Does it spend all its time trying to convince you it's realistic? If not, I'm open to it.
So you prefer unrealistic science fiction?
Again, this is a bit vague, since different people have different ideas of what they consider realistic.
Cyteen takes place in the late 24th/early 25th centuries. While
parts of it seem realistic to me, the overall setting has elements that I can't fathom at all.
I'm not trying to be difficult. But you're asking someone who has been into science fiction for over 40 years, fantasy for a bit less than that, and has read a wide variety of subgenres. Even the subgenres can be further broken down.
Ah, jeez, now you're putting me on the spot. I'm not sure. I am not great at remembering names, I had to look up all the author names in my original post.

The following paragraph in the post you quoted explains it pretty well, although maybe that's still too subjective to be useful. In the Tor book I'm reading, City of Lies, the main character enters a dockyard and a description of the place took up over 3 pages. A span of about 10-15 minutes in the story takes up over 15 pages and all that happened during it was entering the dockyard and stopping a fight. That's too much, for me. I need faster pacing.
Which following paragraph?
Okay, you'd hate my Fighting Fantasy fanfic, then. It's taken two Camp NaNoWriMo sessions just for my character to visit a friend and run a few errands in the marketplace, and he's not done yet (still needs to pick up the cheese his friend's wife ordered, plus one or two other things). But that's first draft stuff, and I'm going into this level of detail to create
my version of Stonebridge, not Ian Livingston's version. His version is full of dour dwarves who do nothing but drink and fight but at this point they're all hopelessly depressed and unmotivated to fight the hill trolls menacing their city because the King's warhammer was stolen (it's the protagonist's mission to find it). I found myself rolling my eyes at that, and decided to figure out something that isn't so silly.
If that's actually a thriving city and community, it needs some common sense fleshing out, with merchants, entertainers, explaining where the food supply comes from, the King's household and government, and ordinary people that include women and children. Subsequent drafts won't need so much detail, since I'll have a better idea in my own mind what the place and people are like. But at this point some of the extra-detailed descriptions have led to creating new characters, some of whom I'd like to learn more about.
Livingston wrote a game, but I'm taking the source material and expanding it into a story. Kinda like Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman did with Dragonlance (the first trilogy was based on a series of 12 AD&D modules featuring 12 dragons). Of course I won't be able to publish this since it's fanfiction and it might be entertaining only to myself and a few people over on the
Fighting Fantazine forum. But I'm still happy with the results of my first draft of novelizing
Caverns of the Snow Witch, and the more recent stuff has been original material bridging the gap between Caverns of the Snow Witch and
Forest of Doom. A few questions needed answering, so I'm answering them.
That's a considerate offer.

How familiar are you with the Fighting Fantasy series of gamebooks?
Good question. I'm not 100% sure which one; my friend picked it up in audiobook format for my ride back up to Canada last month. I played no part in its selection and so do not know the name or author. The one where Tanis and Flynt meet and they're chased by people (goblins? orcs?) through the woods and across a lake, yada yada yada. Except it took 4-5 hours to get to that point. That's a given since it was an audiobook, but it definitely felt like it took far too long compared to what had happened thus far.
Sounds like
Kindred Spirits, in the Meetings Sextet (how the core group of the Heroes of the Lance first met, years before the events of
Dragons of Autumn Twilight, which is the first Dragonlance novel published). Tanis Half-Elven never fit into Qualinesti society since his father was a human (and worse, the product of a rape), and became friends with Flint - a dwarf who preferred to travel in the upper world, rather than stay underground. It's been years since I last read it.
Are the original authors listed as Mark Anthony and Ellen Porath?
Niven did some good stuff on his own. Ringworld is still one of my favorite books and a lot of his short stories are great. His later stuff got lazy though when he had his own little "dirty old man" phase. Pournelle had some decent books, like Janissaries and King David's Spaceship, but some of his works, like the Falkenberg Legion stuff and most of the Co-Dominium books focusing on the Co-Dominium read a little to fashy for my liking.
My favorite Niven book is
A Gift From Earth. The basic situation is that the human colony on Mount Lookitthat is divided along class lines - descendants of the original crew and descendants of the original colonists. The crew are the elite, and get the best of everything... including organ transplants. The colonists are the underclass, and used to supply the organs, blood, and whatever other body parts are needed to keep the crew class healthy. The "justice" system is set up so that there are many capital crimes, and the usual sentence is the Hospital, where the convicted person is killed and every bit of their body harvested and stored for future use. Even children aren't exempt from this.
It's not a situation the colonists can get away from, because there's literally nowhere they can go. Mount Lookitthat is a series of very high plateaus rising above a toxic atmosphere.
Synsena, I echo the early comment of Harry Harrison's The Stainless Steel Rat is good space opera fun. I also recommend Poul Anderson's Dominic Flandry series of short stories. Think James Bond in Space during the Fall of the Space Roman Empire. Nice pulpy fun that ages surprisingly well by Poul Anderson's surprisingly well rounded treatment of Flandry's adversaries and the native populations he encounters on his secret missions through the collapsing Terran Empire.
Poul Anderson's Time Patrol stories are excellent, as well.
Space Roman Empire! My Romanophile friend will love this news.
Does your friend read any Roman historical fiction that isn't science fiction?
Also, another series like the Stainless Steel Rate is the
James Retief series by Keith Laumer (he also did the Bolo series). The books are a satirization of the authors time in the US Diplomatic Service and are genuinely quite funny.
I have the Retief books. They're a good read.
Oh no. If I'm right, you've been given one of those from the very early times (btw it's Flint with an I, Flint Ironforge) when you could practically hear the dice rolling and the entire plot and roster of characters was an ongoing D&D adventure.
I shudder to think what it must be like to actually listen to somebody reading it out loud.
That was my impression of Dragons of Autumn Twilight. At one point I thought, okay this is where they come to a crossroads in the dungeon. Do they go left, right, or straight ahead? Then a little further on, something else is presented to them, and I could mentally hear the dice rolls.
But that's a fault of the first novel... and even though it was immediately noticeable, I still found the story compelling enough to start collecting the series - novels, modules, source books. Some of the sheet music for the songs in the Chronicles Trilogy is wonderful - my favorites are the song Goldmoon sings in the Inn of the Last Home and
Est Sularis (the hymn sung by the Solamnic Knights).
btw if you get far enough into Dragonlance you'll start finding my name a lot.
You were very mean to Raistlin.
Poul Anderson wrote The High Crusade and the Hoka stories among many others. He's a great option for lighter reading.
If you want space opera, consider Ryk Spoor's Grand Central Arena books and Gordon Dickson's Dorsai saga (aka the Childe Cycle) and Dragon Errant (The Dragon and the George etc.)
The High Crusade was made into a movie.
Fun fact: Poul Anderson's daughter, Astrid, married SF author Greg Bear. I've met both Anderson and Bear at conventions.
I highly recommend the Dorsai novels. Dickson had an interesting take on interstellar economies.