Symphony D.
Deity
Having read it all I must say very nice work. Only one minor tick:
Otherwise, all good, such mention as there was of me anyway.
Capital name should be either Funan City, or simply Funan - it was a (rather vaguely described) radial design centered on the confluence of the Tonle Sab and the Mekong, as opposed to Vyadhapura which had mostly been on one bank (OTL Phnom Penh). New name was chosen in honor of the progenitor state of the modern Khmer Empire, obviously. That and it's shorter and has a certain ring to it.das said:Lastly, Khmeria underwent reconstruction; the rebuilt Vyadhapura was a masterpiece of engineering, the most modern city in the world.
Otherwise, all good, such mention as there was of me anyway.
