NESLife attempt #3

flamingzaroc121 said:
ok, if i change it where should i put it

You could edit your original post if you want. Ill be checking back through the last few pages of the thread when i start on the update.

Lord_Iggy said:
If you're referring to the delay of my Volaticyte plans, that was just my choice to evolve different things. It was just a lasting series of distractions.

I wasn't referring to that, i was thinking of the plans and stuff that other people had posted about, that i prevented by killing things off.

Lord_Iggy said:
So, there are little annelid-esque worms, tiny crawlers, and little flying beetle-esque things?

Yes, something like that. Whatever seems realistic to anyone :)
 
Old:
Jubblera Desertia: Splime
Evolved From: Jubblerus Frigidus
Genes (15): Eating Dead Things x2, Crawling x1, Complex Stomach x2, Water Retention x3, Eyes x1, Flying x3, Smelling x1, Mass Reproduction x1, Cold Resistance x1
Description: Tough times call for a tough creature. Jubblerus Frigidus just managed to scrape through the cold times, but is not as prepared to handle the new age of heat. For this reason, the Jubblera Desertia has evolved, designed to better retain water in the hot climate. Also, due to the lack of food, its stomach has complexified in order to more efficiently take energy. This also helps fuel its better flying ability, in order to get to food faster. While this extra complexity will lower reproduction levels slightly, the tough climate cannot support such huge numbers as before.

New:
Jubblera Sensica: Splime
Evolved From: Jubblera Desertia
Genes Added (2): Smelling x1, Complex Stomach x1
Genes Removed (1): Mass Reproduction x1
Genes (16): Eating Dead Things x2, Crawling x1, Complex Stomach x3, Water Retention x3, Eyes x1, Flying x3, Smelling x2, Cold Resistance x1
Description: The resources for a brain were beginning to develop in the Jubblera, with the smelling sense increased, as was also done to the stomach's complexity. The Jubblera's mass reproduction has been removed, as the complexity involved with the new species requires more resources from the mother.
 
Iggy and Thlayli Eat Stuff: Iggy's Journal

Day 3


Today certainly began with excitement. I was awoken in the mid-morning by the sounds of a scuffle. I quickly left the tent to see a Xiavalion and its offspring hunting a group of Volaticytes. I was very excited, as I had never seen any of these creatures before.

The Xiavalion climbed up the Tranel with lizardlike dexterity, and snapped at the Volaticytes. The flying arthropods flapped off towards a nearby tree. However, one large specimen was too slow. It bumped into a branch, and the Xiavalion flung itself onto the Volaticyte's back. Flapping and thrashing desperately, the large arthropod cracked onto the ground. A few quick bites and slashes on the head and into the wound quickly killed the animal. I was about to move in to kill the Xiavalion when I noticed the two infants hiding in the bushes behind it. I couldn't bring myself to do it, so instead I merely scared off the creature, cut the Volaticyte in half, and left. I hid, and a few minutes later the family returned, ate their fill, and left, with a few pieces of meat still hanging from the emptied shell. As the Hiborytes started to carry off the scraps and a group of Chungi began to crawl into the clearing, I felt morally sound again. I picked up a few Chungi and carried them and the Volaticyte into the food pile.

Shortly afterwards, a group returned with a dead Xiavalion. It had fallen from a tall Tranel while pursuing prey. I felt somewhat guilty- perhaps it had been a father (or mother, hard to tell really), and had some baby Valions... the penguins assured me that it had been old and solo, but I'm not entirely sure I could trust them. Gris derided me for my soft behaviour, so I beat the crap out of him with my lightsabre (thank goodness for variable power levels, or he would have been sliced up finer than a 'did on an Arix's dinner table). Shortly thereafter, he retracted his statement.

The penguins agreed to prepare the food. One whose name escapes me suggested that the Chungus I provided him with was unsafe. Being quite aware of its relative safety (other than the fact that it's toxic for anything without a degree of acid resistance), I implied that it was deadly toxic, and he was the food tester.

Heheh.

Well... it seemed funner at the time.

Anyway, I spent the rest of the day diving around the coastline. I was unable to catch anything, so I will be water-proofing some of my arsenal tonight, after completing this entry. The animals I got to swim with were quite fascinating, though the only animal I managed to catch was a Garbageos Megatronus, and I could barely even take the thought of eating that putrid, mushy mass of slime. Yech.

I mean, it was a cool animal and fun to hold and such, but... blech.

Anyway, after drying off I ate. The Xiavalion tasted somewhere about halfways between a fish and a chicken. Its meat was rather tough, and a bit metallic tasting, but it tasted fine, and with a sour topping of Chungi spores it was a delicious dish.

The Volaticyte tasted like a rather meaty crab. The muscles just around the wings were rich, succulent and delicious. The sour Chungus sauce made it absolutely delectable. However, I did not want to eat many more, lest I endanger my only evolution of the era.

Thlayli's continued radio silence has grown beyond worrying. If I don't get any word from him by tomorrow, I will put my taste-based exploration of Delta Panzerus on hold to organize a search operation.

Well, I've got work to do, so I guess I'll end this entry now.

P.S. I feel that I should give a physical description of the Volaticyte. It looks a lot like its Clepsuryte and Scensuryte ancestors. The most notable difference is the adaptation of the middle set of legs into wings. The wings retain the segmentation of the legs they developed from. They are paddle-shaped, terminating in gripping talons.

So essentially there is one roughly triangular and flat segment extending from the torso, one flat rectangular segment extending from that, and a segment which curves to a close, terminating in a gripping talon.

The rest of the body is largely unchanged. The body is very slightly more aerodynamic, and somewhat reduced in size (though the muscles connected to the new wings have grown quite dramatically). The legs are now less adapted for ground crawling, as they terminate in sharp talons. Finally, the tail has extended, and is used as a bit of a rudder for the gliding and flapping flight of the Volaticytes.

Well, I guess it's off to sleep for me now. Tomorrow- though I hope it doesn't come to it- searching.
 
Since no one got a problem with my new creature so I keep it!

Armtupler: c&cciv3
Evolved from: Hextupler
Genes (27): Crawling x2, Plant Eating x2, Flesh Eating x2, Complex Stomach x2, Claws x3, Cold Resistance x1, Communal Behavior x2, Brain Power x2, Eyes x1 Skeleton x1, Tough Skin x1, Water Retention x3, Tough Eggs x1, Parenting Instinct x1, Pack Hunting x1, Walking x1, Lungs x1
New Genes: Grasping Arms x1, Brain power x1, Lungs x1
Lost Genes: Cold resistance x1
Description: As time progressed, the hextupler changed. it's real legs, no longer used to propel it across the land, served no real purpose for a long time. but eventually, some of the smarter Hextuplers began to use these shriveling limbs to gasp small objects. Carrying one of their eggs to safety when somebody attacked a nest. bringing along some leftover food from a meal, to eat later. or bending a Tranel Branch down lower so some of the young ones could grab some fruit. Eventually, the decedents of these Hextupler's became known as the Armtuplers. They were smarter, and their once shriveling rear legs had developed into proper arms to grasp objects loosely. they Also developed slightly lungs to compensate for the extra effort the arms and their larger brains put on them.

Cool someone evolve of one my creature; also with removing Cold resistance some of the old Hextupler should still live for me to evolve later. (If Daft lets it *cross fingers*)


Also I've decided to write a little story on my Aquaupler.(probability not good one but something to pass the time)



Small group on Aquauplers was crossing on top of the water between the islands in Lemunesia going to a different feed area. The sea animal below were wandering what the large feet of Aquaupler’s are. Some of the plant eater's thought they was large leaves which were somehow blow across the water surface and tried to eat them much to the displeasure of the Aquaupler and show them what it dealing with. Other like Socivalion Mk IV found that there is nice meal just above the water.


Any way they was make their the way across the water and a suddenly a Socivalion jump on of the water trying to bite on one of the Aquaupler underbelly but fell little to short and missing and fell back in the sea. Aquauplers know what is about happen crawl as fast they could toward the island! When more Socivalions jumped out of the water, attacking one of the younger Aquaupler, biting it’s legs and underbelly. The others couldn’t help it as they couldn’t use their claws as the attack was coming from below.


The attack continue the Aquauplers was now getting close to land but the juvenile Aquaupler was now tiring with it having bite mark were the Socivalions as biten into its tough skin. Most Socivalion jaws may not be able to hanger on for long being out of the water the number bite marks on it feet and legs meant it was a matter of time Aquaupler with collapse and the Socivalions will get there meal. The other Aquauplers called to it telling it to keep going as they are now in the shallow water were their the Socivalions couldn't gain the speed needed to reach the underbelly any more. However it's was to late the youngest to tried to continue collapse into the water and started to sink, becoming food for the persistent Socivalions.


Poor little Aquaupler but it natural way here on Delta Panzerus the strong survival and make it to land and the weak die and sink become food creatures like Socivalions.
 
very nice stories :D

@c&cciv3, sorry i didnt say this sooner, but i dont see the Aquaupler being able to float just by its legs. I was thinking it could have a bouyant main body, and the long legs would help it swim, or stand up out of very shallow water.

I will treat the 'large feet' as 'swimming' if that is OK...
 
Well, it could work like a group of tiny boat hulls. With little toes that folded back when the foot stepped forward and stuck down to get traction when it pulled the rest of the animal along.

I think it's plausible. They just have to be fairly lightweight animals.
 
They would have pontoon like feet. Displacing a lot of water and all that. They're definitely not using surface tension.
 
It could be one of two ways I imagine...

1) With the long legs and big feet, it could spread the legs out in a wide arc around itself and maintain a low profile over the water surface. The large feet could make it more bouyant the way an elephant can walk over quicksand, large surface area for the amount of weight pushing down over the area. (I know the density of the quicksand is also part of that). I assume the aquaupler is not nearly as heavy as an elephant and if it had feet larger than an elephant for less weight (plus the right foot shape), then it might overcome the bouyancy issue.

2) I don't know the exact proccess (and it might be simular to #1), but something like the little water bugs that ski(better verb?) across the water. By not breaking the water's hydrogen bond tension.

Either way, with no swimming or floating genes, it is a risky thing to do if it is beyond breathing in water. (I don't know what point that occurs?) If something were to upset it's water-crawling and possibly knock it over, (rough seas, attack by predators, ...) it might not be able to right itself and sink.

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As far as the deep-sea plankton and insect eating, one could assume that the preceeding distaters caused some of the zooplankton to move deeper (less in the deep ocean had been affected) and those that survived produced more and more plankton that could survive at those depths.

Insects could have been branching off of larger PC and NPC species and there are finally enough in existance overall to fully support the insect eating gene.
 
Well, it could work like a group of tiny boat hulls. With little toes that folded back when the foot stepped forward and stuck down to get traction when it pulled the rest of the animal along.
Smaller surface area -> greater downward pressure. See also: treads vs. tires. You'd have to somehow evolve a creature that naturally hydroplanes or hydrofoils, which, given nothing has in... 542 or so million years of vertebrate life... May as well make a supercavitating squid or something. :p
 
I still remain awkward about the possibility of having bugs without defined evolutionary ancestry.

EDIT: You misunderstand me Sym. It would be like a person with those water-walkers. Large, water-displacing feet. Possibly concave on top to be like little boat hulls, with legs extending down into them from above.
 
This seems to be contraversial :) Maybe big buoyant feet could work as Lord_Iggy suggested. Hydrofoiling/hydroplaning would seem to require faster movement.

@Symphony D., thanks for the links, but no lurkers are allowed in this thread! I demand you post some kind of random evolution :p

Lord_Iggy said:
I still remain awkward about the possibility of having bugs without defined evolutionary ancestry.

Im in favour of having a land equivalent of 'plankton', without keeping loads of 'insect' species in the stats. Id like to assume that there are loads of tiny and microscopic species that don't get mentioned.

I think they would be related to the Dibblers/Zibblers/Jubblers more than anything else.
 
Well the idea for this creature came from Mythbuster Ninja special were they did walking on water. One on the presenter did mange to float on water with large pontoon boots but failing to walk but i with my creature being alot lighter an human and with 6 legs I think could work, with it using in one ways shown in Iddy and tuxedohamm posts. Plus it's need to put it's body on the water as well I'm OK with that.
I just prefer them crawl on water is some manner, not to swim in it but you got the final say Daft.

Edited because of Gammar mistakes.
 
Oh you know what i mean! I've changed it now.
 
Spoiler :
Socivalion Mrk IV
Evolved from: Socivalion Mrk III
Genes (23): Plankton Eating x2, Flesh Eating x3, Swimming x3, Vibration Sense x1, Eyes x2, Pressure Resistance x1, Brain Power x2, Skeleton x1, Cartilage x1, Jaws x2, Fangs x1, Communal Behavior x3, Parenting Instinct x1, Gills x2, Cold Resistance x1
Description: The socivalion was at the top food chain, or at least it thought so. Over time it just kept getting better at what it did. Its fins underwent a development that allowed greater speeds in the water, its gills preformed better and it got more energy from its primary food source (flesh). As its abilities got better it started actively attacking other predators instead of just the weaker herbivore's and plankton eaters.

Predavalion
Genes Added (Max 2 +1): Swimming x1, Brain Power x1. Eyes x1
Genes Removed (Max 2): None
Description: The time for the Predavalion to re-take his spot as king of the sea-hunters was right. After many many years the socivalion mrk III had finally evolved again to retake his spot as king of the sea. Since the population was down ever since the mass destruction and heating of the globe the Predavalion had to become smarter, faster and better able to see and catch its food. So thats exactly what it did - the brain enlarged to help it "think" about how to best catch its prey and keep from being prey itself, its eyes also developed more allowing it to see what it was hunting better as well as finding the "weak" creatures of a pack and lastly it became more streamlined with a more powerful set of fins to help it swim that much faster allowing it to catch its meals or escape as the situation warranted.
 
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