End of Empires - N3S III

That was a really wonderful update. I'm still reading it in full. Having talked with you earlier about the proposed changes, I naturally approve of them.

I've decided that I'm going to play the faction of Karal. Since Luckymoose's character Ephasir is probably in Letoriate territory, he is welcome to take the faction of Tephras and Zelarri if he likes.

From: Karal-ta-Asihkar, Thirteenth Redeemer
To: Khagan of the Vischa


I think that it is time we put an end to my uncle's foolish war.
 
A Setting Sun

King Dawentar felt old. So very old. He maintained his upright posture on his horse even as his back threatened to revolt. He wondered if that was how his friend Ceuwen felt like, those many years ago during the Farsenca crisis. But then, Ceuwen is the King’s advisor. He... he is the King.

The King must look like the King.

Beside him rode two men of his blood. His older brother Prince Sarca rode to his right, slouched over in the saddle napping. Once an explorer and sightseer, age has pressed down upon his brow as greatly as it does any other man. He knows ten languages, but now he can only remember three. Thankfully, Leun remained one of them.

To his right, riding militarily erect, was Harca, Sarca’s son. His nephew. A veteran of fighting the Zarcasen on the western coast of Parthe, and official commander of the largest army in Parthecan history. A fighting man. A loving man. One who loves his country so much, he is willing to cross the seemingly endless seas and fight for it’s glory.

Looking upon the serious, stale face of the young Princling brought another face into Dawentar’s mind. His son, the crown prince, Kansutdo. A prince he has left behind in the old decaying city of Parta, who preferred it over the polished and new Tarwa. His son hated his city, a city he built with his hands, his mind... his heart. But his son loved him, and loved his country. Best of all, his son doubts himself, but is decisive in making his decisions. He will be advised well. He will be taught well. He will be a good king.

Behind him marched five thousand Parthecan sons.

One thousand are veterans of the endless Zarcasen wars. Scarred bodily and mentally alike, they are silent as they headed south. Led by their grim captains, they have seen war far too much already, but they are willing to see more for the good of their nation. They speak often, but they know each other deeper than some men know their wives. Their conversations are, not with words, but in the sparkle of the eyes, the gestures of the arms, the movement of the brows.

Four thousand are new recruits. They sang and joked as they marched, for the only combat they faced was the loud cries of their trainers, merging the clansmen into a single Army and Will of the King. They can fight, but they have never fought before. Unlike the veterans, they are still lead by their chosen clansmen, and they divide themselves from groups of twelve to two hundred, sometimes snubbing their Captains’ commands to gather under their own chieftain’s calls.

As they stopped for noon, one final ridge before reaching Teora, Dawentar ruminated on his decision once more. Has he just sent these five thousand men... these four thousand boys to their deaths? To die across the sea, unburied and unremembered? They looked so young, even the veterans still have youth in the set of their faces, hope glinting in the light of their eyes.

He felt so old. He closed his eyes for a second.

He opened his eyes. It is time to leave. The brief noon break for dried fruit and stretching has ended.

He has not eaten.

He is not hungry.

He is merely old. One old, confused man leading a thousand men and four thousand boys to their unsung deaths across the sea. He frowned.

As he lead them over the hill, towards the Leun colony of “Teora”, he calmly dusted away his doubts, one by one, rehearsing his lines, bringing union to where there was once disunity. He set his face calmly as cries ran out from the low walls of the Leunun town. As the gates opened and the leaders of the town rode out, he nodded to the dealer, asking for a new round of cards. Cards of fate.

His men will cross the sea.

It was boring, official business. The Leunun representative from their distant capital spoke animatedly with Sarca on the governing of Parta’s newest city, and with Harca on the disposition of his five thousand men. Time seemed to flow around him as he sat kingly on his high horse, nodding and shaking his head as necessary. He stamped what needed to be stamped, he thanked those who desired thanks. Protocol. Meaningless protocol. Watching as the younger men stumbled through the processes, he felt once again old. He is older, much older than all of them, except for his brother beside him. Is he wiser? No. No doubts. The cards have been dealt.

After an eternity of meaninglessness, it is done. Sarca and the representative, elbows bent, clasped left hands. Then they pressed their right hands on the outside. Pressing their foreheads onto this bond, sealing the deal by their minds.

Disengaging, they then used a more familiar gesture. A Parthecan gesture. The two men placed their right arms across their chest, their open hands over their hearts. Then, at shoulder height and with straight elbows, they pressed their open palms together, sealing the deal by their hearts.

The representative bowed to Dawentar. And returned to the town. As the army slowly moved again, Dawentar can hear the criers as they announced the new leadership in Teora.

The whistles and drums sounded has he passed under the gate, heading for the center of the newest town in his realm. He rode steadily towards the raised ground of the podium. A nod. Soldiers spread out through the city, led by their captains to relieve the Leunun garrison and militia of their duties. Others walked practiced paths, handing invitations to the true leadership of Teora- the crafty merchants and shippers whose livelihood depended on Parthecan friendship.

He dismounted.

His body complained as he walked step by step, stair by stair, towards the top of the speaking stand. The merchants of Leun gathered, one by one, before the King. Their faces were shrewd, young. They listened as Sarca gave a speech in their native tongue. He himself never got the hang of it, although he could somewhat understand when listening.

It was his turn. As he stepped up to face the crowd, he felt another dizzying spell of immense age upon him. These men are so young. He would have to offer them granddaughters and grand nephews.

“I come to Tehnoras” he began. He does not remember what he said, but he has rehearsed it often enough as the words poured through his lips and spread out onto the world beyond. He watched their faces instead, as they listened to his offer. They, the old ruling class of Teoras, will marry into the new rulers and with unity help lead the city, and the whole of Parthe, into a new age.

Their faces showed shock, disapproval, disgust and uncomfortability. All well hidden of course, but he could see through their meager shields, their card-playing faces. He was old, they are young. He knows their secrets.

He continued his speech, now amused at the manlessness of the men before him. He was offering them beautiful brides. A future. A dowry. And yet?

Finished, he added a postverse to his speech. “Gentlemen, my children are beautiful, the opportunities are endless. Consider carefully, for this marriage shall help us all more than you can imagine.”

He was disappointed. Young men, all of them, but not yet men enough to accept additional wives, and the ceremonies and gifts that come with them?

Sarcas nervously prodded him as the men in the crowd begun to mutter in that strange, flowing language of theirs. He turned around, a frown decorating his face, and queried his brother. Sarcas replied: “Brother. The Leun, by custom, cannot have more than one wife.”
 
Great job, North King! And I think I like the changes you're making to the rules, though I do think we have a decent player base in my corner of the world as well.

To: Naran
From: Trahana


Hail, sailors of Naran! We have heard many tales of your people and met many merchants who have journeyed to your lands, but never spoken to representatives of your king before. May our best wishes travel with you. We hear of your settlements to the north nearer than before to our lands, and we wish to reach an agreement as to mutual influence over the uncivilized domains between us and to encourage trade between our great realms.
 
From: Karal-ta-Asihkar, Prince of the Moon, Redeemer of Man
To: The Hai Vithana


It has been some time since I came a penitent young Prince to fair Amhatr, city of winds. But why stop a great tradition just because you became the ruler of the world? Sadly I cannot come myself, but perhaps my first flesh, young Zendan-ha, might suffice? I would exchange gifts befitting great princes of the world, and send my word of mercy to the sons of the Grey Arrow who sit in your halls, I hear. Perhaps as well we might make alliance between our tribes, sealed with blood as all such things must be. I await your word, cousin.
 
I would like to share my appreciation of the update - great to see this legend continue!
 
Still in it as Naran. Enjoyed reading what I've gotten to so far, plan to finish in the next day or so.
 
Petty threats. I can and do control the north. You are but a lowly piece on the Great Kalis board of life.
 
OOC: As one who previously met the Stettin as Ederru, I will be quietly cheering for Cyve.
 
The Peace of Edrim

1. Hostilities between the Dual Empire and the Exatai will cease. Hostilities between the League of Gallasa and the Dual Empire will cease.

2. The League of Gallasa will cede to the Dual Empire the city of Edrim and its immediate environs.

3. The Dual Empire will forswear all involvement with the region of Tarena.

4. The Dual Empire will respect its previous arrangements of autonomy with the Khivani and Occaran peoples. It will withdraw from Airani territory.

5. The Exatai will make no attempt to influence the internal affairs of the Dual Empire, and the Dual Empire will make no attempt to influence the internal affairs of the Exatai and the League.

6. The region of Tarena will return to the fold of the League of Gallasa, under a form of government acceptable to its rulers.

7. The self-proclaimed King of Tarena, Vesper, will be surrendered to the control of the Exatai.

Signed, in the name of the Redeemer,

Elikas-ta-Tisatar, Sartas-ta-Exal
 
FYI I'll hold off on what is probably NPC diplo until I know who's still playing... which I'll give until Friday for.
 
I think I will take Brunn, assuming it is indeed open. I know Vischa isn't in your intended range of playable NPC's NK, but I hope a qualified neser comes forward to claim it!
 
I'm still in and playing as the Rihnit! Also when are the stats updated?
 
I don't suppose I could pass on Moti to someone else, or leave it to be NPCed?

No offense, but between all the long updates I long since lost any idea of what I was trying to do with it. It would do better to have new leadership by this point.
 
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