NESLife attempt #3

[Luckymoose]

Kyponea: Luckymoose
Evolved from: Kakoo
Genes (25): Complex Stomach x2, Flesh Eating x2, Vibration Sense x2, Eyes x2, Brain Power x2, Skeleton x2, Cartilage x1, Jaws x2, Fangs x1, Communal Behaviour x1, Crawling x1, Water Retention x1, Lungs x1, Walking x1, Digging x1, Feathers x2, Strength x1
Description (optional): The Kyponea is a similar species to the Kakoo. Increased brain power gives the beast the ability to think out the hunting of prey and the skeleton helps insure the safety of vital organs in fights with other critters. The stomach is becoming more complex to help digest the food and give more energy in the every changing and harshening world. The front arms are even shorter now with little claws and only used to hold down prey. The feathers are darkening and becoming longer but still no use for flight. The head is becoming longer with more teeth growing in and the mouth becoming longer and less wide.

Evolution Template:
Koranthea : Luckymoose
Evolved from: Kyponea
Gene added (you can add two): Cartilage x1, Strength x1
Gene removed (optional, max 2):
Description (optional): Growing in size is made easier with the evolution of a larger cartilage system to ease stress on joints. Combined with strength to help in all fields of activity, give this creature the ability to hunt and kill nearly all animals on the land. The rear legs grow longer, the front legs remain short and the tail elongates. Becoming a biped and effective killing machine. They still hunt alone and only come together for mating.

 

[Daftpanzer]

Thanks guys!

Hmm, about time for another update, i r think.

If anyone else wants to evolve something for the next update, please post within 24 hours or so, thanks

 

[North King]

Spoiler :

Longbay Cloudfire: North King
Evolved from: Skyscreamer
Genes (20): Swimming x1, Vibration Sense x1, Eyes x2, Cold Resistance x1, Flying x4, Jaws x1, Flesh eating x3, Cartilage x1, Lungs x2, Water Retention x3, Crawling x1
Description: A long ranged inland flier, it is a branch off of the Skyscreamers which has moved into a different niche: that of long-range, inland predators and migratory flying creatures. Thus, it has lost many of the swimming abilities of its old cousins; preferring to swoop down on land dwellers inland.

Longbay Fireskimmer: North King
Evolved from: Longbay Cloudfire
Gene added (you can add two): Flyingx1, Talonsx1
Gene removed (optional, max 2): None
Description (optional): While its cousins conquered the Sea, the Longbays tightened their grip on the land, able to fly faster, further, and with new talons, utterly tore to pieces anything they snatched up.

Longbay Fireskimmer: North King
Evolved from: Longbay Cloudfire
Genes (22): Swimming x1, Vibration Sense x1, Eyes x2, Cold Resistance x1, Flying x5, Jaws x1, Flesh eating x3, Cartilage x1, Lungs x2, Water Retention x3, Crawling x1, Talonsx1
Description: While its cousins conquered the Sea, the Longbays tightened their grip on the land, able to fly faster, further, and with new talons, utterly tore to pieces anything they snatched up.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

Yay! Impending update!

 

[Daftpanzer]

Im afraid I've hardly got much drawing done yet Update is at least a couple of nights away.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

Patient, I will be.

 

[Daftpanzer]

Im afraid I still haven't been able to draw that much. And its a weird looking bunch so far

Here is a beta preview of the Shock Finner, Interactive Zeeboo, Volaticyte, Aquaupler, Megafinn, Crimson Slasheel, Hearty Moss and Koranops.

Spoiler spoiler! :

If anyone doesn't like the look of their creature, feel free to let me know, and I can change it before the update. Im uneasy about the Aquaupler and Volaticyte in particular.

 

[tuxedohamm]

I quite like the disturbing look of my creature. Good jobness.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

Hmm, I pictured the Volaticyte being more rounded and friendly-looking.

I'll draw up a very bad- no, basic concept.

Basically only two things: One- It's really thin and lanky looking. I think the legs could be either shorter or fuller looking. And the head seems to be a massive jump away from the Clepsuryte. I still picture it being kind of wide and flattish.

I also pictured the wings to be more paddle-shaped than triangle shaped. And I didn't expect them to be tethered to the other legs, at least not yet.

But actually, the more I look at it, the more I like the one you drew. So really, your call. Only change the Volaticyte if you personally dislike it Daft!

Awesome stuff so far!

 

[c&cciv3]

Well Aquaupler looks great as always. I will very happy to have it looking like that or have you change it. If you decide to change anything make feet bigger and main body little small.(But when you got ask yourself how big can the feet get with only one point) But final decision yours, I'm happy either way.

By the way everything else look great too, I also like to look of Volaticyte (looks little like alien fighter ship or kite) and Koranops (don't know that looks like, it just look cool) a lot to.

 

[Daftpanzer]

Thanks for the feedback! I will change them if I get enough time, which i should. Im aiming to update by the end of this week.

I do find it harder to draw something that looks 'natural' when im trying to stick to people's guidlines. Its a bit easier to get the 'flow' when i just make the whole thing up myself. But in the end, id much rather draw what people want rather than impose my own ideas.

 

[BananaLee]

Impose your ideas all you like on the Yuckii, Daft.
They're bloody good - I'd put them on my avvie but they've grown too complex for 70x70

 

[Lord_Iggy]

My statement on your artistic opinions remains the same. What you want Daft!

 

[TerrisH]

My descriptions are just guide lines to give you an Idea how I envision it. draw it however you want daft!

 

[Daftpanzer]

Thankyou!

So far I have changed the Volaticyte based on Lord_Iggy's suggestions, and i think it looks better.

Something unrelated: this took about 5 minutes to do. It is quite easy for me to copy and paste stuff from different flash files. I may start doing some new evolution chart things of my own, but only for selected branches.

Spoiler Valions of the Land :

 

[Lord_Iggy]

I just did one of those for Scuteridae!

Awesome.

 

[Luckymoose]

The Koranthea looks super good. May the king of the beast reign forever.

 

[Lord_Iggy]

It'll be really cool when our continents reconnect. Two top predator species duking it out for supremacy!

 

[OathinBlood]

I'm currently making a visual cladogram for the Blobster line, and I can't find the image/evolution of the Dark Slithery anywhere. Could anyone help me? Thanks.

 

[OathinBlood]

Nevermind, I've found it. Don't know how I missed it, heh.