CKS-NES - 'Out of Darkness'

I'm pretty sure it will slow down in all regards; after all, these orders are as much about development as about defining the starting conditions, and he did say that we won't get to change the foundations of our society as cheaply as this again.
 
You would be correct. This turn was to set the ball rolling...

As to the amount of years that's passed 500 is a ballpark figure it doesn't matter if its been 500 or 2000 its not anyone's expecting to record the whole update :p

Charles Li said:
Jes[*BLEEP*] Chr[*BLEEP*]

I am scared.... Really.... Uh-huh... will get back to you later...

God, that is a lot of points.

It'll require a fair investment of time on your part but I hope it'll be worth it.
 
I'm sorry to say the update is likely to be put back... I happened to commit the cardinal sin of re-reading my work and I found it wanting. The first player with whom I had finished with had some 2000 words to his cultures name, it's now up to 3270. The other player with whom I had 'finished' is going to get a similar treatment tonight so I expect the 1600 words there to increase significantly as well. I had a premonition that this would happen when I started thinking of making a NES, it's wa [fate] so I'm working around it. I hope to have it done by Friday nevertheless :)
 
I don't mind my section being poor quality, if it makes the update go any quicker.
 
Can't happen now for your section and won't happen full-stop.
 
I'm sorry to say the update is likely to be put back... I happened to commit the cardinal sin of re-reading my work and I found it wanting. The first player with whom I had finished with had some 2000 words to his cultures name, it's now up to 3270. The other player with whom I had 'finished' is going to get a similar treatment tonight so I expect the 1600 words there to increase significantly as well. I had a premonition that this would happen when I started thinking of making a NES, it's wa [fate] so I'm working around it. I hope to have it done by Friday nevertheless :)

My supervisors and professors always said i was wordy and needed to be more concise. I have a feeling they would say the same about you.
Having said that, this isn't school/work; its a hobby and its our chance to be wordy to our hearts' desire.
Either way, i look forward to the update and hope that the first one is an exceptional case and that future updates can be shorter (orders and update itself) and faster (orders and update) in the hopes of making this a 'dynamic' and 'moving' world.
Looking forward to friday. Please don't put it off further.

Immac.
 
EDIT: Comment removed.
 
Update? (10char)
 
Didn't send my stuff yet. Mostly because I am getting over the High of the New NESing forum.

Eh... (shudders again) If I don't get it in time feel free to skip me. Other than that, first 4 incoming within a day!
 
Did that actually delay the update? I would have thought Masada was working on it already.
 
I've been working long and hard hours at work this week that's why I've been unable to do much. In any case I'm going on work/business-holiday on Monday be back Sunday late during which time I can't update. So to reward my players I'll post what I've done, which is probably a third of the update (likely to be half by the time I'm ready to fly out Monday). So far I've finished the cultures of Neverwonagame3 and Das. The aim is to finish Charles Li as well before I go. The other three are realistically the smaller part of the update as they are intertwined and interrelated, so I the amount of unique stuff per culture I need to develop is just that little bit smaller and thus easier.
 
O.K. Sorry if I've caused a bother.
 
No problem.
 
Wow, thanks. This is all I got tonight. It will be sent. Hopefully I will get atleast 6 more by tomarrow.
 
BTW, how did the Ministry go? I was worried they might end in conflict with the Champions or something...
 
There isn't much going on at the moment- could you post what you've done so far?
 
Let us suppose a small number of persons settled in some sequestered part of the earth, unconnected with the rest; they will then represent the first peopling of any country, or of the world. In this state of natural liberty, society will be their first thought. A thousand motives will excite them thereto; the strength of one man is so unequal to his wants, and his mind so unfitted for perpetual solitude, that he is soon obliged to seek assistance and relief of another, who in his turn requires the same. Four or five united would be able to raise a tolerable dwelling in the midst of a wilderness, but one man might labour out the common period of life without accomplishing any thing; when he had felled his timber he could not remove it, nor erect it after it was removed; hunger in the mean time would urge him to quit his work, and every different want would call him a different way. Disease, nay even misfortune, would be death; for, though neither might be mortal, yet either would disable him from living, and reduce him to a state in which he might rather be said to perish than to die.

Thus necessity, like a gravitating power, would soon form our newly arrived emigrants into society, the reciprocal blessings of which would supersede, and render the obligations of law and government unnecessary while they remained perfectly just to each other; but as nothing but Heaven is impregnable to vice, it will unavoidably happen that in proportion as they surmount the first difficulties of emigration, which bound them together in a common cause, they will begin to relax in their duty and attachment to each other: and this remissness will point out the necessity of establishing some form of government to supply the defect of moral virtue.

Some convenient tree will afford them a State House, under the branches of which the whole Colony may assemble to deliberate on public matters. It is more than probable that their first laws will have the title only of Regulations and be enforced by no other penalty than public disesteem. In this first parliament every man by natural right will have a seat.

But as the Colony encreases, the public concerns will encrease likewise, and the distance at which the members may be separated, will render it too inconvenient for all of them to meet on every occasion as at first, when their number was small, their habitations near, and the public concerns few and trifling. This will point out the convenience of their consenting to leave the legislative part to be managed by a select number chosen from the whole body, who are supposed to have the same concerns at stake which those have who appointed them, and who will act in the same manner as the whole body would act were they present. If the colony continue encreasing, it will become necessary to augment the number of representatives, and that the interest of every part of the colony may be attended to, it will be found best to divide the whole into convenient parts, each part sending its proper number: and that the ELECTED might never form to themselves an interest separate from the ELECTORS, prudence will point out the propriety of having elections often: because as the ELECTED might by that means return and mix again with the general body of the ELECTORS in a few months, their fidelity to the public will be secured by the prudent reflection of not making a rod for themselves. And as this frequent interchange will establish a common interest with every part of the community, they will mutually and naturally support each other, and on this, (not on the unmeaning name of king,) depends the STRENGTH OF GOVERNMENT, AND THE HAPPINESS OF THE GOVERNED.


Thomas Paine, Common Sense, 1776.

Manarites

Early Period:

The Manar [1] of the Isle of Mana [2] were an organized agricultural culture that would rise to prominence with the widespread use of metals in the Mikulu [3] chain of islands. The initial settlement of Mana itself outside the river valleys would be impeded by a hard backed layer of ash and stone left by an ancient volcanic eruption. The layer – Punghar Paru [4] – it formed was impenetrable to wood which was the predominant material for tools. Agriculture was thus spatially confined to land near rivers which had carried away the layer, exposing rich soil underneath.

Limited to a small area of land, centralisation of Manarite [5] society would grow rapidly as power – land – was concentrated in the hands of the few who were awarded significant amounts of land in the initial settlement. These landholders would eventually form a separate caste, ruling as high chiefs who with time became empowered to dismiss chiefs, appoint new chiefs, adjudicate on land disputes and levy labour distribute new land, remove existing landholders and appoint new ones. The majority of the land itself was held in common but the high chiefs through their own personal land grants – always hereditary – held a virtual monopoly over land. With the power to starve opposition out or kill it they were virtually unchallenged in their mastery over the population. Their legitimacy rested on their ability to keep the population growing and well fed, not all altogether easy considering the limited fixed stock of land.

Manarite society would of necessity come to rely on metal initially for weapons and decoration but increasingly for tools which could hack through Punghar Paru. Mana itself was geologically impaired and would need to import most of its metal. This would represent the first significant inter-island trade in the region, most with the big island – Whakauh [6] – of the chain. The ore would be carried in outriggers of some four tonnes of capacity with the ore melted on the beach with payment based on the metal that could be extracted with no more than two attempts. The initial trade was both dangerous on two counts, by virtue of the nature of the crossing itself – reefs, rocks and strong currents being the norm – and the endemic warfare which plagued the islands as the high chiefs vied for domination over land. Culture was also a net export for Mana as metal and agricultural goods were on-sold to the smaller islands in the east which in effect came to function as somewhat backwards appendages of Mana. Direct colonisation also occurred as the poorest parts of the population of Mana itself periodically were forced to emigrate as famine set in normally to the east which welcomed the addition of the realitively skilled settlers who bought for instance the knowledge of how to extract metal from the ore. This allowed the smaller islands to instead purchase the raw ore itself which was substantially cheaper and extract the ore on Mana beaches (with predictably bloody consequences at times from the circumvented warlike middlemen).

A far more common means of doing away with surplus labour was to organise periodic moves colonisation forays away from the river valleys. These forays would be organised by the high chiefs, equipped by their metal tools and told very politely to hack themselves a living through Punghar Paru. Most predictably starved, it was quite simply to time consuming, uncertain and expensive both literally and in favours for a single farmer to handle.

Favours were a culturally specific institution which effectively functioned as an alternative means of barter, instead of physical goods or services changing hands or being preformed the right to either a good or service was exchanged. These rights could effectively be then traded on to others, allowing for greater efficiencies in barter. It had its problems mostly with honesty, but Manarite culture adapted accordingly and institutionalised increasingly stringent safeguards including for instance requiring a number of witnesses in the presence of whom a favour was to be granted. A typical exchange might include a neighbour helping a neighbour with planting and in turn using the accrued favour at a later date to compel assistance for harvesting.

A solution to the problem posed by Punghar Paru aside from trying to cover it with decomposing bodies would be developed. Periodic intense tropical rains would fall, which would in turn soften the hard Punghar Paru. Working parties would wait in preparation for the rains and then once they began to fall make all haste for the Punghar Paru covered hills. They would then begin to dig deep channels into the hills running parallel to the hills face. With each passing rain, Punghar Paru would weaken further and more of it would slough off revealing the fertile soil beneath. This would of course be organised by the high chiefs who alone had the financial resources both literal and promised to carry out significant public works.

They would then use this newly freed up land to further secure their own power. This would be achieved by distributing the land to family who would then become chiefs in their own right loyal to the high chief only and not to their constituents. Existing social conventions could also be thrown out the window, the starving poor were not about to quibble over the land that was reserved for them to work provided they were being fed. Initially this would work, but as more land in the highlands was opened up, the number of close worthy familial candidates would decline, in turn this necessitated an expansion of the candidates circle, which in turn often reflected a growth in distance from the high chiefs – literally and in blood – not an altogether solid proposition from which to base oneself. Settlers would also decline proportionately; this can be linked to a general period of population decline in the highlands as families had fewer children – infanticide being common especially of females. The land would be run by the high chief’s increasingly distant relatives, but it would largely be populated not by poor lowlanders but by the aspirational younger sons and daughters for existing highlanders – closer to the core regions – who had little regard for distant high chiefs. This process of ‘highlandisation’ was aided by the inevitable outbreaks of disease for which long time residents had far greater resistance to.

Middle Period:

What would follow would be a gradual process of decentralisation, further enhanced by a separate growing identity in the highlands and the arrogance of the lowlands. The interests of the chiefs and the general populace aligned as the chiefs came to see themselves as highlanders in part because of increased fiscal demands as the revenues of the lowlands agriculture declined due to population decline and overworking of the land. These increase demands would increasingly grow as the high chiefs became dependant on the income of the highlands their own holdings in the lowlands – which they not controlled completely – having declined in value. This period would be characterised by period of intense warfare as the decentralised, under populated, far larger and wealthier per capita periphery fought the centralised, significantly more populated (even if it was declining), smaller and significantly poor per capita centre. The irony would be that the greatest heroes of the highlands and lowlands would all be related quite often fairly closely. Later epics would frame it as fight between freedom – or at least Manarite freedom – vs. tyranny with both sides making their own respective cases. The lowlander’s case required acts of mental contortion that were previously thought quite impossible. Nevertheless they managed to frame the high chiefs as the defenders of tradition and the good old days standing up to their own traitorous kin and their oppressive barbarism (what was oppressive about it was seldom enumerated).

The high chiefs would managed periodically to crush the rebellions, but in the words of a popular oral tradition;

One can stamp out a fire, but one cannot stop the embers from lighting anew.

Serious attempts at occupying the highlands or removing their wayward kin from control wholesale were seldom undertaken owing to the distance, the lack of a standing army and a mentality that can perhaps be bested summed up as ‘better the devil you know’. The high chiefs would build up the means to retaliate slowly. They would trade their monopoly control over land including crucially setting in stone inheritance rights in exchange for increase military favours from some of the less loyal chiefs. The compromise would take the form of a presumption by the high chiefs when settling inheritance: land would preferentially be passed to the wives of the deceased. Prior to this even loyal chiefs children could be disenfranchised on the whims of their high chief, something which was a major point of contention for both the lowlands and highlands chiefs. It would have a duel effect of curtailing rebellion in the highlands and reducing the number of grievances in the lowlands. It would also allow the high chiefs to maintain a permanent standing force to deal with rebellion.

It would however weaken the high chiefs. In reality it represented a dangerous opening in the high chief’s power, something that would be readily used by the lowland chiefs who would steadily build up their own power bases. It was only when families died out that the high chiefs got to appoint their own men (something which was common). Realising that loyalty was more important than blood, the high chiefs began to ‘ike’ [7] for candidates outside their own ancestral unit. These ‘hui’hui’tua’ [8] (also derogatively referred to as ike) were placed on land of families which had died out. This would arrest the decline of the high chiefs for a short period. The relative shortage of land and the pressing requirements of the high chiefs to regain their standing necessitated the formalisation of the colony status of the smaller east islands. Culturally similar and all but distinguishable from the mainland, with their own chiefs and parallel political structure they were nevertheless enslaved and subjugated by their own kin from Mana. Few attempts were made by the high chiefs to moderate their creations actions; they simply could not if they expected to retain control.

High Period:

As the ike became entrenched as the generations passed and their children and their children’s children intermarried with the traditional ancestral elite and they became attached to their land and came to view it as part of their familial rights – instead of as a gift from the high chiefs – their loyalty and reliance on the high chiefs would fall. The scheme which had aided in keeping the high chiefs in power in the intervening years had begun to stagnate as bloodlines began to deepen (due to the long period of relative peace) and families stopped dying out.

The high chiefs themselves would continue to adopt ike into their households and soon found a use for this surplus of loyal followers. They would utilise these men to form a new military elite, kawu mao [9] also know as taumatka-hi [10]. They would be a step up from merely having a standing force to use, to having a loyal professional standing force to use. They would arise out of the ashes of the next series of wars with the highlands. Which would be won by the lowland high chiefs mostly on the backs of their kawu mao. Ironically this victory would weaken the high chiefs yet again, as their major source of recruitment – the conflict itself – dried up. To make up for this shortfall kawu mao would essentially become hereditary. The high chiefs would have their undying loyalty, so long as they were denied land of their own and were therefore forced to rely on high chiefs for their upkeep in its entirety. They would be instrumental in reasserting the power of the high chiefs back to near its old level by providing a critical edge in professionalism which their competitors did not have.

It would not be a one way street, the kawu mao relied on the high chiefs and the high chiefs relied on the kawu mao. The one could not exist without the other. This influence would manifest in growing instability as the kawu mao began to intermarry with the high chiefs and on occasion rise to the position themselves. These ikie-kawu mao [11] would initially rule as old style high chiefs and were only ever in the minority and barely tolerated at that. But even these bloodline links would become irrelevant as groups of kawu mao would begin to overthrow the high chiefs and rule effectively as a taumatka-hi dictatorship. This would trigger another series of wars as bloodline contenders and their supporter’s elsewhere – mostly fellow traditional elites – would clash with the taumatka-hi dictatorships.

Improvements in naval technology and the corresponding increase in safety coincided with this period. This would tip the colonisation balance as large numbers of people would begin to flee the violence – not just the poor – would begin to flee to found new colonies on the main island of the chain, Mokin [12].

The taumatka-hi would generally succeed in their wars, putting into the grave the notion of the ancestral unit – and the role of the chiefs and high chiefs – as purely blood creations. From then on the values of the taumatka-hi would become the values of the regions they ruled, honour, conduct and loyalty to the taumatka-hi. Those faithful to those ideals and abiding the rules would therefore by default become members of the group and thus have a say in the running of things. This principle would extend quite broadly; people put forward candidates to act on their behalf – always out of the taunmatka-hi to represent them – and thus gained a voice albeit it a weak one in the affairs of the region. The high chiefs who held on would continue under the old system; their personal blood right to rule. While the highlands would decisively break away from the rivers and maintain their independence till the end of the period, the path they choose was somewhat between the two. The chiefs of the highlands did not exert the same level of power as the high chiefs and were to a large degree reliant on the major other landholders to rule effectively. The economic balance would also shift decisively towards the highlands, which had remained peaceful and avoided the devastated lowlands; they would largely retain their population something the lowlands now had little off. This shift would really have more to do with the population collapse of the lowlands than any real economic advantage the highlands had.

The old system of the high chiefs would be best preserved in the colonies in the east. They had begun as mere extensions of the tribes at home but with the collapse of the situation at home and the collapse in trade they would gain their own independence. The occupiers from Mana would however suffer from the lack of colonists associated with a population collapse, they could no longer be sure they could maintain their control over those they occupied (who far outnumbered them in most of the islands). Modelling themselves on the old systems for which they had sprung from they appointed their own high chiefs. Crucially faced with significant hostility from their subject populations no shift towards decentralisation would occur as the chiefs would become reliant on the high chiefs due to omnipresent threat of raids and rebellion. The kawu mao would develop along the same lines as the mainland but would never have a chance to settle down and provide a viable counter to the high chiefs and would with time become a fully fledged military organization rushing from flashpoint to flashpoint.

It would be in the eastern colonies that the greatest military innovations would occur, as they would diversify their arms and tactics to suit the environments they fought in. Particularly gifted kawu mao might gain a marriage tie to their high chief forming an upper echelon of taunmatka-hi which was often entrusted to advise to the high chiefs and lead their armies into battle.

Trade would develop between the colonies to a much greater level than anywhere else in the chain. This trade would help foster a common identity in the face of adversity, something which would eventually translate into a shared military responsibility between islands. The trade would grow away from the low volume, high value goods of old to bulk trade goods including livestock, grain and suitors (which were constant to prevent interbreeding).

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It would be on the main island of the chain Mokin that the colonies of the Manarites would be given their greatest test. Initial expansion had been quick, with the docile natives [13] derogatively referred to as ponin [14] succumbing to the militaristic invaders. Colonists were however to few and far between to deal a killing blow – if that were in-fact possible in the first place – and as time went on and manpower began to decline due to the constant fighting the original massive gains would be snuffed out. Only superior military abilities would stave off total defeat and it would increasingly become apparent that the colonies would probably not last much longer.

The natives themselves would rapidly adopt many Manarite institutions in part aided by the ease with which they learnt the enemy tongue. They would learn the enemy tongue from the enemies own distant cousins [15] who were likewise subject to invasion and in many cases assimilation as time went on which helped partially alleviate the shortage of manpower.

Significant changes would begin to manifest in the natives, as they abandoned indefensible settlements in favour of more defensible ones. With time a gap would develop between the warring parties, approximating to the distance the invaders were willing to travel inland. This concentration of the population into ‘oasis’ sites – those sites inland which could support significant populations – which destroyed the notion of land, tribe and chief as the identifying factors of oneself. This would allow multi tribal proto-kingdoms to form around the most competent military leaders. The first true King was Mori-Kine [16] was the first of these military leaders to become a King by virtue of his inheritance of his position from his father. His son in turn was placed on the throne as a young man with his fathers death, cementing the position in the family, they would become the Kings of Mik-Min [17] the first kingdom on the chain.

The colonies which survived Mori-Kine were faced with a choice, fight or flee.

[1] Holder of Honour also Honourable Man
[2] Honour
[3] Mountain Island also High Honour Peaks
[4] Ash Mud also Ash Soil
[5] Holders of Honour also Honourable Men
[6] Big Mouth also Big Island
[7] fish
[8] pull up, drag up by the gut (gold digger: for similar negative connotations) also new family (for a more positive spin)
[9] Champion in battle also a military tactic which aims to form a wedge and split the enemy’s line (not for this context)
[10] The honourable rank in society for all of the champions also combat between champions
[11] high champions also high near chiefs
[12] Mok Home also Dry Millet Home also Home of the Mok (Mok being the name of the people)
[13] Language Group C speakers
[14] collared dogs also bound dogs
[15] Other Language Group A speakers who while of the same group as Manarites who have built up their own distinct identity
[16] Hill-Father [Group C]
[17] Mountain-Home [Group C]
 
The Ypes Amman Wakke

Early Period

The Ypes Amman Wakke [1] from the island of Ramun Ton Ekase Nupe [2] were divided between sedentary agriculture and nomadic pastoralism. The shift from nomadism to sedentary agriculture would be particularly slow process owing to the high temperatures and infrequent rains. The bad years were frequent and farmers starved when the crops failed for they had no means of tiding through the bad seasons.

What the population required was something to provide a source of food during the bad years which would be more independent of the rains. This would be the pig which could survive on the barest land of the plains with little water and still manage to feed a family. It would not be long before vast herds of swine would stride across the plains in a never-ending search for food watched over by the young boys of the tribe. Pigs would allow farmers to endure the years where the rains didn’t fall. The proportion of farmers would increase but the inherent instability of the system would continue only slightly abated.

It would require another animal, the humble water buffalo to shift the balance decisively towards sedentary agriculture. Water buffalo would tie people down as they are sedentary by nature and seldom like to stray from standing water. They would prove a boon to farmers, their droppings would fertilise the crops, drag primitive ploughs and break up the soil with their great hooves. This would allow two crops instead of the previous one.

Sedentary farming groups would follow in the tradition of their nomadic kin. Egalitarianism would be a carry over value; each and every person would have their say in the workings of the tribe. As time went on and the group grew larger and the tribe grew more complex and not every voice could be heard in the day or could sit under a convenient tree. It would fall to the wealthiest and most powerful moser [3] – groups linked by blood sharing common ancestors and the same name – to put forward candidates for councils of elders elected to rule in the people’s stead. That a social distinction should arise was the result of the moser patriarch’s extensive control of livestock.

With time they would alter the land tenure system – by bribing and intimidation of the poor – to favour themselves over others. The number of the poor and landless would grow and the power of the moser families would increase as they turned them into dependants working moser held land. As they gained dependants they gained power as they managed to tie suffrage to land. With the tangiable voices of opposition declining, till only their own could be heard, the mosers became tyrannical. Opposition was crushed this would owe much to the spatial limitation of settled agriculture on the island – controlled by the rains and herds – few would risk starvation.

It was in this climate of imposed rule, threatened starvation and increasing economic dependence that the people would rally behind and propel influential priests, tribal chieftains, justices and great warriors into high offices created solely to counter the influence of the elders. These ho’puni [4] would not always rise to oppose the elders and in a number of occasions would be co-opted (especially those who came from the existing traditional hierarchy).

The growing priestly caste would be the greatest friend of the people even though they were of good blood themselves. Perhaps it was because of their unique ability to intercede with the ancestors, for which much of the tribe shared in common. The justices and tribal chieftains when they would arise would try and restore in some measure the days of egalitarianism. It would be largely ineffective, a parable of the time would come to symbolise the difficulties:

Walk down the road? Into what nobody knows;
Walk down the road well known? Into what everyone knows;
Where the one is uncertain in its vices, the other is certain;
For that which has been done, shall in due time not be done again!


They would ultimately be defeated by a decisive growth in the population as nomads began to settle down often directly into existing settlements. This increasing density of population and the corresponding organization required to survive in a difficult environment would render efforts to regress impossible. The immutable laws of population growth would elongate the social structure regardless of what happened.

Middle Period:

The inherent weakness of the system would play out thus – as the population grew, necessity dictated that a larger amount of land be bought under cultivation, as the prime land was tapped out proportionally more land needed to be bought under cultivation. As the population grew the stability of the system declined. Any extraneous shock to the system would have horrible consequences, evidenced by the series of precipitous famines which erupted as the rains failed. As the population contracted the strain on the system declined and the strain on society increased. Alternatives to the tribal system began to develop.

It would be in the temples that the first revolution in government would happen. The first temples were moser household shrines which as the moser grew in size and power profited from increased patronage. It became fashionable to permanently employ a family member to tend to the rituals at all times as individual members became incapable of visiting the shrines themselves. As the moser families increased in size, so did the temples as they became progressively more pluralistic as more of the populace could claim legitimately to be related to the eska [5]. This would increase the size of donations, of land, property and rights. Priests were commonly drawn from the direct family of the moser, this would increasingly fall to the more distant relatives as the rules for the priesthood became formalised. With this abandonment by the mosers and the elder council the priests would come to dictate their own policy as they gained temporal power from the gifts they accrued.

In the more populated areas where lineal links began to matter less and less, households would not find it unusual to visit multiple ancestors, carefully weighing up the costs of donations against the promised benefits they would accrue. In this way the first proto-pantheons would arise, as yet unified except in whom the persons shared as ancestors. The Eska would have developed around them certain themes to suit the priesthood. These would be used to justify the priesthoods position and growing temporal power. These por paskuma [6] would mirror the priesthoods own increasing centralisation developing a coherent message and content.

Temples of fired bricks faced with stone would be constructed by the faithful and slaves. The slaves were mostly unwanted children and the poor, supplemented by war captives and criminals. Slaves would become skilled craftsmen and functionaries in the temple hierarchy. Many slaves would specialise in maintaining the vast temple bequests and it would be from this group of slaves that the first written language of the region would develop. It was pictographic, with signs representing simple ideas represented by a single sign. It was most commonly used to record the daily workings of the temples:

Rice consumed on this day, 138 kol [7]

The temples would often be given wet land including swamps and marshes. This land would be useless for millet but it would be useful for rice farming. Channels would be cut into the rich soil to drain the water. In the process the idea of moving water through irrigation to parched areas would come into use. Irrigation would be the missing link, without it rice was limited to naturally wet areas, with it rice could proliferate around any standing body of water.

This would spur a massive growth in productivity and population especially around temples. The last hurrah of egalitarianism would occur in this period, feeding as it did on the shift in the structure of the economy and society. A series of rebellions would erupt pitting the chiefs and justices against the elders. The chiefs and justices reliance on small personal retinues of warriors would help them lose the war worn down the numerically superior kin based militia forces of the elders. Thereafter compromise would be the norm, the elders were not popular or numerous and the chiefs and justices were not militarily powerful.

Late Period:

Cities would form around the temples and settlements of the tribes. The rise of the temple cities was largely a product of the growing number of tenant farmers working temple lands. These farmers were driven of their land by the grazing herds of the elders which had grown quickly as the amount of land needed for cultivation fell in the face of rice’s superior production. Offered title for long periods (typically the life of the family) with nominal rent they would quickly become a powerful group. They would become the chief military arm of the temples acting as an effective extension of the temples terrestrial power. This concentration of labour would increase the canal building program of the temples proportionally.

Other cities would develop around the traditional tribal sites and would be less impressive than the temple cities in that they were on the whole less well suited to the new rice farming. Many would stick primarily to millet farming with whatever rice they could plant; whilst they would grow they would still slide in relevance.

The tribes to the east on the Ypes Wakak [8] would gradually grow in power as they were situated on a river and were thus far better suited to the new agriculture than the plains dwellers. This sudden and sustained rise in population in a geographically quite confined area would erode the tribal distinctions. Whilst they would be significant, they would cease to be the sole determinants of allies and friends and would instead merely be guides to likely candidates. This growth in non-kinship bonds would through marriage allow the formation of hegemonies of greater than one city (linked by a combination of tribe and marriage often both).

It would be in these eastern cities that the notion of tribal militia would morph into a true militia with each and every male member of the population required to maintain their own arms and armour appropriate to their station. The bulk of the population would exchange desultory arrow and stone volleys before the elites of the participants would clash in a series of individual combats. Killing the enemy was seldom a motivating factor in these early clashes, the value of the real combatants was such that exchanges were the norm and looting the equipment of defeated enemies mandatory. This predictably tended to make the states which arose unstable, with no means of dealing decisive defeats and lacking the ability to enforce conditions levied on distant neighbours for any length of time deviation from the norm was unusual and normally short-lived. Land exchange was all that could be expected and in the cases of close neighbours suzerainty.

Some particularly adept elders would eventually ascend to a position above the elder councils as Nispa [9] these were not hereditary positions but were rather positions accorded to gifted men in extraordinary times. A handful of these would live long enough that they might be able to establish some sort of regular presence in the position for their families but this would typically end if the quality of the candidates fell. It would fall to these hereditary Nispa dominated states (still reigned in by the elder council at least for the moment) to use their long term strategic focus to expand their dominions.

In the east a handful of these kingdoms would rise to prominence far above their other competitors. One unifying element would unite them, a strong support for the temples and an active patronage of the ancestors via the temples. This would allow them to tap temple resources in times of war which were often far and above the resources of the Nispa themselves (the riverside land being less than prime when first gifted).

In the home cities the rulers would abrogate or adopt the specific privileges and functions of the elder councils and diminish their power accordingly, such that they became merely an advisory council. In other cities under their control they would abrogate some of the previous Nispa’s privileges and functions and empower the local elder council with the rest. In this way the elder councils would become dependants on the Nispa at least to some extent. Temple patronage and construction would be singularly the most important privilege that the Nispa would abrogate; with it they could gain the support of the temples and gain an important rapport with the existing elite by claiming kinship via a common ancestor. The cities themselves became the bastion of Nispa power while the country remained firmly in elder council hands.

While in the west, the traditional centres of power along the coast and on the plains would be slower to develop and their Nispa (when existent) would be forced to deal with a stronger rural moser elite which would actively object to the centralisation of power and their own corresponding loss of power. These Nispa would typically arise out of the tribal chiefs and justices as the positions themselves held large amounts of reserve power which when used judiciously and at the correct time could oust or limit the power of the elder councils. Prospective Nispa seldom worked alone and were often propelled into power different factions (built around kinship groupings instead of the old lineal descent).

Conflict would be intense and often between factional groupings in the cities themselves. This would enable the temples to gain significant Nispa making powers as they were a military and landholding power of themselves. Compromise candidates would often take the throne endorsed by the temples. These Nispa would owe their thrones to the temples and would show their loyalty through exorbitant gift giving and ritual supplication to the priests and idols.

Centralisation was more permanent in the west, with Nispa often using the excuse of conquest to divest the city completely of its troublesome moser elite. The Nispa would then place landless mosers often second or third sons on the land. Opposing cults would have their land and temples stripped from them with the proceeds going to their own cultist supporters. Nispa of the same bloodline as the conquering Nispa would be placed on the thrones as well (although in a subservient position). These measures would ensure that proper Nispa in the west often had stronger support outside of their own chief cities ironically.

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The first Ypes Amman Wakke attempt at invading and subjugating the Nissiu Nay [10] would fail. Led by Nispa Kur Kur [11] whose realm lied in between the Ypes Wakak and the Nissiu Nay it would run into the locals the Kuykuy Nissiu [11] and their endemic fortresses and persistent and obstinate defenders. The Kuykuy Nissiu were large scale terraced rice farmers and constructed their settlements at the apex of the tallest hills in their domains – to watch for possible enemies and to be close to their preeminent ancestor the ekaniss [13]. The individualistic combat of the Ypes Amman Wakke would prove to be less than effective in rolling hills and valleys when your enemy insists not on fighting but on harrying your advance with projectiles of all kinds. Attacks on fortified settlements proved ineffective, the Kuykuy Nissiu typically melted out through hidden entrances when the attacks were getting close to breaking through. It also proved almost impossible to attack gain any lasting settlement with an enemy who were as fractious as the Kuykuy Nissiu were. The occasional gain could be made only at great cost and with the exile or death of the original inhabitants and even then the next tribe would be waiting on the next set of hills newly reinforced by their kin newly evicted from their homes.

Nispa Kur Kur would achieve some measurable progress, driving a wedge of land right to the river and its rich agricultural land. He would also manage to weld together a loose alliance structure of ‘loyal’ Kuykuy Nissiu. They would use this newfound ‘alliance’ to access weapons to carry out their own wars against their traditional enemies – the newcomers were simply too small in number to worry about. Nispa Kur Kur would have a narrow window with which to achieve something tangible and lasting.

[1] Rice-Eat Water [Place] also Rice Coast
[2] Wise Sir Grandfather Field also Wise King Millet also High King Millet
[3] Gens [pl Gentes] via Latin and Rome
[4] To rise up also Great Men
[5] Grandfather also Best Man also Ancestor
[6] Great Old Tales also Great Songs also To tell a Great Tale
[7] A kol is equal to roughly one half of a kilogram, approximate consumption is therefore 275kgs daily or a rate of half a kilo per person per day.
[8] Rice Water also Rice River also River of Rice
[9] Father also King
[10] Cloud River also River of Clouds
[11] Shadow Person also Shadow Shadow (the word has a double meaning)
[12] Cloud Biters also Hidden Biters
[13] Father Cloud
 
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