kind of federation of the the numerous small kingdoms of Cyprus.) I dont realy if it is the right name.
 

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The Zulu people, once nomads of the wildlands, had banded together in a show of force... mainly against each other. With new pride, they displayed their mastery of the lands, not only were they now free to go anywhere they wished (as before) but the also owned the land, atleast by proxy. These days there was talk of an even greater unification project being started by the new leader Ugunwe.
Six days later he stood on a hill and spoke to all the people's leaders about it. "From this day on, let us be a united, great people!"
And all the people cheered.
"From this day on, let us always seek greater glory!"
All the people cheered.
"And from this day on, we shall go forth, treading across new lands like the Giants of Malabitha!"
Still caught up, the people cheered despite being slightly confused. Ugunwe's plan had worked well. By appealing to the greatest feelings of his new people -tribal unity, and glory- he had managed to direct them onto a course that they would never had thought of by themselves. They were expanding! Hundreds of men would soon be seen going in the directions of the three winds, and behind the warriors would come the families, most of whom were already glad to be settling in a new area with better hunting and more space for their own crops.

Orders:
Expand in all (3) directions with the army
Begin Wonder: Zulu Nationalism (+1 economy, +2 army, +2 culture)
 
occ: Story and diplo will come tommorrow. Who do I have contact with?

Quick Roman Orders Secret

Grow economy by cultivating new farmlands
Expand north and south.
Have the navy scout out and find the fabled lands of Sicily. If they find it begin a colony there.
 
Edit: Nvm
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:crazyeye:
 
Massilia
Ruler/Player: Queen Alemnia/Cuivienen
Government: Despotism
Age: Bronze Age
Economy: Stable, Uncontrolled
Army: 500 Clubmen, 100 Archers
Navy: 5 Galleys
Religion: Polytheism
Culture: Okay
Education: Nonexistant
UU:
Confidence: Okay
Wonders:


Orders
Begin a Wonder, the Halls of the Oracle of Time Immortal (+2 Economy, +2 Education, +3 Culture <-- This is allowed, right?)
Expand eastward to the Adriatic Sea with 250 Clubmen and 25 Archers.
Upgrade the economy by promoting revolutionary new methods of fishing using larger and stronger nets to catch fish. (Fish is a Massilian staple.)


Diplomacy


To Rome
From Massilia

Will you agree to a five-turn NAP to encourage peace in our fertile corner of the world?


To New Taikir
From Massilia

We would, but, unlike Austria, we have no river along which to travel. The forests of Europe are not safe and the journey is long. The Queen sends her regrets at being unable to attend what promises to be a lovely feast.


Story

Massilia had grown in the many years since its founding, and now food was scarce. The valley to the east, the Po River valley, promised an abundance of food and wine and rich new territories for the Massilian people. Anxious to settle the region, a large division of troops was sent to secure the valley and settlers soon followed, eventually reaching a sea previously known only in Massilian myth -- the Adriatic. Rumor said that this sea was actually the same water as the sea upon which Massilia itself sat, but no truly intelligent Massilian believed such bunk!

Meanwhile, in the capital, fearful that the Massilian people were becoming reticent in their rich territories, the Queen ordered the establishment of a grand building for the Oracle of Time Immortal, for the worship of the Goddess of Time, Cleona, was central to Massilian polytheism. Cleona, Queen of the Gods, must have an oracle in her favorite city!
 
ooc: tossi, i thought there was a Hittite colony, not a Mycenaen? :).
sheep, I have made a contact list on the front page as I said yesterday.
 
KarlMarxxx said:
I can't believe no one has already taken Gaul...

Gaul
Ruler/Player: KarlMarxxx/King Alaric
Despotism
Age: Bronze Age
Economy: Stable, Uncontrolled
Army: 500 Clubmen, 100 archers
Navy: 5 Galleys
Religion: Polytheism
Culture: Okay
Education: Nonexistent
UU:
Confidence: Okay
Wonders:

Alaric's Unification
The Gauls were once a loosely knit group of tirbes, without any form of central government. But then, a young, ruthless warrior named Alaric forged an army of sufficient size to conquer all of Gaul. He stamped out all opposition and united Gaul under one man for the first time in history. The era of the Gauls has come at last.

Orders:
Expand Northward and Southward along the coast aided by 200 clubmen in each direction.

Welcome to NES Karl, and welcome to CFC! I am sure you will like it here. :)

If you are new to nes, you can check out a couple simple and welcoming newb nes' like mine (stAMNES) and China 444's.
 
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