Mazera Mega Story Thread

Kuruk the Bear was a Chislev berserker. Like his namesake, he was more bear than man. Among his comrades, he was the strongest, the most fearsome, the most devastating on the battlefield. Even Saverous the Thrall would have been impressed, had Saverous been one of those comrades. Even without the rage-drugs of the Chislev, even without the Overlord's maddening promptings, even without Meskwaki's spiritual fury driving him on to greater violence, he was a poweful force on the battlefield. In the previous war with the Yokaido, it was said he had wrestled a Midgarsomar with his own bare hands in the swamps. And won.

With them, he was even worse.

Kuruk had been among the first of the Berserkers. A peculiarly Chislev development. No one else alive could so naturally throw themselves into the fray without regard to their own survival, and yet fight with such passion. Zombies had no fear, would just as gladly throw themselves on enemy spears, but they lacked the spark to surpass what most mortals were capable of. Only a berserker could take an iron club and swing with such force that even Mithril would buckle. Only a bersker could nearly single-handidly run into a line... and not only survive, but send the next line into disarray. A berserker could do these things and win because no one, not demon or angel or anyone else on Mazera, could imagine it until they saw it for themselves.

One berserker was fearsome. Ten were terrifying. A war band was... devastating. That was what the Grigori defenders were learning in retreat. Berserkers could die, technically, but they so rarely seemed to. Even when a sword was speared through them, they would take it out and use it. And after the battle when the wounds would claim them... mages and wisemen with regeneration magics would come, closing the wounds and making them better than they had been before.

Now the Grigori were experiencing it more than ever. Their militia were in near route. Their heralded Serpentine Slayers were sick, struggling with the Plague that the Chislev's secret allies infected them with. Their mages were gone, retreated to Midgard to try and solve the Plague. And while the Grigori reeled, the Chislev advanced. Soon, so soon, they would be back to the borders, and beyond.

Niyol, a scout of sorts, came to him. He was grinning in blood lust, Meskawaki's magics still lingering in his blood.

"The militia have been broken. They retreat in disarray," he said.

Kuruk nodded, calm until that moment of bloodlust in battle. "Then we will advance," he said. "We will catch them in the chaos, and make it ten-fold."

But Niyol shook his head. "Our Masters have a different task for you," he said, and Kuruk couldn't tell which masters he was talking about. Those of the Deep, most likely.

"The Grigori have a hospital to our left. Inside are many of their Serpentine, who could not be evacuated with the rest for fear of the Plague. And with the militia fled, they have no defense besides the Ordine with them."

Kuruk understood, and shared Niyol's grin. Niyol continued.

"You are to go forth and massacre them all. No one, Serpentine, Ordine, or other, is to survive."
 
Darkness.

Eyes closed or open, it makes no difference. Engulfed in darkness. But as soon as the thought of fear is formed, lights appear. Pinpoints of Light. Stars. That’s what they were. Stars.

But how?

Snow everywhere

Where was he?

People, yelling

More importantly Who was he?

A Yell. Light Falling. Blinding Light.

Uniformity around. Uniform and infinite depth.

CRUSHING LIGHT

“Messa” The voice came from the infinite darkness. “Messa. Listen to me.” It was a familiar voice, one he knew he had heard before. Where?

A woman, standing, beautiful, snow swirling around her. And with that, Memory sparked and burst into life, a roaring spitting, resilient fire. Messa. He was Messa, of the Grigori. Messa. That was his name. Mess, and he was on a Mission for Cassiel himself.

“Messa, Scion of Cassiel, Fulfill the first part of your destiny. Free me.”

There she stood, in front of him, and he for the first time, he realized that he was not in the void anymore. He stood on the snowy peak of a mountain, with eternal fields rolling away at its base. Above him spun the stars on their eternal roll through the sky. And in front of him stood the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. She smiled at him, though the smile was one of the saddest Messa had ever seen, sadder, even than Cassiel’s, though that one was widely reputed to be the saddest the world knew. Her red hair flowed and rippled in the wind, for the world like fire, and her green eyes stared intently into Messa’s.

“My… Destiny?” he answered.

“Your Fate. One such as you can have nothing but a great destiny, but that is for you to find. Free me, and I will join you

“My fate is not to bring another Divine power into Erebus. The Divine has enough influence in Erebus, despite the compact. I am Grigori. Fate is but a tool of the Gods, to shape mortals to their whims.”

Again, she smiled. “Messa, freeing me will not bring another divine power into Erebus. I have not fallen. I am bound by the compact, bound in a way even Cassiel isn’t, for he has fallen, and I have not.”

“That is not enough, I cannot allow any more of the tools of the Gods into Erebus.”

“Messa, Free me and I will Join you!” She spoke with an intensity almost painful “The Righteous Flame, Allied with the Fist of Balance, Cleansing Erebus of Evil.” As she spoke, reflected in the sky around him, Messa saw visions of a city of Demons burning as Grigori armies marched through wielding Swords of Flame, Saw himself Appointed high leader of the Grigori, Brigit and Mouar by his side, Saw a great gate come crashing down, locking the Angels about to enter the world out of Mazera. “Your will, that of the Grigori, will come true!”

“I am not to be tempted so easily by images of power.”

“I know, Messa…. I know. I give you my word, I swear on my Mission to save my mistress that I will not use my Divine power in any greater , nor call upon the Ara placed upon me to to exert Divine influence in Erebus. I swear to act only in so far as it will help my people and Aid in my mission. In Turn, you, Messa, will you swear to free me, and to use your influence in Junon to protect my people in their Mission, for it is one that Cassiel would approve of. We seek to return Balance in the heavens, to redeem my fallen mistress!”

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The skirmish against the Illian patrol was going badly. Bakabushi had been unconscious since the beginning of the battle, and both of the wolves Lengdu had called were lying in a pool of their own blood with Lengdu himself lifeless near the base of the small bulwark. Ericai had expended his darts, and was now fighting with a slim dirk against an Illian brute that was slowly driving him back, and Jonas Endain was a whirl of metal and flame, but even he was being driven slowly to exhaustion, and still the Illian seemed to come, unstoppable.

Then, the world took a deep breath, the wall of fire gathered impossibly high, then collapsed on itself, disappearing in one last burst of glory. In the center of where the Ring had been kneeled a woman with a mane of red hair. Slowly she stood, and unfurled a pair of Firey wings. She motioned, and in her right hand appeared a blade made of the holiest of fire, and in her left, a sphere of Fire with which she motioned towards the Illians.

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Deep in the Darkest, most hopeless regions of Nyx, a small part of the Lady of Fire’s heart felt, for the first time in Centuries, an emotion these dark lands hadn’t known in Ages. The Embers of hope stirred.
 
The War Room
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Deremei sifted through the letters he had received once more. He was still at sea, but he had received several from many different nations, most congratulating him for bringing down one of the deadly Kraken. Some, however, were a little unhappy in the way it was done. Deremei had neglected to disclose the invention of their special poison and the Grigori had called them on it the moment the news came out. Deremei had attempted to rebuild the bridge and he seemed to have made some progress, but it was slow going. Deremei looked up as the door opened and Ras Silentkill entered the room.
"Greetings, sir. I heard you wanted to see me?" Ras stood at attention in front of Deremei. Deremei nodded and turned to his desk. "Yes, I did. Please take a seat, we need to wait for a few more people." Ras nodded and sat in one of the wooden chairs nailed to the floor of the office to prevent guests speaking to Deremei from being tossed out of their chairs during a storm. Deremei picked up a piece of parchment from the desk and examined it. Deremei turned when he heard the door open once more and Xar Rotchain entered the office followed by Mojin Madburner. Xar and Mojin took a seat next to Ras as Deremei stood in front of them.
"We are approaching the Fane of Lessers. The Lanun sent a letter to me by bird informing me of what we should expect to run into. The Infernals seem to have around 1,000 to 2,000 vessels, including what the Sheaim are providing. They are, of course, demons so they are bound to have some other tricks up their Hellish sleeves that we don't know of yet. The Malakim general, Isanov Orzaz, says that the Elohim have positioned their fleet on the western flank of the Sheaim. General Orzaz has maneuvered his fleet through the island chain north of the Infernals and has already taken one of the islands, giving us a base of operations. The island has been named Silvermage Isle by the Amurites, supposedly there's a tower called the Tower of the Silver Mage on it.
"The Sheaim in the Deadlands are still busy with their war against the Bannor, Elohim, and Amurite armies so they won't be much of a factor in our battle. The Sheaim on the Fane aren't at full strength due to their forces being split between the Fane and the Deadlands. The Infernal armies are going to be difficult to crack. They've trained their demons in warfare of all kinds of styles and they will most likely all be used to devastating effect. I now give the floor to Mojin Madburner." Deremei nodded to Mojin and took a seat behind his desk. Mojin stood and placed his finger on a map of the Fane.
"The Lanun plan to have us land here, on the coast of the Sheaim lands. They report that the weakest point in the fortifications is just south of a Lanun holding, which should make it easier to attack. The Elohim will assault them on the western front to force them to divide their forces between our armies. The Lanun will assist us and the Elohim, while the Malakim assist us and the Grigori assist the Elohim. The Infernals will most likely surge to assist the Sheaim against us, but by the time they reach our position we should be well entrenched. Ras Silentkill will lead the cavalry for the Nortek while Xar leads the arcane regiments. The Ogre regiments will be lead by an Ogre named Ung Rockmate." Mojin stopped at this point as he noticed the looks on the Goblins and Orcs in the room. They all looked at Deremei Diranth. "He was very unfortunately named."
Mojin cleared his throat. "Yes, well. He will lead the Ogres that survived the Kraken attack. I will be leading the forward assault parties consisting of Orcs and several Goblin clans. With any luck at all, we'll be able to break the Sheaim fortifications and give us a foothold on the Fane." Mojin bowed and went back to his seat. Deremei looked around at the Orcs and Goblins in the room. "This will not be an easy battle. The Yokaido will be nothing compared to the battle we're about to enter. Steel your nerves and prepare yourselves well. If we lose this battle, Mazera could be doomed."


Edit: Map updated. Unless there are any objections, this is most likely how it's going to look from now on. Land in the ocean to the south will be discovered over time, so don't worry about that. The brown on the right of the map is mountains on which there is just more ocean, same with the north but I couldn't put it in due to my short patience.
 
He wandered into Oswego one fall afternoon and got a room at the Inn. Though he came in the middle of day and most of the villagers were busy bringing in the harvest, the news of the visitor had spread to all by the evening, and by sundown, the entire village had gathered in the in the Inn in the hopes of seeing that oddity in the village, a stranger.

That the traveler was an Orc was the first real surprise. The few observers that had seen the traveler enter the village had merely stated that he looked like a druid, hooded, with the only visible facial feature a long white beard.

He sat, silently, smiling, hood pushed back, drinking slowly, as the villagers spoke in hush whispers, stealing quick glances at him before staring resolutely at one another.

Finally, Heron the Blacksmith walked over to the orc’s table. “Mind if I sit here, friend?” he asked, politely. He was the biggest of the villagers, and undoubtedly could have broken the old orc with one hand, but, he had heard stories of the orcs, of their incredible strength and brutality. “What brings you here to Oswego?” he asked, uncomfortably.

“Forgivness” the Orc answered, after a long pause.

“Forgivness, eh? What do you mean?”

“Tell me, what do you know of the Fall? Of Sirona the Merciful?”

“Not a lot, old man. The Only gods we have here is Kilmorph of the earth and Cernnunos of the Forests. I know that Fire was turned against her own and she fell, bringing with her an age of ice.”

“I serve the Lady Sirona and Lady Brigit. I am one of the Blossoms of Mercy, seeking to redeem and bring forgivness and salvation for all who seek it.”

“So, I can be absolved of all my sins?”

“Yes, forgivness comes from the self. One must feel remorse and utter compassion for the victims of those wronged, and absolution will come, as long as the compassion is sincere and selfless. But to truly improve, and become a better person, one must forgive those who are worthy of forgivness. one must not forget the sins of the past, but rather remember and learn from them, do not let them shape you.”

Heron nodded. “What are you doing in our village, though?”

“Travelling north, to meet with the Redeemed in Junon, though I’ll stop here for a few days, and help you all with any small sickness. I have some skill I’ve picked up from assisting some medicos and the untouched over the years, nowhere as good as the Untouched, nor even the Medicos, but, I can do minor things.”

“Please, Teach me.”

They spoke late into the night, discussing, and, when the Orc finally left, three days later, he was accompanied by Heron the Blacksmith.
 
Um... I think you mixed up Sirona and Bhall. Sirona's Angel of Spirit, Bhall is Angel of Fire.

Nope, not at all.

your correct in that Sirona is Spirit. However, she believes that all the Fallen gods can be redeemed and should be forgiven.

her followers are the Sisters of Mercy, or, alternately (which I prefer, as it isn't sexist) the Blossoms of Mercy. they are an order of Monks that travel around and help where they are needed.
 
The Sisterhood of Sirona (which in the Age of Magic ran the orphanage where Perpentach/Henri Ghouls lived between his parents' deaths and being adopted by the Emperor) and the Order of the Elohim are two groups known to be dedicated to her (although I think the latter might not exactly worship her but merely revere her teachings). There may however be many others. She does not really care for hierarchy or see a need for an unified organized religion, so many unrelated groups may have sprung up to serve her. She is non-dogmatic, does not insist on proselytizing, and while she wants to help bring the wicked back to righteousness I don't think she would have a problem if they declined to worship her and instead chose to serve another good god (with the possible exception of Junil), The One alone, or just humanity in general without any religious connections.


Blossoms of Mercy sounds more like a syncretic faith blending the teachings of Sirona and Sucellus and likely worshiping or at least revering both dieties. Sirona and Sucellus have always been very close friends, so she would not mind sharing worshipers with him. They are likely even closer now that he is God of Life. He offers healing, restoration, and revitalization to those who feel broken. This would include those who feel their sins doom them to remain evil, to whom he offers an opportunity for a new, righteous life. Sirona's sphere emphasizes the importance of forgiveness and working to heal others, the the actual restorative ability needed for her work to be effective is mostly the domain of Sucellus.
 
The Sisterhood of Sirona and the Oder of the Elohim are two groups known to be dedicated to her (although I think the latter might not exactly worship her but merely revere her teachings). There may however be many others. She does not really care for hierarchy or see a need for an unified organized religion, so many unrelated groups may have sprung up to serve her.


Blossoms of Mercy sounds more like a syncretic faith blending the teachings of Sirona and Sucellus and likely worshiping or at least revering both dieties. Sirona and Sucellus have always been very close friends, so she would not mind sharing worshipers with him. They are likely even closer now that he is God of Life. He offers healing, restoration, and revitalization to those who feel broken. This would include those who feel their sins doom them to remain evil, to whom he offers an opportunity for a new, righteous life. Sirona's sphere emphasizes the importance of forgiveness and working to heal others, the the actual restorative ability needed for her work to be effective is mostly the domain of Sucellus.

SO, is my use in the story "appropiate"?
 
You mean appropriate? Maybe, it doesn't really seem to conflict with the lore although there isn't really anything to back it up either.

Following Sucellus too instead of just Sirona and Brigit would help explain his Druid-like garb.

It seems a odd for the man so say he knows of Sucellus of the Forests and for the "Blossom" to not make any mention of him if the faith did follow both Sirona and him. Also, Sucellus is all that associated with the forests anymore, and his name was misspelled there. Maybe you should change it s that he knew of only Kilmorph and Cernunnos, the new God of Nature. (Iirc Cernunnos was called Lord of the Forests before he became a god, and had a stronger connection specifically to forest while Sucellus represented many biomes equally. I get the impression that Sucellus may have been more associated with Vines than with Trees like Cernunnos.)


A follower of Sirona would probably insist that those who want forgiveness also must forgive all those who wronged them. Also, they would likely emphasize that forgiveness leads to repentance, expressly denying that forgiveness must only be given after repentance like most good gods believe. Of course, forgiving an evil doer should in no way be taken to mean that you should allow their continued bad habit to corrupt you or permit them to use you as a tool to further their evil ends.

I don't really care for the "Yes, forgivness comes from the self. One must feel remorse, and absolution will come, as long as the feeling of remorse is sincere and selfless" part. Emphasizing the feeling bad doesn't strike me as quite right. It think it should instead emphasize feeling compassion for the victims, and deciding to help the world not out of duty but love. It is not that one should forget the mistakes of the past, but it is important not to let them define him. (Lugus on the other hand would probably think it is essential to remember our failings to stop us from repeating them, so to him our sins should help define who we are by serving as an example of what not to be.) Working to help those you harmed is laudable, but one should never demand anything from those one forgives.



The Untouched (the followers of Sucellus's post-resurrection religion) are known for a healing ability surpassing even that of the Ordine Medicos. They often study non-supernatural healing techniques developed by the Grigori Medics, but then combine this with the power of prayer. I think they probably dominate the Elohim hospitals, which are the most advanced in Erebus. It is unclear how much of their healing ability is natural and how much is supernatural, as their mundane medical treatments could fully explain most recoveries but they seem really lucky as choosing the right treatments. Their prayers are seen as powerful, and a tiny minority of them can even revive and fully heal the dead by prayer alone. Cassiel does not allow religious discrimination, so I would not be surprised if many Grigori Medics were also among the Untouched despite the general Grigori prejudice against the religious.




Using Medico as the singular form seems really weird to me.


Can Orcs grow facial hair?
 
Story edited.

MC: in this world, Orcs can, but it's a cultural taboo within Clan society that prevents them from growing hair
 
I see you specified forgiving those worthy of forgiveness. That is not what I said at all. Even Junil would agree that those who deserve forgiveness ought to be forgiven, although he teaches that the decision of who deserves forgiveness is not up to mortals.

Sirona would insist that her followers must always forgive those who do not deserve forgiveness; those who deserve forgiveness don't really need it like those who don't do. She would see being granting forgiveness as a prerequisite for the character changes required to deserve it, not the other way around. The only think I can think that Sirona could possibly see as a valid justification for not forgiving someone is that person's absolute refusal to forgive those that have wronged them, but even that is not certain. Sirona would teach that forgiveness should be given with hope but without any expectation that it will lead to repentance, and that a failure to repent does not justify rescinding past forgiveness or refusing to forgive future sins.

Even The Order recognizes that forgiving the unworthy can sometimes help them come to repentance, but they see it as crime to refuse to punish them on the slim hope that this will happen. Most of the gods consider Sirona's insistence on unconditional forgiveness to be extremely naive. They tend to view The Goddess of Wisdom as a kind but foolish little sister whose opinion is not really worth noting. Junil especially has trouble fathoming how she could be so stupid, yet the fact it has often been shown that she is actually too wise for them to comprehend. (She is the paragon of the fruits of the spirit, so naturally her wisdom is seen as foolishness to the world.)
 
Can I argue that away as what I wrote being the interpretation of one man as opposed to the actual teachings? :p

though I do agree with what you said about Sirona.
 
Sure, many religions in Erebus don't accurately understand the will of the gods they claim to serve. His views would be heretical, but such a non-violent faith would probably have trouble rooting out heresies.
 
and I can't imagine the teachings of Sirona being spread all that well, but rather being decided and interpreted by Lone wise men (term used loosely, men, women, elves, etc) who Decide how they will be good people. I don't imagine, aside for the Order of the Elohim, that the Followers of Sirona are that organized...

and "heresy" is a word that doesn't work with any sirona followers.
 
While heresy is generally taken to be a pejorative term for sects that disagree with religious authorities, it doesn't have to be. The Greek word for it (derived from the verb "to choose") can refer to any sect, and in fact is used in the bible to refer to Christians as opposed to other Jews.

They aren't organized, but there can still be some sects with doctrine closer to Sirona's true teachings than others.
 
While heresy is generally taken to be a pejorative term for sects that disagree with religious authorities, it doesn't have to be. The Greek word for it (derived from the verb "to choose") can refer to any sect, and in fact is used in the bible to refer to Christians as opposed to other Jews.

They aren't organized, but there can still be some sects with doctrine closer to Sirona's true teachings than others.

that's interesting... I had always thought of Heresy with Negative Connotations.
 
Krogar tossed and turned in his bed, sweat dripping down his face. He was usually capable of controlling his dreams, but they had gone in a different direction this time. All had gone black and a chill of fear went down his spine as a voice whispered "Witness death." He awoke and he looked around the room. Everything was as it should be, but something felt...Off. He stood out of the bed and reached for his sword. A candlestick fell off a desk pressed up against the wall, causing Krogar to turn quickly, brandishing his sword before him. He stepped forward slowly and heard a small pop to his right. He turned and his head was separated from his shoulders.

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Krogar Clawfang's body was found that morning by his servants. His head was nowhere to be found, and written on the wall in Krogar's blood was the phrase "Witness death."
 
Who the heck is Drogar Clawfang, and why should we care that, wow, there are still assassins targetting important people out there? Sort of lost it's impressiveness after the Undercouncil did it, the Archos and Svartalfar, then Hastill... but sure. Fourth wave is the charm. It's not like anyone with sense hasn't boosted their security measures with each wave of assassination.
 
Flauros woke, breaking sweat. He had heard something... Words... A dark and brooding voice. "Witness Death", it had said. He quickly rose and put a cloak over him, finding his sword. With a flick of the blade, he lighted a torch that enlightened the room. It looked empty, but the murky corners could easily hide someone. Had the Austrin convinced the Sidar to send someone for him? Had he not helped them? Had he not saved them from Ilyth? Surely, they would not be so ungrateful...

He was distracted by his line of thoughts as a shadow danced across the wall. He was reminded about how the Sidar assassins could apparently split their selves to be two places at once. Then, an even more gruesome thought popped into his mind. A rumour of the most merciless of all those that hid in shadows. "Denmora?", he whispered into the dark.
 
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