ImmacuNES III: Post-Apocalyptic Fantasy

sorry for bringing this back to life even temporarily, but with Immac's approval I wrote an epilogue for my nation and characters. Enjoy

Spoiler :
Council

22 years later

“Fellow members of the Council of Eastern Barsaive, I bring foreboding tidings. We have fought of the Patrian slavers for near century, slowly growing stronger as they weakened. Their allies, the Pilsetans and the Uld’ari, have been defanged. The mighty Throalic navy is retaking the seas from the Patrian galleons. We have victory in our grasp. While western Barsaive has ripped itself in half, the Palitane and Utilican forces fending off the Scions, Tabba Ghut, and Kraz, we are facing the very real possibility of peace. Keep all that in mind while I present a message that the Patrians sent us only a week past, a message that could change our relationship entirely.” Sharad raised his hands, making a box from his fingers. The image of a bedraggled man appeared above the Council, his Patrian heritage obvious in the lines of his jaw and his almond colored eyes. He began to speak slowly, his voice distant.

“Our home continent, Patria itself, has been overwhelmed by the beings known as ‘Thorned Ones’. They are the corrupted descendants of the Elves on the eastern continent, servants of the Lady in Pain. We beg for your help in freeing our home, if the Thorned Ones get their hands on the Stolen Tomes there will be dire consequences for us all. There are rituals described in those books that could bring about another Scourge, one far worse then what we have barely endured before. They must be stopped. Please, for all our sakes, save us.” and the image faded
“This could easily be another trick by the Patrians, trying to lure our armies into a trap. But if they’re right... How does the Council vote?”

Thorns
Eight years later

Sharad looked over his city, watching the distant glint of steel as the massive army of Dark Dwarves and Thorned Ones destroyed the pathetic remnant of the once-mighty Achatin. It was truly over. The Council chose to ignore the Patrians’ warning, continuing their campaign against the Patrians. Their forces were occupying Sky Point when They came. Half the fleet was destroyed in the long retreat that followed. The Thorned Ones came next to Achat, driving back the increasingly desperate Achatin forces under the command of Pathos. The return of Glamdrin and the main army wasn’t the turning point that the Achatin had prayed for, only managing to delay the inevitable defeat by a month or two. The capital has been besieged for three months now, the cannons of the enemy tearing down the walls far faster then the defenders could repair.
Glamdrin burst onto the balcony. “We’ve got to leave. The city is lost. We still have control of the Western Gate, we can fight our way out and into the hills. A guerrilla war in the countryside could last years if we’re cautious.”

“You go. I’ll do what I can do here, maybe buy some time.” Sharad turned his head to Alari, his ever-present support. “Go with him. You must be safe”
Alari jerked away “No! We were separated once by Ceridwen’s armies. It will not happen again! I won’t let-”

“الذهاب! أحبك ، اذا كنت يموت ثم كلانا يموت. تقرر مصير بلادي ، لك لا تزال خالية” Sharad interrupted.

Alari looked down, a tear falling “ولكن... نعم. لقد وجدنا بعضها البعض من قبل ، وسنفعل ذلك مرة أخرى” She embraced Sharad briefly

Sharad smiled sadly, “If only. But GO!” and he pushed her into Glamdrin’s arms.

He watched them as they hurried through the streets. He brushed away a stray tear and turned back to the palace, there was work to do.

Six years later

“The Thorned Ones have ruled us with an iron fist for over half a decade now. Every day we hear word of their victories in Pilseta and Uld’ar spread. Throal’s pleas for help have yet to be answered, the Easterners remain in their bubble, confident that since they beat off the Thorned Ones once that they can do so again. Quite frankly, we’re losing and losing badly. If we keep fighting then we will probably die, crushed under these latest minions of the Lady of Pain. They will kill us slowly and painfully, drawing out each moment into a decade. But if we surrender then they will still kill us, just as slowly. They will torture our children and our children’s children. Not only that but our souls will be forfeit, doomed to serve the Lady of Pain even after death. Do not despair, there is always hope. We have allies in the capital, friends among the Dark Dwarves, and Throal remains free. Even now Alari and others are coordinating our efforts with orcish and elvish resistance cells. Most of all we have the Goddess of Mercy, Lady Sirona, on our side. Remember, we are not alone. We will fight on. We are the mountain.” Glamdrin pointed an arm at the distant silhouette of Mount Achat. The rebels cheered wildly.

Glamdrin poured over the maps in front of him. He pointed at one of them “Send the slingers there, the convoy will ripe for the plucking.”

An aide scribbled this down “If it isn’t too forward, how do you know all this?”

Glamdrin grinned “We have friends left. Not all those who dwell in the ruins of Achat have given in to their fate”

“How do you know they can be trusted?”

“I have faith. This particular source hates the Lady-in-Pain more then any other I know of. He would not help their worshippers unless it put him in a position to do them a great deal of harm.”

Sharad bowed to Calaufein, the governor that Chief Warlord Dipvyll had left in charge of Achat. “Milord Calaufein, I bring more news. The terrorists in the eastern hills have pillaged the supply caravan. There were no survivors.”

Calaufein sighed. “That’s the fifth in the past three months! They have to have a source. I want you to hunt the leak down and bring him before me.”

“Yes milord. Is there anything else?”

“No.” Sharad turned and started to walk away but Calaufein called out again. “Stop. Why are you doing this? Why help us? We conquered your lands, killed your people. You should be out there with the rebels or out west, away from our mighty army. Why stay?”

Sharad smiled secretively “I have a great deal of interest in the Lady. Your people are the most closely attuned I’ve seen beings be to her and still be coherent. I’m fascinated.”

Calaufein looked at him intently for a few moments before shrugging. “You may go.”

Five years later

The immense armies of all Western Barsaive had arrived just as the Thorned Ones had broken the Throalic Shield, the nickname for the united Throalic, Kraz, and Baalic forces. Together they destroyed the Thorned One army at the Battle of Seventh Vale. They marched through Uld’ar, now being assisted by the Uld’aran guerrillas. They turned south, methodically retaking the cities of Renegade, Pilseta, and Jalsafar. They turned to the biggest Thorned stronghold left on the continent, Achat.

Sharad crept through the palace, the others had finally come. The armies were a day away, he would have to act fast. There, the labs were just ahead. Good, they were still empty. The mages were still out preparing the city’s defenses. He quickly swept to the rear of the large room, opening a cabinet in the back. He rummaged through the bottles, pulling out one labeled Moveit 11. A blood-red liquid swirled slowly inside,

He smiled humorlessly “Body Essence, excellent” and wrenched off its cork. He could hear people coming down the hallway, the mages must be coming back. He swung the vial up and drunk deeply, emptying it. He tossed back his head and screamed, his body contorting into bizarre shapes. His arm flew out and scattered the other bottles across the floor, shattering the fragile glass. Black smoke welled up from the mixing reagents, obscuring the scene.

Farrysn, mage of the Third Secret and priestess of the Lady, was having a bad day. She was forced away from her precious research to help construct the walls. That was what they had the maleït gnomes and dwarves for! They weren’t even allowed to properly discipline the slaves, having to keep them alive for work. Her holy magics were being wasted on moving mere rocks. The power to rip apart dimensions and tear holes in reality being used to build a freaking wall. It was demeaning, that’s what it was. At least her shift was over and she would be able to check on her experiments before sleep. Her thoughts were interrupted by a horrifying scream from the labs. Her head jerked up and a slight smile touched her lips. Something horrible was happening to someone. She ran down the corridor, her fellow magi falling in behind. She slowed to stop just outside the door to the labs, motioning her fellows to keep quiet. A quick spell later and a sword appeared in her hand. Her smile spread.

The door creaked open, smoke billowing out. There was dead silence, no sound from within. Farrysn waved at Fildaer, her second. Fildaer moved towards the door like a whisper and peered into the mist. There was a blur and she was dragged inside. There was a scream which was cut off almost instantly. Fildaer’s smile grew larger, something that could put up a fight. She threw herself into the room. The adepts moved in with a bit more caution, also adopting battle-stances. They peered around the room, the thinning fog making everything eerie and blurred.

A familiar voice came from towards the back, it was that insufferable servant. “That was more painful then I had thought it would be, but I can’t complain. Some people to kill already, what luck! And here I thought I’d have to hunt you all down one by one.”

Her smile turned into a full-fledged smirk. “Ooh, ooh, is this really happening? I really hope this is. I’ve wanting to kill you since we invaded, you miserable leech.” She motioned at the back of the room. “Your allies are coming and you think that they’ll win. You want them to think that you were on their side the entire time so you’re going to backstab us. You know what I think of traitors like that?” and she dropped her arm. The entire back of the room became a whirling maelstrom of raw magical power as eight different spells struck it at the same time. The chaos died down seconds later, leaving the area devastated.

“That, my students, is how you deal with...” her voice faded as a quiet laugh, almost a chuckle, became apparent. There was a blur and one of her students literally snapped in half, something hitting his spine hard enough that his body folded around the object. There was another blur and another mage collapsed.

“I must say, you’re people’s grasp of magic is most impressive. Its almost as expansive as you’re ego. You honestly think that you can rule without understanding your subjects. That you can simply ignore those who appear to be on your side. I should have been executed the day you invaded, not given the governor’s ear. Now I know where your soldiers are, what magical research you have made, what your weaknesses are.” and more adepts collapsed, their fellows spinning wildly with spells readied on their fingers but no target. It was over moments later, ending with Sharad standing over Fildaer’s beaten body.

She coughed and spat blood “So what, you’re going to kill all us by your lonesome?”

Sharad grinned “No, I’m going to keep some of you alive. There are some things that I haven’t been able to learn from mere observation, things only a priestess would know.” and he clubbed her in the head. There was a blur and he was gone. Eight down, three hundred to go.

The army of the Eastern Barsaivian Alliance had reached the city. There was almost none of the resistance that they had expected, only a few Dark Dwarven pickets. In front of the city they could see the recently constructed fortifications, all empty. The armies marched onto the gates, the eerie silence spooking the myriad soldiers. The gates swung open, revealing a lone figure. It was Sharad, blood dripping from half a dozen wounds and his right arm completely soaked in crimson. He bowed as his greatly amplified voice rang out.

“The city of Achat welcomes our liberators. We have killed the Thorned Ones in anticapation of your arrival. Join us and be merry.”

A month later

Sharad wiped blood off his hands, the seventh prisoner had finally caved and told him how to communicate with Lady Ceridwen. The ritual itself was simple, only requiring a few ounces of mouse blood and a torn contract as a focus. No wonder priesthood was so popular, there was practically no work required. All smoke and mirrors.

Sharad chanted from the center of a small circle, red glyphs swirling around him as he said each word. “אלת הכאב, לשמוע את הטיעון שלי.
והכוונה היא זקוקה, אני לא יכול לראות
אני מבקש ממך למועצה אותי”

As the last syllable joined the floating symbols around him a small light appeared. A feminine voice, hinting of forgotten mysteries and stars far distant, spoke. And who would you be? You’re not one of my priests nor one of my chosen people.

Sharad spoke quickly “Milady, I am merely a gnome who seeks to serve you. The armies of Barsaive are preparing to invade Patria, putting the Tomes of Oghma out of your Thorned Ones reach. I believe that with your help I can ensure that they will fall into the hands of those who will put them to their proper use. I will need your help to keep those books out of the hands of your enemies.”


“People of Barsaive, it is with greatest pride that I announce that the newly formed High Council has voted six to two to send an expeditionary force to Patria. They will drive the Thorned Ones back to their ruined homeland and free them from Ceridwen’s curse. Righteousness is on our side. We cannot fail in this holiest of missions.”

The mighty fleet sailed out from the newly rebuilt Sky Point. Over a thousand ships carrying millions of soldiers drawn from across Barsaive. Tabba Ghut galleons, Elven kalaels, Throalic carraks, all with a single purpose. The Kraz even managed to send a few of their experimental skyships. Not since the heyday of Patria has such a sight been seen.

The battle for Patria has raged for seven months now and the Thorned Ones have steadily been driven back. A massive battle was being waged in the city itself, the Patrians and Barsaivians both throwing everything they had at the Catacomb Libralus, trying to retake the central saferoom before the defenses surrounding the Tomes collapsed entirely. This push was led by the Achatin, White Elven, and Scionic forces. Schist was the sole survivor of his unit of mages, the rest were slaughtered by a horror summoned from some distant realm. The lockroom was on the verge of opening, but there was nothing he could do about it. The room was far too well guarded. He watched as a dozen white elf swordsmen ran past and fell in behind, maybe they would provide the distraction he needed?

Sharad glanced at the glowing circle in his lab, one of his mages had finally reached the books. There was a brilliant flash as an immense tome materialized in the center, quickly followed by a dozen others. He rushed over and dispelled the circle of runes, the books were his and the alliance none the wiser.
 
and the second part, as the stry was too long for one post:

Spoiler :
Seven years later

Sharad turned to Glamdrin, “You know, over the years you’re probably the only person I’ve come to truly respect. Everyone else has an agenda, has hidden motives. You are the only one who I haven’t found anything on, any reason for you to be doing what you’re doing. You gave up Sirona’s Heaven for us, for our petty little wars for our pathetic schemes. You seem to be the sole genuinely good person in Barsaive.”

Glamdrin nodded slowly, not sure where this was going

“You’ve become one of two people I actually trust, something which I swore would never happen. I trust you inherently, you alone wouldn’t turn against me unless I turned to evil. I can only hope you trust me the same”

Glamdrin nodded again, wondering why Sharad was bearing his soul to him like this.

“Verdammt, then this will be all the harder.” and Sharad pulled a lever. Bands of force sprang up around Glamdrin and wrapped themselves around his body, pinning him to a wall. He struggled briefly but the bonds wouldn’t budge. Sharad said quietly, almost in a whisper “I’m sorry it had to come to this. If there was another way...” Glamdrin’s eyes opened wide as Sharad pulled out a long, steel knife.

Three weeks later

“Three weeks and no progress. Your faith truly does seem to sustain you, but eventually you will need food and water. Spirit magic can only postpone, not eliminate the need altogether.”

Glamdrin glared, eyes red from sleeplessness.

“The sooner you give in the sooner this will all be over with. I would rather not kill you, but if you continue to resist I will be forced to.”

Glamdrin continued to glare.

“... fine. I have to go meet some important people. Try not to break while I’m gone.”

Later that day

“Frostfire, thank you for this meeting”

“Milord, you caused the revival of the Sjykalfar. You are our closest ally. Why did you call me?”

“Quite frankly my dear, you’re the best smith around. You were the first to work mithril. Your work was critical in the development of Achatin steel.”

“Flattery will get you nowhere. What do you want of me and my humble nation?”

“I need you to forge me a weapon, well reforge a weapon. I have all the pieces, I just one with sufficient skill to put it together.”

“Whats the catch?”

“Catch? Why must there be a catch?”

“Any journeyman could reforge a weapon. Whats special about this one? Is it made of mithril? Has it been enchanted with Elemental Earth? Where’s the catch?”

“... hm. How well versed are you on the Signing of the Compact?”

“I know of it”

“Do you know of how they sealed the deal, so to speak?”

“Of course, the Go- you can’t be serious!”

“I am always serious.”

Two weeks later

There was a brief flash of light in the laboratory-turned-torture chamber and a radiant woman appeared. She glanced around quickly and gasped when she spotted Glamdrin on the wall. “Come on, we’ve got to get you free! Your mission isn’t finished yet, there’re still so many who must be saved.”

Glamdrin mumbled something, but his mouth was still gagged. The angelic figure muttered something and touched the strip of force blocking his mouth, the magic dissipating from her finger. Glamdrin gasped “No!” and jerked at his bonds.

“Finally” said Sharad from behind the angel. The angel turned around, a sword crystallizing from the air, but she wasn’t fast enough. A fine golden net settled over her, and beneath it she wilted. Beads of light pulsed along the net, flowing through strands of light to a series of glowing stones. Sharad walked up to the angel and sliced her throat open with a knife, grimacing slightly. Her body slumped and a faint scream could be heard as her soul fled the ruined body. Golden blood flowed from the wound, which Sharad quickly started to collect in a bowl.

“Finally, the last ingredient. Don’t worry Glamdrin, you’ll be free within a month. That or dead, this plan could still fail.”

Frostfire glared at the blazing inferno. Seven thousand crysts worth of the finest Anthracite barely even warmed the strange metal. It seemed the only thing capable of bringing it to welding temperature was Elemental Fire, which was quite expensive. Nearly fifty thousand for an ounce... But it was worth it. Finally a flame hot enough to weld the broken sword back together. She carefully picked up what seemed to be a golden spearhead and placed it in the heart of the flames.

Deicide
One month later, Summoning Day
Sharad looked over the immense cavern. It was perfect; large enough for the requisite mages and runes and yet where no-one would dare interrupt them, the old Kaer.

Schist jogged up to him, holding a long package wrapped in dark velvet “Sir, a courier was at the entrance with this, said it was for you.”

Sharad smirked, “Good. Thank you, you may return to work”

Schist bowed and returned to the circle. Sharad felt the handle sticking out from the velvet, caressing the mystical ruins that hid the sword within from magical detection. Today would be glorious. Everything he has worked for over the last six centuries was leading to this point. He would not falter now.

Alari burst into the lab, “Sharad, I’ve heard th-” and stopped dead in her tracks as she saw Glamdrin bound to the wall

“its worse then I thought” she whispered and she ran up to him, hurriedly dispelling the Force bonds.

“Glamdrin, speak to me!” as she shook him.

His eyes opened blearily, “whu..?”

She slapped hard “Verdammt, focus! I’m afraid Sharad’s going to do something exceedingly stupid.”

At the mention of Sharad Glamdrin suddenly drew himself upright “Oh god, he killed Her and took her blood. Angel’s blood has very few uses, none of them good.”

“Well come on then!” and Alari ran from the room

Glamdrin muttered a pray under his breath as he followed, grabbing a knife from the table.

Sharad looked over the ritual, it was almost complete. Now it was his turn. He stepped up to a makeshift podium and began chanting
“כוחו של העם
הנשמה של המרכז
חיים לחיים
תמימות אבודה
ובילה
יותר כוח תמותה מכן
אני להזמין אותך
לאגד לך אותי
מסך גדול אז את סכום חלקיו”

Alari stopped midswing, clutching at her chest. The guard saw his chance and brought his axe around in a smooth swing, but he collapsed. His soul was violently wrenched from his body, leaving only a trailing scream as his body collapsed heavily. Glamdrin grabbed Alari and shook her “Come on, it may not be too late” and they continued. They were almost at the door

All across Achat dwarves and gnomes collapsed, millions dying in a single cataclysmic moment. The sheer number of souls rushing towards Mount Achat made the air hazy, distorting the corpses that lay upon the ground. Achat was dying. Then, just as suddenly as it started, it stopped. People slowly came to their feet and viewed the devastation about them. Wives gently shook husbands, children called for parents, none understanding exactly what had happened. They turned to the mountain, to great Kaer the protected them in centuries past. Someone would answer for this.

Sharad felt a tear roll down his face as he watched the churning vortex in the center of the room. So many people dead... but it would be worth it. Any price would be worth what was going to happen now. The sword hung with reassuring reality from his hip, he was ready for what was to come. He started chanting anew as the limp forms of his mages lay in their position around the circle, still channeling even in death.
“הגברת של כאב לי לקרוא אותך
לך שפעם שלטו אג"ח
עכשיו ההרס שלהם
המלכה של מקומות בין
יוצר פערים
אחד אינסופי
אין סוף
ענה לי
בא לי
אני בא ועליו להקריב את התמימות
ואת הטוהר
מוות בלתי צפוי
הגברת של כאב לי לקרוא אותך”

Glamdrin and Alari burst into the cavern in time to see a vast implosion of light. The massive vortex of souls collapsed into a single point, blindingly bright. They could just make out the frame of Sharad, a puny figure with a massive shadow trailing out behind him. When they moved toward him a voice echoed through the chamber, not loud but coming from every direction at once.

I am almost free. You did good my servant. Now finish the spell, bring me to this world in all my glory.

They could not hear Sharad’s reply, but the effect was immediate. The point of light exploded outwards, blinding them with a brilliant flash. As the afterimages faded they could make out a... strange figure in the center of the circle. The only constant was the feminine form, but her features kept shifting. An instant later and she was next to them, glancing at them like insects. She glanced over Glamdrin with a faint sneer, Oh dear, so my dear younger sister sent one of her servants to stop me. How amusing.

She turned to Alari, But you... I don’t recognize you. Hm... Ah, I remember. You were on one of those minor planes.

She turned to face them both, What to do, what to do. Leaving you alive could be amusing, see what you’ll try to do to stop me, which should be quite impossible. Of course there is always the small chance that you will find a way to bring me down. Perhaps death then?

There was a wrenching feeling and suddenly Sharad was by her side What say you my noble servant, my gift to you. Let them live or die?

Sharad didn’t respond, “My lady, if I may ask you something?”

The figure nodded Ask away

“I am from the same demiplane as Alari here” a nod to Alari. “Why did you destroy it?”

The figure thought for a moment I didn’t do so intentionally. It was merely in the way of events. Its survival or destruction wasn’t my concern.

Sharad nodded once, his face emotionless. “Ah, I understand then.” and he bowed deeply

The figure watched, a faint grin on its face Why do you bow now? Never before have you bowed to me.

“Milady, I am showing my respect. It was the custom at my home to bow to ones enemy before they fought, at least until you destroyed it.”

The figure raised an eyebrow and bowed sarcastically in return Opponents? Surely such a word only applies to people who have an even chance of victory. I am Ceridwen, goddess of dimensions. You are a mortal, an administrator with some limited magic. What threat could you possibly pose?

Sharad straightened up and withdrew the sword hanging from his side, hefting it thoughtfully.

Ceridwen watched in amusement. And what toy is that?

Sharad slowly unwrapped the velvet from the sword, revealing a dull blade which smoothly grew out of a brass pommel, no crossguard separating the two.
Ceridwen glanced at it, the sneer growing Hah, you call that a swo- The sneer froze wait, I can remember a sword... no! Thats not possible. she flicked out a tendril of power at Sharad, the power of it sending Alari and Glamdrin flying across the cavern. Sharad brought the sword up in a clumsy parry and the tendril evaporated. Sharad moved the sword in a figure eight and beads of force flew from it. Ceridwen flung out a massive ball of power straight at Sharad, all finesse gone. It struck Sharad full on and there was a deafening explosion. Ceridwen grinned Like I said, just a mere mortal.

The dust descended slowly and a figure stepped out, sword held in one hand. Sharad was unscathed. He glanced at the sword “Hm, the tales seem to be correct. Full immunity to even divine magic.”

Ceridwen recovered quickly, raising an arm. The air around her warped, small cracks appearing. She grimaced in effort and she began fading from sight. Sharad pointed the sword at her, its point steady, and the beads of force rushed towards the cracks, sealing them. Ceridwen snapped back into focus. She snapped her fingers and a sword, more a gap in the shape of a sword, appeared in her hand. Sharad leaped forward, swinging his blade in a quick arc. The swords met in a clash of light and glowing veins spread like cobwebs across Ceridwen’s blade. The clatter of the blades colliding echoed throughout the cavern. There was a distinct crack and Ceridwen’s blade exploded. A moment later and Ceridwen was on the ground, the Sharad’s sword at her throat. Ceridwen stared at him, pride unbroken, So it is. You reforged the Godslayer. I didn’t think that any remembered it, let alone would actually try to remake it. So now what, you kill me? You honestly think that the death of a god will go unnoticed? The gods will react, they look for their own. They won’t like one of their number being killed by a mortal. It bodes ill for the future if men can fight their crea-

Sharad smiled sadly “Please, don’t ruin this with words. I’ve fought for six hundred years for this moment. Six centuries of plotting and betrayal. This ends now.” and he brought the sword around in a swift arc. Ceridwen’s form folded up around the blade, disappearing into nothingness.Sharad lowered the sword, letting the point touch the ground. He sighed and fell to one knee. His eyes unfocused and a contented smile spread across his face.

Alari stumbled over and grabbed onto Sharad, “Sharad, SHARAD! Come on, stay with me. Don’t leave me now.”

Sharad’s smile broadened “Al’ri? Dat you?”

She smiled back “Yes, its me.”

“Dat’s good. I’m not gonna make it. I did it.”

Alari shook him again “No, you’re going to survive. You have to. We’ve lost each other far too often. I won’t allow it!” and tears started to form in her eyes.

“A’ri, there’s som’thin I need you to do b’for I die.”

“What is it?”

“The sword. Use it on me”

“What? No!”

Sharad’s voice regained some of its former strength “ALARI!” and faded back again “Please... the only way to en’ure I’m out of reach of b’th men and gods”

She picked up the sword gingerly and held it up to his chest. A tear fell as she pushed it into his heart. Sharad collapsed with a faint sigh, murmuring something. She lay her head on his chest and breathed out, tears falling silently. She spoke to Glamdrin, who had crawled “Its over, he’s gone.”

Glamdrin sheathed his dagger “No, it isn’t. Millions have died. The gods will react to this. Everything that we have worked for, everything since the Compact, could be for naught. All because of his need for revenge.”

“What do we do now?”

“We do what have we’ve always done, survive”
 
Interesting epilouge.
 
Althought, before letting this return to dust, is Moveit 11 from Girl genius, o do both have a common insperation?
 
Althought, before letting this return to dust, is Moveit 11 from Girl genius, o do both have a common insperation?

...
maybe :shifty:
;)

thanks for the encouraging words.
 
No mathameticians answers!;)
 
A fitting end to this tale, Kyzarc.
 
Spoiler :
Twenty-Six Years before the Deicide

Anabella closed the door behind her and stared out the window into the darkening sky. It had been another hard day, and her powers were not what they had once been; the magic that had once flowed from her fingertips as the song flowed from the chirping birds now needed more work to do as she wanted; it was as if playing an instrument that you were not fully familiar with. Her hair had grey sprains in it, and the lines around her eyes revealed the hardships she had been through.

Lost in thought, she advanced to the window, and she could feel the memories swelling up in her, her eyes running over, as she thought back to that day, a decade and a half ago, where she had suddenly aged what looked like more than half an elven life.

She had been on the battlefield, raining down terrible destruction on the ranks of the Uld'ar orcs, protecting the Throalic armies that had taken her as their ally and vassal, surrounded by her loyal guard and her beloved Rasmus Svigard. The sky was clear, and their forces easily pushed back the orcs, whose lines began to scatter. It had been a good day, and Anabella had not truly stretched her powers, then as now mostly used for the magicks of life; reinvigorating the dwarven troops and repairing their wounds.

Then, out of nowhere, an arrow had struck down, directly penetrating the throat of Rasmus. She saw the event in vivid imagination, progressing as if time itself had slowed down before her eyes, each time as unavailable as the first to prevent the disaster. She recalled her own monumental shock as what had just happened hit her, the momentary confusion in the ranks before she had simply discarded all care for the battlefield and thrown herself to his side, desperate to save his life. But his blood had already carried his life from his body.

With a power she did not know she possessed, she channelled every pinch of magic that resided in her body, desperate to reverse the process of death. At first, she had felt sure of success, but as nothing happened, she moved from desperation into a pure and raging panick. She had not seen the scared faces as magickal surges surrounded Rasmus and herself, lashing out at anyone nearby, or her desperate cries between tears as she commanded him to rise and live again, but to no avail. He was stolen from the world of living forever. After what seemed like an eternity of desperate spellcasting to no good, she had collapsed. When she awoke in the samaritans' tent, her hair had been stranded with grey, and she could no longer feel the arcana in her blood. It had returned, in time, but it had never come naturally again. She had lost everything that day.

She was drawn out of her waking nightmare by the silken voice of her daughter, her only child; "Are you thinking of Father again?"

She nodded, biting her lip to keep silent. The tears lurched, ready to run down her cheeks. Her daughter went on; "I wish I had known him. I cannot recall his face, his hands... Tell me about him, mother, if you think you can."

Anabella nodded, but remained silent for a moment, gathering herself. Then, she said, "Your father was a grand man, Amalia. The best elf who ever lived. Sometimes, I wonder how things would have looked if he had been born a prince instead of me."
The young girl, still in her twenties, stared at her mother with compassion. The old woman added, "I can never forget him. And I can never forgive myself for letting him die. It will be what kills me."

Amalia opened her eyes in shock. "Please mother, no such words! You still have so much to live for! You have me," she moved to her mothers side, putting her arms around her. "You have me, mother. Me and every single Sjykalfar who still breathes. We are your family."
The young princess could feel her mother's gaunt figure shaking, on the verge of control. Through teeth clenched in emotion, words escaped the aging Queen Anabella.

"I love you, Amalia, my daughter. I always will. You must never doubt that."

She felt her daughter's arms clenching tighter around her, and a single tear ran down her cheek.
Rasmus, she thought, I still miss you.
 
I really like the domestic poignant aspects of both stories.
 
Spoiler :
Immidiately following the Deicide

Queen Anabella was seated on her throne, in the rebuilt city of the Sjykalfar.
Sirlysning, was its new name. Beside her, Princess Amalia, now largely past her adolescence, was standing. They were casually discussing something when they both suddenly felt an overwhelming surge through them, a powerful spiritual quake. Amalia cried out in distress as she lost her balance, landing on the hard floor not quite without pain. Anabella got up and helped her daughter to her feet, but they both stopped dead in their tracks there and then, looking at their hands. They were a healthy, nutty-brown colour.

Thinking quickly, Amalia removed her mother's head-scarf. Mother! Your... That pock-mark you've always had... It's gone!"

Both of the women rapidly shed their large, black garments, leaving them unrespectfully clad for a Princess and a Queen, but they could not resist. Their eyes found healthy bodies, as if the touch of Kanna had never descended on the Tearwillow elves of old. They were no longer
Riaï.

Amalia once again was the first to reach another conclusion, and a frown came to her face when she focused her arcane powers into a conjuration spell. Nothing happened. The two women, still somewhat in shock, now positively gaped at the change that had happened. Putting on some of their clothes again, they were on their way out of the Throne room when the gate opened and a couple of guards escorted a vaguely familiar-looking man inside. After a moment, they both realized that it was indeed one of the Royal councilors, rendered almost inrecognizable by the transformation. Anabella took the word. "Is it... Is everyone... Cured?"
"Yes, My Queen," the advisor quickly answered. Anabella frowned. She had lived most of her life with the touch of Kanna and had been used to it. She still had problems coming to term with the disappearance of any apparently arcane powers. Then, she felt something... strange. Quickly, she turned to Amalia.

"My daughter, you must find out what this means. You must find out what this means for the re-risen Sjykalfar. You must find out what it means to the arcana - and to yourself. You must find a way for our people."
Amalia looked at her as the Queen stoicly took of her crown and placed it on the head of Amalia herself. "But, mother-"
"No, please. No words. Come here, my daughter, and hold me."
Amalia obeyed, her eyes suddenly flowing over with thoughts. She could feel a subtle tremor in the body of her mother as she held her tight. Letting go, Anabella took a step back and looked Amalia into the eyes. "I... Take care."
It was as if Anabella's eyes flickered in a most unusual way, before the black of the pupils shivered and extended to fill the entire pupil. One of the guards stepped in and caught the falling body of the old Queen. Amalia, the new Queen of the Sjykalfar, stood trembling with fear and sadness before breaking into a hysterical flood of tears.

Queen Anabella had died.
 
<blinks back a tear>
wonderful storywriting diamondeye, simply wonderful.
 
RIP gentle shepherd.

Yeah-that was really good.
 
Elegy of Gears
Spoiler :

During the Thorned One&#8217;s invasion of Kraz-ke-Mekan

Kheirza hurried along the line, shouting orders to the Automaton and Faithfull, directing fire from gun, bow, catapult and arrow-tube, knowing full-well that the defence was likely to fail, but that didn&#8217;t matter. They Thorned did not need to be stopped; they needed to be slowed, so that the refugee&#8217;s could escape to the valley were the Throalic and Baal forces waited.

As she ran, she felt another of the spasms she had been feeling for months, since the angels had stopped speaking to her. As it wracked her body, she supported herself against a leg of a large arrow-golem, careful not to interfere with the operators clambering over it. How had it gone so wrong? Merely a month ago they had been so well; yes, the angels rarely spoke, and when they did it made little sense, as if she was hearing only part of it, to someone else. They had rewarded the Palitane leaders for their betrayal so long ago, had freed their people from their servitude to the god of greed, their Steel Legions were unstoppable!

Then the Dragon failed them. They had completed the Avatar, ready to follow it, to crush the Kannites, to save everyone! But no. So many had died, so many Legions fell still, so much... so now they were fleeing, the remains of the Legions dying one-by-one to protect the citizens, those that still remained after their... no, HER failure. All her fault. Mechzia had warned her, Pelza had warned her, even Kim and Mieckre had warmed her! So now she was making up for her mistake. So long as a few escaped... but to what? What if the Machine was gone? How long could the world remain without it, to guide it?

Feeling her strength returning, she resumed her actions, casting and shouting all the way. Her forces fell no fear, but were dying, bit-by-bit. Suddenly, the she saw a motion, a small rip in the air. At first, she thought it was another priest, or even an angel! But what stepped out was no angel.

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Far ahead, Mechzia watched as the first of the refugees reached the comparative safety of Throal and Baal camp, letting out a sigh of relief as they did. He turned to his attendant.

&#8220;Send word back to Kheizra. Tell her we are reaching the camp, and she can fall back.&#8221;

&#8220;Right away, sir.&#8221;
Tick​
At last, something was going right. Tock
About time.
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Khezria lay in the mud, feeling it&#8217;s cold slime slowly fill her ear, only warmed by the blood of the Faithfull that had taken the first blow. She watched, as if from great distance as the shadows, the legless torsos slaughtered her people. Through the ringing in her ears, she heard heard the screams, the screech of a golem collapsing.
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Slowly, everything blackened.
Tock
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&#8220;What do you mean you can&#8217;t reach her!?&#8221; Mechzia shouted at the priest, his fear making his voice high. &#8220;W-well you made a mistake! Or it&#8217;s interference!&#8221;

&#8220;I&#8217;m sorry sir,&#8221; the priest said softly, tears in his eye. &#8220;There is no error. I&#8217;m sorry.&#8221;

&#8220;No,&#8221; Mechzia said, then sobbed, &#8220;We were so close.&#8221;

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&#8220;Steve? Where are you? Steve?&#8221;

I&#8217;m sorry. We were too late. Nothing can be done.

I&#8217;m sorry. We were too late. Nothing can be done.​

"No..."

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15 years later, day of the Deicide.

Mechzia sat, looking over Khraz-ke-Kheizra, watching the sky-ships slide into port, wondering when it would end. He still had not aged, which Kim had explained as &#8220;A gift can always be given, but you need to ask to take it away.&#8221; Since there was no one to ask about it, he figured he was stuck like this, maybe forever. Immortality might not be so bad, at least if he could find things to do.

After the defeat of the Thorned ones, he has relinquished control to Kim and Pelza. They both had sensible heads, even if she was prone to distraction, and he to chasing Meickra with a plank. Hey could doubtless do better than him, a relic of the old days, of castes and &#8211;
Tock
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He paused, and looked around, seeing no source for the ticking-the clock in this room had no moving parts.
Tock
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Suddenly, he felt a lurch, like something was wrong with existence. Something was here, something that shouldn&#8217;t be.
The next moments will decide it all.

As he fell, he hear the door open, heard the click of Kim&#8217;s feet as she ran across the stone floor, Pelza and Mieckra just behind.

&#8220;Mechzia! Mechzia, are you allright!? Do you feel that!?&#8221;

&#8220;YES!&#8221; shouted Meickra, &#8220;Like many voices suddenly cried out, and were abruptly silenced! OOFFF!&#8221;

Pelza moved to Mechzia&#8217;s side, shaking out his fist before helping Kim lift Mechzia.

&#8220;Is something wrong? He asked, looking from his wife to Mechzia. &#8220;I don&#8217;t feel anything, at least, nothing but a pain in by knuckles.&#8221;

Mechzia took a moment to answer, letting the dull pain of Kim&#8217;s hand digging into his side ground him. He wondered idly why wasn&#8217;t wearing the sleeve she normally covered the metal with, then stood properly.

&#8220;I felt... something, now I feel... something else-...&#8221;

Tock​

He wasn&#8217;t sure who screamed first, himself, or Kim. He just knew that he felt a sudden pain, unlike anything he had ever felt. Then the floor rushed to meet him. Tick
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He saw gears, springs, broken pieces flying past his vision, whirling in circles. At its centre, a figure he had not seen in 15 years.

&#8220;It&#8217;s Broken, all Broken. Since the Walls Broke Down. Shattered. Bu she is dead, now We can Fix It, Repair it, Mend it.&#8221;

&#8220;It&#8217;s Broken, all Broken. Since the Walls Broke Down. Shattered. But she is dead, now We can Fix It, Repair it, Mend it.&#8221;​

&#8220;Wha... but-&#8221;

&#8220;It will never be the same, it will be new, but familiar. Stable.&#8221;

&#8220;It will never be the same, it will be new, but familiar. Stable.&#8221;​

&#8220;Kheizra!&#8221; Mechzia cried, &#8220;But, you- during the battle!&#8221;

She paused, seemed to think.

&#8220;Yes. But now I know what to do. It died, Mechy, she killed it. But now she is dead, and I can repair it.&#8221;

&#8220;Who&#8217;s dead?&#8221;

&#8220;Cerdiwen. Sharad of Achatin has used you, all of us, to get vengeance for a past wrong. But he is gone now, too.
Do not blame the others, Alari, Glamdrin. They will need help, all will need help. The gods will not stand one of their own slain&#8221;

&#8220;Cerdiwen. Sharad of Achatin has used you, all of us, to get vengeance for a past wrong. But he is gone now, too.
Do not blame the others, Alari, Glamdrin. They will need help, all will need help. The gods will not stand one of their own slain&#8221;​

&#8220;But-&#8221; Mechzia began, then was cut-off when Kheizra seemed to cross to him without moving, an kissed him lightly on the forehead.

"Go. They need you.&#8221;

&#8220;Go. They need you.&#8221;​

As she seemed to grow more and more distant, she spoke one last time.

&#8220;Goodbye. I&#8217;m sorry.&#8221;

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He awoke to the feel of a cold metal hand on his cheek. And screaming.

&#8220;MECHZIA! Please, say something! Wake-up! Please!&#8221;

&#8220;Kim, he&#8217;s waking already.&#8221; Pelza said, easing her out of the way. &#8220;Welcome back, Lord, you gave us quite a scare.&#8221;

Mechzia glanced around, at Kim, Pelza, a priest he didn&#8217;t recognize, Mieckra bouncing in the rear.

&#8220;Get a message to Achatin, to everbody. Tell to Crafters to focuse entirely on arms, Auton and parts for the True.&#8221;

&#8220;What?&#8221; Pelza said, his face paling. &#8220;What&#8217;s going on?&#8221;

&#8220;I&#8217;ll explain later. First get-out my old plans. They&#8217;ll work this time.&#8221;

They never could have imagined the next chapter.


He did see her again in the End of the Middle.



Notes:
Spoiler :
Kim never appeared in any stories, and she might never have. She&#8217;s a True Beliver, from a different time period, and world. Mechy is just a nickname Kheizra gave Mechzia (they were never involved, or anything). The technology described is just the type I would hopre for, and steer towards. Arrow tubes, for instance, use air mana to propel projectiles like a gun, but without powder
Oh, and the changes in formating in Kheizra's voice near the end is delibret. So if you can think why.
 
:)
I'm loving these stories!

Me, diamondeye, darksaber, whose going next?

Hm, the end of Elegy makes me think that another nes could be quite interesting. Any volunteers for a mod?
 
good stories everyone. I love how it all gets revealed...
 
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