While We Wait: The Next Generation

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sp: Quite original, although extremely unplausible. Although the base facts are correct, such as the bugs and their ability to block out naval guns, I highly doubt all those volcanoes would erupt at the same time. And while animals do respond to volcanic tremors, they don't suddenly start killing people. :p

Umm...duh? :p I don't think the point was realism. sp's idea is frightening from a mental health standpoint, but hey...I've seen worse!
 
Really not all that bad, sp. A few random sentence fragments that added nothing to what was being said, but beyond that, a vast improvement on past grammatical practices.

As for the actual story, it's not that horrid. Anybody remember Birds? Alfred Hitchcock wrote that and it stank worse than this does.
 
It's not my type of fantasy.

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What do people think of the FFHNESes by the way? I feel like being part of them makes me some kind of NESer ethnic minority, almost all our players are new to NESing who as far as I know have not participated in other non-FFH NESes, and we have no welknown NESers in either of them. This is not really a disadvantage though, as I think they are bringing in lots of new players that may at some point join main-stream NESing.

If anyone is interested, I am running the ''next'' FFHNES, under the name EkoNES: Fall From Heaven, which I will be starting a pre-thread for at some point in the not too distant future and will run when one of the current two NESes slows down or becomes inactive.


I've never really read the background of Fal from Heaven, but I do occasionally peak into the FFHNESes, although usually it's just browsing. And yeah, it is kind of weird that there is an NES with almost completely different NESers in it from the rest of the forum. It's kind of like its own little forum compacted into one thread.
 
I personally fear them greatly. They seem like a dangerous minority with strange and mysterious practices. I think we should oppress them and stamp them out. At the very least make sure they only remain concentrated in that thread and restrain their freedom of movement in some sort of concentration camp and ban them from other NES's. Who knows they may be plotting against us. I wouldn't put it past them. If necessary some ethnic cleanisig may be called for and we can seize their thread and destroy it. I shall organize it. Who is with me?
 
I personally fear them greatly. They seem like a dangerous minority with strange and mysterious practices. I think we should oppress them and stamp them out. At the very least make sure they only remain concentrated in that thread and restrain their freedom of movement in some sort of concentration camp and ban them from other NES's. Who knows they may be plotting against us. I wouldn't put it past them. If necessary some ethnic cleanisig may be called for and we can seize their thread and destroy it. I shall organize it. Who is with me?

:eek::eek:

Oh teh noes! Their iz a secret consperacy against us! Pleez don't kill us silver! I no you will sned the Mossad against me!

Spoiler :
;) You make me laugh silver.
 
We've already been making pre-emptive strikes for quite some time. :p

sp, would the animals have these?

Epic_Crayfish.jpg

That will probably give me nightmares. Thanks, Iggy.
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
Sp i almost died from the awesomeness, good job:goodjob:
 
I have a question, should I keep doing MRTOR, Restart, Do a regular Fresh Start, Do another kind of NES or stop Moding. I have the time to do it, although 'The Ban-er' is coming back tuesday.
 
Thanks for asking. I haven't written enough about Ardavan or Satar culture in general, but this quote from my orders should serve as an introduction.

Ardavan will be instituted loosely as the state religion of the empire, but followers of ancestor worship will not be persecuted heavily. In fact, Ardavan will begin to incorporate the ancestral beliefs of the Sesh valley in its structure. The Kaphai-taleldil, Record of Taleldil or simply Kaphai or Record for short, will emerge as the transcribed legend-cum-history of the Great King Taleldil, an exiled desert wanderer who rose to lead the chosen Satarai to victory, and whose glorious actions caused his spirit to gain godhood in the afterlife.

The counterpart to the Kaphai, the supposed historical record of Taleldil’s pre-divine deeds, lies in the Avai, or Visions. This is a two-part legendarium: Taleldil’s journey in the afterlife to become a deity, and a less organized series of maxims and psalms dealing with the spiritual link between life and afterlife. The Kaphai will be more of a doctrinal book, quoted in Ardavani ceremonies, while the Avai will be a popular book (or scroll) spreading the the folk-mythology of Taleldil to the masses.

Since each of the Seven Princes maintain a fictionalized lineage from one of Taleldil’s seven sons, each of whom are pseudo-demigods, the general idea that ancestors are a proper object of devotion (if not on the same level as Taleldil) will filter through Satar society. This begins the general entry of Taleldil into the ancestor worship practices of the Sesh, and the introduction of ancestor worship practices into Ardavan. This religious fusion will make Ardavan, and the Satar in general, more acceptable to their subjects.
 
It's not my type of fantasy.

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What do people think of the FFHNESes by the way? I feel like being part of them makes me some kind of NESer ethnic minority, almost all our players are new to NESing who as far as I know have not participated in other non-FFH NESes, and we have no welknown NESers in either of them. This is not really a disadvantage though, as I think they are bringing in lots of new players that may at some point join main-stream NESing.

If anyone is interested, I am running the ''next'' FFHNES, under the name EkoNES: Fall From Heaven, which I will be starting a pre-thread for at some point in the not too distant future and will run when one of the current two NESes slows down or becomes inactive.
I'm not familiar with Fall from Heaven, though I'm aware of it. I simply prefer fantasies where everything isn't already set up- I want freedom and more originality in creating races and gods and such.

I will play as Triffidia! Death to the Colonists on Wight! Power to the Peas!

I personally fear them greatly. They seem like a dangerous minority with strange and mysterious practices. I think we should oppress them and stamp them out. At the very least make sure they only remain concentrated in that thread and restrain their freedom of movement in some sort of concentration camp and ban them from other NES's. Who knows they may be plotting against us. I wouldn't put it past them. If necessary some ethnic cleanisig may be called for and we can seize their thread and destroy it. I shall organize it. Who is with me?
I will come to the defense of these defenseless enclaves- silver shall not pursue his inhumane plot of metaNESing purity!
 
Thanks for asking. I haven't written enough about Ardavan or Satar culture in general, but this quote from my orders should serve as an introduction.

Are the Satar picky about whom follows Ardavan?
 
Not particularly. Though they enjoy killing people that don't...it empowers their god. Not in a human sacrifice way, but in defeating them in battle.

Don't the people who follow Ardavan believe that there are other gods besides their own? I vaugely remember reading that in one of your stories. Something about the other people's gods or something.
 
Don't the people who follow Ardavan believe that there are other gods besides their own? I vaugely remember reading that in one of your stories. Something about the other people's gods or something.

They do. The Satar believe that the wars of the earth are reflected in the wars of heaven, so when two peoples go to war, their gods are fighting also.

So, Krato's gods, the Trilui gods, etc, are all real. The religious justification for the Satar to fight is that if they are defeated, their god could diminish and eventually die. And if they win, Taleldil will reign supreme over the heavens.
 
We've already been making pre-emptive strikes for quite some time. :p

sp, would the animals have these?

Epic_Crayfish.jpg

WOW! Iggy, thanks so much! We'll have a krill faction and a cephalod faction vying for power on the seas! I know you were being rhetorical, but several plans spring to my head with that!

I'm astounded. That's still a better plot than several alternative history novels I've read as well as several movies. I mean, you should still have humans around; there's secret bunkers and so forth, surely some would be ok. I think the whole story is a convincing argument for why we should all support the War on Nature.

Ummm, thanks?

If you know it sucks, why are you working on a sequel?

I meant the writing quality.

sp: Quite original, although extremely unplausible. Although the base facts are correct, such as the bugs and their ability to block out naval guns, I highly doubt all those volcanoes would erupt at the same time. And while animals do respond to volcanic tremors, they don't suddenly start killing people. :p

Still, it'll be fun.


Sooo, should I turn this into an NES once I finish writing Part 2 of the background?
 
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