MoreEpicThanYou
The most Epic.
I'll correct it later, I feel a bit stupid now.
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christos200
Never tell me the odds
It seems that I have 2 Characters.
Milarqui
Deity
@Grandkhan: it means you have 5 clips with 10 bullets each.
@MoreEpicThanYou: I find it really weird that a mage has the same armor as my prototype sniper. Also, the limit is 2 items at the beginning. My suggestion is that you drop the grenades.
@SamSniped: the Cloaking Device does not count as an ability, it would be an object or part of the uniform. Also, you have too many items, and the limit is 2. My suggestion is that you keep the Swiss Army Knife and the Duct Tape.
@MoreEpicThanYou: I find it really weird that a mage has the same armor as my prototype sniper. Also, the limit is 2 items at the beginning. My suggestion is that you drop the grenades.
@SamSniped: the Cloaking Device does not count as an ability, it would be an object or part of the uniform. Also, you have too many items, and the limit is 2. My suggestion is that you keep the Swiss Army Knife and the Duct Tape.
Grandkhan
Telvanni Master Wizard
An Introduction to Severus Hark
TL-40 000, Perlia, Cadian Sector, Ultima Segmentum, 40999
"Stand and fight, cowards!" Severus bellowed over the din of battle, as he railed off a few shots from his boltpistol at the advancing Chaos forces. "I did not come all the way from Emperor-damned Parthion to have to kill a squad on my first command!"
The standard bearer next to Severus waved his banner in front of him, serving as a rallying point for the 4th Perlian. He tried to say something, but his words were drowned out by the thunder of big guns and the unholy screams of the Daemon army.
"You'll have to speak up, guardsman!" Severus yelled, gunning down a traitor legionnaire. "I can't hear you over the sound of the Righteous Cause of the Emperor!"
"G-g-greater Daemon!" the Company commander yelled, gibbering. He tugged on the Commisar's arm. "We must withdraw!"
"Nobody withdraws until I say you can!" Severus bellowed back, as he saw the Greater Daemon of Khorne run across the battlefield at them. It spread its immense wings, and stretched out to its full seven metre height as it blew out a breath of flame from its fanged mouth. "You will hold your positions and fire, Emperor damn you!"
"No Emperor will make me stay for this!" the commander yelled back, and turned to run. The squad followed him, with the standard bearer dropping his banner and fleeing.
"Then may the Emperor have mercy upon you, for I will not!" Severus yelled. He turned and placed four neat bullets into the backs of the fleeing squad, dropping them as they ran. "You have been found guilty of abandoning your posts in battle, and may you serve the Emperor faithfully in death as you did not in life." Severus turned back to the battlefield, where the Daemon was nearly upon him. He stood alone atop the ridge as it raced its way towards him, and activated his chainsword as the seven metre tall being loomed over him.
"For the Golden Throne!" the commissar screamed, and charged the Daemon. Needless of the heat, he slashed the chainsword into the it's leg, grinning with satisfaction as it bit into the being.
The Daemon looked down at the small man-thing, standing on its own against it, and slashing at its foot with a weak and powerless blade. It bellowed with rage, and swung its immense claw at Severus.
As the claw hit Severus, he saw a flash of white light, and then he saw no more.
TL-40 000, Perlia, Cadian Sector, Ultima Segmentum, 40999
"Stand and fight, cowards!" Severus bellowed over the din of battle, as he railed off a few shots from his boltpistol at the advancing Chaos forces. "I did not come all the way from Emperor-damned Parthion to have to kill a squad on my first command!"
The standard bearer next to Severus waved his banner in front of him, serving as a rallying point for the 4th Perlian. He tried to say something, but his words were drowned out by the thunder of big guns and the unholy screams of the Daemon army.
"You'll have to speak up, guardsman!" Severus yelled, gunning down a traitor legionnaire. "I can't hear you over the sound of the Righteous Cause of the Emperor!"
"G-g-greater Daemon!" the Company commander yelled, gibbering. He tugged on the Commisar's arm. "We must withdraw!"
"Nobody withdraws until I say you can!" Severus bellowed back, as he saw the Greater Daemon of Khorne run across the battlefield at them. It spread its immense wings, and stretched out to its full seven metre height as it blew out a breath of flame from its fanged mouth. "You will hold your positions and fire, Emperor damn you!"
"No Emperor will make me stay for this!" the commander yelled back, and turned to run. The squad followed him, with the standard bearer dropping his banner and fleeing.
"Then may the Emperor have mercy upon you, for I will not!" Severus yelled. He turned and placed four neat bullets into the backs of the fleeing squad, dropping them as they ran. "You have been found guilty of abandoning your posts in battle, and may you serve the Emperor faithfully in death as you did not in life." Severus turned back to the battlefield, where the Daemon was nearly upon him. He stood alone atop the ridge as it raced its way towards him, and activated his chainsword as the seven metre tall being loomed over him.
"For the Golden Throne!" the commissar screamed, and charged the Daemon. Needless of the heat, he slashed the chainsword into the it's leg, grinning with satisfaction as it bit into the being.
The Daemon looked down at the small man-thing, standing on its own against it, and slashing at its foot with a weak and powerless blade. It bellowed with rage, and swung its immense claw at Severus.
As the claw hit Severus, he saw a flash of white light, and then he saw no more.
Here it is just tell me if you need something changed:
Name: Neil Morriss
Origin: TL-4253, Date: 5 years after Vault, Pandora, Vault Hunter, Ex-Crimson Lancer
Stats: STR=60, PER=75, END=70, CHA=45, INT=50, AGI=70, LCK=80
HP=195/195, MP=0/20, CP=21
Abilities: Firearms Lvl 1, Looter Lvl 1(can find better/more items), Bandit Killer (feel free to change the name) Lvl 1 (bonus against undisciplined troops)
Disabilities: Greedy (penalty while doing things with no direct payoff), Self-Preservation (penalty to actions that put himself at high risk)
Weapons: Dahl Defender (burst assault rifle), Combat Knife
Armor: Badly Damaged Lance Armor, civilian clothing
Other Items: Basic Tediore Shield, 3 grenades
Injuries: None
Name: Neil Morriss
Origin: TL-4253, Date: 5 years after Vault, Pandora, Vault Hunter, Ex-Crimson Lancer
Stats: STR=60, PER=75, END=70, CHA=45, INT=50, AGI=70, LCK=80
HP=195/195, MP=0/20, CP=21
Abilities: Firearms Lvl 1, Looter Lvl 1(can find better/more items), Bandit Killer (feel free to change the name) Lvl 1 (bonus against undisciplined troops)
Disabilities: Greedy (penalty while doing things with no direct payoff), Self-Preservation (penalty to actions that put himself at high risk)
Weapons: Dahl Defender (burst assault rifle), Combat Knife
Armor: Badly Damaged Lance Armor, civilian clothing
Other Items: Basic Tediore Shield, 3 grenades
Injuries: None
Milarqui
Deity
@SamSniped: your combat knife would qualify as a normal knife.
@Grandkhan: Great story! I hope everyone else soon follows and does the same.
@merciary: your HP should be 200. MP and CP are good. I have two questions:
- Does your character comes from Borderlands?
- What does the Tediore Shield do?
@Grandkhan: Great story! I hope everyone else soon follows and does the same.
@merciary: your HP should be 200. MP and CP are good. I have two questions:
- Does your character comes from Borderlands?
- What does the Tediore Shield do?
SamSniped
DJ Goodboye
All fixed. Still wondering about what AC and CPS stand for in the Ranged Weapons category.
Depending on what my schedule looks like, sometime between tonight and Tuesday night I should be making the first part of my character's background.
EDIT: also, accidentally had my character listed as ex-Navy SEAL corporal instead of colonel. Fixed
Depending on what my schedule looks like, sometime between tonight and Tuesday night I should be making the first part of my character's background.
EDIT: also, accidentally had my character listed as ex-Navy SEAL corporal instead of colonel. Fixed
Okay about the health and yes he does come from borderlands. The Tedidore shield is just a very basic shield (they typically are the cheapest in game and usually don't give bonuses), as for what the shield does it blocks X amount of damage before depleting then needing a recharge. If that's OP just let me know and I'll replace it.
Milarqui
Deity
@SamSniped: Have added an explanation in the Weapons post. Basically, AC means how many bullets there are in 1 clip, and CPS how much 1 bullet costs.
@merciary: No problem, if it is the most basic one it is acceptable. I have accepted SamSniped's camo uniform, after all.
@merciary: No problem, if it is the most basic one it is acceptable. I have accepted SamSniped's camo uniform, after all.
MoreEpicThanYou
The most Epic.
@Milarqui: I'm busy now, but I should have the profile changed in the next six hours.
MoreEpicThanYou
The most Epic.
Here's my new profile.
Origin: TL-1420, 2006, British Socialist Union, People's Association of Believers, Mage
STR=60, PER=70, END=60, CHA=50, INT=75, AGI=65, LCK=70
HP=190/190, MP= 23/23, CP= 15
Abilities: Magic (Staff) Lvl 1, Alchemy Lvl 1, Trickster Lvl 1
Disabilities: Physical Weakness, Xenophobia (Americans)
Weapons: Knife, Staff of Magic
Armor: Leather Jacket, Jeans, Lesser Ring of Protection
Other Items: Book of Incantations, Book of Alchemy
Injuries: None
Origin: TL-1420, 2006, British Socialist Union, People's Association of Believers, Mage
STR=60, PER=70, END=60, CHA=50, INT=75, AGI=65, LCK=70
HP=190/190, MP= 23/23, CP= 15
Abilities: Magic (Staff) Lvl 1, Alchemy Lvl 1, Trickster Lvl 1
Disabilities: Physical Weakness, Xenophobia (Americans)
Weapons: Knife, Staff of Magic
Armor: Leather Jacket, Jeans, Lesser Ring of Protection
Other Items: Book of Incantations, Book of Alchemy
Injuries: None
Gem Hound
Deity
Name: Ky Miller/Gem_Hound
Origin: 843, Earth, Kaalgan Union, Rogue
STR=60, PER=70, END=70, CHA=50, INT=60, AGI=75, LCK=65
HP=200, CP=14
Abilities: Jury-rigging Lvl 1, Looter Lvl 1, Pistol Training Lvl 1
Disabilities: Self-Preservation, Xenophobe
Weapons: Colt M1991A1 Pistol(suppressor as well), Machete
Armor: Black Leather: custom trenchcoat, vest, pants, boots, gloves, and mask.
Other Items: A half-burnt doll, 15m long rope, 4 chaff grenades
Injuries: Laser burn on the back of his right arm
Origin: 843, Earth, Kaalgan Union, Rogue
STR=60, PER=70, END=70, CHA=50, INT=60, AGI=75, LCK=65
HP=200, CP=14
Abilities: Jury-rigging Lvl 1, Looter Lvl 1, Pistol Training Lvl 1
Disabilities: Self-Preservation, Xenophobe
Weapons: Colt M1991A1 Pistol(suppressor as well), Machete
Armor: Black Leather: custom trenchcoat, vest, pants, boots, gloves, and mask.
Other Items: A half-burnt doll, 15m long rope, 4 chaff grenades
Injuries: Laser burn on the back of his right arm
Milarqui
Deity
@MoreEpicThanYou: perfect! Your profile has been updated with the correct information.
@Gem Hound: is Ky a woman or a man? Also, you still have 10 points that can be spent in improving your stats (you have used 440 of 450), and you have calculated your secondary stats incorrectly.
@Gem Hound: is Ky a woman or a man? Also, you still have 10 points that can be spent in improving your stats (you have used 440 of 450), and you have calculated your secondary stats incorrectly.
Gem Hound
Deity
Optical
The Fall of the Eleventh
Edit: see 2 posts down
Milarqui
Deity
@Gem Hound: Actually, it's 100+END+STR/2 (not (100+END+STR)/2, there is a difference, division goes first).
@Optical: There are several problems with your Hermit:
@others: here is to hoping that others will play as women, we have already 7 confirmed and 1 probable men.
@Optical: There are several problems with your Hermit:
- You have put 5 extra points in the primary stats, find where you want to pull those from.
- It makes little sense for your character to be shortsighted and yet have a PER of 90.
- You have not calculated any of your secondary stats correctly. Currently, they would be HP=210, MP=27 and CP=15.
- Shortsighted should be a disability.
- I can willing to accept you having the medical kit, the bible and the spectacles if the latter go on Armor.
@others: here is to hoping that others will play as women, we have already 7 confirmed and 1 probable men.
Optical
The Fall of the Eleventh
Name: The Hermit/Optical
Origin: TL-285, 1603, just outside Morpeth, Northumberland, Commoners' Republic of England, a solitary old friar of the Observant Franciscans, healer
STR=40, PER=30, END=100, CHA=55, INT=105, AGI=50, LCK=70
HP=220, MP=31, CP=19
Abilities: Magic Lvl 1 (orb pendant, via left hand), Trickster Lvl 1, Jury-Rigging Level 1
Disabilities: Silent, Fanatic (the Hippocratic Oath), Short-sighted
Weapons: Blade (hand-and-a-half sword), Rifle
Armor: Chain mail from head down to knees and leather jerkin (all under monk habit), thick leather broad-brimmed hat, spectacles (the best Italian ones)
Other Items: Medical kit (bandages, various poultices, needles and thread, herbs), Bible
Injuries: None
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Fixed. Thanks for the advice, I've actually never been involved in anything like this RPG/D&D-style 'NES' before and so I did expect to make mistakes
Origin: TL-285, 1603, just outside Morpeth, Northumberland, Commoners' Republic of England, a solitary old friar of the Observant Franciscans, healer
STR=40, PER=30, END=100, CHA=55, INT=105, AGI=50, LCK=70
HP=220, MP=31, CP=19
Abilities: Magic Lvl 1 (orb pendant, via left hand), Trickster Lvl 1, Jury-Rigging Level 1
Disabilities: Silent, Fanatic (the Hippocratic Oath), Short-sighted
Weapons: Blade (hand-and-a-half sword), Rifle
Armor: Chain mail from head down to knees and leather jerkin (all under monk habit), thick leather broad-brimmed hat, spectacles (the best Italian ones)
Other Items: Medical kit (bandages, various poultices, needles and thread, herbs), Bible
Injuries: None
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Fixed. Thanks for the advice, I've actually never been involved in anything like this RPG/D&D-style 'NES' before and so I did expect to make mistakes
KaiserElectric
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Interesting. A bit stat-heavy, but I think I may join.
A question though, is the timeline unique to our character or is there a database somewhere else that I need to get that number from?
A question though, is the timeline unique to our character or is there a database somewhere else that I need to get that number from?
Gem Hound
Deity
I thought it was unique to the character and we have no idea what we will find when we travel, making the database as we go?
JohannaK
Heroically Clueless
You just invent it.
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