LINESII- Into the Darkness- Part III

Rorlapum[1]​

Soriv had just stepped back into the shade of his small, two-room, mud-brick hut. Sitting in the middle of the first room were two bundles of rorlapum stalks. His brother had just delivered them from the south to Soriv's hut along the northeastern border with Guangfei. His hut was part of a small village along a common trading path leading into Guangfei. Soriv picked up the bundles and carried them to the back room. Inside were many additional bundles of rorlapum stalks piled along one wall. In one of the opposite corners a few rotting stalks sat in a small pit filled with stagnant water. In the other corner were a number of empty mud pots stacked in one another.

Soriv dropped the bundles he carried among the rest. He stepped to an older bundle and pulled a stalk from it at snapped it into two pieces. As he sniffed the broken ends, Soriv stepped into the front room to discover a man standing just inside the door to the outside.

"Soriv, we meet again. It is too pleasing."

Soriv nodded at the greeting as he stepped over to his fire pit and placed the stalks on top of the burning embers. Turning he held his hands and arms open to the man and smiled. "Terrsok, it is pleasing." [2]

It was a slight offense to Terrsok, but he had learned to ignore such insults. Most of the villagers here treated him poorly. They gave him his Mag name of Terrsok when he first arrived to do business. Terrsok literaly means dirt worm in Mag.
"So you want more rorlapum? Another bundle. Same as before. I'll get it," Soriv turned back towards the back room.
"Wait, Soriv. I need more."
Soriv turned towards Terrsok and raised an eyebrow. "More? What are your people doing? Eating it?"
"I have a cart full of the finest garments from my land. Those who breathe the smoke of the rorlapum have fallen in love with it. They don't burn it like you. They contain the smoke in a pot and breathe it all at once."
"No wonder they demand more. I burn one, maybe two sticks a day, in an open pit, and with the doors open so I can breathe," Soriv laughed. "I bet they never get up to do work either."
"Well..."
"I will give you five bundles this time instead of two. Next time, bring me something useful, we know how to make clothing here and I don't want to look like you." Soriv went into the back room and retrieved the bundles.
When he returned Terrsok was already unloading the clothing outside the hut. Soriv would eat well tonight. He had a trader that would gladly take the garments to the market in Seden.

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Notes:
1: Rorlapum is a common plant native to the southern portion of Magland. For many ages the people of the region knew that it could be used to calm oneself. The stalk when dried has the most potency when slowly burned.

(Leaves as of now are mostly useless when burnt and are left in the fields to decay and replenish the soil. Though if desperate one could burn the leaf and get an extremely mild high.)

Only recently has it become cultivated. The various soldiers that have been through the region time and again learned to use it to relax those injured and/or dying. Many have returned as the borders opened peacefully seeking it out, it has some addictive properties if used too often.

Some farmers realizing the profit potential have moved away from food production to rorlapum and use money and bartering to purchase their food. As a side note, the roots can be ground up and used on food as a bitter flavoring and lack the potency or addictive qualities of the dried stalks.

2: The proper greeting would have been to reply the same way - "It is too pleasing." Additionally, many Mags have trained at one point or another to fight unarmed. Holding one's hands and arms open suggests that one is unarmed and a request that the other person present themselves unarmed also. Among Mags, it is seen as a sign of distrust and a desire to handicap the other.

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OOC: Maybe more appropriate prior to the previous update, but still applicable now.
 
I would like to announce that Ecturin has joined the defensive alliance with Magland, Destre, and Trinlin. I would like to thank these kind countries for offering the weak Kingdom of Ecturin their friendship.
 
OOC: iggy my stats should put me at 14 eco points not 12 because I have 10 centers not 8, unless something happened to them.
 
I absolutely cannot remember the names for everything. Which part of the world is Azulia and Terrania?

You need a key or something. :p

From: High Priest Ptmed of the Nation of Aryie.
To: Cultesian Bladeist Empire of Greater Myocaca


Rest assured that we have had no part in this inexplicable slaughter. We suggest that thieves are at work. We would never debase ourselves to this sort of behavior. We have learned what it means to break words and treaties. Aryie stands neutral.

Plus, if we wanted to declare war on you, we would have done so. This underhanded tactic is not in our national character.
 
Iron Face Republic
Cities: None
Leader: The Khagan
Culture: Lengel with Small Merhai Minority, all Lengri.
Government: Tribal Republic
Economy: 1- 1/0 (+1 Bonus)
Population: Small
Army: 4000 Horse Archers, 1000 Spearmen
Navy: None
Education: None
Technology: Iron Age
Wonders:
Description: The indominitable Lengels, having lost their homelands, spent several years in Gamorrea before attacking the nation of Fairhelt. Liberating the Merhai, they now live alongside their old allies, slowly merging into a single nation.




Does anyone control this country?

Better question, does anyone remember my Iron Face Empire of StJNES5?
 
Iron Face Republic
Cities: None
Leader: The Khagan
Culture: Lengel with Small Merhai Minority, all Lengri.
Government: Tribal Republic
Economy: 1- 1/0 (+1 Bonus)
Population: Small
Army: 4000 Horse Archers, 1000 Spearmen
Navy: None
Education: None
Technology: Iron Age
Wonders:
Description: The indominitable Lengels, having lost their homelands, spent several years in Gamorrea before attacking the nation of Fairhelt. Liberating the Merhai, they now live alongside their old allies, slowly merging into a single nation.




Does anyone control this country?

Better question, does anyone remember my Iron Face Empire of StJNES5?
Ofcourse I do ;) my evil ally...
 
Contempt controls the Iron Faces, though he hasn't been very active. You can ask him for control of the nation.
 
I'll ask him how dare he... Use the sacred Iron Face symbol, and then allow them to get defeated at all.

I believe Contempt knew of my Iron Face Empire, back then... Brought a run-down country, turned it into the Iron Face Empire, and went on a rampage. Went to war on my second turn with the country, won 3 wars on that single turn, and never stopped warring untill I abandoned it many many turns after. (Never lost a battle, either... I don't count the muscovites, because Jason was playing god and not mod, at that point) At the end of that NES, all of europe was worshipping under some sort of deviation of amonism.

To see another country take the name I created (Only slight deviation) and not be at least a respectable power... I just... I can't express it with words... It does my legacy severe dammage.

Contempt, I'd appreciate it if you'd allow me to take this nation that you've created. I promise it a fresh breath of life.

EDIT-HOLY CRAP! Reading through the update where it first became "Iron Face" something or other, it was the Iron Face Empire hahaha. Holy crap... HOLY CRAP! And it's not even slightly respectable right now.
 
Well in respect to Contempt, he originally controlled the Lengel, who conquered half of known Tellus back then, and quite easily at that. Though i truely did hate the Lengel, Contempt was a very good opponent and actually formed and properly controlled the empire after his war spree.
 
Well, you have to admit.. It is kind of nice having new schoolers look at my brainchild and marvel to the point where they take it and try it for themselves... Kind of like new bands taking a classic song from an older band and making a remake. Sometimes you hear the new song and it sounds ok, good, or WHAT THE CRAP IS THAT!? This is a what the crap is that moment.

His job as Lengels was good. His job with the Iron Faces is deffinetly not. There's no defense to be made.
 
Touche. (10 characters)

I'd still like to do damage control.
 
lurker's comment: Ah, the Lengels. I sold out my neighbours/allies to them (as an excuse, some of us hated each other from way back, but mostly it was sheer opportunism) and went on a genocide spree. Then we all got our comeuppance, though; still, it was good while it lasted.
 
I thought you liked faster paced nes's, the update is months away

You're right. I had no idea there wasn't going to be an update for months. nvm, then!
 
The Good Maybe Tale
(Part 1)


How does one begin a story that ends. A story that has a finality like not other, no ifs, no buts. Is such a tale worth telling? Or should and individuals consciousness be left without knowledge of such a thing. Would the emotion it evokes be worth the time spent pouring over it, or is that the very purpose of stories. To make us feel some lofty emotions. A little pill of words. Happy, sad, lust, love, jealousy, hate, rage, fear. What do good stories do, other than cover page after page of blurry words? Do they simply bring forth a specific emotion, the desired result of a cure to medicate a life already plagued by emotion? Is a good story happy or sad? Or perhaps it is more than that. Perhaps it makes one simply feel. Feel in the basic sense of the word. Feel, regardless of a specific emotion. Feel, in a way that you cannot describe in words. Feel, in such intensity that your whole body trembles with it. Where it is like a pain that seizes your entire self and shakes you. A experience that makes you cry, for no reason other that the sheer intensity of it. Perhaps a good story is one that puts a thought into your mind, that is so utterly beyond any other thought possible that it makes your very being explode, a thousand pieces of consciousness scattered everywhere, like rain pouring into nothingness. Such is the intensity I speak of. The sheer power that these tales can bring forth, the good ones. If that’s what the good ones are anyway.


The story I speak of is not such a story. It’s not intense, nor emotional. Quite simple actually, but maybe that’s part of what a good story is.
You decide.

To the man of this tale everything was loud at this moment. A kind of loudness one perceives when the input is just to much perceive, and hence it blurs into one solid mass of sounds crashing together. Voices slammed into each other with the force of ten ton slabs of stone. They squashed together, each one losing something as they collided in a mass of dizzying proportions. A great mass of noise. Just as the bodies collided. Dust would seem to be their journey. Blood and spirits splattering, leaving nothing but loudness.

He had fear, just as any other man would when faced with annihilation. Indeed death would find him, albeit slowly. He yelled incoherent cries of war as he charged with his kin. A brother on his right, a father on his left. What made their bond strong? Those man that now huddled behind their shields before him to had fathers, brothers, perhaps even sons. What made his bond stronger than theirs? What made his bond worth more than theirs? Yet recklessly he charged, diving into that sea of fear, cutting down all the doubt in his mind just as he cut them. Crash, with reckless disregard for his own existence, into the towering shields of his enemies that once were his friends.

Betrayal and flurried thoughts of rage and vengeance trembled through his mind, further fueling his hand of retribution. Cut, his only objective, Cut, his only sight, Cut, the will of every face before him, Cut, until he could think no longer, Cut, until all he saw was Cut. The thought of it filling every facet of his mind, sense clogged with it. Drenched in it, as he submerged his very being into every action that his blade made, until he was something different.
He had indeed changed, into something other than what he was. What he changed into I cannot say. It is a thing beyond any expression, other than Cut. A singular creature who’s whole being became this thought. Cut. All the cries, the grunts, the screams, were Cut. As deep, as hard, as precise, as fast as possible. It is through this thought that he transcended to something more than his former self could ever be. Through forcing his being into this singular point he became a superior being. Every experience he had ever had was stripped away. Useless. All that was left back was a simple husk. An existence rich in experience yet devoid of this single thing. Cut. He turned around and looked at it, yet its form was incomprehensible to him. It was everything he was, and everything he was at this moment was nothing but Cut.
 
The harsh winds howled though the snow covered trees as two men shuffled along a crude trail. The men carried a heavy burden, each carrying large bags filled with various valuables. Coins and hides bounced inside the bags as the two men hiked along the trail. But as they walked, shadows through the dense forest to their sides. Not a sound could be heard coming from the shadows. They moved ever so slowly yet kept up with the men. Suddenly, a twig snapped.

“Who's there?” one of the men shouted.

A roar erupted from the woods as a bear crashed into one of the men. It clawed and bit at him with ferocity, tearing chunks of flesh off of the man’s bones. The man died instantly, but his partner was frozen in shock as he saw the bear lift its head from shredded body and looked at him. The man, frozen with sheer terror looked on as the bear began charging.

Then it stopped. With a low groan, the bear slowly fell to the ground. The man then saw an arrow sticking out of the bears head, chest, throat, and some of its limbs. In amazement he looked as cloaked figures emerged from the woods carrying bows.

“Are you hurt traveler?” one of the hooded figures asked.

“Well, aside from needing a change of clothes, I’d say I’m fine.” The man answered.

“We saw you two men walking through the forest and decided to keep an eye on you. The bear took us by surprise. I’m sorry we couldn’t help as quickly.”

“Well, you did what you could. Well, I’ll be on my way. May Oovunter’s Breath never chill your soul.”

With that the man began moving towards his fallen companion’s bag. However, the cloaked men stayed where they were.

“Would you like an escort traveler?” One of the men said, clearly a leader of the group.

“No, thank you. Now please, I must be on my way.”

“One problem sir. King Osin has ordered that goods moving through his kingdom be examined whenever possible. You look like you have quite a load there, and it is law that I check it out.”

“Is that really necessary?” The man with the bags asked.

“Yes. Now tell me your name and your destination.” The leader of the cloaked men said.

The man paused, looking around as the men started getting closer and closer to him. He looked trapped, almost opposite of the leader’s expression, which seemed polite and relaxed.

“Well, could you prove that you’re not just bandits posing as the law? You can never trust anyone in these cold woods,” The man said, stuttering and breathing heavily through the sentence.

“Fine, I’m Calvainin Vrizcof, leader of the Bwarg Izrom of this region.” The cloaked man said. “Now, show us what’s in those bags and we can both move on.”

“Uhh… Umm…sure. Just let me go get Ashenti’s bag.” At that sentence was a gulp and a few curses under his breath.

“Ashenti you said?” Calvainin asked.

“Uhh…No. I said Afenci.” The man nervously answered.

The Bwarg Izrom quickly seized the bags away from the man and look at their contents. Coins from some of the northern lands as well as some Ect ones filled the bags. There was a good deal of pelts in the bags too. Calvainin sighed and then laughed at his good fortune.

“You’re under arrest traveler, or should I say Ferzenfa Meztract! You have eluded many traps and have earned the envy of many thieves. But here you are now, caught with your spoils and your partner in crime dead.” Calvainin laughed.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Ferzenfa said nervously.

“Save it for Ouvunter, for you will be joining him soon.”

“Never!” Ferzenfa shouted.

Ferzenfa dashed past some of the Bwarg Izrom, running down the trail. But he didn’t get far. No less than ten arrows hit him, knocking him to the ground. Ferzenfa then tried to slowly crawl, but was hit by even more arrows as he laid face down in the snow.

“Well men, we’ve caught one of the most elusive thieves in the world. Tonight we shall celebrate this day! But first, someone get Ferzenfa’s body and his loot. No one is going to believe we killed him unless we bring the rat’s body to Osin himself.” Calvainin said.

And so they grabbed the loot and the body and melted back into the shadows of the woods, leaving only a mutilated corpse and a dead bear. That night the Bwarg Izrom celebrated, and were able to boast that they had killed one of Ecturin's most famous criminals.

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To: The Citadel
From: King Osin of Ecturin

We must decline going to far off lands to fight great evils. We simply lack the manpower to do so. However, our Bwarg Izrom will gladly defend the forested areas in and around Ecturin from such a threat. We care greatly about this threat and truely wish to help sooner. But to my great sorrow our armies are not mighty, nor are they large. We are simply too weak to go on the offensive. However, you may contact us on defensive matters.

OOc: The Bwarg Izrom are my UU incase no one figured that out. Sorry if the story sucks, I wrote it rather quickly.
 
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